RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome...

Thank you Hiyu 😉

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neha_zamia500

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

Appi means di.. I will call u appi.. otherside was awesome and it's kinda unique.. I just love this. I just came from school.. and also feeling headache.. that's y I m not writting a passage.. but loved it ❤️ ❤️

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: neha_zamia500
Appi means di.. I will call u appi.. otherside was awesome and it's kinda unique.. I just love this. I just came from school.. and also feeling headache.. that's y I m not writting a passage.. but loved it ❤️ ❤️

awww finally u read it sisso zami
its oki
❤️
m glad u liked it 😊

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Saurabh Rai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Hmm I got it... Good story. Keep it up...

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Mickey_S1
Hmm I got it... Good story. Keep it up...

thanx 😉

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

so guys m updating final part of KABIR'S side story Haal-E -dil

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Saurabh Rai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Hut k andar ka story update kb hoga Needa??? ? ???? ? 😔

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

chap8

Kabir was all happy & cheered up after leaving village.Coz he was now going to meet some1 special.

On returning back to Mumbai he thought to visit his younger brother Virat.who was living in hostel nearby dat village...
He bought some chocolates & some gifts for him on the way.
and was all prepared to surprise his younger brother Virat who was a special child.Virat deaf & dumb by birth studying & living in dis hostel frrom years.Who loves his brother Kabir a lot as he was his only family member.Kabir too was very fond of him.Always loving & pampering Virat & strict too in times.

Virat who was unaware of fact that Kabir was not his real brother wanted to become just like him on growing up, Kabir was his role model & Kabir too don't want to reveal it to him ever that he was not his real brother.

After reaching Hostel kabir was bewildered as an unexpected thing had happened in his absence...

Warden informed Kabir that summer vacation had started & Virat had urged to go to Mumbai to surprise u.
we had Offered him a guard who will accompany him bt he had refused.
Describing himself as grown up & insisted on going Mumbai alone .

He called his home in Mumbai to find sumthing more shocking der.
From home
he got to know another shocking news abt his brother ...
Virat never came here .
so now
Virat was missing.
as he left his boarding school to surprise him
bt didn't reached home...
Kabir fumed badly on warden how dey allowed Virat to go all alone.
But now wat to do...
Kabir got panicked he immediately called Saurav & informed abt all.
Saurav calmed him down saying-

"Kabir me aaraha hoon.Veeru ko kuch ni hoga.hum mil k dhoondh lenge .tu tension mat le."

Saurav disconnected Kabir's call & immediately called police filing a missing case as he knew Kabir won't ever file a case coz he was nt having faith in judicial systems.
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meanwhile in Police station Near Kabir's home
Police registered the case & attached photo of Virat on wall as missing brother of Kabir Singh.

A local thief & goon 'Shan' who WaS getting released on that day saw Kabir's name on the wall & that pic of Virat too.
He immediately remembered where he saw this child,
'Nisha Gangwal, yahi h us ladki ka naam jis k ghar me ye rehta h.'
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Kabir reached Mumbai & was missing Virat terribly .
Calling his no. on his cell bt it was only coming switched off.
He was lost in times when they were together. Those special moments which They had spent together .
Playing , teasing , fighting all were flashing in front of Kabir.
Virat only person in dis world to b called n tagged as his family member as of now.
He loved him so much he was sole reason why Kabir was alive till now. without Virat he would have been lifeless.
Kabir was regretting of not calling or not being updated abt Virat.
He should be acknowledged by Virat's activities. He should took care of him& should track down what's happening to Virat. from time to time.
Saurav arrived next day.Telling him his reason to which Kabir dismissed paying zero attention.
Lost in thoughts& deep into Hus regrets .
This state of Kabir was broken by an unexpected video call on Kabir's phone by unknown no.
Kabir received call & jumped in his seat with astonishment after seeing Virat on call.

Then a voice came from call, camera's focus still facing only on Virat who was tied by rope in chair.

'apka bhai hamre pass h , agar zinda chahiye to Mumbai k pass thodi dur jungle me 50 Crore le k ana.
Police ko inform karne ki koshish ki to.'

Camera now showing a hand with a knife on Virat's Neck.
'yaad rakhna.warna...anjam accha ni hoga.'

To b continued...

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: Mickey_S1
Hut k andar ka story update kb hoga Needa??? ? ???? ? 😔

ummm u hv to wait for that ...soon I will reveal that as well...till den enjoy dis part..which I have updated now

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Saurabh Rai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#260

Yuppp abhi abhi dekha maine ye Kabir, virat waala... It's nice.. .
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Bah Bah Bah Bah Bah Adbhut likhi ho...
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Aap pe to ek picture ban ni chaahiye..
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