RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

First of all.. I'm sorry for commentING. .😆

The story is awsm...it's a very different concept so please continue it...nd please don't discontinue it...

Waiting for yor update...update it soon..😃

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: itzanya32
First of all.. I'm sorry for commentING. .😆
The story is awsm...it's a very different concept so please continue it...nd please don't discontinue it...
Waiting for yor update...update it soon..😃

y R u sorry for commenting??
don't b sorry dear ...I'm glad dat u commented... I'll update soon ..thanx

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: vishesh_Tippani

kind??! really Neha :P
k find...error in typo queen 🤣

thanx dear.bt update will depend on response.

sahi pakde hain...
kind nhi find hi tha!! 🤣
plzz don't even think to discontinue plzzz... 😲
keep writing ...
I m loving this story ❤️

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

sahi pakde hain...
kind nhi find hi tha!! 🤣
plzz don't even think to discontinue plzzz... 😲
keep writing ...
I m loving this story ❤️

Thanx Neha. ❤️ m updating next part now. Ab to pm karna b agaya mujhe 😃😉

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Thanx all for encouragement I m continuing it 👍🏼

Than Q all . . .

Here is d next part...

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT😊

chap4

Kabir Singh u don't even know proper address of Saurav's village how would u reach der ??

Kabir asked himself.

He den remembered dat he owned a telecom company as well which can track his phone location in no tym.

After tracing d last location K planed to go der all alone.

He reached dat place which was very remote from his hometown city Mumbai.

It took almost 5 hrs to reach dat place.

Again he was not sure as from WHR to start his searching for him...last location suggested dis place only..

an underdevelopment village.. bt now how to go abt...

s recent pic was der in K's phone he showed to village ppl.

one of dem helped him to reach to panchayat.dey confirmed dat S belonged to this village bt his family & him were involved in a fraud ... &THEY RAN AWAY WITH ALL THE MONEY.

Kabir denied dis...as he knows S very well. he never would do such fraud to any1.infact he WAS against all such things.

K though to himself that Saurav had called him few days back..he must b in trouble...He should help him n get him out of dis false allegation.

Then Kabir said to panchayat ...he would help dem to find him.

They agreed & placed a condition as well.

K cannot leave dis place until dey found S & his entire family.

K too accepted to dis condition knwimg dat There must b another side of it which he should find out as early as possible.&

He decided to stay in village .till d matter get resolved...

Next day again he was called by pamchayat for his respective matter.Under shade of dense tree.

K suggested we should search him from where he had last seen or with whom he was last seen...

While Searching for S , at evening time.

K got attacked by some ppl in village. To escape & to hide from dem he entered a hut ...

There he met a girl...

To b continued...

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: vishesh_Tippani

Thanx Neha. ❤️ m updating next part now. Ab to pm karna b agaya mujhe 😃😉

shukar khuda ka... 😊
and Congo [<:D]

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 9 years ago

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

awesome update... ❤️
saurav involved in a fraud??
mujhe b lagta h kuch gadbad h!! o_O
kabir met a girl 😃
but kon??
nishu?? 😲
wo village me kaise??
m so excited to read next
continue soon