RABTAA~Chap5-Submarine Recall-pg78 *08/09* - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mishri0209

Superb strt

M sure dis ll b a hatke story
W8ng 4 d nxt


yeah thanx

story likhne wali jab hatke h toh uski stories b hatke hi hongi Ka 😉
many more to come..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
an awesome start.
update d nxt part soon
waiting for nibir meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

an awesome start.
update d nxt part soon
waiting for nibir meeting


thanx
abi nibir meeting ko kaafi tym h 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
thanx all
@Nibirlove_amu
@Anmol333
@nibir143
@MysticRiver
@Gerua
@alisha17
@naucfan
@plaksha2002
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
KHAMOSHIYAN

CHAPTER-2



AFTER REALIZING DAT WHR she should be..
NISHA THOUGHT TO INFORM ABT ALL THIS TO Her OFFICE &DAT SHE is unable to come der today too...
immediately after realising she reached for her cell & discovered 22 miss calls from office.
She called back in no tym ..
D voice on other side appeared to b worried. It was her best friend as well as Secretary of her boss SARA who asked her so many questions on listening to her voice in one go.
She calms her DOWN.
Telling whatever happened n how she had managed...
On listening to dis Sara turned low on tone asking "so u won't appear today in office ??!"
Nisha replied affirmatively.
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Now it was 12noon on d clock & she was rewinding
wat had happened to her n comparing it wid wat she wanted to happen ...
DAT made her sad...

She thought of informing d same to her family bt immediately dropped d idea on account of nt to make dem sad as well or tensed .

The reports of d boy has came n dat shows no significant harm to him no fracture or anything major like brain hemorrhage,cerebral edema etc.
Der was minor injuries n he was unconscious just bcz of shock due to profuse bleeding nothing serious as she thought at d sight of DAT boy in her rear mirror lying in pool of blood
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D doctor told Nisha to go home as he(injured boy) is out of danger &luckily no police will b behind her to investigate on her as she had told dem fictional story ...she felt Fortunate abt it on WHR all dis happened der was no one to b represented as a witness
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she went back home.
on seeing her clothed dipped in blood her mother got panic.
Shazia told her to relax-'LAXMI RELAXMI ' n gave her Bp medicine.
after dinner she told her all n she had taken few days leave as well to came out of dis trauma

she lied as she had not.

TO B CONTINUED...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Very nice update 👍🏼
Thoda long update dena next time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Awesome update 😊
Lekin itna chotu sa update😔 next time long dena ok. Please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Nice update
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm Sujay
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
I m soon existed.. sry for not commenting on ur last chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice update'
But want little big update

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