Manneet new os Anhokha Bnadhan part 2, 3(A), 3(B) on 8 and 12,20

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maan just watching girl face who is smiling with his family any one love her smile so beautiful ,she is perfect and beautiful but he know that smile is fake just fake because he know he himself ruin all her happiness last night their first night yes that girl is non other than his wife mrs Geet maan singh Kuhrana big DIL of kuharana family who yesterday make grahpravesh in his house when she expecting her soul mate cherish her with his love care he just broke her ...she herself don't kno if she get fix or not

tum itna jo muskura rahe ho
kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

how is it so that you are smiling so much,
what is the sorrow that you are hiding..

she just trying to hide her sorrow behind her smile and she get success in that because no body get moist of her eyes but maan saw her tear which is given by himself he just want to fight with destiny , why a innocent soul get hurt like this with his hand why why ...her last night face from shy . red to shock in last just blank just blank when he say he can not accept her as his wife this relation is fake relation he don't want this marriage it is just force marriage for him but he don't have any other option after so much emotional blackmail from parent that they commit suicide but he don't want to ruin any innocence life so he send latter to her house but destiny play with them because that latter not reached to geet and poor souls just


aankhon mein nami, hansi labon par
kya haal hai kya dikha rahe ho

there is wetness in your eyes n smile on the lips,
what's your condition n what are you trying to show it as..
[as in, why are you trying to hide your sadness]

kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

what is the sorrow that you are hiding..

tum itna jo muskura rahe ho
kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

how is it so that you are smiling so much,
what is the sorrow that you are hiding..


it is more than two month to their so called marriage he every night lesion her cry in study and his soul get hurt with her cry her sob , he expecting that she may be fight with him blame him or his family or she just went away from them BUT she just braking down day day by day in front of him and he is so helpless ,she never talk a word with him after that day , she just talk with family member in room in their room there always a silence a dead silence some time this silence just scare maan because she never make any called to her family after marriage , it means she never share her pain to anyone , he feel like her pain her tear become turn into poison who may be kill her

and all this ritual after marriage and teasing of all just again again open her wounded heart he know it some time he try to stop but earn glare from geet and he get that he lost this right also now they become two road or two side of river which could not meet to each other

that day when maan bua , maan bua get that they are sleeping in different room she make so tamasha of geet in front of all family and same time maan is out of town for two week all just start to look her with douht that nazar full of sheka just killing her just killing her in two week she get dark mark around her eyes like she don't get sleep from ages this family love is last hope of her family and now she lost this also...



ban jaayenge zeher peete peete
Yeh ashq jo peete ja rahe ho

if you keep drinking, they'll become poison for you,
these tears that you are keeping on drinking..

jin zakhmon ko waqt bhar chala hai
tum kyon Unhe chhedhe ja rahe ho

those wounds that the time has almost healed,
why are you keeping on disturbing them..


tum kyon Unhe chhedhe ja rahe ho

why are you keeping on disturbing them..

kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

what is the sorrow that you are hiding..

tum itna jo muskura rahe ho
kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

how is it so that you are smiling so much,
what is the sorrow that you are hiding..


when maan return from tour he get all from nakul the old servant of maan , maan just seton anger , he just want to ask his family but he first run to his room and just get shock of his life , she just lost weight , dark circle under eyes it is so painful to look her ... she crying with pain maan soul get brake with guilt he feel like he is murdere of this soul this innocent soul like his family he is also selfish who just send one latter in name of give her information why he not talk face to face with her befor marriage it is his duty to talk with her than , he just took some step to her and with shaking hand he just touch her and get another shock she have fevour high fever ,her all body shaking with cold he just turn off ac and try to called her but she is not in her sense , just mummering something please ma took me to youself please I don't want to live please no one hear for me please

tum to chali gayi papa ke sath babaji ke house accident main phir muje ku chod diya ma ku , ku muje sath nahi lake gayi tum , maan gasp loudly it means she don't have parent ...he die so many death within second , he just called dr and nakul

nakul - maan baba

maan - kaka you not look her why

nakul - wo sabne mana kiya tha

maan just closed his eyes and say bought some cold water along with cloth we have to put on her forhead to reduce her fever till dr come please kaka hurry up

nakul just brought all in room




rekhaon ka khel hai muqaddar
rekhaon se maat kha rahe ho..

fate is a game of lines (of the palm/forehead)
You are just getting defeated by lines..

kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

what is the sorrow that you are hiding..

tum itna jo muskura rahe ho
kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho

how is it so that you are smiling so much,
what is the sorrow that you are hiding..

maan feel like destiny slapping him hard and this play of destiny this innocent soul suffering so much just than nakul entered and maan just start to put cloth on her forehead after 5 minute dr entered and check geet , he give some injection and give very disappoint look to maan

dr - mr khurana app ke office ko tala lag gaya hai kya

maan - dr what you saying

dr - what you saying ha why she not eat anything from last 4/ 5 days , can I get it

maan gasp loudly and look to nakul who bend his head , maan just say sorry dr I am out of country and we fight on that and I think she took anger on food , usko hosh kab aayega dr

dr ,hu within 1 hour she get her hosh but we have to give he saline , she is very kamjaor so

maan just nodded in yes and dr arrange everything in room , maan just sit beside her so she don't move her saline hand after some time she got her consiance and open her eyes with so much difficulty she try to move her hand but maan just hold her hand and she look to him but with blank eyes just blank no emotion in her eyes , she try to move her hand from his hold but she don't have that much power also , some tear fall from her eyes , she feel so much helpless she don't want face him , don't want to her helpless to this man her so called husband but this destiny ...

maan - un sabko sach ku nahi bataya ke tum innocent ho

geet - smile painfully kis haq se main unko jawab deti jab mera pati hi muje as a wife accept nahi kar raha to unko main kya keahti mr . Khurana

just than nakul entered with soup he just put near maan ans went from there till now saline also get finish , maan just took out that like doctor say him and took bowl in his hand and try to feed he but she just lay on bed and put her back to him maan just closed eyes in pain but he know he deserved it

maan - I know i am your criminal gunegar hu main tumahra I just ruin your life but ...idont do this intentionally geet please lesion me once I tale all story to you why I took this decision please , but first finish soup please if something happen to you I will die in guilt geet please

geet who want to denied but don't know why but want to lesion his reason why he just act like that she took big breath and say hu

fisrt time maan smile and make her sit on bed and feel her soup , she get that his care is genuine no fake

maan just went to window from last 5 years I love sam , loud gasp come from geet mouth maan say iam madly love with her geet just thinking about her I give her all money gift ect , ect but my family never like her , her pride attitude but I am so much blind in her love I cant get that that she is fraud , a big fraud and I come to know all this before two days when I saw he in hug of another man and he kissing her onon...maan just closed his eyes , geet I know I hurt inoocent soul like you that's why I get this punishment , ihave so proud of my love and fate just slap me hard

maan stop for moment , geet lost in thought thou she hate him to ruin her life but sheis happy that he not cheated on her and say trun on day one itself

maan ask geet I hear your mummer when I come in room your parent , a sad smile come on geet face and she say ya ilost them three year ago , after them I lost happiness also latter who give they are my long uncle they just want to marry me that's why that latter not reach to me

maan - took deep breath and say geet it is not pity or any paschatap of my sin but in last two month you make place in my life I trualy respct you never fingt with anyone including me timari jaga koi aur hoti to media main jake hamara tamasha bana deti kya hum kya hum is relation ko chance de sakete hai

geet eyes winded in shock ...she is not expecting this

maan - don't ans in hurry it is your decision if you want divorce I am ready just tale me till morning what is your decision and please koi bhi compromised mat karna , I want to see you happy so jo tumarha dil kahe wahi karna ok and maan just went to his study room , he feel like he lost big weight from his mind

geet just lost in thought and decide she will tale her decision tomorrow morning next morning maan come out from study with red eyes he cant sleep whole night because of tense he just praying to god again and again he just went near bed but not found geet there , he lost his hope he think she went away from him just than his eyes fall on letter ...with shaking hand he took that paper and read

mr. khurana

I cant say all this in front of you so I wrote this , yes I am ready to give chance to this relation but i want some time for for ...you get me na it is not easy to me accept your past please try to understand me as you say we don't make this relation with compromise so in this time we get chance to understand each other and then ...

geet

some happy tear come from his eyes yes he is happy , and luck that he get geet in his life , now he have hope from his life just than bathroom door get open and he saw geet come out from it ...her wet look maan first time saw her , yes she is beautiful very beautiful and innocence on her face it is just out of world she get shy when found maan gaze on her , she just went near mirror and try to dry her long hair

she just avoid to look maan just than she heard thanks geet thanks


geet turn to him and want say something but maan say can I hug you once please , he make such face that she cant denied and with shy face and thudding heart she nodded in yes maan just took step to geet and with each step of maan geet get nervous it is so much for her he is first man who will hug her other than her family maan just come near her and open his hand and just took her in hug like soft flower like he don't want to hurt her with his touch ,both can hear each other heartbeat ...maan feel himself on top of world , he just want world just stop hear only he found so solace in her hug his soul mate his wife Geet maan Singh khurana ...they just took step to fall in each other love yes to become MAANEET ...

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part 3 (A) on 12

part 3 (B )on 20

last part on 25

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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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me first hui bhi to kaise is OS me jisme maan uss s******a se pyaar karta tha...! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭

i dont want any 1st place in this...! aina u only take it dear sorry!!!!!!!!!😭


maan!!!!!!!!!!!😡


geet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭


better he understood what is love...! 😃


maan's family members are inhuman...! 😡 they dint even care if a person is dying r not.! 😭

r they humans r not bloddy morons...! 😡 atleast they should give her food...!😭



finally maaneet became one...! 🥳


very good os dear...! 👏


love


Uma 🤗



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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superb dear, finally maan realise his mistake, hate his so called bhua.
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awesome os!!!!
after all suffering they gave chance to their relationship😊
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awesome mahi dear👏
first maan pe gussa aaya tha😡
how can casually he send letter to her😡
how much fgeet was broken😭
bechari...had no one to share her pain😭
and that bua😡she said they r not together
and whole family accepted it😡 wat a crazy family😡
no one was able to see her pain
they accused her and didnt give food😡 chhiii...😡
happy that maan took care of her😃
maan's past...fell sad for him tooo...but after seeing someone with sam only he thought of geet😲
or else still he will be loving that stupid😡
finally he asked for a chance😃
geet too accepted it😳
hug scene was sooo nice mahi dear😳
atlast they became maaneet
🤗for the os mahi dear
loved it😃

Edited by disha31 - 11 years ago
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Nice OS mahi coz of dat sam maan hurtd geet nd maan's family 😡 i wish i just can kick dat sam uski tho band baja du bt maan facd reality of so calld love of sam accha hai nd maan took care of geet so sweet nd askd 4 her permission 4 gvng a chance 2 their relation aakir mai hamare maaneet ek ho gaye 😃
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Mahi 🤗...thank u for the awesome OS and pm...the first part was so painful 😭...poor Geet...she is so sweet and innocent...was angry with Maan...but the reason behind his behaviour and the way he was cheated by Sam changed my feelings...glad they both decided to give a chance to their relationship...but want them to move away from his family who let her suffer like that 😡...they dont deserve Maaneet...loved the hug at the end ❤️

I just wanted to say thank you!
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maan realize his mistake awesome
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Awesome update...after all the sufferings finally they become maneet

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