RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: Krish58
Ok so finally needs last chap of hal e dil padha and here goes review...
Hmmm so bunty is virat..and Ab virat ko kisi ne kidnap kiya hain what will happen next will continue soon

Thanx krishu...3part or h WO b padhle jaldi se same maja ayega😆

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

@somwat violet- Thanku 😳

now I'll update next part😉

@red-Yaaayyy🥳

@pink - ye to secret h😆
@blue- hmmm ty

@green-Hmmm NiBir story h...nibir scene to honge hi...wait is over finally tonight I'll update... So b ready

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Pehli baar color kiya h...kaisa lagra h sujay bro😳 ?!!

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: -VisheshTippani

@pink - ye to secret h😆
@blue- hmmm ty
@green-Hmmm NiBir story h...nibir scene to honge hi...wait is over finally tonight I'll update... So b ready
😃
Pehli baar color kiya h...kaisa lagra h sujay bro😳 ?!!

Superb hai needa 😉
I hope mera comment long tha 😆

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb hai needa 😉
I hope mera comment long tha 😆

Thanku😳

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#415

Ya it was of fairly good length... 😊

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#416

New character added

I'll reveal who's she later😳😳😳

Edited by -VisheshTippani - 10 years ago

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#417

RABTAA
Chap04: discordant charm

It was now Dusk when
Nisha Reached to that bill wala dhaba the same bill which she had found in that hut where bunty was kept.
on inquiring she got to know a local goon named Shan ordered all this & went without even paying to Dhaba.The cashier knew all & remembered this coz there was no stamp there As- PAID ..the cashier vividly remembered --on asking for money that goon was.threatening them with a knife...
Nisha panicked more as his Bunty was in hands of such a perilous person.
She need to track them all down fast & save bunty...bt now the question arise how she would save bunty alone she required a source of help...
also she thought to find to whom that name & no. belong the same paper she found in that hut. which states on front Virat Singh Rathod & on back a no.{ye hame pata h wo Bunty Ka real name h nisha ko ni pta 😛}
now as she knew it was a local goon... police would b now helping her out in saving her brother bunty. . .

when she turned she was startled.
on seeing again that marvelously crafted face in front of her.
She just can't believe on her eyes...She was not dreaming also...
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KABIR'S side of story-

He was driving his way to the place now kidnapers had asked...
While reaching a Dhaba around 4pm he stopped his car to freshen up...
He had some meals there stayed for about 20- 30 mins.
&again began his journey.

but in middle of nowhere his car got punctured..he checked for a spare tyre
but that was also punctuated... He searched for a nearby shop of car tyres or hardware tools..but was unsuccessful as he was nt having a smart phone along with him to track a nearby hardware car tool shop or any other help for that matter...he waited for lift for about 1or 2 hours...
after that a truck driver gave him lift to near by Dhaba where such facilities were available...
That truck driver took KABIR to hotel Sunshine Dhaba...He called Saurav from mobile of Hotel's cashier .
And acquainted all to him -his situation & how he could nt reached that place on time aloted by Kidnappers.how he got stucked in middle of no where .no means of communication. no hopes to reach on time to that place now.
From KABIR'S voice it was visible How frustrated he was .
Saurav calamed him down
Saying- sun tu tension mat le me kuch karta hun.
But itne saare paise tu kahan se arrange karega?? asked kabir.
S- dekh abi tu wahin reh.agar kidnappers Ka call aya to me unko Teri situation k baare me bata k tujhe isi no. pe call back karta hun.
K- okey.
& he discontented the call.

when he reached to return cell phone & pay to cashier...
He was marvelled to see her again in front of him...
it was as if unbelievable thing was happening to him.
in the middle of this chaos.She again met him.or he met her again...whatever the scenario was...To kabir
Her aura her persona was something irresistible.
He greeted her.
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Nisha's POV-
It was happening to her again...again her heart was racing as if its a matter of life& death if it will not beat this fast...
Nisha was telling her heart to stop beating so fast..Just then.
He greeted.
Kabir-Hy Nisha.
Nisha-Hey .KABIR right??tumne hi mujhe Hospital pahunchaya Tha na.(oh hell ye mene kya boldiya)
Kabir- what do u mean..(lifting one eyebrow)
Nisha-i mean to say ...u only took me to hospital... help ki meri.or me ek thank you tak ni bol payi apko ...u left b4 I woke up.(phewww...)
K- don't b so formal.ummm. to Ab kehdo.
Nisha- thanks a lot Kabir.
K- yeah alright ...tell me how r u now??
N- M Fine.
K- dikhto ni rahi...(Said pouting)
..btw what is the reason?y u r here at this time? u should b in hospital now,don't u?! treatment complete hogya?! (asked in disbelief&concern for her)
N- tumhe us se kya..meri marzi me kahin b jaun...for ur kind information.. help ki meri us k liye thank you boldiya h..abi zyaada apna pan dikhane ki zarurat ni h.I know when I should b where.
(samjhta kya h khud ko.mana k accha h bt help kari h to kya abi haq b jatayega)
K-(while paying to cashier for a call& saying to him)
abi ek or call ayega us Ka b paisa lelo.
(facing to Nisha again)
he said- Wo to hai... tumhari marzi h Jo karna h karo.
&went to sit on a table nearby ordering for himself dinner.

Nisha too moved &sat on a table opposite to him.(finally I spoke the right thing...mene kuch zyaada toh ni boldiya...bt never mind konsa hum dobara Milne wale hain..)

KABIR to himself- dikhne me kitni sweet si h...bt hai kitni rude.
"meri marzi". huh!!!
.agar samney wala concern show kar raha h to tantrum koi show karta h bhala.

till den his meals were arrived & he saw what Nisha had brought for herself &was having...A wada pav.!!!

watching nisha eating wada pav of street he got in to his past where his secret ex-gf of which he hide from all.. even from Saurav ...
who refused to eat roadside food along with him...

a waiter diverted his attention.. when he came & told -a call was der for u Mr.Kabir.
&he went.
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Nisha was not sure whr she will b staying at night.
She was left with some money which was insufficient to pay for a hotel room.. on this highway.

She decided to stay in open...
ek raat hi to katni h . . . kal subah hote h nazdik k police stn me ja k sab bta dena h.phir wo bunty ko jaldi dhundh nikalenge...
Kabir came to her &said -yaha khule me kya kar rahi ho?!
N- wo shauchale mila ni na to khule me hi ...
Kabir gave I don't believe dis wala look.& offered her to stay in his hotel room.
k- dekh ek hi room available h...agar tu chahe to us me reh sakti h..me car me so jaunga.. .
Nisha- no thank you... I'll manage.
K- are u sure Nisha??
N- Ya I'm. u don't have to worry.
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KABIR too decided to stay in open that night.
At night around 11pm Nisha was feeling hungry as she had only Vada pav .nothing besides that from afternoon.
KABIR knew that dis would happen so he had already
brought some fruits to eat
He offered her ...But dis time she didn't rejected his offer as she was damn hungry.
KABIR was starring at her while she was eating...
Nisha- Ghoor kyun raha h...tu bhi kha .
K- nah I'm full wo to bs...unhi..

To b continued...

Edited by -VisheshTippani - 10 years ago

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Anmol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#418

Superb update 👏

Nisha ne apna ladaku vimaan nikal hi diya 😆

Nibir fight. Loved it...!!

Continue soon...!!!

Edited by Anmol333 - 10 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#419

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Oh god needa i was laughing when i was reading this update 😆

Nibir nok-jhok was superb 👏

Awesome update 👏

Kabir is so caring 😳 but nisha is very rude 😈

But i am liking this chemistry alot 😳

Well update soon needa i am loving this story alot 😳

Thanks for pm

Edited by Sujayricky - 10 years ago