RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Superb dear

Interesting concept ... loved it

all chptrs r awsome

cont soon

thnks for pm

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: heemasomani
Amazing update

thanx dear 😊

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Nice update
Bunty lost his memory, but what is his role in nisha's life.
The accident story was heart touching.
Waiting for your next update

thanx dear 😊

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: anu012
Superb dear
Interesting concept ... loved it
all chptrs r awsome
cont soon

thnks for pm

thanx dear.. updating now 😊

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
awwweeesome ❤️
read all 4 parts
superb story meri jaan :*
I love u
kya likhti h tu 😃
mein to Teri fan hu 😉
and tuJhse zyada MEIN EXCITED HU ISS STORY KE LIYE
Continue sooonish 😳 plzzz

yeah babeszzz 😉
I know dat
m continuing now
plz koi pm kardo coz meko ni ata 😔

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: anu012
Superb dear
Interesting concept ... loved it
all chptrs r awsome
cont soon

thnks for pm

thanx a lot ...

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

chalo shukar sabko story pasand ayi...
hello ppl...
now m taking a turn...
now I'll tell all story of Our Kabir...

Hal-E-Dil

half story I hv told u abt nisha...half interval k baad abi Kabir ki kahani dekho..I mean padho 😛

so here it is...

HAAL-E-DIL

Prologue

In dis underdevelopmenot village far away from his own city...under shade of dense tree...
he was once again called to meet panchayat for his respective matter...

KABIR a highly successful bachelor of dis decade.A business tycoon. famous for his punctuality & commitments. running successfully all his companies with his sharpness & capabilities... which includes manufacturing to marketing in each & every sector ranging from food&agriculture to jet&airway industry.For him his work is a priority and he will never compromise on that.

Kabir Singh Rathod aged 26 had his priorities set- S.R. GROUP of
industries.

Every rich & social businessman wanted him to join hands with him by some or d other means.some wants to collaborate others wanted their beautiful daughters to marry dis handsome young man.

kabir was aware of all dis, despite dis fact dat he was one of d most eligible bachelors he was not even interested in any1 .Reason behind dis was not dat he was gay or something bt he was d one who had already lost so much in life dat he don't want to get attached to any1 now.

very intelligent in selecting his employs.Chooses one who's not so experience bt who's loyal & trustworthy.

and whoever even d one who tries to break his trust he never forgive dem& leave dem.
He was d one who can't tolerate injustice & fraud done to him or to any1 for dat matter.
he was capable to punish dem for their bad deeds. He never waited for judicial system to punish dem.in fact he used to think as judicial system isn't reliable as criminals get clean chits while innocence one got punishment...

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 10 years ago

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

The character of kabir is nice.
I think he has a painful past.
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Res
Unres
Needa a superb story 👏

Kabir character is awesome 👏
Update soon 😉
Thanks for pm

Edited by sujoyricky - 10 years ago

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

hello and welcome here ... this is really a different story and seems interesting ... i read all the parts today and liked them all ... sorry for commenting late .. and thanks for sending me pms ... 😊