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Posted: 11 years ago
Epl 3

maan just playing with musky and musky just kisiing maan onhis cheek , nose , she just want to play with maan hair , she try to take it on her small hand and maan just push his head back , musky small nose start to turn red in anger , she want to hol that at last she just bite on maan cheek in anger and maan just laugh on her oh poor girl

maan kya sab ko invitation chiye baitane ke liye all just sit on their place , veer start to come in his naughty mood and he say lets we play some game what say

naina narrow he eyes she know now veer is upto something but what

veer just wink to maan and say ok it is like passing boll but in couple so punishment bhi as couple puri karni hogi ok all just nodded in yes naina feel something fishy

maaneet on one mat , pinky and adi and naina and veer they sit like that veer just start music and they start to play ,musky who sit in maan lap she just start to clap her hand so happily she just love it ye bade aj bigad gaye hai and khel rahe hai ans she want to show it to her dada , she try to look maan and called hi m papa but papa to busy the Mama ko eyes se eat karne main , maan eyes just looking to geet with intense gaze , musky try to make sound but no effect , musky just took maan hand in her hand and bite it with her toothless gum but hard and maan come out from his geet land , oh he hissed musky kya hua

but saw musky angry red face , just mummer hai na msk ke beti naak / nose ka pata nahi but naak pe ghussa , geet ke babaji ...

maan just make cry face kya hua musky , musky just give angry glare to maaneet and start to look to boll like saying katti now I don't want talk with you

geet just giggle on musky notanki and maan just glare to geet musky try to go to geet so geet just want to take her maan just pick musky and pretend that he giving musky to geet and just pick geet cheek and say its sweet dear geet just froze in her place she come out with sound of veer it is adi and pinky who get out maan just wink to geet poor geet just cribbed kya babaji

now veer on 9 cloud all set to take revenge from pinky , he mummer ish thappad ki gunj hamesha yaad rakhana tum doc pinky and he smile evilly

veer ok - you both have to play dram of 5 min ok


hear adi is gir and pinky you are boy your love is angry on you serious type main and you have to make her clam it is qus of your life ok

maan just nodded his head and say chalu , kya badala le raha hai

geet ask kya

maan nodded in no just than maan try to caressed geet leg with his leg poor girl just want to moan , but all she look to maan who pretended like he don't know that like it was accident poor geet get confused and start to look to drama

pinky and adi just start to play

adi - main tum se bath nahi kar rahi hu

all just giigel on adi girl word and pinky as boy start to try make affords

pinky - just lesion me once ,

you are my life ,

I cant live without you

please lesion me once


at last pinky lost her coolness and grab adi face and kiss him hard and veer just say loudly yes yes yes and just went to there just pull pinky from adi and just try to slap hard on pinky cheek , pinky just battle with all and took her hand on her own cheek and veer move away and smirk on pinky and say than why you slap me that day



pinky get all it is veer prank , her face turn red to smirk she just went near veer just grab his collar and just pull her leg to kick veer on his aham aham poor boy just horrified with thought



pinky just hold her leg mili miter away from veer and say don't mess with me nahi to naina ko problem ho jaayegi


all just froze their place with holding their breath come out from shock with musky loud laugh and clap and within second veer just run behind maan and all just burst in laugh


maan - veer suder ja aj impotent hote hote bach gaya hai tu

veer - kya maan tum bhi

geet just slap on his head kya karte rahete ho app

veer just make face and sit next to naina , now it is time of naina and veer

maan smirk and say naina you have to dance on hot number and veer you cant touch her get it

veer who under shock of pinky without lesion carefully just nodded in yes

maan just give high fi to adi and naina just start to dance on hot number adi went away from maaneet and maan start his next besharmi maan just sit so closed to geet



geet sitting near wall and maan put his hand around her waist , they sit like this that no one notice but geet feel so shy , all are there if moan come from her mouth than , maan hand start to make pattern on geet waist like soft feather and just start to travel upper side he just touch her side of blossom and poor girl just bite her lips to control her moan , maan hand ... at last he just put his hand under her kurti and touch his fev territory just once and squeezed it , geet eyes winded in shock and wave of desire run from her body ...

zara zara touch me, touch me, touch me

zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me

zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me

zara zara o o o o o

touch me, touch me, touch me

zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me

zara zara hold me, hold me, hold mezara zara o o o o o bin

tere sanam iss jahan me

bekraar hum dam da dam da dam

bin tere sanam iss jahan me bekrar hum

bin tere sanam iss jahan me

bekraar hum dam da dam da dam

bin tere sanam iss jahan me bekrar hum

zara zara touch me, touch me, touch me

zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me

zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me

zara zara o o o o otouch me, touch me, touch me

zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me

zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me

zara zara o o o o o


naina dancing so so ...maan and adi just look to each other it si bold move but not cheep because naina know that all are there but poor veer , bold out with naina dance his hand just itching to touch naina and and ... but punishment given by all oh his thought dry with thirst , he just gulp hard and watch naina with desire full eyes


in last he walk to ward naina to hold her but same time maan and adi stand in front of naina as wall , veer cry liked small baby


and all just laugh on him



but veer is veer he just run and took naina hand in his hand and just run from there and say loudly bas ho gayi party by ab personal party chau hogi and I don't want any one with us and just run from there


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
epl 4

in last he walk to ward naina to hold her but same time maan and adi stand in front of naina as wall , veer cry liked small baby

and all just laugh on him

but veer is veer he just run and took naina hand in his hand and just run from there and say loudly bas ho gayi party by ab personal party chau hogi and I don't want any one with us and just run from there

veer just took naina to his room and closed door of room and press naina on door he just push his body to naina and naina moaned veer ...ku kya huam tum hi ga rahi thi na touch me touch me ha and naina turn red in shyness , just than they hard some noise it from maan father room , veer just stop and look to naina , both think for second and went to that room and just froze in their place maan father standing on his feet and slapping hard on pammi cheek

veer just want to dance just than pammi son try to entered in room , veer just punch him hard and they land on floor cry in pain hearing so much voice all just gather there ,maan face turn as stone

maan father - you kill my wife and I just punish him from last so many years , without his fault , main ager aj tumko maar bhi dun a to bhi kam hai pammi wo tumari sister thin a phir ku ...why and he again try to slap her but someone hold his hand he froze in his place it maan

maan - haat bhi utha rahe hai to women pe

maan father - beta wo

maan smile sadly and say its msk me. khurana , because as I remember we don't share any relation so please called me msk or Mr. Khurana

maan father face turn white , he get what he give to his own son

maan - veer just called police and hand over them

veer just dialed police number ,after some time police come and took them all away

maan just say with serious toan , hum sab Muskan vila ja rahe hai abhi ishi waqt , all just look to him , dadi give painful look to maan father like look what you done with your own child

geet just come near maan and say ok I will brought our lug , maan just smile with geet ans , he know she is with him in evey step all just brought their lug at last maan father say please maan ruk jao

maan ask with cold voice - ku mr .khurana ,app ek murderer ko rok rahe ho

maan father - please don't say like this

maan - ku taklif ho rahi haii main to 5 saal ki age se sun raha hu sir

MF - please main us pammi ki baat main

maan - wahi to sir wahi to wo bahar kit hi you trust on her , but cant trust your own blood you lost this right sir because when 5 year old son is there standing in front of you and crying his heart , with knife of fool of blood of his own mother tab app ne meri bath suni thi kya , nahi na to ab ku

jab hostel main fever se mar raha tha tabp apane meri awaj suni thi kya phne pe , nahi na to ab ku mr khurana ab ku

jab meri akhe har parent meting ko har compition ka , har activity ko apko doond thi tab app the kya meri achievement dekh ne ko mr ,khurana nahi the app

maan just went near adi , veer and naina , ye annath hai ku ki inko inke ma baap ka pata nahi hai aur main special annath hu The Mr. Khurana ka big boy annath , ye mere ma baap bane the jan mera baap mujse nafrat karne main busy tha ...

wo bacha to tabhi jail main sad jata ager ye dadi ne apko roka nahi hota ...

maan just went near dadi took her hand and say ye meri dadima nahi ma hai naya janam dene wali ma jab meri ma mari thi tabhi wo 5 saal ka maan mar gaya tha naya janam to in sab ne diya muje

aur ye jo full of life msk app ko dikh raha hai eo in theen angel ne diya hua hai meri rano ma , meri wife and meri beti , you know me khurana pammi ne ek kaam bahot acha kiya mere Md hone ke din muje geet ke pass drink pilake bhej diya , ku ki destiny hame hamari musky dene wali thi

in tin one muje hasna , rona aur jeena sikhaya hai mr. khurana , geet muje yah lake aayi thi muje innocent sabit karne ke liye aur wo kam ho gaya so now good bye Mr . khurana . maan just took musky and geet hand in his hand and come out from KM with his family his real family

Mf sit on sofa lifeless to spend all his life in tear, remorse kuch mistake, pap ban jati hai aur uski koi maffi nahi hoti hai

all just come in MV there house , and maan ask dadi ,main kuch galat kiya dadi ma

dadi just hug maan and say app ager unko maaf kar dete to vo galat hota maan it s now early morning all just went to there room to took some sleep

next morning veer and adi just gaayab from morning today is final hearing of dev case , geet look so clam all just make pooja and went to court dadi and rano with musky stay in house

in sourt dev and his vakil try to hurt geet with word but geet face it very bravely and jugde declared fasi for dev

geet sound stop them all

geet - judge sir it will be good if you free him

judge - you insulting judgment Geet Khurana

geet - and you all insulting women , kya fasi sir , kuch din baad ye bail pai chut jaayega , phi appel karega , HC jaayega phir SC jaayega , ye justice hai , pata hai apko ye karoorwar hai sab proof ,hai , sab witness hai to phir isko fasi abhi ku nahi abhi ishi wat ,in front of this court all just gasp loudly with her demand , her each word feel like acid but it is true , and very naked and dirty true there are severl case jaha victim mar jati hai jab tak criminal ko saja mile ...


in few word geet just slap hard whole system ager ye apko insulting laga ho to I am sorry ...but think about my word sir

ku yaha victim suffer hote hai aur is jaise log aaram se baahar ghhome te hai app konsi bhi case dekho kya hua , victim har chuki hai ya phir mar chuki hoti hai

inloga ka case lete hui koi ye nahi sochata ke morally ye sahi hai gala two sochata hai kitani badi raakam mil jaayegi sir and this is fact sir tp phir ye adhoora naaye ku sir


isne mera sab kuch chin liya tha self respect bhi , lakin muje maan mila ,kya har meri tarah ladki ko maan mil sakata hai jo uska fate badal de


sir aj app isko aise fasi dijiye ke koi aur dev banana se pehele 100 bar souchega sir , is sabke samane fasi deni chiye sir


judge stop for while and say he need some min


after some time judge declared dev ko fasi court ke samane rate pe di jaayegai within on hour , dev just cried and geet feel dizziness , maan just grab her , this is victory of her , her maan , she mummer ,maan we won we won


maan just hug her and say yes geet we geet we won ,just than naina , pinky veer adi just hug maaneet all just so happy


within hour that place full of people dev just crying begging but all just hate him



police man took him to fasi place dev cried like hell he is so much sare want to live but today no one is lesion to him , that man just pull him and took that rassi around dev neck and bound his hand back side ,now dev cant use his hand , geet saw so much fear in dev eyes , she smile with tear ,yahi fear wo ji rahi thi kitane dino tak ...same fear in dev eyes and next that man push rassi and dev hang there ...



geet just mummer fate of the unfortunate also turn into fortunate maan , maan just hug geet and nodded in yes



Now me feel
😭
it is really closed to me
thanks everyone

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
maan did right with his father. he believe some outsider but not his son & punish maan for no reason.
how i wish every criminal got punishment this much soon as u show here.
it is true that victims in our country are treated as a criminal as if they r responsible for their mis happening specially when crime is done with a women. Our India is such an incredible place where a po*n star is heartily accepted but this same society can't accept a rape victim or a women who is molested & treated them as if they invited those men to do it with them (pathetic people pathetic society)
I am just wishing that govt will make a change in the Indian Law regarding punishing criminal
Edited by impoojaverma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the epi
friends masti together..besharm hai sab
mf came to know the truth maan is iinocent
all left to mv
devs judgement..
hanged b4 all
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
awseome yaar the way maan n his friend masti maan besharmi
pami ka sach samne ana
maan is right his each words show how much he suffer
sahi kha kuch galti pap ban jati hai
n court part geet word is a slap for system
kash reality mein bhi aisa hi quick justice ho hope for good
i am now santi for the endinding
n the last line just superbbb

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome part

maan did right with his father. he believe some outsider but not his son & punish maan for no reason.
how i wish every criminal got punishment this much soon as u show here.
it is true that victims in our country are treated as a criminal as if they r responsible for their mis happening specially when crime is done with a women. Our India is such an incredible place where a po*n star is heartily accepted but this same society can't accept a rape victim or a women who is molested & treated them as if they invited those men to do it with them (pathetic people pathetic society)
I am just wishing that Modi's govt will make a change in the Indian Law regarding punishing criminal






just want to show how women treated in our so called society , agree with they all just use us like things , bejaan gudiya and about law system , we also liable , hum log ko bhi shot cut chiye na so corruption is route of this all problem dear
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Originally posted by: fariya20

awseome yaar the way maan n his friend masti maan besharmi

pami ka sach samne ana
maan is right his each words show how much he suffer
sahi kha kuch galti pap ban jati hai
n court part geet word is a slap for system
kash reality mein bhi aisa hi quick justice ho hope for good
i am now santi for the endinding
n the last line just superbbb




glad that you like epl

for system hope for best dear
me feel so senti like some ,imp chut gaya hai after finish fate yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update mahi in epi 3 frnds masti was awesm in btw maaneet's romance was superb finally maan was provd innocent coz of geet d way maan asnd his father was emotional nd heart touchng geet demandd gd punishment 4 dev s its true always victims hv 2 suffer nd nt d criminals finally dey both supprtd each other nd turnd their unfortunate fate into fortunate mahi dis story was special ill miss it
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Originally posted by: christipie

Superb update mahi in epi 3 frnds masti was awesm in btw maaneet's romance was superb finally maan was provd innocent coz of geet d way maan asnd his father was emotional nd heart touchng geet demandd gd punishment 4 dev s its true always victims hv 2 suffer nd nt d criminals finally dey both supprtd each other nd turnd their unfortunate fate into fortunate mahi dis story was special ill miss it






big hug i need it
glad you like it
for me fate is so close one dear it give
me so many reader and friends like you dear
miss this story
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




glad that you like epl

for system hope for best dear
me feel so senti like some ,imp chut gaya hai after finish fate yaar

it like now some very important part will never between us
muje aj bhi yaad hai hum dev ko kitna pyar show kartey they hheheeh really u complete are wishes

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