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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey osheen lovly updates and lovly concept... Keep it up...
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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART-4

Mr.Raj n Mr.Karan somehow managed to pacify Geet by giving her chocolates n assuring her that they did'nt saw anything.


Mr.Raj-I talked to your dad, he already was boarding a flight to Delhi. Thanks to your message chit. He will be here in 3 hours
(guys there is no flight from Shimla to Delhi but as a writter i m using my veto power hehe)


Geet-what dad is coming but i did'nt meet Meera, when will take me to her??
Mr. Karan- Right now classes are going on as soon as classes will get over we'll call her.
Geet sadly- Oh!! Okz. So how is she doing?? i mean in studies.
Mr.Raj- Your Meera is doing great you know she is chosen class president. I have never seen a student so bright that too at this age.
Geet- Really! She is class president. Wow!! Mujhe toh pehle hi pata tha, my meera is the best.
Mr.Raj n Mr. Karan were amused by the Geet's enthu which comes with just the name of Meera


After almost 3 hour, Mohinder reached Ujwal Academy. He was lead to the room where Geet n Mr.Raj were sitting. He quickly went to Geet n took her in his arms

Mohinder- Are you ok beta??
Geet- Yeh dad i m absolutely fine.
N with Geet's replay soon Mohinder concern changed into anger
Mohinder-how dare you geet, You ran from home!! Do you have any idea how much worried your mom was?You are grounded for 2 weeks as soon as we reach home.


Mr.Raj-Excuse me Mr Handa
Mr.Raj who was untill now listening to their talks with a smile interupted them

Mr.Raj- Actually if you dont mind Geet can stay here n continue her studies with Meera.

Mohinder n Geet in chorus- what???

Mr.Raj- yes, waise toh admissions are over. But there was a reserved seat in class 5th A i.e. Meera's class. But the boy family shifted to Russia n he was not able to study here. Now his seat is vacant ,if you want we can give that seat to Geet.

Mohinder became thoughtfull
Mr.Raj- this is a golden chance Mr.Handa getting a seat in Ujwal Academy is not that easy.
Geet was waiting for her father replay n praying plzzz plzzz babaji bas papaji haan keh de phir mai aapse kuch nai magungi. Pakka promise!!

Mohinder after thinking for sometime agreed to Mr.Raj as he also knew that Mr.Raj was absolutely rite this is indeed a 'GOLDEN CHANCE'
Mr.Raj- So come with me Mr.Handa, i'll tell you the formalities n fee structure. Btw Geet your class presidents will be reaching here anytime to meet you.
Mohinder bid Geet goodbye n they went outside


Now Geet was alone in the room
Geet ST- wow !! BONAS, mai ab meera k saath padhungi.

At the same time Meera n a boy of same age with specs n cute smile entered the room dressed in their respective school dresses.


Bas phir kya tha, as soon as Geet saw Meera she ran to her in full speed, like a bull running behind a red cloth. Typical DDLJ style...
The boy became horrified watching Geet running like that towards Meera.
As Geet reached Meera

CHATAAAK!!

Instead of huggi shaggi, Geet got a slap, she held her cheek which was now imprinted with Meera's finger prints... The boy felt pity for Geet n asked meera
Boy-Hey Meera why did you slapped her??
Meera looked at him with black face n gave him an angry glare. Boy quickly shut his mouth knowing Meera n her temper.


Meera- You ran from home to meet me. Now you crossed ol limits of insanity. I did'nt expect THIS from you.
Geet face became doleful. Tears filled her eyes n spilled.

Geet with shaky voice- Meera i came all the way from Shimla to delhi just to meet you because i was missing you badly. You know you are more then a sister to me. You forgot everything our first meeting, our lunch breaks, you making fun of me then saving me from bullies I pleading you to do my homework n you asking my pocket money in return. Have you ever wondered how scared i was travelling alone at night in train with only one hope to meet you n get a from hug you after the dark journey. N this is what you gave me...A SLAP??(ufff emotional atyachaar)


Meera was observing Geet from corner of her eyes n after listening to Geet's misery Meera's stone heart melted n she hugged Geet. Afterall, at the end of the day she also loves Geet though in a weird way. But Geet has no complaints untill n unless they both are together.

Geet eyes lit up with Meera's acceptance n she hugged her back with all her love and warmth.
In the cornor of the room, the boy didnt know how to stop his tears which were spilling like ganga Yamuna

PART 3 PREV & NEXT PART 5

PRECAP- Weird class, New frnds
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Edited by OsheenBajpai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well guyss... I forgot to tell u earlier that this FF is divided into 3 parts or i can say three phrases of life. The 1st phrase i.e. The school life is inspired by a fiction series Alice Academy...

Btw frnds I m so glad that u ol accepted my 1st FF. Thnx alot to those who gave comments n liked the posts.

I m requesting you guyss to plzz like n comment on the update as its the only reward i can get...you know i read every single comment again n again even if it is jus awesome or nice update...

thnx again 4 ur time,
luv u
Osheen

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
superb updates
part3 and 4
loved them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4
wow Geet is really lucky...
now she can be with her Meera...
OMG she slapped Geet?
poor Geet baby...
but shes really good in her antics...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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add me
and send me the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awesome update

thanx for pm

continue soon

bye tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Nice one

Do continue

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for PM me
later i will reply After reading
Edited by kahkashansakina - 13 years ago

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