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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786
cheating hai cheating...
kabir ka part dete dete u gave nisha's ... 😲😡

nishu n bunty's is so cute... loving it!! do continue soon... 😳
nibir story kab start hogi?? 😲
waitingggss

Badi jaldi h Nirbir ki Nehu 😛
hogi jald hi pehle Ye dono part to khatam hojayen...
ya will update tonight :)
&lastly thank u ...

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: poornima_15
sweet bond btw nisha and bunty ... cute update 😊

thank u poornima :)

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: anu012
lovely update
loved nisha bunty bond
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thanx dear :)
will update.

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: mishri0209
part7&8 r on page no????
i jst cant find dm yar.. plz tell me d page no plzz..
of khamoshiyan

mene abi tak update hi ni kiya :P
wo surf likha h index me ..will update tonight 7th chapter of khamoshiyan...
I'll send PM when done :)

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome update 👏
Nibir story kab start karogi? 😆

wah dono bhai behno ko nibir part padhne Ki badi jaldi h...
wait bro. sabr Ka fal meetha. I mean Mishri ;)

Thanks a lot.

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: vishesh_Tippani

Badi jaldi h Nirbir ki Nehu 😛
hogi jald hi pehle Ye dono part to khatam hojayen...
ya will update tonight :)
&lastly thank u ...

lastly thank you ??
na bolti to hi acha hota !!!
aur nibir story h to nibir ki jaldi to hogi hi na

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Dr.Needa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Hello guys, here, I am again, to torture you with another part of Nisha's side~Khamoshiyan
of my story Rabtaa.
I know everybody is eagerly waiting for nibir part.
. Bt as I hv said already dis is lil hatke type so u all hv to wait till end of
last chapters of KHAMOSHIYAN & HAAL-E-DIL 😛

So, feel free to criticize. We have
plenty of brilliant writers on this forum & plenty of
brilliant critic as well. .So an honest criticism will be
highly appreciated , instead of being abusive. So,
friends, please give me honest opinion about this chapter.

RABTAA

Chapter 7

2weeks passed like dis all were very happy .
Nisha was feeling That emptiness that lack of something which she used to feel is no longer there.Now she is content even though things are not pretty well on professional aspects ,her personal life& emotional quotient were sole source of her happiness.
whenever she was around bunty all her disappointment & sorrow used to vanish..as if der was not a any.

Ho Oo OO Ooo..
Meri Duniya ,Meri Duniya ,Meri Duniya Tu Hi Ve
Meri Khushiya,Meri Khushiya,Meri Khushiya Tu Hi Ve
Meri Duniya ,Meri Duniya ,Meri Duniya Tu Hi Ve
Meri Khushiya,Meri Khushiya,Meri Khushiya Tu Hi Ve
Raat Din Tere Liye Sajde Karu Duyaien Maangu Re
Mein Yahan Appne Liye Rab Se Teri Balaein Mangu Re
Ho Oo OO Ooo..
Tune Hi Jeena Sikhaya
mujhko yun Accha Inshan Banaya
Zindagi Hai Tera Saaya
Anjanao Ko Seedha Rasta Deekhaya
Tu Nai Ek Roshni Le Aaya Hai Jeevan Ki Raahon Mein
Har Ghadi Guzre Teri
Saari Umar Abb Apne Baahon Mein
Ho Oo OO Ooo..

She remembered meeting him first on that day when she ran her car over him by mistake bt now she was taking his care as well as making up for her mistake... Bunty was constant source of happiness amidst of her dilemma in professional front.

Humne Ki Jo Bhi Khataaien
Hum Jhelenge Unki Saari Saaaja Bhi
Humne Ki Jitni Jafayen
Hum Unse Bhi Abb Karenge Wafa Bhi
Hooo..Hum Naye Mausam Naya, Aalam Naya
Badle Hain Armaan Bhi
Keh Rahi Eshaas Ki Gehraiyan Tehra Hai Tofaan Bhi
O Oo OO Ooo..
Meri Duniya ,Meri Duniya ,Meri Duniya Tu Hi Ve
Meri Khushiya,Meri Khushiya,Meri Khushiya Tu Hi Ve
Raat Din Tere Liye Sajde Karu Duyaien Maangu Re
Mein Yahan Appne Liye Rab Se Teri Balaein Mangu Re
O Oo OO Ooo..

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all going well until this day when a hawaldar came with the news... that dey hv found out Bunty's real parents.They were searching from d day he was hospitalized after dat accident n now some1 after a month came to dem for bunty.
the news came up as a shocker for nisha .she was feeling as if she was losing control over everything or as if something was slipping out of her hands which she was afraid to lose...
bt she was happy for bunty who'll meet his real parents.

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current day...

The day has finally arrived..when Bunty's parents would come to take their son back to home.

Nisha was very tensed at d same tym happy...
as it might b her last day wid him bt she knows it might b best for him too...

as d tym of their arrival coming nearer she was becoming more n more hyperactive... taking all responsibility on her young tender shoulders.

She had taken a good care of their son she thought to her self. They might b allowing her to meet Bunty once in a while. Oh wait Wat would b his real name she wondered.. as dis name was not his own .dis was given to him as to address him only in Hospital .
whatever his name would b she said to her self she will always call him bunty only.
For her he will b his lil brother bunty forever nothing will change dat.

She was very anxious & nervous ...
even bunty was not looking happy.as though he also don't wanted to leave nisha .

Nisha lost in her thoughts Bunty who resembles her younger brother whom she had lost in dat accident along with her father, 4 years back .same accident in which laxmi got half paralysed...
How in an accident only she found him...How she got attached to him as if she again got back his lil brother ..bt now he would b leaving her soon.
This stance was broken by door bell...
Too b continued...

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago