Maaneet FF-MILAN- The Final Destination #1

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Posted: 14 years ago

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dat is wat i like in this FF... INNOCENCE... lovely...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wow my princess k entry chemstry teacher [=D]
both parts wre superb
geet maks maan undrstnd his parnts relatn
oh geet missd him n exam : gud1 mis krege to love krege
maan restles went 2 geet rum ohhh
maan brought pain killer how caring
school festival exctng geet got idea frm maan
maula mere maula my fav. Sng luvd tht
maan's worldwar3 w'l end at end
@ exctd 2 read jealous maan

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sneha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@osheen u make 10yr maaneet naughty kya hum naughty cmmnt na kre dear bolo bolo hmmm
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woh kya hai na aa jate hain update pad k
@m little busy these days tht's why got time late 2 read it

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Waiting for d next part😍.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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waiting for the next part...

update soon ...

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sorry yaar..havent read last two parts as i was busy..will start ASAP.

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OsheenDGr8

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Posted: 14 years ago

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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART-22

Thnx guys for lovely Comments n Likes😃

Updating this part in 2 post, click the like button at end of 2nd post only😊

Maan was again gone for football practice so he skipped classes.

Last period...
Adi- We have 2 news for you
Meera- Why don't you change your name from Adi-manav to Aaj- tak.
Manav-anything for you Meera.
Everyone rolled their eyes while Meera gave an angry glare to Manav.

Adi- OK guys Maan again got hurt during football practice. This time on hand but the good news is that its just a minor wound. He is in his room right now.
Geet worried- Mai usse dekh kar aati hu
Manav- No geet Mr.Raj is calling you in staff room. There is surprise for you.

Geet went to staff room.
Mr.Raj you called for me
Mr.Raj- Yes dear. Actually there is a work for you. At ball night a pair form all 3 sections i.e. Primary, Juniour n Senior has to perform in the starting. So we choosen Maan from juniour section n were thinking of you as his partner as you can dance n most importantly sing.

Geet came out. She was very excited but at the same time a bit nervous. She went to Maan's room to check her 'Ghayal Sher'

Maan was resting on bed n his hand was bandaged. Maan saw Geet entering his room.
Maan ST- Here she comes to test my self control. But i won't loose this time.
Geet said frowning- Maan tumne phir se chot laga li. Tum log talwaaro se football khelte ho kya?

I am fine. Dont over react
He said coldly
Mai..Mai over react kar rai hu? Kher chado pata hai we are going to perform at ball night.
Geet said jumping
Hmm.. I know Mr.Raj told me.
Kitna maza aayega na. I think we should start practicing from today itself.

No
Maan snapped.
I won't do any practice with you. Not today, not tomorrow, never ever.
Geet confused- Maan maine koi galati ki kya?
Nai tum kabhi koi galati nai karti. Meri hi galati hai. Now will you leave me alone coz i am sick of you

Geet's eyes became teary. She ran from there crying. Maan thumped on bed. He felt like punching himself for hurting her.
Maan ST- this is for your own good

Geet in her room.
Geet sobbing- mujhe kaha that he is sick of me. Mai bhi nai baat kaungi usse. Koi aisa bolta hai kya

CONTINUED ON NEXT PAGE...!!

Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 14 years ago