ff:once again our fates entwined-ch-29-pt4 - Page 35

Chapter-29-part 2of 4 confession,passion and seduction,a sin he committed

Jogita,shanky and mihika were discussing things when suddenly a pigeon came to the window.it was jogita's fav pigeon,she knew it was his msg.

Jogita went quickly and read the msg,shanky and mihika were confused.she smiled a little and then wrote another msg and sent it back.

Mihika-kiska sandesh tha.

Jogita-tum apne karya par dhyan do.

Mihika angry-tum hamare acharya nahin ho jo hum tumhare saari baatein mane.

Jogita-accha,she slapped mihika very hard.

Shanky got hell angry at this,he grabbed jogita's hand.

Shanky-aap stri hain isliye aapse theek se varatalaap kar raha hun,kripa karke mere shishtachaar ko chunauti na den.

Mihika-tumhari itne cheshta..

She was about to slap her when jogita got her hand and did a trick that she fell on the ground(when two badasses meet things like this are usual to happen)

Shanky got impressed by her skills though he was upset that she hurt his precious mihika.

Jogita-bacche ho abhe,bahut kuch sikhna hain,acharya ne tumhe bahut kam sikhaya hain.

As she turned acharya was there,jogita-pranaam acharya,acharya had a grin at his face.

Acharya-jogita aap bahut guni hain,pata nahin tha aap itne acchi yodha hain and yeah it was really surprising for acharya because she beat his best pawn though not better than chandu.

Jogita-ye sab to mere maharaja ke kripa,bhagwaan karein unki dirghayu ho.

Acharya and jogita had a grinny eyelock and she left.

Acharya-mihika utho'she got up.shashanka'

Shanky-jee acharya

Acharya-tumne kal sagai ke saari taiyaariyan kar le hain.

Shanky-jee acharya saari taiyaariyan ho chuke hain.

Acharya-uttam..and he thinks-bas kal durdhara aur amatya koi archan na la den is vivah mein.

COUPLES SPECIAL''

Chandu was in his room thinking about his engagement,it was first time he had doubts on his love for durdhara.he was all the time thinking about rashi and everytime he thought about her he had a good smile on his face.

Chandu thinks-ye muzhe kya ho raha hain,muzhe samazh nahin aa raha hain ke mein kispar asakt hun aur kisse prem karta hun,prabhu mere sahayata kijiye,suddenly someone knocked at the door.

Chandu-itni ratri ko..he took a knife in his hand and opened the door and it was'..RASHI,she looked worried.

Chandu-rashi'tum'yahan kya kar rahe ho,sagai se pehle tum muzhse'

Rashi entered-are sagai ko chodo yahan mere sir par aafton ka ambhaar laga hua hain and she sat on his bed.he closed the door.

Chandu-kya hua?he sat beside her.

Rashi-wo chitra hain na'and she told him everything,hamein to dar lag raha hain ke vishal uski hatya na kar de(ha ha 'and he emotionally blackmailed her of his death,really no one knows vishal)

Chandu-ek shan rukiye,raajkumari chitra yahan panchala mein hain.

Rashi-haan wahe stri jisne tumhe aur hamein bacchon ke saath ghumne bheja tha.

Chandu-accha wo jalebi waali stri.

Rashi-jalebi??

Chandu-nahin kuch nahin,he thinks-wo raajkumari chitrangada hain.

Rashi-kahan kho gaya,are bolo hum kya karein.

Chandu-ah mein kya keh sakta hun.

Rashi-are apne hone waali patni ke kuch to sahayata karo,muzhe to vishal ke kaksha mein he jaate hue dar lag raha hain(baby its better you should not go),tum uska gussa nahin jaante,wo striyon par bhe haath utha deta hain.

Chandu angry-ye to bahut galat baat hain.

Rashi-are nahin,wo to bahut samaan karta hain striyon ka,bas unki galtiyon par thoda bhadak jaata hain.

Chandu remembered him taking him to ganika house and he thought-pata hain kitna samaan karta hain wo striyon ka.

Rashi-are tum sochte bahut ho,hamein lag raha hain hamare aane se pehle tum awashya he durdhara ke uplaksha mein soch rahe the na.bolo bolo..

Chandu-nahin wo..

Rashi put her hands around his shoulder-are sharmao mat,hamse kuch bhe keh sakte ho.she saw bananas and she took one,lo kele khao.

Chandu-itne ratri ko aur aap aise mere kaksha mein,ye uchit nahin hain.

Rashi sat on his bed-are hamare liye sab uchit hain.

Chandu-ah'..accha.????

Rashi pulled him and he fell on the bed.

Rashi-hamare paas baitho,chalo..

He sat beside her but he was feeling hell awkward(waah kya diff hain vishal aur chandu mein)

Rashi-hmmm'kuch bolo bhe.

Chandu-mein kya bolun.

Rashi-of ho''chalo hum he bolte hain.

Chandu-hamesha ke tarah..

Rashi-agar hamara parihaas udaoge to hum tumhe nahin chodenge dekh lena.waise kya sachmuch durdhara tumhara pehla prem hain??Sach sach batana,hamein jhooth nahin pasand.

Chandu-accha jee aur khud jhooth bolkar gandhara aye the.

Rashi-are to wo to hum abhiyaan par the.

Chandu imitated her-abhiyaan par the,tum jaanti ho tumhari wazah se vishal ko kitna kuch pata chal gaya gandhara ke bare mein.

Rashi-he he he'

Chandu-ye khee khee karna band karo.

Rashi-to tum kyun nahin karte.itna kam kyun haste ho tum,tumhare daat to acche hain.

Chandu smiled a little.

Rashi-are phir wahe''.hason to.

Chandu-tum rehne do na'but rashi was not ready to give up.

Rashi-oh ho tumne koi sambhavana nahin chodie,ah gude gude and she started doing gudgude(ha ha omg ubber madness)

Chandu-are are,ye ha ha ha ha ha''''.

Rashi-waah,daaton ko kya chamka kar rakha hain.

Chandu was laughing and while he was laughing he had tears In his eyes.

Rashi-kya hua?????itne zor se gudgude k eke tumhe rona aa gaya??

Chandu-nahin ye soch kar rona aa gaya ke itna mein aakhri baar kab hasa tha.

Rashi-kab hase the??

Chandu-jab mein mere maa ke saath tha.

Rashi-hmmm''..tumhe apne maa ke bahut yaad aati hain na.

Chandu-bahut.

Rashi wiped his tears-tum ro kyun rahe ho,tumhe to hasna chahiye.

Chandu angry

Rashi-ab dekho hamari maa bhe to nahin hain to kya hum nahin haste.

Chandu shocked'''''''

Rashi-tumhe pata hain agar tumhari maa tumhe rote hue dekhege to unhe kitna kasht hoga.

Chandu-wo yahan hain kahan muzhe dekhne ke liye.

Rashi-oh fo,ab tum koi bacche to ho nahin jo hum tumhe ye kahen ke log marne ke baad tare ban jaate hain,chandu reminded durdhara and him at the bank of river in jungle when she told him about the taara thing and he compared her with rashi and felt that rashi was smarter than durdhara.,aatma kabhe nahin marti chandu,

Chandu-chandu??

Rashi-haan chandu,aatma kabhe nahin marti,aur jab wo nahin marti to faltu ka chinta kiske,hamari maa kehte the ye,isliye chinta se mukt raho,chinta chita ke samaan hain.

Chandu was too touched by her words,he felt a hope in his dead heart ,he hugged her.

Rashi hugged him too'..

Rashi coughed-abhe vivah hua nahin hain.

Chandu quickly broke the hug.

Chandu-nahin wo'.bas aise he.

Rashi-to bolo durdhara tumhara pehla prem hain??

Chandu-wo'and then he remembered his moments with mrignayani.he was sad.

Rashi-bolo na.

Chandu-nahin durdhara mera pehla prem nahin hain.

Rashi-accha to kaun hain??

Chandu-mera rashtra,akhanda bharat ka swapna,meri matrabhoomi.

Rashi was too touched by his words.she started crying loudly.

Chandu-kya hua???are'..tum itni zor zor se kyun ro rahe ho.

Rashi sneezing in chandu's clothes.

Chandu-ah'(disgusting)

Rashi-kaash hum bhe tumhari tarah hote,ah'and she started crying more.

Chandu smiled-ye ye..kya hain..

Rashi-tumhe hasane ka tareeka kintu hum parajit ho rahe hain isliye hason.

Chandu laughed really hard'''''

Rashi-he he he..dekha has diye na

Chandu-kintu is hasi thitholi mein mere kapde gande kar diye aapne.

Rashi-haan,chalo nikaal do inhe.

Chandu-wo to nikalunga mein par pehle aap kaksha se jaane ke cheshta karenge.

Rashi-are haan hum chalte hain hamein kal sundar lagna hain isliye hum so jaate hain,she kissed him and left.

Chandu smiled-bahut vichitra hain par bahut he komal hriday ke hain(just like you chandu),prabhu ise kabhi koi kasht na dena.

Durdhara and amatya were few kms away from panchala.amatya was sleeping,durdhara was lost in her thoughts of chandu.

Durdhara-chandragupta,ab hamein koi alag nahin kar sakta,ab hum sada sada ke liye tumhare paas aa rahe hain,tum kewal hamare ho kewal hamare,hum aur tum gandhara mein apne ek naye sansaar basaenge.dhanyawaad ho chitra ka jisne hamein ye gyan diya ke prem sabse badh kar hain.hum aa rahe hain tumhare paas and rashi,chandu and dhuru in one frame.

Chandu in his thoughts-prabhu,muzhe aasha hain ke rashi ke saath vivah kar ke mein uchit kar raha hun,mein durdhara aur mihika dono ko he kitna kaksht de raha hun,muzhse kise ka kasht nahin dekha jaata.accha hoga mihika shashanka ke saath vivah kar le,mere andar jo bhe bhavanyen hain wo sada sada ke liye mit jayenge.(oh oh oh''..omg'..so mr feels something for her too,wow he feels so much for everyone,kitne saari ladkiyan hain chandu ke liye,vishal ke liye bhe hain par bhaisaab ko to ek he flavor accha lagta hain.really when you truly love someone you just can't get enough of that person,chandu has to figure that out,he yet has to find true love .his feelings are mixed now but later I will develop this part and he finally will realize whom he truly loves,a reason for these contradictions is that he puts his patriotic love above than any love)

bhaddu in his dreams was hiding in kitchen because he pretended to be a kitchen's guard.bhaddu was thinking all time about rashi.

rashi-waise tum bahut sundar ho...

bhaddu smiled and said-tum bhe...bas ek baar tumse milna hain,mein tumse bahut prem karta hun and then he reminded rashi hugging chandu,bhaddu woke up from his dreams.

bhaddu-ye chandragupta ke saath uska kya sambandh ho sakta hain,jo bhe ho tumhe muzhse wo chandragupta to kadapi nahin cheen sakta,hatya kar dunga mein us chandragupta ke,kal mein tumhe apne saari bhavnayen bata dunga...😳

NEXT PARTS WILL HAVE COUPLES WHO ARE NOT TOO IMP IN THE STORY,I INCLUDED MAIN COUPLES IN FIRST TWO PARTS.NEXT COUPLE WILL ALSO HAVE SOME SUVASINI AND CHANAKYA.POOR ACHARYA.

Originally posted by: RiniRocks

nice!! Waiting fr next updates..

Originally posted by: lucykaede

next part is a very emotional bomb,i hope you guys will be able to handle it and thanks but i don't believe you because i get very few comments in comparison of other ffs but its okay,everyone has their own taste.😉

Originally posted by: chand1234

nah...many ppl arent aware of ur ff...thts the prob... or else u'll be one of the best writers. really

shall cmnt on the updts ltr. as am yet 2 read thm :)