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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
if he is avoiding her coz of guilt... then why hurting her so much...
My poor Geet...
Maan is really smart...! but the final stage was a cheating...!
you should think about a patch up now...
dont stretch that guilt and avoidind thing so much...
let them be good friends...
oops Precap is damn promising...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww 😳 that was cute
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awesome part dear...whats that precap yaar..I think they are school kids.

but the precap sounds like they r in college lol:)
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for the pm
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waiting for next update
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beautiful n bubbly ff jst enjoying reading it. plz add me to ur pm list as i have added u to my buddy list
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wow...waiting 4r update...plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 23

Thnx for ur awesome Likes n Lovely comments. It seems like more than parts you ol like precape.
As i m from mob liking each comment is really difficult so wont be able to do that, but i SUPER LIKE ol ur comments.

@rsroopali
Love ur 'Love it'
@basicquestion1
U r always free to imagine anythng. Glad that u liked my Milan.
@anisha_maaneet
lived it nai loved it. I understood lol😃
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nice pics. I like the 1st i.e. d black one.
@adorableyosh
there is no rape scene yaar its just a joke.



Updating this part in 2 post, click the like button at end of 2nd post only😊


They came out. Geet with a cry face n Maan with an evil smirk. He looked at Krish n poor Krish gulped gallons of saliva in fear while his mind screamed 'Oh! Shit'.


Sheena brought a glass bowl filled with paper chits.
Sheena- Take out a chit. Jis insaan ka naam chit pe hoga, that person will be your slave for tomorrow.

Maan-Just pray to god that its not your name.
He said to Krish to which Krish gave a faint smile.
Krish ST-Kya zaroorat thi Krish bete sher k muh me haath daalne ki!! Kahin bacche ka slave na banna pade.

Maan took out a chit n opened it. 'GEET' was written on it.

Krish- Phew...
Geet-Nahiii...
Maan- Not again


NEXT DAY (Day 2, School Festival)

Maan tied a collor on Geet's neck n kept the chain attached to it with himself. Prem was with them n offcourse his cutie rabbit was on his shoulder as always.


What is this? Do you think I am a dog.
You are my slave right. So slaves are kept like this only.
Maan ST- I'll make sure that after today you would never cross my path.


Geet ST- Dusht Danav!! Babaji mujhe iske saath kahan phasa diya.


The trio went to Haunted House. It was made by Psyche group. Screams n scary howls were audible from outside.


Nai mujhe nai jana
You are my slave so you are coming
Prem- Maan I also think that we should'nt go inside.

But till then Maan entered the Haunted House so they had to follow. It was dark inside. As they entered the doors automatically got closed behind them.

Sam saw them going in.
Sam ST-Oh no. Yeh Geet, Prem n Maan k saath akele andar gai hai.
Mujhe bhi jaana hoga. But mai akele...
Just then she saw Mr.Upadhya without even thinking she pulled him inside. But she did'nt knew that Mr.Upadhya was scared of Dark n ghosts.

Maan was walking ahead n Geet Prem were walking behind. They heard a loud scream n Geet held Prem's hand. Prem n Maan both became red. Prem due to blush while Maan due to anger. After walking a little they saw a painting.

Wow yeh aurat kitni sunder hai.
Suddenly the lady in painting opened her eyes.
Prem Geet in chorus- Aaa...
Maan rolled his eyes seeing the two chickens.


They moved ahead. There was a cute virtual girl playing with a ball.
Prem- Geet don't go near her. There must be something fishy with her too.


But jo maan jaye wo Geet kahan. She went near n touched the girl. As the girl was virtual Geet's hand went through her.

Dekho Prem yeh kuch nai karti. Aao tum bhi try karo
Geet was saying this to Prem when abruptly the girl changed into skully old lady with a loud scream. They out of fear started running n old lady ran behind them. Geet n Prem were scared till death while Maan was running in his coolyo style. Straight, hands in pocket. As if obliging the old lady.

Prem while running took a turn n Geet Maan ran straight. After running for sometime Maan stopped n grabbed Geet's hand in order to stop her.

Geet panting- Bhagooo... Otherwise that cranky old lady will eat us.
She is gone idiot.

Geet looked behind n no one was there.
Phew... Arre Prem kahan gaya
May be he lost the way while running. Lets find him


CONTINUED BELOW...!!
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CONTINUED...!!

On the other hand, Sam n Mr.Upadhya reached the same painting. The lady opened her eyes n Mr.Upadhya got hell scared while Sam got scared seeing him scared. After that they reached the virtual girl, she changed into old lady n screamed but Mr.Upadhya screamed louder than her.

Mr. Upadhya got so scared that he ran outside n started shouting on Sam. Then he went to control room of Haunted House n started scolding the senior students. A student got very scared n by mistake increased the power supply, due to which the fuse broke n the power got cut in Haunted House.


Geet Maan were in some cave like place when they heard a loud bang n everything turned darker than before. The door was closed n got stuck.
Maan-Lagta hai light chali gai
Yeh darwaza bhi nai khul raha hai. Ab kya karen?😳
Wait untill some Human Being comes to our rescue.


They sat in the dark only a small amount of light was coming from a small window on top of the wall.

We are stuck here because of you. You wanted to roam between ghosts
We are stuck here because you are a panauti(bad luck)
Kya? Panauti. Mujhe samajh nai aata k tumhari problem kya hai.
You are my problem. I already told you that i am sick of you.


Geet 'd had enough. Again those awefull words. Geet felt hurt n extreamly angry. She pushed Maan on floor, sat on his stomach n started jumping.

Geet- I'll tell you what being sick means.

Geet was busy in torturing Maan when lights came back. Dev, Prem n Meera reached there as they were searching for Maan Geet. Meera pushed open the door n everyone saw them in that postion.

Dev- Yeh kya...
Meera- Hooo...
Prem- speechless. Lol😃

Maan- Bachao! Bachao. Thank god you have come otherwise your friend was trying to rape me.
He said to Meera in a dramatic voice with a straight face.

Geet's anger knew no bounds. She bursted.
MAAAN!!


After all the drama the trio went to literary group's food stall.

They settled on chairs. Kopal brought them Ice- Creams n went back to prepare food for others.

Maan ate a spoon from his ice cream but something clicked in his mind. He saw that Geet was about to eat her's. Before she could eat, he grabbed her ice cream cup n spilled it on her shirt.


PART 22 PREV & NEXT PART 24
PRECAP-Can I Have this dance...


Guys be ready to bade Ujwal Academy Good bye as this track is going to finish soon.

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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was sooo hilarious part..oh god when will this maan understand??he is hell-bend on staying away from geet..
hmmm..lets see if he'll change once they are out of the academy..

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