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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 27
nice part...
they met and quarreled...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice dear
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 superb
luvd it dance kiss separatn
geet's dhunki
shoppng fght supeqb
=sry yar was busy frm last days
thnks 4 pM
update soon and PM me also
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Still waiting. 😛refreshing page..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 28

Thnx for Likes n special thnx to those who commented...

@tushti-kiran
we don't slip coz of gravitation yaar. N world z surely round they r also living in same colony.😉
@Remya_Pillai
Met after so many days. They r changed both physically n mentally so did'nt recognized each other.
@_mahi.ve_
I was also kidding yaar
@Speechless
thnx for nice comment
@Snehagujral
Missed u dear...



Updating this part in 2 posts, click the like button at end of 2nd post only😊


Same Day, Evening...

Everyone was in living room. Mahi was eating apple, Meera was reading some journal while Beeji was cutting vegetables. Geet came downstairs dressed in same white dress which she brought this morning.

Geet- Ta Daa... Mai kaisi lag rai hu??
Mahi- Patakha...



Mahi is a sweet gal but a bit muhfat(out spoken).


Tu bhi chal na
Mahi- nai yaar mom is sick. Mujhe unki dekhbhal karni hai.
Meera- wow kya dekhbhal ho rai hai.
Beeji- Tu chup kar, bas yahi to pyaari bacchi hai meri. Warna ek ko party se aur ek ko kitabo se fursat hi nai.

Beeji lived alone after her husband's death. Her son lived in Australia. She is a women of moral n ethics but at the same time she is broad minded as she transformed herself according to her surroundings.

The door bell rang...
Ab kaun hai??
Beeji- woh samne wale mehra ji shift hue the toh unka ghar khali pada tha. Meri saheli ka pota apne dost k saath yahan padhne aa raha hai toh maine mehra ji se keh k usse samne wala ghar dila diya. Wahi honge...

Geet- Mahi in chorus- Mother India ki Jai ho!!

The door bell rang again.
Beeji- ab jaa pehle jaake darwaza khol.
Geet happily opened the door. But her face lost color as soon as she opened the door.

Tum...
yahan kya kar rai ho??
Yeh mera gha...

Maan did'nt let her complete, moved her aside with his hand n went inside.
I don't have time for your bak bak
Geet mouth opened in big O.
Prem- Hii..
But Geet did'nt replyed Prem due to shock.
Prem ST- May be she is mad.

Maan touched Beeji's feet lovingly.
Namaste Beeji
Beeji- Namaste puttar kinna wadda ho gaya tu.
Mahi- oh the great standard dialog of all the elders.

Meera decided to escape before this family drama goes any further.
Meera- I am going to my room
Oh! I too have to go to party byeee
Geet turned to leave.

Maan mummered- Gai ladki haath se.
Geet heard him but did'nt said anything as Beeji was there plus she was also getting late.





CONTINUED BELOW...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONTINUED..!!


Next Day, College...

Everyone was in corridor
Armaan- Kal tum log kahan the yaar.
Sana- Hmmm we went to mall after Geet's concert. But how would you know because you were busy somewhere else.
She said teasing Armaan n Riddhima.

Riddhima- Haan we were late yesterday.
Geet- Thats not fair guys yesterday was my concert n you guys did'nt came. Karan tu bhi nai tha.

Karan-Arre yaar I forgot that yesterday was college.
Armaan n Riddhima are one year senior but are good friends of Geet n others. Karan is Geet's classmate. He is a big flirt n his fav time pass is flirting with Meera.

Tracker came jumping.
Tracker panting- Two... Boys... Hot... College...

Just then the annoucement was made that all students had to reach the Auditorium within 5 minutes.

Karan- Chalo Chalo... We are are already in bad books of Mr.Ron agar late hue toh he will get a reason to punish us.

They all rushed towards the Auditorium. Karan stopped as he saw a sexy girl. Geet rolled her eyes.
Karan we dont have time for all this
Geet said looking behind n banged into Maan. Her bag fell on ground n everything came out.

Oh! Shit.
She sat on ground n started picking up all things. Maan was about to help her but she started cursing him without seeing his face. Maan also did'nt saw her face as Geet's head was bent down.

Don't you have eyes. Dekh kar nai chal sakte. Babaji meri perfume ki bottle toot gai. Idiot, ullu ka pattha.

Maan' d had enough.
chup bilkul chup
Geet stood up to answer him back but then it hit them.

Maan ST- Babaji
Geet ST- chup bilkul chup
Their eyes widened in shock.



Oh my god its you
I could'nt believe this view
After a long time we have met
But what to say as it was not set

We are not getting even a single word
Still could'nt believe that we are together in the same world
We want to tell each other
What we have done in past years

Facing you after such a long time
All the memories have come back to life
How we used to fight each n every day
And then help each other in our own different way

The first time we met was obnoxious
When we met the things were not clear
This time also it also started with a fight
Just like the first time when we had our first sight

Still feels like the first night together
When we had our first kiss
I wanted to be with you forever
My feelings for you are not more or less

First time our eyes met
Same feelings I get
Only feels much stronger
Wanna love you longer.


Maan- Geet
Geet- Maan
Meera- Prem
Prem- Meera
Tracker shouted- Aur mai Tracker.

Maan ignored everyone. He abruptly questioned.
Maan- Did any guy touched you
Kyaaa??
Maan- Did any guys touched you all these years.
What type of question is this? Are you insane
Thats not my answer. Just tell me did anyone came near you

Uff now he was getting on her nerves. Geet was hell confused n irritated by his weird question that too when they are meeting after so many years. She grabbed Prem's wrist with her one hand n touched her other arm with Prem's.

Lo ho gaya
Geet said giving Maan a winning smirk. But she had never expected what Maan did next moment. He punched Prem hard on his face.

Prem- Ooouuuch!! What did I do.



PRECAP-1. Geet sneaking in Maan's room😲
2.Maan- Andheri raat me ek ladki jawan ladke k room me, akele. Log kya kahenge😃.




Credit(s):- Poem-' Meeting again' by Kavya
Thnks alot dear for such a lovely poem.



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Posted: 13 years ago
What type of Qn was that???? Did any guy touch U?? lol😆 Geet toh usse bhi upar. Poor Prem. Kaha phas gaya??😆 Nice update. Loved it.😊
Edited by CutieTeju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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dear PM dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahaaa...'did any guy touch u'...o God that was freakin insane...awesome awesome update..
Will b waiting 4 da next part :D

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