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Posted: 13 years ago
jst read ur ff
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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 9



YEPII!! Guys MILAN completed its 1st 50 Likes in just one week... Me on cloud 19. Wow thnx to all so much.
n Thnx to Neha512 n others who made my bday special..
MY THANKS
Now here comes the update...

A roar ecoed all over the Ujwal Academy.
Mr.Upadhya- ZERO STAR


Dev reached the place n Sam, Anji n Shikha were also present there to know Geet's star rank.
Sam sarcastically- Ouch... Even in primary section no one has zero star.
Mr.Raj tried to handel the situation.
Mr.Raj- But Mr.Deno...
Mr.Upadhya- My decision is final. She got addmission without any pain bt now in order to get a star she has to prove herself.
With this he left.
Mr.Raj- Its OK darling. I know you will soon earn a star.


Geet was shocked, she was'nt hearing something. Her Glazed face soon turned doleful. Her eyes filled up.
Mr.Raj worryingly- Dev why don't you show her Meera's lab.
Dev- OK Mr.Raj. Come geet lets go.
Geet just followed silently. She was brooding.
Geet self talk- Babaji aap saari problems mere address pe kyu post kar dete hai?

Dev-This is Meera's lab, meera must be here. You go inside, I am leaving.


As geet entered, her eyes instently lit up. Her tears were now replaced by a heveanly smile. Her opposite wall was filled with her n Meera's snaps. Playing, dancing, teasing. All beautiful moments decorated n preserved like treasure.
Meera- Zayada khush hone ki zaroorat nai hai. Woh actually you were not present, so i was missing you a bit.

Geet was touched she hugged Meera. Then her eyes scanned the whole room.
Wow Meera this is so cool
She reached the table where some books n chemicals were placed.
Meera- Don't touch it. You will burn your hands.
Meera held her hands n Geet smiled at her concern. Then Geet remembered the horrible incident which took place minutes age. She narrated the whole staff room scene.


Meera gravely- You should'nt be here.
Geet- kyu teri lab haunted hai??
Meera- No idiot, I meant Ujwal Academy. Our place was cold but people had warmth in their hearts but people here are cold blooded, emotionless. It is not at all for a person like you.

Geet hugged Meera sideways.
You dont worry Meera. You are here for me na. And jahan tak uss star ki baat hai. Toh I'll prove my self, you know i m 5 star hehe


Good Frienship is important in earthly life.
True friendship is a rare find, lasting a life time.
Friendship is supportive, wholesome n priceless.
Friendship must grow but difficult to keep.

Friendship makes world a better place to live.
Friendship makes living worthwhile, loveable n liveable.
Friendship creates the right environs for sharing.
The basis of good friendship is selfless, dedicated love of a special kind.

Dr. John Celes


Outside on way to hostel,
Mr.Raj- Geet you alright now.
Ji.. I am fine now.
Mr.Raj-I have to tell you your group.
Abhi aur kitne jhatake lagne baki hai??
Mr.Raj- Haha. Its nothing like that. The students as per their talents are divided into 4 groups, so that they can polish their abilities with their like ones. The 4 groups are..
Somatic- for students with physical power or sports related talents
Literary- for students with literary talents like poets writters etc
Psyche- for students with good mental ability. Aspiring scientists, doctors n lawyers etc.
Its meera's group rite.
Mr.Raj- absolutely. N then comes the special talent group for singer, dancers etc.

Mr.Raj did'nt showed the picture behind the mirror. Special talents group was considered less then other groups. Students who don't fit in any other group are alloted Special talent group.

Mr.Raj- Geet your group is spcial talents.
oh! Ok...
Mr.Raj- Now go to hostel, wardon will show you your room.


At night Geet in her room, writting letter...

Dear mamma n papa ji,
1st day was full of surprises, almost all bad. But i wont loose hope. Like mamma you say babaji must have planned something really good for me in future. My room is not good as Meera coz my star rank is zero. But i ll prove everyone my worth.
Yours loving
Geet

PART 8 PREV & NEXT PART 10

No precap coz one more part coming today

This part saying,

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Edited by OsheenBajpai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
waooo...yaar nice part...awesome..luv it ❤️🤣😊😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

ohh poor geet

she got 0 star

but nt worry as our geet definetly prove her self


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Posted: 13 years ago
oh woww luved ur ff dear
its superbbb
rockinggg
n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my poor geet..
i hope she vl b able to prove herself soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

poor geet...she does not know what she has got herself into...i hope she emerges as a star...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear make geet prove herself we cant see her like thiswe want her to be happy we want even her star to be morehope mr.updhya love geet dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved part 9 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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