RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

ooops correction...
atki nai h slow speed me chal rai h!! 🤣
but at least har chapter me story agey badhti h!!
me late updates deti hu bhale hi but zyada content hota h!!
aur Teri na jaldi de rai aur na hi lambi 😛
turtle kahi ki... 😆

and look whose supporting u 😲
the turtle king sujoy bro 🤣
pehle lhud apni story update karo phir mujhe bolna 😛

bade aye dono huh

chal be chal nikal ...apni story complete kar -when truth came in open- phir baat karna...n BTW ek song add kardene se story lambi ni hojati -_-

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Hola ppl
its my 112th post on IF...thanx all for ur PRECIOUS comments...&LIKING MY STORY & BANNER...

here is the next part
HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE OT TOO...

chap3

Saurav calling him amidst of night with unknown number .it signals nothing bt he was stuck somwhr.he might b in great trouble.He would defiantly in need of Kabir's help...
But Kabir had no idea how to help him...

On overhearing his phone conversation in farmhouse on dat day. Kabir never assumed that he can b in trouble due to dat matter.

on inquiring more with his neighbors Kabir got to know dat he was in a quite tensed state for his family who lives away in a village.They told Kabir...
"Kuch family me problem chal ri thi.Uski family ko le kar hi kafi pareshan rehta Tha woh..."
One of the neighbor informed Kabir that He also didn't appeared here in last 5-6 days...

Kabir was blaming himself.. me b Kaisa best friend hun uska !! sirf naam Ka! selfish ekdum..jab mujhe uski zarurat hoti wo hamesha hazir or Ab, jab, usko meri zarurat h to me...bt me kuch janta b to ni hun...Kyun USNE mujhse ye sab baatein chupayi...
ander hi ander sab jhelta raha akele.. mujhe apni success ki chaka chauund se bahar ane Ka mauka b ni diya mana k wo mujhe pareshan ni karna chahta hoga bt bata k to ja sakta tha... akhir matter hi kya h mujhe uska tk idea ni h me uski help karun b to Kaise ...
Ku saurav Ku?? Ku ni btaya mujhe apne dil Ka haal...

Kabir Thought to himself -
Jo b ho ab waha ja k hi pta karna hoga sab.

He instructed all his staffs to work efficienfly till he got back to office.

He was thinking nothing bt wat might happened to his best friend... all d possibilities he was ruling out.
among dem superior one was
There might b a big conflict between his family for some property matter.for which he got struck der...
others...might b dat
S was just fooling him..bt he never did dat knowing K's anger.
or He might b just missing him so he called bt due to weak network it disconnected...

Whatever reason behind it..I must go der to see him now...
Kabir said to himself...

To b continued...

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 10 years ago

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Anmol

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Nice update 👍🏼

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

hmmm now go n kind your best frnd...
wat might hv happened with saurav I wonder... 😲
hope kabir finds out and solve it... 😊
good luck kabireee 😉
continue soon siiisssoo