RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09* - Page 2

Interesting concept

Very nice beginning dear continue soon...

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Pm's sended 😳
Superb start
Update soon

thanx a lot bro.
ya will update soon...

Nice start

Superb strt

Hi dear

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome concept

Really loved the character of Nisha.

Her positive attitude,

The accident was a mistake, but she didn't ran from there.

She saved the life of the boy.

Thanks for the pm Sujay

Waiting for your next update

thanx a lot for encouragement..
will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome concept

Really loved the character of Nisha.

Her positive attitude,

The accident was a mistake, but she didn't ran from there.

She saved the life of the boy.

Thanks for the pm Sujay

Waiting for your next update

thanx a lot for encouragement..
will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: tanya119

Hii ...

Tanya here

Concept seems reallly nice!

The start was fab!!

Continue soon !!

hy Tanya
now I'll b writing story with double speed..
bt ek baat btao ye newbie ki restrictions se bahar kab niklungi 😔

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Hi dear

the story line seems good

just plz explain things in little more detail

ky ni samjha dear ??