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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Ameres



Aww! This one was super cute! Really brought a big smile on my face. :)
Anu:
Thank you so much. You people's smile after reading my FF is the biggest award for me.


I'm really loving this Phulwa. Can so imagine Sargun like this, not caring about time and all. And Abhay...such a caring guy. He is so sweet. 😳
Me too. I think by the end of the show especially the last parts, the holi celebration day she was a bit like this. A little bubbly, doing some cute things with Abhay... I always wanted to see that sorts of cute scenes with them. The day when shatru planned to go to the house do u remember it how jealous she was when he explained abt his cow.


will wait for you endlessly
Wow. Seriously these words even have the same effect on me. So beautiful and meaningful words.
Yes those words have the same effect on me also. I was also smiling big and blushing when I wrote that 😉 😆 .
She seems so possessive about him. But its cool, since we have always imagined Abhay like that its good to see Phulwa also showing possessiveness.
Yes she is. She dont have any problem in Abhay talking to any other girl but when he accept her teasing with Arti that makes her a bit irritated. She expect him to offense it tell a big no and tell I dont love any buddy. Even though she knows to hear these words frm him make her happy 😉 😊.

Oh, you brought Aarti too. Glad that they are just friends and nothing more. After all its AP always. :))
I wont leave any character ...

Really loving this sweet story. Continue soon. 😉
Yes will continue soon but this time I am taking one more day since all these comments and support makes me happy but at the same time makes me a bit more conscious also wants to make up with ur expectations...Thank you so much Anu fr these words these words means a lot to me... 🤗

Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Athira!!! This is just too awesome for words. I have decided, if ever AP were to come back in a new show, i want them in something similar :D

I love the bubbly Phulwa who does what she likes not caring about consequences because she knows Abhay is there to take care of them.

he wakes her up, calls her, drops her at college and even tells her which colour to wear. Uff I think im in love with him😍

I think everyone has said it but i'll say it again😆. My fav line:
Are baba I wont going to leave you to day, he posed and continued, will wait for you endlessly"
❤️

I really liked how you introduced the story, it's so different and refreshing that i want to read more and more so plzzz update regularly.

AWESOME work and imagination👏👏👏 And I don't think any of us can have anything to correct or add that'll beat what you will imagine, because it's just perfect the way it is😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly


Athira!!!
This is just too awesome for words. I have decided, if ever AP were to come back in a new show, i want them in something similar :D

The day they will be back on TV, Oh we will be celebrating like any thing... will that day ever come? In any get up no probs but should be PhAb, at least JayGun.

I love the bubbly Phulwa who does what she likes not caring about consequences because she knows Abhay is there to take care of them.
Specially created fr Sargun... 😆. Yes our this Abhay is really pampering her a lot so the girl is already bhigadi huyi like this... he should have to pay...


he wakes her up, calls her, drops her at college and even tells her which colour to wear. Uff I think im in love with him😍
You just think na I am sure I am in. 😆

I think everyone has said it but i'll say it again😆. My fav line:
Are baba I wont going to leave you to day, he posed and continued, will wait for you endlessly"
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Yes Mimi also pointed out this statement as her fav. This one and the one Akshi pointed out are my fav in the entire thing...

I really liked how you introduced the story, it's so different and refreshing that i want to read more and more so plzzz update regularly.
Oh thank you so much Ami... You cannot measure how much confident I am feeling now... You and all others here just made me 😃.

AWESOME work and imagination👏👏👏 And I don't think any of us can have anything to correct or add that'll beat what you will imagine, because it's just perfect the way it is😊
But pls when ever you people struck with any kind of new idea feel free to post it here... and also all kinds of comments are welcome if any one feels anything not as good as expected feel free to tell then only I can improve... I really mean it... Thank you so much Ami fr your kind words and is expecting all kinds of support frm all of you in the future also. 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here we go with the next part.. As said not a continuation of last one...
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All the college is restless. The day every one in the college, except teachers and some boring book worms who thinks college is a place where they are for studying, hate the most, "The examination... "

Phulwa was buried in the book for a long time through the entire journey to college she never utter a single word neither raised her eyes from the book... Abhay smiled looking at her then asked teasingly "Phulwa we are abt to reach the college, are you planning to enter the college with these books what abt your take it easy get up then?" Phulwa looked at him fuming, but said not a single word since she is studying from his book if he took it then she wont going to have anything to look and there is no time to read the entire test, its few hours remains and she needed to finish reading 3 more chapters. She is just reading the note, who wanted to study all these?... she thought she just wanted to pass the exam.. not like this BW who wanted to get first rank and as usual gift from two families while this stupid will get all the praise, she get advices like "look at Abhay why cant u be like him..." But she never failed in exams thanks to Abhay's notes...

Finally they reached college. Phulwa is not raising her eyes for a few seconds even while walking...

"Phulwa take care you will going to fall some where" said Abhay,

But even before finishing the statement he could see her on the floor looking angrily at him. All the students around laughing at her, in fact the first reaction of Abhay was also the same, here he cannot control the laugh as usual he do...

Phulwa felt a thread of shame from top to bottom, on seeing Abhay joined others made her more worse but even at that time she cannot help herself from admiring the beauty of his smile showing his lovely dimples...

Abhay extended his hands to Phulwa, still laughing, first Phulwa wanted to accept but then her ego works and she stand alone with out his help.

"Phulwa you should have to study these all thing a bit early not at this last moment"
Phulwa looked at him and said in an angry tone

" Oh thank you for your kind information. Its just because of you I fall down, why you wanted to say something at that time and raise my concentration..."


"Waise bhi you are not concentrating on your steps dear" Abhay retort.


"Hai Abhay" It was Arti...
" Now you will be happy, you will get the company of some one like you, go and have some good moments with your like..."

Abhay knows if he now go and spend time with Arti it will going to be a big dealt, but he wanted to take up the challenge. so he went on with Arti.

Phulwa felt a bit down and the girl in her was really angry, if it where a normal day you will not be spare dear BW but today???? she just wanted to finish three more chapters. Will take care of u latter son. Phulwa thought.

The bell rang... Phulwa turned the pages fast... Oh no she was still to finish another half...Abhay came near her

" Yar bell is already rang, close it now and come".

"You just care yourself BW, you go and start writing else you wont get time to finish writing all you have studied for the last six months..."


Abhay shake his head and entered into the hall... Then turned around and said to Phulwa " Best wishes". She smiled while closing the book and returned the same...

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Oops it remain one and a half hour more... Phulwa thought. she finished writing fifteen minutes before... Will pass the exam she thought happily. Then she looked at Abhay he is still writing, from the beginning of exam, he was just on the paper not for a single moment looked up... why he is like this? normally boys are not like this... but her Abhay? her Abhay is like this.. She call him as BW but he is not completely in fact... he is a bit shy but an active participant in many of the college programmes and a good speaker. He is training himself from the very childhood for being a good cop. Trying to over come his shyness and introvert nature... and according to her he won in it also.. how much he changed from the childhood.

Abhay felt something spcl he suddenly have a feeling to look back at Phulwa, in fact he did it... she was looking longingly. He gesture her to write and turned around.

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Phulwa was waiting for abhay outside the hall. He came out finally.

"What were you doing inside Abhay I was tired waiting for you'''..

He smiled and said "shall we go now?"

"You won't change, wont you? , yar today is the last day of exam and you wanted to leave the college soon, pls I wanted to see my friends and have some good time with them if u wish join with me else can spend your time in some boring hobbies of yours I will be back in a short while"

"Fine take your own time and I will also meet my friends and be back"

While walking in two directions, Abhay turned back to look at Phulwa, they have two sets of friends in college, her group contains the most crazy students of the college, the problem makers.. but his? According to her words, they are the craziest. How different their tastes are, still cannot spend nearly a day without her.


Phulwa walked through the corridor fast since she cannot wait to see her entire team... she was missing them badly for the last few days... today they will go to their usual hang out places and enjoy the day... suddenly she slowed her pace, she could vividly hear some foot steps following her... Abhay? he never used to accompany her to her gang. What happened?


Now will you act like my body guard, following me to every where I go? She asked with an angry look while turning to the person behind...

"You?" she yelled in an utter shock...

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So this much for today... Pls feel free to say any sort of comments... good or bad... that can help me in improving myself... the next part will be obviously a continuation...

Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OOHHH GOD now who is this Athira???? Arjun???? She is shocked...so she doesnt like him...is it???????...jaldi I want the next update...and if the guy is someone bad...quickly gt Abhay to rescue...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Mimi. This one I have written just to keep my words to you that I will update it yesterday, else I wont do that since I was not free so I have a plane of introducing the guy... But not well prepared thst is why stoped it there... oh dont worry our Abhay will be there...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..i like it..her frnds are the craziest and abhay a introvert ...athu u hv won me..love ur writing...waiting to knw who the guy is...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Akshi...🤗 I won you even before? just now I won you? Just kidding. Ya I have decided to update it today itself..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4: They belongs to each other.

Yes I am. Why, not expecting? By the way what did you thought? I will not come back? It was just a suspension yar. Also you are here so have to come. Right Kullbhushan?

Well said bhai, how could we can forget one person who stand against us?

No damn, this devils have to come today itself. Phulwa thought.

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Chote Takur and Kullubhushan: Devil brothers is the name these two enjoys. It was six months before, in the beginning of this year, these two tried to misbehave to freshers in the name of ragging and Phulwa accidently saw that and rescued them, in addition she reported abt them to the management and forced them to take action against the two. They were out of the collage for the past six months and lost their one semester, that was not a new thing also.

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Chote Takur: He is the one and only one son of the MLA of the place Mr. Daroga Singh, Usually called as Bade Takur. Rather than calling him as a son we could call him as cool blooded goon to Takur, who controlling all the black side of his father. The man with no sense of love in him.

Kullubhushan: A foolish version of Chote Takur. He is also a very ruthless person ready to do any kind of negative act. But is a stupid. The great weakness of Kullu is girls. He always shown himself as a one supporting Chote but in fact he wanted to over rule chote takur in the mind of his mama and also wanted to power his mama's empire.

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Now what do you want? I am a bit busy
. Phulwa asked in dislike.


As usual, you are always a busy girl. But today you will not go from here with out our permission. You reported against me? against chote to the management? You should have to pay for that. Look Phulwa I dont wanted to hurt anybody but how could I can forget you?


He moved close to to her his hands contain a bottle, she read the label on it conc. sulfuric acid. She moved a bit back then pushed him back in fraction of a second, he lost his balance for a bit but retained it soon. But she already find her way away from him. Chote Takur feels law, but where the hell kullu was doing? he thought. He looked around for kullubhushan, finding him standing in the far end of the corridor looking at some girls passing down.

"Kullubhushan" he shouted.

Yes, where is Phulwa chote? Kullu asked while walking towards him.

Chote Takur wanted to pour the acid on his face but he controlled since even by doing that this stupid wont going to change, it will only be a waste of acid.

"She escaped."

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Phulwa
was half running and half walking she saw abhay standing with his friends.

"Abhay" she called out. He can vividly see the pain on her face.

"What happened
" he asked.

"Actually nothing shall we go, I was tired after spending time with them."

"Ya, we can go then. Guys bye will meet for the cultural fest."

Cultural fest?
Phulwa asked in shock? I forgot how could I? What is your plan abhay what are you going to do? she asked while walking.

" As usual, I am going to give a speech... Actually they already given the welcome speech to me. What about you?'.

This time I was so busy with the studies, in fact exam studies that I even forgot abt it now I have not even prepared anything".

"So there wont be any performance from Phulwa on this cultural fest?"

She kept quite for a long time... while they reached the car she said in a jumping voice

I will give a performance on a love song with YOU .

"With ME?? Are you crazy, did you see me even doing a single step in any of the parties we attended or even saw me doing a single step unconsciously with a music. I thing the days of study made you lost your proper way of thinking."

"You will do we have a full week in front of us, so no more discussions on it we are going to give a performance."

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Two families were in chaos since the day the two started their practice on the song Isq Sufiana... for giving performance in the cultural day. Abhay was looking like a school kid forced by his parents to school. Phulwa is in a complete mood, putting one step then losing interest in it then changing it with other... Poor Abhay he understand these steps with difficulty then hardly understanding it his masterniji changes them. Now he is fed up with her and sitting in the corner telling her to first fix the steps then I will study. He knows so well that he is not a good dancer but this girl is not ready to understand that. Finally she decided with the steps and the two started their practice. Abhay made so many mistakes but finally with the help of Phulwa he was successful in making himself presentable as a dancer.

But on performing the song with Phulwa made him so restless, he was in love with her for many years but he never felt this sort of a longing to tell her about his love. He was always afraid of losing the relationship he enjoy with her. But for a few days he was feeling like she also have the same feelings for him, the way she looks into his eyes, her smile, her shyness he was not feeling it all as just acting... she is really blushing on his single look, small touch... He decided to tell about his love to Phulwa on the day of their performance.

Phulwa was walking though the terrace restlessly. What happened to her? she was not like this.. She knows she loves him but never felt the necessity of telling him since she always feel it should be the boy who first propose.. But now a days she wanted to confess abt her love to him. She felt like she cannot hold this for any more. she is even thinking of telling it to the family... but before she wanted to know abt Abhay's mind... Ya she will wait for a few more days and then will confess to him. it's after all Abhay, but that is the problem. She thought...

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The day has been finally come. They are dressing up in the house itself and then going to the collage. They choose white and red combination for them, Phulwa wearing white gown while Abhay kurtha...



Abhay and Phulwa .

The cultural programme was named Rang De Colors... 😉. Abhay was a little timid in the beginning but as the time pass he was completely out of the world. slowly the world around him vanished for him it was just him and Phulwa. He could only see the depth of her eyes, he was dipping in it. He was losing all the controls over him.




Phulwa noticed the particular color in his eyes. Those eyes where no longer belongs to her caring friend, but to some one else, a passionate lover she felt... She was incapable of looking into them, she was feeling weak.




"I love You" He muttered in her ears, while standing behind her, holding her hands. Phulwas cannot believe her ears. The question was not about what he said? but was about did he said? She was somewhere inside her mind sure about that he loves her but she was waited for these words...But when he finally said it she was in utter disbelief. " I love you" he again said in soft voice. She was overwhelmed with joy. She just wanted to turn around and hug him... and say "I too love you a lot" but she controlled, thinking about the audience.

Phulwa was standing in front of him silently, like she did not hear any of the words by him. He felt dishearted. So what ever he was feeling for the last few days where just the wild imaginations of his mind... She was just considering him as a good friend, may that also will not be there in her mind from now.





He looked into her eyes while lifting her, it was cool, happy, no signs of any other feelings. Does she heard me? He asked himself. She was not looking like she heard anything particular...




After he placing her down she just turn to look into his eyes, where she can see the love of her entire life. Then slowly place her hands on his chest and said " I belongs to you".

He could feel his heart beating fast. He was feeling light now. She finally said it to him. In fact more than just an I love you. She belongs to him. She has given all rights to him. From this day she is his. He cursed himself for telling that at this time in front of all those people else he could have been drew her to him and could enjoy the taste of her lips. They looked into the eyes of each other and two can read the other vividly, both smiled after knowing what is going on in the mind of the other.






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Here we ends with the other part... sorry I know the last part was a bit disappointing... I tried my level best to make it good... pls comment... good or bad... it gives a new power to write... and also gives a new path to correct...
I dont know whether I am good with this, the way they confessed... if not sorry... If I was not up to the mark pls tell me next time I will try to correct the mistakes...Because I have a feeling that I rushed with that...Pls tell if so...


Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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last part..? oh no...it was fabulous..i really enjoyed it...phulwa should hv taken the bottle and poured on kullubhushan's face...but i really liked it...it was fantastic..the way he expressed his love and the way she said" i belong to u.." wowww...i loved it ...everything was perfect...

the cultural fest name.."rang de colors.."🤣 🤣

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