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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rashekha: Thank you so much... feels good on hearing that you liked all the six parts... Yes now the story will go for a turn... pls read the next updates and comment anything you wanted to share good or bad... 😊

Akshi;
You really liked some of my dialogs? Actually I always have a feeling that I am too bad in writing conversations... I felt really great when you comment exactly the same here and also telling you liked it... that is an understanding yar... yes dear a grief is there... story hena tho kuch turns should have to be there...😉

khaira: Thank you khaira... Yes the real deal starts now... in fact the title of next update is this...Soon will update the next part also...😊

Anu:
They are adorable or else will all of us run behind them even a month after the show has gone off air... I think after that they are recognized more... I saw many people accepting and commenting abt them in you tube even new VMs on them... They were truly adorable...Ya he is a sweet guy...That is why Phulwaji love him this much... 😆

To All:
The next two parts will turn the story completely to some other ends... I have to finish with it na 😆 First thought it as some SS thread where any one can add their own bit but nobody come up with new stories so I have to continue the thing and finish... so going in that direction now... that is why did some rushing here and there... in that process i dont know I missed some essentials of the story my extreme apologies if that case...But really all your words have giving me more power and confidence to write... your comments are truly valuable for me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 7: The starting of real deal…………….

" Abhay", Phulwa called for him from her window

Abhay looked out and asked "What?"

"Shall we go for a shopping today I wanted to buy some gift for Akshat Bhaya and Roopa Bhabhi"

"Ya for Sure, but when Phulwa?

"Now itself within few minutes."

"Ya I will be ready"

:" Ma we are going" Phulwa cried out .

"now move" As usual she ordered to Abhay.

Abhay smiled at his friend and both drive towards their fav shopping mole.

Phulwa was decided to buy a shirt and chudithar for them. Abhay decides to but two watches and his brother's fav brand perfume….. Abhay hate going to shope with Phulwa according to him she spends time waste on these stupid dress selection. Phulwa also hate taking Abhay with her to the textiles. So both decided to meet in the front after one and half hour and moved on to their own destinies……

In fact two pair of eyes were watching them for a long time with out making them aware abt their presence…… Abhay moved away Phulwa stood there looking at him for a few seconds and then walked towards her fav textile shop… She was followed by two.

Chote takur is holding the silencer fixed gun…. She wont be any more the one who reported against him… That would be a lesson to all to think a thousand times before stepping against Chothe Takur….. He knows nothing is going to happen to him his father can help him in minutes…….

Phulwa was busy in selecting the shirt, finally her eyes fall on coffee brown full sleeve shirt.. Yes this would be the perfect she thought. Now She wanted a chudithar……. She was abt to move but suddenly her eyes fall on a blue T shirt with white bands across its shoulder a perfect one for Abhay she thought. She asked them to pack that also……

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Abhay was searching for a lady watch to gift his bhabhi, he has been already selected one fr his brother what remains is for Bhabi but he is not sure abt her likes……. Then he found a golden watch with a square bezel which is decorated with small stones in each side… he decided to take that one for her. Then he thought of Phulwa….. He wanted to buy one for her to remained her abt the importance of time. he smiled to his that thought… Phulwa and punctual???? Impossible…….

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Phulwa was slowly walking along the chudithars to find one…. Now she is standing in one corner of the shop where there is no one else… also standing just in front of the glass window. In fact the side where she stands is only consist of glass through which we could get to see a good view of Mumbai…. The shop is on the 10th floor of the mole….. Chote takur and kullu slowly moved towards her….. Just one push, her body will fall down while her soul move up…………

Phulwa took a chuditar which seems to be recently good to her, but she does not love the design on its thupstta so just placed it back…. But while doing that she failed to recognize the silky tupatta was not placed properly by her and its end is now touching the floor…..

Chote Takur looked all around the shop is kinda big and everyone is busy with their own job…. No one is looking or caring them he felt very happy. He moved towards Phulwa with all his force……

Phulwa looked right to her on some voice seeing Chote takur coming to her. She made a cry and moved aside….

Chote Takur saw his pray has just changed its position…. But before he could stop himself he stepped on to the silky shall fallen down, before from Phulwa's hands and find his way towards outside through the glass window…… "Chote" Kullubhusion cried his heart out……

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Abhay was looking at the watch he had been taken for Phulwa, a square shaped one, its one end contains 3 bands filled with Persian blue, golden and emerald green coloured stones. The opposite end contains two very small roses each directed towards two ends out line of which are done with golden colour…. Half of it projecting to outside… the bezel is white in colour the numbers are written on it with glittering rose colour. … The tip of the second hand of the watch is also a rose shaped one but just the outline only…. The outline is done with something in coordination with the numbers….. The strap of the watch is a very narrow round shaped golden chain. It will look better in Phulwa's hands he thought.

Abhay noticed the agitation outside he came out of the shop and asked to one

"What happened".

Somebody fallen from the textile shop."

Abhay's heart forgot to beat for a second Phulwa? Where is she. He ran to the shop. He entered the shop his eyes searching for only one thing. He saw Phulwa sitting in the corner of the shop….

Phulwa what happened?

Phulwa looked up to see Abhay she ran towards him, fallen to his chest and hold him tightly muttering

"Chote fallen down Abhy, he.. he was coming to me… to…. to push me down …. but.. but on time I… I moved aside and……he stepped in to silky shall and….and slipped."

Abhay heard phulwa with a shock. He know that Phulwa and Chote have some arguments b/w them but never felt that they will reach upto this leavel to the end of one. But he was sure that Phulwa had no hands on chote's death he had been fallen down only because of his deeds.

Abhay was slowly patting her hair and her back to give her whole comforts. He took her face in his hands and said "Calm down Phulwa. Why are you becoming so upset. He had got what he deserves. God paid him for his evil deeds. You are not involved in it any ways. He came to harm you but harmed by himself… what can you do in that… come on we can leave….."

They slowly moved down…. The place is already filled with police and people. Police are asking abt how it happened to those who are present in the shop at that time. They are reported that, he fallen down after slipped by the silky shall in the floor. Somebody saw Phulwa in b/w and told that she was the one who was standing very close to him at that time….

They came near Phulwa, to enquire her… She told what had happened….. They let her go warning that she should have been in the station when ever summoned. She agreed and walk away….. But in the preliminary stages of the investigation itself the innocence of Phulwa was proved with the help of finger print detection. Since from the body of Chote they did not get any finger prints of Phulwa to prove the argument of Phulwa pushed him down and the witnesses are also supporting Phulwa. About one week they all walked behind the case before she was legally announced as innocent.

" I was telling you all from the very time stop pampering this girl this much. Now look what she had been down?" Imarti said in a angry but concerned voice.

"What had done? I am very much proved of my girl she had done a good deed in fact rescuing a poor student from the hands of ragging monsters" Pradhap singh said with a raised head.

He was truly feeling very good in thinking the courage and good mind Phulwa has shown there. In fact all in the two families were feeling good for that their small girl is grown enough to stand against and raise voice against the evil deeds of the society.. But all were a bit concerned with Phulwa's security and any sort of danger over her is something no one in the two families can take upon………… But now everything is safe the investigation also ended telling what ever happened was just an accident no one had any hands in it. So that chote chapter ends there every one thought in relief. While the family discussion was going on Abhay looked at phulwa indicating her to met with him in the terrace. Bhanua kaka noticed it and announced. "Now a day's someone is getting very irritated with our presence" clearly showing what he mean.

Every one smiled on his comment and allowed Phulwa and Abhay to leave them for some time.

Phulwa was arguing with Abhay for doing that but he just forced her to stop all her bla bla.

"Actually I called you to give this Phulwa. He said showing the watch he had been purchased for her last day, " I brought it in that day then our life where so much changed that I don't get any time to give it to you. Whenever you miss me in your life just look at it dear you could hear my heart beats with its second hand's rhythm."

"Miss you in my life? Never, you will be with me forever and don't dare to make me miss you Abhay" She slowly placed her head on his shoulders and looked above at the stars in the sky… the sky seems to be very clear and their life also…. There was a small problem in their life, but that also ended…. Phulwa was feeling so comfortable in Abhay's hands… Abhay was actually thinking what made him say so, he was not said those word purposefully it just came as such. His mind was in fact not calm… but the presence of Phulwa was enough for him to push aside all bad thoughts…….

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While in a few kilometers away at Takur haveli, Takur Dharoga singh was burning in the thought of his son's death…. A small girl… She made the way to his son's death Takur Dharoga singh's son's….. Whatever the law or police or people say for him the death of his son is not just an accident…. He went away from him without completing one job,

" Killing Phulwa"…..

" I will complete it for you my dear son…. I will complete it… She won't be on this earth who caused your death…… A promise of a father to his son…. I promise you son I will kill her……."

"I WILL KILL PHULWA……." The whole haveli shake in the sound of Takur…… his face muscles trembling , his eyes two fire goals…..


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So here we end with the next... I will update the story in every morning from today want to finish it within this week... so much to go. I wanted to finish it before all get bored 😆😆 Comments are most welcome...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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IT was a good move.👏. but dont make phulwa or abhay die in the last. we need a positive and happy end😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woww.athu. ...when u said grief in the last before part i thought of somthing is gonna happen to phulwa..but thnk u..me too wanting a happy ending...those evil minds shuld b punished..again it was fantastic..👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
ones again it's wonderful writing... keep it up👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. This one was action packed update.

The shopping part was so cute. Both of them buying gifts for each other was super cute! 😳

Ch. Thakur wanted to kill Phulwa? How evil he was! And yes, his own ill deeds led him to his death.
God! That Thakur! He wants to kill Phulwa but we know nothing can happen to Phulwa as long as Abhay is there.

Hoping for a happy ever after for PhAb! Good work. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nity92

IT was a good move.👏. but dont make phulwa or abhay die in the last. we need a positive and happy end😍



Believe me I give only a positive end... 😊 How could I can do anything other thatn that after all I love my Phulwa and Abhay a lot... But in b/w there will be some sorrow just to move the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzling_akshi

woww.athu. ...when u said grief in the last before part i thought of somthing is gonna happen to phulwa..but thnk u..me too wanting a happy ending...those evil minds shuld b punished..again it was fantastic..👍🏼



You too Akshi I wont end it sadly believe me... 😭 😭 😭 now I am crying...The real deal is still abt to come dear after that I am sure you people will kill me and even I am afraid that u stop reading my FF but keep on reading I will not end it in a sad note... Evil minds will get punished for sure.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashekha

ones again it's wonderful writing... keep it up👏



Thank you soo much dear... for liking it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ameres

Wow. This one was action packed update.


The shopping part was so cute. Both of them buying gifts for each other was super cute! 😳

Ch. Thakur wanted to kill Phulwa? How evil he was! And yes, his own ill deeds led him to his death.
God! That Thakur! He wants to kill Phulwa but we know nothing can happen to Phulwa as long as Abhay is there.

Hoping for a happy ever after for PhAb! Good work. 😃



Ya romance is ended I think... but can return in the last parts... ya they are... Yes he is so much proud filled and he was shown by his father that everything coming into his way just cut them away... 😡 😡 😡

Ya happy ever after... of course 100%

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