MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155

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Prologue


one lady between 20 to 22 lying on bed without any cloth ,one man just attacking her body without any mercy , but she cant react to him , like his touch not touching her body , her mind her soul is not present with her beautiful body yes she have perfect beautiful body which made anyone crazy but she just hate herself , her body which took her in present situation ,she don't react to that man , that made that man more and more wild all her body turn blue with his bits , but she never hiss in pain , at last when that man finish his work he just slap her on her cheek and say You w****, cant response , i give money for this to you're your ...HUSBAND ,she say first word in full night


Yes her husband send her with another man for S** so he get money, she is his money making machine her body is way of his earning she is MRS GEET SINGAHANIYA /GEET HANDA a s***, she smile on her faith and push that man away and went from their after wearing her cloth and most imp things , money without that she cant entered in her own house ...after half hour she reach her house and start to knock door , after 5 minute , a man yes her so called husband open door ,and first come dirty smell of alcohol ,


she feel like omitting ,she want to enter ,but he just say , money , she just put all money to his hand and run to her room, she don't want to look his face also for second ...she just open her room door and went to near bed their her life sleeping peacefully and she get her life back , a small smile come on her face she just kiss that baby face , yes baby her baby ,her life Muskan 4 month baby ...she just took shower and clean herself , she want to clean that touch also but smile sadly and say herself ...you cant clean that dirt from your body till whole life geet , she smile sadly


she just come out and took her baby on lap and start to feed her ,her milk , that baby missing mother milk , she start suck hungrily in her sleep also...which brought tear in geet eyes ,she just say why , why with me , what is my fault so i got life like this ...why

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Character
geet

age 21
muskan

age 4 month

rano handa


age 50
Maan




age 26

veer


age 26

adi

age 26

pinky


maan family

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Dream come true with maaneet


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3857084/dream-come-true-with-maaneet-teaser-of-time-pass-on-113


Life of geet

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3632879/new-mg-ff-life-of-geet-part-35-36-37-38on-page-106-109-114

Journey of maaneet arrange marriage (complete )

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3826436/new-mg-ss-journey-of-note-and-part-30-on-page-104-30-jan


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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april


Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki (complete)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3974738/msk-ki-sr-hogi-ke-nahi-hogi-my-ss-dhdkan-epilogue-os-two-part


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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143


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Index

part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=7

part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=13

part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=19


part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=28


part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=36

part 6


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103960330

part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104010998


part 8
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=68


part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=75


part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=85


part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155?pn=92

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104899789


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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I m eager to read this eye opening concept update soon
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interesting prologue...

loved it very much...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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painful prologue😭
continue soon!!!
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for the New Story Dear👏👏👏
Awesome Prologue⭐️⭐️Lovely start..its so interesting❤️❤️but painful..Poor Geet😭😭Eagerly waiting for the update dear
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omg.. sooo dark ... whos geet s husband then? what abt her family? where is maan into all this? i m so curious to know more abt this story... wont say i m happy but yah u hv written it v well dear.. a gray shaded story.. waiting for more to know.. hope u'll update soon... u r so fab writter.. i m lookin forwrd to this ..

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😭
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what the hell i want to kill her husband b-------------
new story plz continue soon

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