Maaneet FF-MILAN- The Final Destination #1

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MILAN- The Final Destination


Guysss after reading so many FFs u can surely call me an xpert, of course in reading only😆 n after reading so many beautiful stories, mere andar ka writter bhi jaag gaya... lol Anyways ince its my first work ur suggestions, complaints, eggs n chappals r always wlcm so feel free in giving me ur feedback...

My fav Maaneet... are the lead of my FF as they can portray diff. characters n we cn imagine them in diff. moods...Rite?? So be ready for a cute, sexy, passionate, emotional n thrilling roller coaster ride...So here starts ''MILAN- The Final Destination''



Wat happens when two people, made for each other meet??

They fall in love, get married and lives happily ever after...

''W*F'' are the views of our Maan n Geet, they love each other but can't say it...!! Ego, misunderstandings n sometimes the attempt to hide their feelings block their way... In other words...


Fate wants them together, but they repel each other, It brings them together again n again but these two don't understand the cupid n seperate their ways...LETS SEE WHO WILL WIN FATE OR MAANEET!!


Charcter Sketch

Geet Handa-10yrs old, Only daughter, lives in Shimla...thodi jhalli, thodi pagal but hav a heart of gold...refreshes every corner she visits wid her lively nature...loves her parents, but more than them loves her best friend Meera, who is Geet's breath...

Rano n Mohinder- Geet's parents, luvs Geet (their jaan) too much. Rano is a house wife n Mohinder is a respectable businessman of Shimla in partnership wid Meera's dad Rajendra.

Meera- xtremely intellegent, Einstien of 21st century wants to become a scientist, speaks less, practical, hardly shows her inner self when she speaks it seems like robot z talking

Loves Geet- YES!!

Respect Geet- Aaa...(osheen confused😕)

Meera loves Geet as she z her bst frnd but she takes her for granted coz she knows that Geet cant live without her.


Maan Singh Khurana- Well the mystry continues...

Other characters will be introduced further in the story!!!



INDEX

PART 1- Below
PART 2
PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7
PART 8
PART 9
PART 10
PART 11



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Angelic_mishty thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ME 1sttt

YEPPYYY

🥳

im so so so happy for U...

🤗 🤗 aaja jhappi pale...

congasss

strting seems very interesting...
ur writing is wonderfull...

hoping to see great work from U 😛 😛

lots of wishes n love for U

love
MISHTY



Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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wow i love it plz add me to ur pm list
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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART 1

Geet- Maama uska jana zaroori hai kya, cant she stay here with us...padai hi toh karni hai, what is the need to go Delhi

geet spoke wid big fat tears in her beautiful, coffee brown eye

Rano- beta she got admission in such a big school n she iz intelligent n hard working, u know she deserves it

but maama padai hi toh hai aur phir mera kya hoga well... this is our Geet over emtional n stubburn

Rano- par beta tu samaj...

Geet cuts her in between
No i dont want to hear anything, she is not going anywhere With tis Geet ran to her pinky- girly room, shut the door with bang n slammed on her bed...poor bed on verge of breaking after so many slammings..

Geet self talk- Baba ji koi aisa karta hai kya(sob-sob) mai kaise rahungi Meera k bina...how can she leave me like this
n Geet cried the whole day in her room, keeping herself issolated

At night Rano came to her room, as soon as geet heard foot steps she hid her face in pillow

Rano- geet puttar tu apni maa se naraz hai...rano asked patting her her head

Geet- Mujhe aapse baat nai karni, you all are on meera's side nobody cares for me

Rano- listen to me beta(she made geet sit on her lap) beta you know Meera is smart n she got what she deserves...then you should support her not cry like a small child now you are 10, you are big enough...you love her na???

Geet sweetly- haan
Rano- Then you should let her go happily

Geet a little pacified asked wiping her tears with back of her hands asked Wo kab Jaa rai hai??

Rano- aaa...k..kal subah
(osheen thinking lo gai bhais pani me)
that was it, the little understanding she had went to hell,n she came back to her daily soap avatar crying n howling...she jerked Rano away n again slammed on her bed


Next morning, sunday

Rano- Geet, Rajendra uncle Meera ko airport le jaa rahe hai, go n atleast meet her once

Geet- I dont want to meet that selfish, stupid, idiot n n n...ahhh...mujhe nai milna kisi se...

But as soon as she heard car engine getting started, all her anger vanished and an unknown fear of loosing her friend gripped her.
She came running outside, but it was late. The car was going... she wanted to shout but her throat got chocked, she somehow managed to shout...Meera...meera... n started running behind the car.

Rajendra saw her running n was about to stop the car but Meera stopped him

Meera- No dad, once i'll meet her, it will become difficult for me to leave.

Rajendra- but beta..

Meera- You know her dad!! She will be fine after sometime

Rajendra with deep sigh- as you say...


A week passed, Geet was not able to concentrate on anything, it was like a part of her was missing...

Geet on way back home from her school Ek...Ek letter tak nai likha, haan haan why she will write to me... Ab toh wo delhi wali ho gai hai. Aag lage iss delhi ko, nai nai phir toh Meera bhi jal jayegi..ufff... Hey baba ji ab aap hi kuch kariye na Geet said luking up

as soon as geet reached home... Rano showed her a letter with wide smile on her face, without any confermation geet knew whose letter it was...she snatched it from Rano's hand,quickly went to her room slammed on her bed...and started reading...

Dear Geet,

I am having fun out here. The teachers are really good. I have been given my own lab for experiments. N you know, I hav a AC room.

Meera

Geet- yeh kya hai 4... 4... Sentences thats it...aisa lag raha hai she mocking me... Geet was feeling really sad n a tear drop escaped her eyes

Night, 1 AM

Geet packed her bags, jumped from the window, after leaving a message on a chit for her parents on the study table...
Message-I am going to Meera

she took some money and she has a pemplet of Meera's school which she brought from Meera's house.

One last time she looked back to her house...
Geet- Love you maama papa but i cant live without Meera...


PRECAP- Delhi calling...
Welcome to Ujwal Academy...


Phew...!! 1st part completed...sorry for mistakes if any..
Tell me how it is n give your priceless suggestions
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update dear...
geet going to delhi...😛 😛

continue soon...

love
MISHTY


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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new first FF...
interesting character sketch...
part 1
nice start...
OMG Geet is such addicted to Meera...
she even is leaving her parents' and home to go to Meera...
cont soon dear and add me to ur pm list...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!! 4 ur new ff ...

add me to ur pm list ...

interesting start ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey plz do continue
awsum story...

Poor geet left her home 4r meera...



Edited by Hina.khanxxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww
now this is something new

where is maan
plzzz make him come fast

pm me
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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART-2

Geet wanted to reach Delhi as fast as possible, so she took Himalyan Queen train from Shimla to Kalka n then Kalka Shatabdi from Kalka to New Delhi. Geet was never very smart but the urge to meet twin soul gave her strength n brain.

Passing hours stole the night n fresh sun rays kissed the horizon, thats when Geet reached the not so crowded railway station of Delhi as it was early morning.
Then Geet took a taxi.

In taxi,
Taxi Driver- Beta ji aap chote nai ho, aise travel karne k liye...
Bas Geet's punjabi blood cells came in action
Geet- Bhaiya ji i m not a small child, i m big enough..Mai ghar jaa rai hu aap bas jaldi chalaiye she wanted to play it smart.

After almost 1 n a half hour,
Bas bas bahiya ji yahin rokiye She instently stoped the taxi when she saw a sign board indicating the way to Meera's school. She got down from taxi n payed the driver. Then she followed the sign boards, one board lead to other...after following several boards she reached a perfectly silent or say a rather horrifying road covered with trees from both the sides, by the looks she can guess that she is in outskirts of Delhi.


Baba ji meri bechari Meera ko kaha aana pada. Why she was so desperate to come here??? At the end of d road she saw a Huge gate n big wide walls adjacent to both the sides of the gate...you can see d walls till your vision allows...above the gate on an arc it was written in bold letters 'UJWAL ACADEMY'

Ujwal Academy is country's oldest n most renouned school..Students studying in this Academy are children of actors, politicians n socialists etc... You can also call VVIP area, so children here are either biggie's babies or extreamely intelligent

Geet was gapping at the gate when someone broke her meditation lolzz

Guy- Ahem Ahem...
As geet turned her face the guy was dumbstuck, she looked exactly like his sister whom he lost to death at a very young age... He immediately developed a soft corner for Geet...

On the other hand Geet saw a young man dressed in pant shirt n a sweater hanging on his shoulder.
Guy- Hey Sweety what are you doing here??

Geet- Why should i tell you, mom says dont talk to strangers, specially those who carry honey in their mouth n try to be over sweet.

Guy- Haha, well i m the teacher of the same school,at which you are gapping like a chocolate. N darling name is Raj.

Raj is English Teacher in Academy. He is humble n fun loving but at the same time clever, sarcastic n wity.
Geet's self talk- Hmm so he is teacher of this academy, i should take his help waise bhi he looks a decent guy.

She reluctantly showed the pic of Meera. She is Meera, my best friend. I have come from Shimla to meet her

Ofcourse Raj knows who Meera is 'The Einstien'
Raj under his breath-hmm guts haan! what?
Raj-Nothing dear come with me, i will take you to Meera
Raj made Geet sit in the car n they entered the gates...

behind the gates, same road with trees on both sides.
In the car,
Yeh sab academy hai??
Raj- Haan...btw i have a condition
what condition?
Raj-You can meet Meera only if you give me your parents number.
Geet saw the determination on his face n decided to obey him.
ok sir
Raj smiled n said call me Mr.Raj

They reached a building after 15 mins...Mr.Raj took Geet to a living room. Geet gave him her father's number
Mr. Raj- make yourself comfortable, i 'll be back in a minute...

As soon as Mr.Raj left the room another man came running, he was dressed in jeans, shirt n jacket.

Guy- Raj you again stole plant from my...n then he saw Geet
Guy- hey did you saw Raj??
He just went outside
Guy- Oh! Btw i m Karan, you can call me Mr.Karan... I m biology teacher. You are new here rite??

Mr.Karan is Raj's best friend n biggest enemy...He jolly n fun loving like Raj

Geet was about to say something but he stoped her in between.
Mr.Karan- Ok hav to catch that Raj, he again stole a plant from my lab..
N he rushed out

Geet self talk- kaise ajeeb teachers hai yahan k..
Geet was busy in checkingout the whole room...when someone tapped her shoulder, she turned n..

boy-booo!!

PART 1 -PREV NEXT PART 3

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Any guesses who the boy is?
Edited by OsheenBajpai - 13 years ago

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