ff:once again our fates entwined-ch-29-pt4

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sig is done by chand1234.ok guys this is my very new brand ff.story is same till now.now lets see what challenges and surprised will chandu face after becoming king of gandhara.

here is cs...
chandu,dhuru,mihika and shanky-no intro needed
now..
he he double role alert.
vishal-he is a very very intelligent prince,he loves to play chess and see his servants as his pawns.malayketu and his principalities are under his rule and only chanakya knows this.
chitrangada-best friend of vishal and durdhara and daughter of enemy kingdom.
rashiDeblina Chatterjee In Sajda Tere Pyar Mein-she is very much in love with vishal and is daughter of one of his nobles under him but he rejected her feelings when she confessed.she still follows him and is very much of a pawn to him but he quite cares for her.
krishnaVipul Gupta-he is besty of best buddies of vishal.he is a king.
jogitaLeena Jumani-she is gonna be replaced by mihika.she is a secret spy of vishal.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sig is done by radhi.
VOLUME 1(CH 1-14)-ESPIONAGE AND CONSPIRACY

character sketch and chapter 1- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chandragupta-maurya/3005318/ff-once-again-our-fates-entwined-ch-29-pt4
VOLUME 2(CH 15-21)-CHESS GAME OF BLOOD
VOLUME 3(CHAPTER-22-)-ENTWINED FATES WORKING TOGETHER ????
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niceee...anothr ff :D i jst luv ur ff's 😉

nice cs...waiting fr furthr updates..nd do PM me :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wohhoo... moni, new ff? vry excited fr d ff.. BOL fr ur new ff! nyc chars.. continue soon!! 😊
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CHAPTER-1-A MYSTERIOUS KING,A FATE THAT HE COULD NOT KILL.

IT WAS EARLY MORNING.chandu,mihika and shanky arrived to meet chanakya.

cgm-kahiye acharya,aapne hum sabko kyun bulaya??

chanakya-amatya malayketu ke bhet ke liye jaa rahe hain,tumhe pata hain na??

cgm-jee acharya..to isme chintit hone ke kya aawashakta hain,amatya ke raajmudrika to hamare paas hain.

chanakya-mein chintin nahin hun chandragupta parantu aaj mein tumhare gyan ko maapna chahta hun.kya tum vishal ko jaante ho??

cgm-kaun vishal aacharya??

chanakya-vishal,panchala mahajanpad ka raajkumar.

shashanka-haan acharya maine uska naam suna hain kintu..

chanakya-kuch mat kehna.chandragupta ye ek aisa raajkumar hain jise aaj tak kise ne nahin dekha.

mihika-kise ne nahin??

chanakya-haan kisi ne nahin.kise raaja ne aaj tak uska chehra nahin dekha hain.

cgm-parantu acharya is samay hamein malayketu ke baare mein vichaar karna chahiye.

chanakya sighed-to use ke baare mein to vartalap kar raha hun mein.

mihika-arthat.

chanakya-arthat ye mihika ke jis malayketu ko itna ahenkaar hain apne maharaj hone ka wo darasal mahraj hain he nahin.

everyone shocked...

cgm-mahraj nahin hain,ye aap kya keh rahe hain acharya???

acharya-tumhara chaukna swabhavik hain.is baat ko bahut kam log jaante hain ke malayketu aur uske saare saathi vishal ke liye karya karte hain aur wo uske taraf se shaashan karta hain.

cgm-acharya kintu koi raajkumar ya raaja aisa kyun karega??

chanakya-ye to ab tak mein bhe nahin jaanta kyunki uske guptchar vyavastha bahut kadi hain.sune sunai baaton se pata chala hain ke wo sirf unhe logon ko apna mitra banata hain jo uske liye apne pran tak nyochaavar karne ko taiyaar ho jaayen.bahut kutil buudhi ka hain wo.

cgm-to acharya ab??

chanakya sighed...

IN A BEAUTIFUL PALACE...OF PANCHALA,TWO BEST FRIENDS WERE PLAYING CHESS.

krish-ah ye chali maine apne chaal.

opponent chuckled.he too played his part and bamn he was terribly occupied.

krish-such kahein hum,tumse jeetna bahut kathin hain vishal.

vishal-jeevan ek akhet hain krish,agar isme aap apne chaalein nahin chalenge to koi aur aapko khatm kar dega.

krish-tumhare chaalein tum he jaanon,waise chitra se tumhare baat hue.

vishal-nahin abhe nahin,kyun??

krish-nahin kuch nahin.

vishal sighed him badly,his eyes were enough to warn him.

krish-ah shama karna.

suddenly a beautiful spy arrived.

jogita-shama kijiye maharaj kintu mera aapse varatalap karna atayanta aavashyak hain.

vishal-hmm...theek hain,tum mere kaksha mein jao mein aata hun.sheh aur maat and he broke krish's white king chess piece and he left.

DO TELL ME GUYS,DO YOU WANNA ME TO CONTINUE IT
???????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@chand and frozy thank guys,i think this ff is going to be very action packed and with some really cool adventures.i think only dhuru is in this who thinks of romance.every other person have bigger goals in their lives and for this their fates entwined together capturing them in a web of hell.
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nyc start moni, i likd d chap 1! do continue ur ff!
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chapter-2-A CERTAIN UNKNOWN

durdhara was sitting in her room all crying and stuff when dhanu entered.
dhanu-dha dha tigra dha tigra dhe,putrrriii...
dhuru totally ignored him..
dhanu-dekho tumse kaun milne aaya hain.
someone came from behind and dhuru's sadness turned into extreme happiness.
dhuru-chitrangada...😃
chitra showed her a very much fake smile-durdhara...
dhanu-tum dono vartalap karo hum abhe aate hain.
dhuru hugged her-hamein to vishwaas he nahin ho raha ke tum yahan ho.2 varsh ho gaye tumse mile hue.
chitra-hmm...hamne socha apne pyaari sakhi se mil aate hain,hamein bahut khed hain durdhara.
dhuru-are kis baat ke liye??
chitra-wo tumhara bhadrashaal se vivah hone waala tha aur us chandragupta ne tumhare vivah ko khandit kar diya.
dhuru glared in proud,chitra confused..
dhuru-chitra jo hua wo accha hua.
chitra-kyun??
dhuru-hum wo vivah nahin karna chahte the,hum kise aur se prem karte hain.
chitra evil smiled😈-kya??tum kise aur se prem karte ho??
dhuru-haan,chandragupta se.
chitra totally shocked-kya??tum aur chandragupta??kintu kyun ah mera matlab ye sab kaise??
dhuru told her her story and chitra got for what she came here for,a weakness,a weakness that could help her in destroying dhananada.dhuru started crying..
chitra hugged her and showed sympathy but actually not having-are are durdhara,ro mat,dekhna ek din tumhara prem awashya safal hoga.and she again evil smiled😈

there in panchala's palace...
vishal ,krish and jogita in his room...
vishal reading a letter-😈hmm...to ab gandhara ke maharaj hamse milna chahte hain.
jogita-haan maharaj aur aapse matlab aapse,unhone bahut anurodh kiya hain ke aap unse swayam mile na ke kise aur ke dwara.
vishal-hmmm...jogita,unhe sandesh bhej do ke hum unka anurodh nahin sweekar kar sakte,agar wo hamse milna chahte hain to wo zarur mile lekin hum is baat ka unhe vishwaas nahin dilate ke jis vyakti se wo milenge wo hum he honge.agar wo tab bhe hamse milna chahe to...😈
jogita-jo agya maharaj..she left.
krish-mitra ye chandragupta tumse kyun milna chahta hain.
vishal-iske liye hamara dut ab tak pahunch bhe chuka hoga.
krish shocked-kya???tum...tumne dut bhe bhej diya.
vishal chuckled-jab ye chandragupta raja bana tha tabhe muzhe isme bahut zyada ananda aa gaya,muzhe anada milega chandragupta ke saath shatranj khelne mein and he drank water(he doesn't drink madira).
krish shocked by his farsightedness.(and by the way he took shiksha in kashi university not takshashala.😆)

chandragupta and chanakya were outside having good look of ghandhara when suddenly they saw some people harassing a beautiful girl.
girl-chod do muzhe,ishwar ke liye chod do.
chandu got highly angry after seeing this.he went there and kicked their asses and saved the girl.
girl-dhanyawad...but as she saw his face SHE GOT HIGHLY ,HIGHLY,HIGHLY...SHOCKED
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Niceee updt... ;) waiting 2 noe wht'll happen nxt ? whose tht girl ? nd why was she shocked sseing chandu ?😳
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moni, vry gud updt!!

tumne suspense 2 ud mein hi bahut bada diya!! main bechain hoon..

1st of all chitra ke evil smiles...

n 2ndly y is dat girl shocked 2 c cgm's face?

updt soon... w8ing fr d updt!!! 😊

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