They r 2, but 4 being 1.FF last prt updat page 23. - Page 4

Originally posted by: dazzling_akshi

last part..? oh no...it was fabulous..i really enjoyed it...phulwa should hv taken the bottle and poured on kullubhushan's face...but i really liked it...it was fantastic..the way he expressed his love and the way she said" i belong to u.." wowww...i loved it ...everything was perfect...

the cultural fest name.."rang de colors.."🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: Ameres

Athira! Fabulous updates! 👏👏👏

Sorry I couldnt comment earlier.

The third part- Fantastic like always. Aww, that was so cute even in the exam hall they had eyes for each other. 😳

Uff! That was a real cliff hanger there.

Dear better to say, I did not allow you to do that there 😆 😃 , I was actually rushing with the 4th part. Since I have a greater feeling of "not so good" with the third part 😭 so to escape from that guilty complex I rushed with my 4th part and also tried something new in that to feel a bit up 😊 ... after writing the 4th one I was happy. 😊 But you people really liked it? If I where the reader I may have a nutral stand for that part not good and not bad in fact I may go with bad... 😆. The way you people said good words for the 3rd I was very happy..

Fourth part- So it was Kul. And Ch. Thakur and Thakur is also present? Hm. Interesting. Glad Phulwa showed him and ran away in time.

But why didnt she tell Abhay what happened?
Yes she escaped, our Phulwa is still capable enough to escape for herself 😊 ... And brave enough also. Ya three of them exist 😃😃. They have to in fact I think I wont introduce Sharbathi all others exist... I think...😆 . She wont hide it from him will make it known to him soon.. but just waited for a perfect timing since she dont want him to fall on these all things... Since he wanted to write civil service exam any sort of police case or any bad records on him can affect him... If he came to know how they treated her he will ony going to fight with them... so may be that just not ends in collage...That is why she is trying to keep him away from all these sorts of things...

@confession- Wow!! Amazing! Seriously I loved the confession part. It was such a different way to show it. I could really imagine it happening. Esp Abhay whispering I love you in her ear...amazing! :D

And oh, thanks for adding the pics. Really provided the great visuals.
As I said after that sad 3rd part I wanted to do something that can help me to feel up. I was thinking of the confession in the 4th or 5th update... So frm the time of starting the thinking of confession I wanted to do something different from the usual things so when my head stuck on it I did not took a sigle second to make it true...😉 😊

@Adding pictures: I was not sure about this idea how u people take this? but feel glad when you all accepted it...

Fantastic job! Continue soon. :D

Thank you... 😃 😃 . Yes will continue soon...😉.
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Athira!!!!! That was beautiful!👏

Sorry wasnt here for the 4th part so will comment combined😉

@Part 3- Oh i love the way you showed Phulwa drowned in her books while Abhay teases her. She gets irriated so easily with him while he's like a calm ocean😆 I guess only he can handle Phulwa.
You know what that is the way I used to with my History during my school days... 😉. I have a very good friend, she is too good in history and had a very good note I just study her notes vo bhi just on the day before exam... But I passed all the history exams... 😆 She always used to tell me those words abhay told Phulwa you should have to study these a bit early not now...

@cliffhanger- Oh! Was not expecting it but really a good surprise.😉 Kulbushan! Haye, one villain is needed, i think so very good move! :D
Yes they may have a good part in controlling our story line... 😊 I mean bad control...pls be with me... and support me...

@Part 4- I see you kept Phulwa's core character. She still strong, daring, not afraid to fight injustice. Great!👍🏼

Yes. That character of Phulwa was made us all attract to her then how could I can avoid that? Our Phulwa should be our Phulwa with small changes... Here the biggest strength of Phulwa is Abhay from the very beginning... 😊

Next time, Phulwa should bring some concentrated Hydrochloric acid and give him a taste of his own medicine😆
Yes next time when they will be face to face I promise something will going to happen that can change our story...😉

Chote seems like the same impatient cruel person. i hope Phulwa takes care of these two again and again😉

But I like the fact that she knows when to run to her Abhay. When Abhay gets to know about kullu, i expect some sparks😆
She knows, and she knows when to inform abt them also...

@performance-WOW! That's a brilliant idea you got there. Putting those stills along with the narration just made it all the more real! LOL, i can imagine Abhay not being too keen about it at first but giving in to his phulwa in the end as always😊

Oh thank you you dont know how much confuse I was with this Idea? how will u guys take it...

And you made them confess the love? Aww, that was way too sweet😍 Having Abhay dressed like that and saying 'I love you" Uff❤️😆
Thank you as I said I wanted to make it taste a bit different from other usually seen things so dii it so...

Truly, Every part just gets better and better! 👏👏Waiting eagerly for the next😉
Thank you , ya will update soon...

Originally posted by: akeash

👏👏👏fantastic. amazing writing. like the way Abhay told i love u. truly beautiful.keep it up the good work.a👍🏼

Originally posted by: mimi_s

ATHIRA...👏

i am nt going to comment on anything else but only on their performance and Abhays proposal...it was excellent...the idea of putting the pics were mindblowing ...it jst took your writing to the next level...its awesome...really...i loved phulwas reply...she didnt simply say i love u ...but I belong to u...excellent Athira...and how u have matched the pics with the situations ...lovely...and yes that part is super cute...when Abhay wishes that he had proposed her somewhere alone ...so that he could have kissed her...😊...U know i actually wanted to ask u if u would ever write...some hot romantic scenes...well i guess u will...well done again...loved it and looking frward to the next update...😊