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Posted: 13 years ago

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CHAPTER-6-spies and revenge in the game.

next day...in morning.

chitra entered dhanu's room.

chitra-maharaja.

dhanu face lightened😃-are chitra tum yahan,kaise,koi samasya??

chitra-haa maharaj samasya to hain,hum yahan aaye hain par kahin ghumne nahin gaye,kya hum kahin ghumne jaa sakte hain??

dhanu-jj.jao...awashya jao.

chitra-oh to phir theek hain hum abhe...

dhanu-kintu tum hamare saath jaoge.

chitra-huh,par hum to soch rahe the ke hum aur durdhara striyon ke snaanagar jayenge,aap wahan aakar kya karenge??😕

dhanu-snanangar ke baad hum aur tum kahe dur ghumne jayenge.

chitra-maharaj,hamein sirf snanagar par jaana hain,phir hum laut ayenge.darasal ham durdhara ke liye chintit hain.

dhanu-durdhara ke liye chintit??

chitra-haa maharaj,bechare pure din bas rote rehte hain,agar wo hamare saath snanagar jayege to uska man behel jayega aur raaste mein hum use samzha bhe denge ke wo chandragupta ko bhool jaye.are uska kya astitva hain aapke saamne,aap kahan magadha ke raaja aur kahan wo chote se gandhara ka mukhiya,koi mel he nahin.

dhanu-dha dha tigra dha tigra dhe,hum tumse bahut prasanna hain chitra,bahut prasanna,jao,jahan jaana hain jao,hamare sainik bhe tumhare saath jayenge kintu ratri se pehle waapas aa jaana,wo hamein tumse kuch vartalaap karna hain.

chitra thinking-huh vartalaap,mera bas chale to tere jiwah ke hazaro tukde kar dun.

chitra-ah jee maharaja...and she left.she straight went to dhuru's room.

chitra-karya ho gaya durdhara.

dhuru-ah chalo chalte hain kintu sainik.

chitra-hamne kaha na sab kuch hampar chod do.tum sirf chandragupta se milne ke swapn dekho.and they both left for the temple.

rashi entered chandu's room,he was studying something,she came at his ears and screamed-kya kar rahe ho??

chandu got shocked...

chandu-are...aapne to muzhe dara he diya.

rashi-are waah,veer chandragupta maurya ko bhay bhe lagta hain.

chandu-ah apke aane ka prayojan,koi karya hain muzhse.

rashi-are haan,chaliye baithiye..

chandu-kahiye..

rashi-hum chahte ke aap hamein gandhara ghumayen.

chandu-ah jee mein??

chandu-nahin aapka bhoot,are aap he to,dekhiye aap waise bhe apne praja ka nirikshan karne to jaate he hain na to hamein bhe saath le chaliye.dekhiye ham yahan mehel mein thak jayenge baithe baithe.kripa karke hamein le chaliye.

chandu-accha theek hain,chaliyega kintu acharya.

rashi-are...hum koi paraye hain kya,hamein to aisa lag raha hain ke aap hamein kahin ka dut samazh rahe hain.

chandu-are nahin nahin,aisa kuch nahin hain,awashya chaliye aap.

rashi-ah acharya bhe hamare saath honge na??

chandu-nahin wo bhadrabhat ke saath kahin gaye hain.

rashi thinking-ah ye accha hua,ab chandragupta se ho sakta hain kuch mahatvapoorna suchna mil jaaye.

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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bhoomi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

m d 1st 2 comment again!

vry nyc updt! continue soon...

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

chapter-7-runaways

durdhara and chitra went out with some sainiks.

chitra and durdhara were walking on bank of river ganga when suddenly chitra said-ah..hamein bahut pyaas lage hain,hum abhe aate hain.

as chitra went to drink water she fell in the river...

chitra-aaa...she started drowning.

dhuru-chitra...😲are murkhon dekh kya rahe ho,jao bachao hamari sakhi ko.

sainik-jee...jee raajkumari and three soldiers jumped in river.

and durdhara ran away..

soldiers-are are rajkumari jee...are..

soldiers ran after her...

those three made chitra out of river.

chitra-jao..cough..cough...jao jao...dekho...durdhara kahan gaye,hamne uske zimmedari le the,maharaj dhananda bahut krodhit honge.

soldiers-jee rajkumari jee and they went after durdhra too.

chitra got up and someone came from her behind.she smiled at her.

chitra-dekha hamne kaha tha na kuch nahin hoga,sab hampar chod do.

dhuru-waah kya yojna banaye,kitne romanchak.

chitra-accha ab chalo nikalte hain warna sainika aa jayenge.

chitra and dhuru ran away in opposite side.they had some clothes with them to change.

rashi and chandragupta went out in gandhara.they were not talking much with each other.

rashi-chandragupta??

chandu-jee..

rashi-tumhare jheeva bahut thak jaate hain kya.

chandu-jee??

rashi-tum kuch bolte kyun nahin.

chandu-ab mein kya bolun.

rashi-are,accha chalo ye batao ke...ah...tumhara agla karya kya hain,tum kaise dhananda ko parasta karoge,kuch yojna soche hain tumne.

chandu-jee soche to hain kintu wo gupta hain,shama karna mein aapko nahin bata sakta.

rashi disappointed-are koi baat nahin,hum samazhte hain.chalo ye he bata do ke acharya se aap kaise mile.

chandu-haan wo mein bata sakta hun and then chandu started his talking and he literally told her everything,he even told her how he and durdhara met and they fell in love which was quite shocking for her.

rashi-are waah,ye to bilkul kahaniyon jaisa ho gaya.wo jo ladki mihika the,wo kaun hain???

chandu-jee wo wo hamari dut hain(he literally gave her a secret)

rashi-oh...kaise dut??mera matlab kya wo bhe jassoosi karte hain.

chandu-ah...nahin nahin bas aise aam dut hain wo...(he couldn't tell her the truth)

rashi-hmm...zarur is mihika se kuch accha pata chal sakta hain par wo kal se dikhai he nahin di hamein.

krishna was sitting in his room drinking apple juice.

krishna-oh ho..hamein apne ek mahrani ko to saath le he aana chahiye tha aur vishal,wo toh hamein mahel mein ganika laane nahin dega when suddenly a soldier pushed a person at his feet.

vishal was in his room...

vishal-chandragupta hamse milna chahta hain,hmm.. he chuckled...and pushed the opponent white king of chess with his knight.and then he kissed the knight...and then a pigeon came to his window,he saw the msg...

hum panchala aa rahe hain aur is baar humein pratishod chahiye.

he saw the knight and said-pratishod...ek aisa astra jo kise bhe shastra ko parasta kar de,hamein tumhare prateeksha hain.

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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proteeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Sabse Pehle Lovely Updates !! Duruji Aur Chitraji Ki Yojna Toh No. 1 Tha !!! Aur Baaki Bhi...Chandu Kitna Saral Hai, Jo Saaab Kuchh Bol Diya !!

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proteeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: lucykaede

oh...by the way how was update??😆

The Update Was Capable Of Making Me ROFL A 10000000000000000 X 1000000000000000 Times !!

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Ria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

fab updts.. ;) waiting fr the nxt part :D

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bhoomi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

awsm updt...

n d last dialogue was 2222 gud! ekdum filmi type end of d chap..

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

chapter-8-opponent's spies who will become pawns.

krishna's feets were touched by some person.

krishna-srimaan aap kaun??

person-mahraja ko mera pranaam(just like how shanky did with odomos oops eudomos😆)

krishna-ah tum hamare per chodoge,hamein gudgudi ho rahe hain.(lol krishna is krishna,so funny)

person-ye to kuch bhe nahin,aapke liye ek aise anokhi vastu laaya hun jo aapke is niras ratri ko rasbhari bana dege.

krishna-nahin,hamein aur phalon kar ras nahin chahiye.😃

shanky was quite surprised.

shanky-nahin maharaj,ye to ek aise vastu ho jo ke ...he he he...

krishna-accha to hamein bhe dikhao ye vastu.

shankya clapped his hands and a beautiful girl came inside his room.krishna was quite amused to see her beauty.

mihika-maharaj ko mera pranaam.

krishna got shocked.

krishna-ye..??

shanky-yahe hain wo vastu.

mihika-mein aapko itna sukh dunge,itna sukh dunge ke aapko lagega ke aapke jeevan mein koi dukh tha he nahin.us sainik ne satya kaha tha,mahraj vishal behad yuva hain.

krishna started at her in pity,he clapped his hands..

two soldiers came laughing

krishna-waah,hum tum dono ko uchit puraskaar denge,tumne hamein vishal bana diya.

mihika and shashanka shocked.

krishna then angry-jao in dono ko karavaas mein daal do,vishal in duton se niptega.

shanky and mihika very very shocked.

soldiers started dragging him when krishna said-kise bhe janpada mein jasoosi karne se pehle kam se kam ye to jaan lo ke us janpada ke kya visheshta hain.panchala ke ye visheshta hain ke yahan ka raja ganikaein nahin rakhta.

mihika very much shocked

krishna-par tum janoge kaise,vishal ne to ye asatya faila rakha hain ke uske kai ganikaein hain jisse wo tum jaise duton tak pahunch sake.

mihika and shashanka shocked.

krishna-sainikon inhe karavaas mein aise bandhkar rakhna ke inhe ye gyat ho jae ke ye kahan aye hain.

soldiers dragged them to jail and tied their hands,mouths and legs.

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago