MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35

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Prologue


one lady between 20 to 22 lying on bed without any cloth ,one man just attacking her body without any mercy , but she cant react to him , like his touch not touching her body , her mind her soul is not present with her beautiful body yes she have perfect beautiful body which made anyone crazy but she just hate herself , her body which took her in present situation ,she don't react to that man , that made that man more and more wild all her body turn blue with his bits , but she never hiss in pain , at last when that man finish his work he just slap her on her cheek and say You w****, cant response , i give money for this to you're your ...HUSBAND ,she say first word in full night


Yes her husband send her with another man for S** so he get money, she is his money making machine her body is way of his earning she is MRS GEET SINGAHANIYA /GEET HANDA a s***, she smile on her faith and push that man away and went from their after wearing her cloth and most imp things , money without that she cant entered in her own house ...after half hour she reach her house and start to knock door , after 5 minute , a man yes her so called husband open door ,and first come dirty smell of alcohol ,


she feel like omitting ,she want to enter ,but he just say , money , she just put all money to his hand and run to her room, she don't want to look his face also for second ...she just open her room door and went to near bed their her life sleeping peacefully and she get her life back , a small smile come on her face she just kiss that baby face , yes baby her baby ,her life Muskan 4 month baby ...she just took shower and clean herself , she want to clean that touch also but smile sadly and say herself ...you cant clean that dirt from your body till whole life geet , she smile sadly


she just come out and took her baby on lap and start to feed her ,her milk , that baby missing mother milk , she start suck hungrily in her sleep also...which brought tear in geet eyes ,she just say why , why with me , what is my fault so i got life like this ...why


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Index

part 45,46

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4108094/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-4-part-epl-1-2-3-on-23-29-35

last part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4108094/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-4-part-epl-1-2-3-on-23-29-35?pn=16

epl 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4108094/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-4-part-epl-1-2-3-on-23-29-35?pn=23

epl 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4108094/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-4-part-epl-1-2-3-on-23-29-35?pn=29


epl 3




Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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i will not vote in Nach

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How many time we have to hurt myself as GEET fan ?


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please don't hurt yourself as fan of maaneet



Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Part 45

maan just took her in crush hug and mummer thanks geet thanks tum haesha muje apne dard se bahar lati ho hamesha and he just kiss her lips same way like she pick his lips , poor girl just moan maan and maan just kiss her heart who sounding loudly dhak dhak dhak and say in slow voice ye tumari dhadkane meri zindgi hai geet ,ab se tumari hare k kwaish meri duty hai geet and I will fulfill it you want to prove my innocent , I will prove it dear for you my Misty ...geet who just lost in maan word misty and his touch moan loudly when when maan ...start his fev work after kissing on geet heart he just took that glory in his hand and his long fingers just start to worship her ...


geet feel goosubump on her whole body , she just mummer beti feed ke lie crazy hai aur father ...ye to waha se apna haath dur hi anhi rakh sakate , but her all mummer stop when maan mouth start to tease her feminist beauty oh she just mummer maaan , maan just ttok her lips for kiss and mummer in her mouth please geet from morning I am controing not now , please don't make big sound or musky will saw that I am eating you and maan just wink to her


poor girl just sharam se pani pani just than maan make serious face and ask , aj tum ne khana kyaya hai na , geet nodded in yes and maan say I ask you else you will faint again like that day and geet eyes winded in shock , she look to babaji and mummer dekha babaji

maan chi chi geet babaji ko ismain bulao gi ...geet just salp he forehead , nahi nahi babaji sorry sorry ,mat sunana ...maan just laugh loudly how nave his geet , he just say love you geet and took her lips in his rough lips ... whole night maan don't give chance to sleep her , he just stop when musky want her feed , both devil just troubling poor geet



but geet love this maan who took his haq , with his love ...she is so shy she have so many mark on her body ,even on lips also and she just crying , all will tease her ...



next day she went early in veer room , she wear full sleve dress , where adi is already their



geet - sab ho gaya



veer yes di I fix camera in pammi and her son room and that adjust screen in my room and maan father room ... till now maan father get it because after your encounter , she is all fustressed look this but problem is she just say mera plan koi kharb nahi kar sakta and this not sufficient and now maan father may be ask why camera in her room so


geet say hu and say ok I will handle maan father and pammi , first I will go to maan father


she just went to maan papa room , took blessing from him , he just wan to say something but she say no please you have to wait for 10 days , till now you get it she is planning something ,it is question of innocent soul sir so can I expected that you keep quite and don't say anything to pammi and her son



maan father stunt on this girl faith , trust on his son ...is he wrong to judge him ...he just nodded in yes geet say thanks and come out from his room she than went to pammi room with loud voice



geet - Good morning sasuma arre aj kuch palning nahi karni kya ,you sleep till now ...



pammi just give glare to geet who broke her sleep she say you , why you in my room ,



geet give smirk and say with attitude , room apka hoga lakin mention to mera hai , you don't me I am geet maan singh kurana ,jab mention mere pati ke naam pe hai to ye mera hi hua na as a wife to esae hissab se main kahi bhi ja sakti hu na sasuma



abhi se Km ke rule change ho gaye hai yaha rehana hai to rule follow karne padege


waise I want to ask why you not in my sasurji room , ek bed ...


pammi - geeet mind your she pointed to finger to geet geet just hold her hand and turn it badly , do baar to maar kha chki ho abhi bhi aur khana hai kya , apna haat smbhal ke rakho , nahi to tod dungi , wise bhi eshi haat se marra than a maan ke ma ko to babaji muje saza nhi denge ache kaam ke liye , samaj gayi na app


poor pammi just cried in pain , geet have guts , she want to reply but somehow control her ...geet want to pammi say something but need more push , she just losse grip on pammi hand and say come out fast , bahot kaam karne hai apko samji kya


after geet went out pammi just say tume to main dekh lung jab main apne sister ko nahi choda...she have evil smile on her face in other room old man get shock of his life , pammi new face oh ...


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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part 46

from that day geet just make pammi and her son life hell , she want solid proof against her and her bhai in her toli hear Msk as he promise geet he took help of detective and try to collect all things about this so called pammi so mission pammi is on full swing along with maan mission love to geet , pehely shy shy rehane wal maan ab to veer se jada besharam hone laga tha

next day after their first love making in KM in B.fast table all just giggle on maan and geet , geet have cut on lips and maan have nail mark on his hand and near neck which are visible geet ne body ko cover kar liye tha but she cant hide mark of lips

veer - geet di don't eat spicy or HOT ha apko taklif hogi he say with naughty grin , geet give confused look to veer

veer - di wo apko chot lagi hai na lips pe to wo jalega na , waise how you get that mark di , veer make so innocent face , dadi and rano just give excuse and went away from them



that biggest profit for veer now he is in his devil mood

veer ha di bolo na apka face itna lal ku hua hai di bahot HOT ,I mine thikha tha kya ...parotha


maaneet get his double meaning maan want to say something but naina joind veer and say not today bro ,you cant took side of bhabhi and it si simple question kya veer ne koi aisa vais question pucha kya , and naina just wink to adi


adi - he he he , maan just glare to adi for his laugh , adi say not today maan you are not MSK today you are just our friend and our jiju today so haq to banta hai , ha to batao , tume itne saare nail kaise lag gaye , musky ke nail bad gaye hai kya , geet ko nail kat karne ko bolu kya ...musky ke


poor maan just look to other side to stop his blushing , he know now there is no way to stop this monkey all three ARE BIG DEVIL OF MY LIFE LIKE ( Mahi have three devil in her life )


Just than veer click photo of maan blushing


Maan smirk devilry and say oh veer pehele hi bol diya hota na achi pose de deta all get confused with maan smile and word including geet



but next moment all gasp loudly and after some second veer just hooted loudly



maan just went near geet took her face in his palm and before anyone get what he doing he just kiss geet on her lips with making sound , oh poor girl just shock with maan action and start to hit on his chest with her tiny hand maan put his palm like this way so they don't saw geet face but they know na what is he doing



in all adi turn beetroot red like tomato poor boy this so much for him ...just than he found someone near him , he turn his face to look that person he turn more red in shyness and scare for maan


there is Dr .pinky standing all lost in maaneet kiss



adi realy fear for her reaction ,he just push veer who is busy in hooded and saying come on maan too good maan when adi nug him he give angry glare to adi but adi pointed to pinky and veer first time smirk after saw so lost pinky he again start recording and went near pinky without sound and mummer in her ear , you also want like this kiss from Adi na and pinky who is lost in kiss and day dreaming of adi nodded in yes and say I will love it in upset unconscious mind



and veer make victory dance on his dance , pinky come out from her la la land and look her side there is no one , she look for veer but he is away from her




precap


i write this two update light because next part

of fate have BIG and last twist so ...

it may happy ending or sad ending mahi don't know now

so enjoy


Court part




Note -

hi all just feel emotional today

fate is going to end soon this is ff who give me so many

reader , and i want you all with me to my all ongoing and upcoming

story thanks and big hug to everyone who give me support till now

love you

all alwyas be with me mahi need you all always


Mahi


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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nice part mahi maaneet moments were so 😳 nd geet gave a nice ans 2 dat pammi bechare maaneet all just teasng dem nd maan gave shock 2 all by his kiss mahi plz gv us a happy endng yaar plz waitng 4 d next part
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Mahi dear...!!!!!!!!!!!!!



what can i say about ur updates ...u know na hamesha ki tarah !!!!!!!!!!! 😛



part 45 was very hot ☺️ and cute...


maan is such a naughty pie...geet ke naak me dam karke rakhha hai ...

his dialogue was awesome!!!!!!!!!!

agar geet jaisa strengh ho to har koi muskil ka samna kar sakta haio na...

geet ne jo chudial pammi ko jawab diya...uski haat marodna was hilarious..🤣

.me dancing..



Ye Veer kabhi nai sudrega!!!!!!!!!!bada shararti(naughty) hai!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣
u r a writer!!!!!!!!!!


fate is ending!!!!!!!!!😭


but new story starting 😆😉


waiting for next !!!!!!!!!!!


do cont soon





Basanti/Uma...



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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wow...kya romantic hai...aur msk itna besharam...haiii...sharam se pani pani...maan n geet both...aur adi k bhi balle balle...

awesome updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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hi mahimaan ..
great part ..
liked both the parts ..
maneet enjoying together ..
and geet after pammi ..
veer adi maaneet bonding is blessing ..

please ..don't give sad ending ..
please i want happy maneet ending ..
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Congratulations Mahi!

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