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Posted: 13 years ago
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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART-3


Thnx friends for ur lovely comments...but the real credit 4 Milan goes to Neha512, she actually pushed me for writing tis FF. Without her persuation i would'nt hav started Milan...So a big thnx to her.

N speechless ur comment was awesome, the best comment award goes to you lolzz

Btw u ol guessed it rite, the boy z none other than our MSK. So here comes the most awaited part...


Geet turned n

Maan- Booo!!

Geet got scared n was about to scream but maan closed her mouth with his hand at the right time. Due to sudden force Geet lost her balance n both fell on sofa now Maan was lying on top of Geet (osheen wondering, hayeee! how dreamy)


Time stoped, wind went back to give them privacy, birds stoped chirupping. N suddenly, the room became devoid of any sound or movement, the only thing maaneet can feel was the presence each other through their warm breath n rapid heart beats.


Geet saw a smart boy lying atop her, almost of her age...black hair n hypnotic eyes. Dressed in red, black striped half pants, white shirt black coat, red tie, red socks n typical black school shoes...Athough she was in a vulnerable position, she felt warm n secure...she felt like ol her organs were playing dandia in her stomach.
On the other side, when Maan saw her face only one word came to his mind 'SEXY'

Maan's self talk- Wait a sec what did i just thought...sexy??? What the hell.


There mutual observation session got interupted when a boy of their age dressed same as Maan wid dark brown hair entered the room

Boy- Hey Maan did you find it??

Geet became aware of her surrounding n position and started struggling. Maan quickly straighten himself n sat on Geet's stomach again taking the control, still closing her mouth with his hand.

Maan- See Prem we hav a toy with us.

Prem- wat??
N when Prem saw Geet, he thought
Prem- wooow!! man she is cute.
(sexy, cute, sexy, cute...ufff me confused, now u guys decide)


Soon they heard some footsteps
Prem- Maan somebody is coming lets move, fast.

But it was very late, Mr. Raj n Mr. Karan were already standing behind them. Prem gave them 'oh! You caught us' smile.

Prem n Maan are here because they were challenged them to bring paper weight from teacher's quaters.

Mr. Karan- Boys you should'nt be here.
Taking the advantage, Geet pushed Maan n ran to Mr. Raj n hugged him tight from waist.


But Maan had his own plans n he is not even afraid of teachers.

Maan- Hey! Toy girl...

When Geet turned, she saw Maan holding a familier, wierd, flower printed cloth with evil foxy smirk on his face...

Firstly she was utterly confused then it stuck her...she looked down n OMG!! It was her skirt that too fav lolzz...she was jus standing in her top n inner.


Her cheeks turned bloody red, Mr.Raj didnt knew wat to say or do, Mr. Karan was giving a cheeky half smile n Prem was standing ol embarresed.

Maan signaled Prem, n they both ran out side...
Geet luked at Mr. Raj n thats when the volcano erupted n the whole building started shaking...she started crying no no howling n MR. Raj n Mr. Karan had to literally cover their poor ears to save them...

PART 2 PREV & NEXT PART 4
PRECAP- Geet, Meera n... SLAP??

So, Guys how was the update...
Plzz spare me spelling mistakes, I was never good wid them. The updates are from mobile so plzz avoid other kinds of mistakes too.

Luv,
Osheen





Edited by OsheenBajpai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
part 2
so this is a FF now...
nice part...
guess thats Maan?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
part 3
so thats really Maan...
OMG what did he do?
oh thats so embarrassing...
and Geet's wailing is something...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
nice FF...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
toy girl !!!!!!!!
that was embarassing
like the two teachers
and will geet b attending the same school now?
thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
oh man tat was too much of Maan taking her skirts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
great udpate dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
nice part
that was so embaressing...
toy girl... !!!!
then geet howling and teachers keeping hand on ears was hilarious...
SLAP...? by whom...? to whom...?
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Hey osheen lovly update and lovly concept... Keep it up dear..

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