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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashekha

this is soo good, once again u touched my heart. 👏 please make the next up date as AP romance. they met after all these years so.. now they have to spend some time with each other.., forget all the other things 4 while.



Next update AP romance... In fact I am also thinking so... Ya finalized next one completely dedicated to them... In fact I was thinking of doing it at the end as the last update, now when you said...yes after this much of pain and sorrow they need few moments together... Thank you for that suggestion dear...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
AT LAST THEY MET EACH OTHER..⭐️ THE PAIN , SORROW, LOVE, ALL THE EMOTIONS NICELY GARNISH BY YOU WORDS. WAITING 4 THE NEXT UPDATE, EXPECTING SOME ROMANCE❤️ IN THE UP COMING PART..😛😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fa-ameer

AT LAST THEY MET EACH OTHER..⭐️ THE PAIN , SORROW, LOVE, ALL THE EMOTIONS NICELY GARNISH BY YOU WORDS. WAITING 4 THE NEXT UPDATE, EXPECTING SOME ROMANCE❤️ IN THE UP COMING PART..😛😍



Yes next update for some romance... 😊 But not much... Thanks for reading and commenting...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful. very good writing. enjoyed a lot once again PhAb rocks on the forum.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PuvaniPillip

Beautiful. very good writing. enjoyed a lot once again PhAb rocks on the forum.



I think you are new to the forum dear so first of all a very warm

Thank you so much for liking and commenting... Yes PhAb will shine for ever... Thay were such a cute couple well executed by JayGun... Continue reading my post and commenting... Thank you so much once again.


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Posted: 13 years ago
athu i have no words to describe ur writing..because it was fabulous..i loved every single word..while reading i literally felt that i was watching phulwa and abhay on TV. again..woww...i m missing phulwa and abhay a lot dear...it was mesmerising...thanks dear for such a fantastic writing...convey my wishes to ur brother's son...i loved it athu...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes Athira im new 2the forum. i love PhAb and also the 2 wonderful actor who given life for Ph Ab, Ajay and sargun. the end of Phulwa brought me a big disappoint. ur writings brings a innocent happiness to our mind. thank u athira for all those beautiful words.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_akshi

athu i have no words to describe ur writing..because it was fabulous..i loved every single word..while reading i literally felt that i was watching phulwa and abhay on TV. again..woww...i m missing phulwa and abhay a lot dear...it was mesmerising...thanks dear for such a fantastic writing...convey my wishes to ur brother's son...i loved it athu...😃



Thank you dear... You all are happy with it, that thought makes me 😃. I am also missing them a lot... I will tell him... He will look up at me with his goal goal eyes first, then will smile showing the two teeth he has in the first raw. ...😊 I love U.
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Posted: 13 years ago

12. Heaven's door are open for them again

All were sitting together in the house of Abhay discussing about the past four years.

"Why you never tried to connect with Akshat Bhaya Phulwa?"

"I don't want to see them also in trouble because of me Abhay, the moment Takur came to know about my existence he will not sit patiently from then and will try to destroy everything that are connected with me."

"Anyhow past is past, you two are together now is the present so enjoy it" Bhavani said and all agreed to him.

That time Arjun and Arti entered into there...

"Arti?"Phulwa Asked in a surprised tone.

"Yes you never expect me right?"

"Never. What you doing here?"

"She is my wife Phulwa" Arjun interfered

"But then why we never met yet?"

"May be destiny wanted to bring you to Abhay first."

"Ha you may be right"

"Now we have to think of the Takur" Phulwa said.

"Ya, we will all think of him jijiya, now no one can rescue him from us, he has to face the end he deserves, but before that we all want you two to spend some time together." Babu said with an authority to his sister. He was too excited to see his old Phulwa jijiya, whom he knows can only get to see with Abhay bhaya.

"What you want we two to enjoy at this time Babu" Abhay asked

"Why not life is all a mixture of happiness and sadness and you two have your part of misery now enjoy for a bit" Roshniji told them.

"What about going for a dinner?" Gouri asked

"That would be perfect"

"No no I think they have to go for some drive" Bhavani said

Phulwa and Abhay silently watched as all busy with deciding the what they have to do.

Shall I get a chance to say where we wanted to go?" Abhay fall in b/w them

Yes of course" All said in chores.

"We are going out, where? Is a secret just for we two."

"Ohhh, then ok" All replayed.

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So here we are taking a small interval from all the problems since they two wanted, in fact all want some good moments together. Dedicated to all and pls pls comment abt it and like it if you like it...

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Roshni entered to the room of Phulwa carrying the same pld rose colour sari she offered her that morning.

"You will surely go for it now, right Phulwa?"

"Yes, I want to look the best for him today Roshniji"

"Just go and stand in front of him like this Phulwa, for him you will be the best"

"I know, still..." Phulwa blushed in her words.

"I can understand"

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Car was moving fast with Phulwa and Abhay.

So he started running the car with a bit of speed now, Phulwa thought the days in which she used to make fun of him for his slow pace in riding the car.

You are thinking about my speed, right Phulwa?

How do you come to know that

You share me with or not your eyes never fail to.

Where are we going Abhay?

You will get to know when we will be there, any how we are out from all our works for a few days Phulwa so a far place.

Ok, I like your surprises Mr. ACP

He thinks of the days she used to call him BW.

You look pretty in sari Phulwa, but you can wear any chuditars so that I could get to see you as my old Phulwa

I am always your old Phulwa dear as far as you are with me, then dress has no place at all.

Abhay looked back at her, he could see the traces of small pearls of tears in her eyes, he slowly extended his hands to take them in his, as they were too precious for him...



Abhay take care in the road else... I wanted to live thousand more years with you.

Abhay switched on the FM. A melody started to flow into the car in the voice of Sonu Nigham. With the rhythm of song, lyrics of the song their hearts began to communicate with its own silent language.


Abhay

"Abhi mujh mein kahin , (Still somewhere inside me)

Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi, ( There is a little life remaining)

"Their eyes tell each other, life was still without you, never felt that I was living. Even I never felt my heart is beating. I was a dead body that can walk, talk, eat, hear and can do anything a living human can do, but was lacking a heart and heart beat. But when the moment I saw you after a long four years I came to know that, somewhere inside me a little life is still present. "


Phulwa

Jagi dhadkan nayi, ( A new heart beat come up)

Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi ( I came to know that I am alive)

"I heard a new heart beat inside me a new life inside, one that came after four years of separation from you. Then after a long time I came to know that I am very much alive..."


PhAb

Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai , (Such tenacity is there at this moment)

Ye lamha kahaan tha mera (where was this moment of mine)

'For the last few years I even forget to smile without you. But today in your presence I can smile not just a smile can laugh my heads down. Where was it for the past four years... I even forgot that how human beings smile. But with you all my things are coming back to me. A desire is coming back to me.. Today I know you are the only one for me."


Abhay

Ab hai saamne , (Now It is in front of me)

Issey chhoo loon zaraa (Should I touch it)

"Now you are in front of me, but I am too confused to accept you, still my hands asks my brain and heart whether I touch it to hold it for ever or should I just let it be like that.. Once we felt the pain of losing it should we go again for that."


Phulwa

Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa , (Should I die or I live a little)

Khushiyaan choom loon (Should I kiss the joys)

"It asks me should I touch it or not. Should I die without touching it, holding it forever or should I live a little with the happiness it gives for us."


Abhay

Ho.. dhoop mein jalte huey tann ko, ( As a body which was burning in the sun)

chhaya perh ki mill gayee ( Got the shadow of a tree)

Roothe bachche ki hansi jaise, ( Like the smile of an angry kid)

phuslaane se phir khill gayee ( Came back on little cajoling)

Kuchh aisa hi abb mehsoos dil ko ho rahaa hai (Something like this is feeling)

Barso'n ke puraane zakhm pe marham laga saa hai (past year's wounds are healing now)

Kuch ehsaar hai, iss lamhe mein hai (I felt something like this now)

"I was burning in the heat of loneliness in the pain of losing all who loved and cared me, even I lost you. I was like a lost soul. Nothing was there for me. I was like a little kid who was angry on his elder brother who snatches his favourite toy from him. But then you came back to me like a tree on a sunny day, you again kept me under the shadow of love and care. You were healing the wounds past four years have been made in my heart "


Phulwa

Dor se tooti patang jaisi, thi ye zindagani meri (I was like a broken kit)

Aaj ho kal ho mera naa ho (Now i am present , Tomorrow? I am not sure, I never cared.)

Har din thi kahani meri (I was like that)

Ik bandhan naya peechhe se abb mujhko bulaaye (But now a bond calls me from behind)

Aane waley kal ki kyun fikar mujhko sata jaaye (And I started bothering about tomorrow)

"I was living a life that has no aim in it. I stopped bothering about my future. I never cared whether I will be there for the day after; I never felt the essentiality of living. I was living because I was alive. Then a bond from my past came back to me 'YOU', and I started living again, My desires came back to me, I started bothering about my future again and I want to live now I have an aim in my life now you and your happiness."


Phulwa feels like she was filled now... with lot of feelings she just wanted his warmth around her to melt all... She looked at him, he nodded as he understand her. He slowly parked the car and the two step out of it. He locked it and told her to go for a walk. The road was empty except them, the night was its full beauty with a cold wind smoothening them inside and outside. Abhay interlocked his fingers with hers during the walk. Both said nothing in fact for them the silence was more than enough.

Phulwa was enjoying herself in the sound of Abhay's boots. She moved more close to him to place her head on his shoulders, he circled her with his hand, the pace of their walk gradually decreasedtoo stope at one moment, to face each other. Abhay leaned to her to mummer into her ears "I love you Phulwa". She giggled in the warm breath of Abhay in her cheeks. He slowly gets up to look into her eyes which were trying hard to hide the shyness.

I am expecting something from you also my princess" He said while placing a small kiss on her already reddish cheeks to make them even more.

"What should I have to say? you said it already, 'My Princess'". Phulwa said with a smile. Abhay also joined with her.

Now shall we go for our destiny? Abhay asked. They walk back to their car.

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So it ends, where they are going? We could get to see in the next update... I used the pics from the Phulwa Pic Gallery. I thank to all who posted it there... The song I used "Abhi mujmeh..." I was very much attracted to the song from the day AMI used it for the VM. I always felt the song perfectly suits PhAb... I wish to thank Ami to bring up the song. Then I wanted to thank all here who likes and comments on this SS. With your support I could do this else... Any how this is not the end. But I think will wind it up with next two updates... I tried hard to escape from Phulwa's Mangalsutra.. but in the last pic it was there... but a slightly 😆 pardon me I was stick to the pic that my mind dont allow me to change it so... 😃

Edited by thiku - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Athira- Im so sorry for being late. You already updated the next part and i didnt even comment on the one before it So first things first,

Loved the way you made them meet. How can you say it wasnt good? It was dreamy and so beautiful. Phulwa coming in front of Abhay to save him without knowing it was him just shows what a great bond they share!😍

And loved the bit where Abhay teases her on her clothes😆 That's so him! Glad to see they both instantly got back what they lost when they met. Their smiles! So nicely written there.👏👏

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You have a way of incorporating pics which fit the situation to perfection. Really feels like it's happening! :)

@Song- Oh WOW! you got it so right there. And i liked the way you brought of the feelings of these two through the song. I agree it does suit them!

@Mangalsutra- LOL, sooner or later it had to be there so abhi hi sahi😉

Great one! Im just sad that you are going to end it soon Cant wait for the next!

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