RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09*

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

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m updating next part today evening

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Hope u all enjoy ...& like dis part as well 😊

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Anmol

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Yeh kya mera res uper reh gaya or part niche 😆🤣

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

RABTAA
CHAP 2: Flightless

Reading Her name on Identity card...
Kabir's Pov-
How could I do dis.
my Brother is in danger n m here with Nisha. Nisha ahhh u r so contagious.
Y u r infecting me with ur innocent face.
Nisha y u met me there like dat.
kuch b bewajaj ni hota.But is tarah milna kyun ?!is waqt hi !?wo b aise?!! .on middle of road!!? unconscious. !I can't bear ur silence plz get well soon.

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dat night he spent der only in hospital he even saw nisha in his dreams...
They both were together holding each others hand Kabir singing...
Tu hi yeh mujhko bata de chahun me ya na...apne tu dil Ka pta de chahun me ya na...

Aisi pehele kabhi hui na thi khwahishe...kisi se b Milne ki na ki this koshishen...
uljhan meri suljha de...
ankhon ankhon me bta de...

He wake up horrified seeing her going away from him...leaving his hand..slowly they were separating... until he was in touch of her fingers..which too lost his contact den she vanished...

it was morning as well...

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NISHA'S POV-

After that incident in hut
I only able to think that I am alive here.or I might b in heaven as its bright outside..hearing bird's chirping sounds...I think m attending my consciousness back again gradually in a ward of any hospital or someone's home not sure of wat place it's actually.Slowly opening my eyes cautiously not to get hurt much due to light coming from outside as sun is already on its peak throwing so much of glare. penetrating thru my lashes.
After opening my eyes beating that glare of sun with my fortitude.
I m now sure it's a room of a fairly good hospital. with a broad window near my bedside from which Sunlight is coming & a see-through Glass walled room from which corridor is visible.Beside my bed there was a table where few medicine are kept & a saline holder from which a small pipe line of liquid is coming & inserted into my backside of palm.. into my vein.
I tried to get up but suddenly I felt a sharp lancinating pain the same pain which I had felt in my head.while saving bunty in dat hut.
Ahh oki now I Remember what exactly happened der in dat hut.
I went unconscious when sum1 hit me badly on my head.
"Ahhh ye pain, but kaise b kar k jaldi yahan se nikalna h.!!Bunty kahan hoga?!kis haal me hoga.?!
Sab meri hi galti h..mujhe aise hi kisi k saath ni bhejna chahiye Tha Bunty ko I Should inquire abt them.b4 sending bunty with them.But I promise Bunty Tumko kuch ni hone dungi me"
& again tried to move...but couldn't...

she wanted to move & go back to bunty again bt was unable to move on account of pain in her head which was still der throbbing ...thru Occiput spreading to whole head telling her to relax in the bed.To keep quite & stay calm.
leaving all to Almighty...

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After a moment a nurse enter into d room seeing her conscious went for Doctors to inform dem.
Nisha was still Feeling intense pain which compelling her to become more & more restless.

She wanted to move & get out of dat place as soon as possible to rescue bunty.
Her sole source of happiness. Her own younger brother although not by blood bt by heart.
She was feeling so miserably helpless. she can't even move from here due to pain how she will save him.She thought to herself-
"Kuch bhi ho jaldi se yahan se nikal k wapas wohi jungle me jana hoga .Akhir kahan le gaye honge wo bunty ko.Koi clue mil jaye shayad wahan ja k.Bt first I hv to get ride of this throbbing headache...ahhh its still hurting badly..."

when Doctors arrived
They asked her Why she was dehydrated for this long...
even starving.
"The impact of hit by some object would be lesser if u had proper meal & kept urself hydrated. by the way who hit u dat badly?!
we assume dat ur unconsciousness was mainly due to dehydration coz...
All reports are normal showing no significant Danger only minor head injury bt still we need to observe it few more days ..."
'Few more days!!!' -Nisha asked in surprise.
Doctor nodded in yes.&
Said 'if other reports which we r waiting for are normal too then u can get discharge today itself.'
Nisha smiled happily.
Then she remembered she hadn't hv anything to save bunty she left home early no breakfast no dinner nothing. she didn't even drank much of water on dat day.But no she can't afford to stay here few more days. She need to get out of here as soon as possible.
she was praying to God that the remaining reports should cum normal as well...
she was sure she went unconscious in jungle so how come she is waking up in dis hospital ward!?
Nisha was thinking how she came here bt she was unable to recollect .

Nisha asked Doctor dat how did she came here?

before
doctors could reply her this questions...

A handsome man with sharp features & pleasant smile was coming towards her ward...in nisha's dozy view thru dat glass walls she still was able to see his masculine features ..sturdy yet cute face, rigidity with a touch of tenderness...
His black Hairs bouncing on his forehead with every step he was taking , His sharp nose , rounded spontaneous eyes it was as if it's a prince from a fairy tale came to alive, to her surprise his view made her
heart beats fasten.as if its racing...
Dhak ..dhak... with each step he was taking & abt to enter the ward...

To b continued...

Edited by -VisheshTippani - 10 years ago

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Anmol333
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love u anni sis...ye kya jaoo h...update se pehle ur reservation 😉
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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

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Awesome update...
Chahu me ya na fav song .. 😳
Aye haaye tere description se mujje Vivian lyu yaad ara hai
Chalo finally nibir going to meet 😉

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 9 years ago