RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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RABTAA-AN UNUSUAL LOVE STORY(02/04/2016)

Hy all dis story of nibir is lil hatke types

I hv written it in 3 parts in each parts der r 8-12 chapters


1st part is from point of view of Nisha as Khamoshyian

2nd of kabir n his side of story as Haal-e-Dil

& 3rd is of mishri as RABTAA-AN UNUSAL LOVE STORY.
So basically my story name is RABTA only
WITH SUBTITLES & CHAPTERS 😉

Hope u all will like it



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INDEX:

KHAMOSHIYAN
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Title song



HAL-E-DIL

Prologue

CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
TITLE SONG


RABTAA AN UNUSUAL LOVE STORY


TEASER
Chap1-Dilemma
Chap2-Flightless
Chap4-Discordant Charm
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RABTA-an unusual Love story

Part A-KHAMOSHIYAN
-(HARDLY contains any dialogues; pure feelings)

prologue

she was very tensed at d same tym happy...
as it might b her last day wid him bt she knows it might b best for him too...

as d tym coming nearer she was becoming more n more hyperactive... taking all responsibility on her young tender shoulders.

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NISHA WAS ONE OF ITS KIND GIRL.
highly positive in nature. eldest of her family of 3ppl .she ,her half paralyzed mother n her little sis who studies in abroad. lives with her mother Laxmi in a very insecure place bt dis brave girl manages all by herself.Very Responsible & Full of life at d same tym.
Nisha was an employee of one of d multi national company. Brilliant in her job.
she thinks her self as very average looking girl bt in fact she was
very attractive &Gorgeous among all other employees of d same company.
Her family supportend her in each n every decision of her life n were always standing by her side .She feels proud to hv such an understanding family.
By Grace of Almighty she has everything in life she needed & want...bt sumwhr deep in side she felt occasionally an emptiness.. lack of sumthing .she has no idea wat was she
missing... until one day dis boy came into her life...

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KHAMOSHIYAN
PART-1

CHAPTER 1


1 month ago ...

THIS 24yrs old beautiful lady don't know anything abt wat was going to happen to her in DAT day.

She left her house as usual for office in her car. While driving she was thinking abt her day which is abt to begin...d day for which she was preparing from last 3-4 months... d day when she was
abt to archive her next career breakthrough..she was handling a project which has got maximum profit among others.

she was day dreaming abt DAT day wat will going to happen today.

Suddenly she felt a large thump n after a while she understand what it was...

as she was unaware DAT while day dreaming she has committed a crime...
she broke signal of highly alienated place .no one was der.as it was early in d morning. she felt guilty although nobody has seen her doing dis crime.
she even didn't realized DAT until ..
she saw in rear mirror... DAT d thump she felt few moments back was nothing else bt she has ran her car thru
a boy...
a shudder passes thru her body ...she almost felt numb.

As she was panicking over dis matter n thinking wat to do next. she saw in rear mirror DAT d boy was still alive ..shallow breathing may b coughing...
she ran out of her car...took him in his hand. her dress got dripped in his blood...
she immediately drove her car towards city hospital ...widout wasting a single moment.
Hospital was
abt 5mins away from DAT place she reached der in no tym...& took dis boy to emergency ward as fast as possible.

The first aid got started of DAT boy..she felt sum relief. after talking to doctor who told her she had got d child
at ryt time few mints later it would b hard for dem to save him.
she thought to herself how lucky she was to reach on tym.
Within Few hours police was called to investigate dis matter of hit & run case.as she already narrated a fictional story to Hospital staff.
On being asked by police abt how& whr she got dis child...she told d same fictional story DAT she found him lay on so n so road .he was ran over a anonymous car...n other sort of things...

Few hours later boy started improving. his vital stats coming back to normal.she was feeling more relieved now..
Her guilt had decreased to sum extent
& she w as positive here too.that soon dis boy will become absolutely normal.


After dis matter resolved...she suddenly felt DAT it was her day in office... Everyone would b waiting for her n she has stuck here in dis hospital. Due to her own mistakes :'(

To b continued...
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characters
Nisha
Kabir

Kabir with his best friend Saurav (ignore that person behind them-coz uska is FF se koi Lena Dena ni h😆)

laxmi
Addition characters-
Dr. Virat




SHAAN THE LOCAL GOON

Nisha singhaniya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start 👍🏼
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pm's sended 😳
Superb start
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii ...
Tanya here

Concept seems reallly nice!
The start was fab!!
Continue soon !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept
Really loved the character of Nisha.
Her positive attitude,
The accident was a mistake, but she didn't ran from there.
She saved the life of the boy.
Thanks for the pm Sujay
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update thanks for the pm
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Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳

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