MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 4 part epl 1,2,3 on 23, 29,35

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

epi 2
lovely...
nice one...
Veer is so naughty...
Pinky was so blushing...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

epi 4
awesome dear...
very good...
Dev got his due...
Maan and Geet are happy and have a happy future ahead with Musky...

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

dear u actually made me num i dont know what to coment is really shocking first u

give i am not talking about that coz i was like iam not giong to coment on it

but the epilegoues is mind blowing

after my apiya (desi girl) u r second writer who made me crying laughing n blushing with ur story

fate is really close to my heart when i read this my whole day was really upset to think about maaneet when good days arive i am sooo glade

their teasing their friend ship n bonding n love out of this world

some times ur blood relation is less then ur heart relation rishety ahsas say bantey hai

geet her life jis tarha woh jee rahi thi uski life mein maan ka ana is like god will not good n innocent let sufer long koi na koi aa hi jata hai jaise geet k liya maan n maan k liya geet

rano dadi awsum example of mother

maan father dev n paami her son bset xample of devil even wosre then him

last part mein jab maan apni dil ki bath bolta muje aisa laga jaise my heart will came out

geet n her out busrt in court n court justice all are fab no word kash reality mein bhi qiuck justice hoo aisey hi koi bhi suffer na karey

n last not least aour angel n cutei pie muskan her antic s jaise shera mein hoo phool

i think this is not the end this is beging of fortunate of their life

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

go geet
am glad she proved maan right
and maan dad well he was left alone
of course he was
damn that was something
how did he not believe his own flesh and blood
but that of his saali
i cant believe it
so it was her huh
poor maan suffered due to her
well its over now
and maneet can be free to be with their family
dev got punished
veer dream didnt come true
and all is good
even pinks proposed adi
what could be better right
what an ending

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

awesome last parts I like the sasuma part and the last part a lot
I thought that mg are dead and even it it happened I won't be having any regret because their love is eternal
epi"s are so gud
muski cut I pie
and last Dev dead
awesome end

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Wow This got to be the most Heartwrenching Story I've read till date
Geet suffered from the day she got married but Maan suffered from the
age of 5years
Maan cured Geet's pain and gave her a life filled with true love and
happiness while Geet stood as a pillar of strenght for Maan and declared him innocent in his fathers eyes and freed him from that
loneliness of guilt and sadness
In all this their bond of trust , Respect and Love just multiplied
their family which included Daadima , Rano Ma , Veer , Naina
Adi , Pinky and their baby Muskaan which was just their deeper
strenght .
Victory to Maaneet was won due to their pure souls , happiness was filled and their home with enternal bliss

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Awesome ff !!! 😃 Am always a fan of ur concepts with strong social message di.. and u know it 👏 !!! I like this ff the most in ur works !!!!! 😳 Maan , adi ,Veer & naina were adorable !!!! 😛 Pinky toh... no comments 😆 !! Poor Maan.. This Pammi is 🤬 such a heartless creature !! yuckkk... So is Dev... 🤬🤬 Good that he got the deserved punishment !!!!! 👏 Geet is really an angel to have bore this much pain !!!!😭 Muskan was sooo cute !!!😛 Every twist from Maan knowing Muskan was his daughter to how they landed up together were surprising and emotional !!!!⭐️ Rano ma & Dadima had heart of gold to have accepted everything and moved forward with there children !!!!⭐️⭐️ Just loved ur writing di !!!! Excellent !!!🤗