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Posted: 13 years ago
so here is a long comment 😊 -
really awsm updt!! ur story is filled wid surprises at every moment!!
i luv vishal's manipulation n exactly opp chandu's bholapan...
n chirta's pics were really cute..
updt soon moni!! BOL fr ur exams n also fr d results dat r gonna cum ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: frozen.devil

so here is a long comment 😊 -

really awsm updt!! ur story is filled wid surprises at every moment!!
i luv vishal's manipulation n exactly opp chandu's bholapan...
n chirta's pics were really cute..
updt soon moni!! BOL fr ur exams n also fr d results dat r gonna cum ...


thank you so so much frozy😃.i really love your comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
a mixed tre
at...

AN ANGRY CHITRA

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Posted: 13 years ago
VISHAL
WHEN ANGRY
vishal remains calm even when he is very angry.

chandu
i think you guys can easily differentiate between vishal and chandu.vishal's hair is shorter than chandu and he is not as buff as him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😃

Originally posted by: lucykaede


omg...yaar time ke thodi pareshaani hain samzha karo,ek mahine baad exam hain plus do teen din mein results aane waale hain,par type practice ke wazah se kal update kar dunge,don't worry.


ohh..soo sorry 😲

BOL 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
chanakya-sahe kaha aapne,mihika got hell jealous of her,she was shocked to see her guts,she was new member of the group but already so controlling,she felt really bad as acharya never allowed her to be part of discussions but allowed jogita.

aww...mihika 😒

Nicee updt 😃 waiting fr nxt prt !
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Posted: 13 years ago
sides update...
dhanu's side-
amatya
bhaggu
bhaddu
his soldiers

vishal's side-
chanakya
jogita
chitra
rashi
krishna

chandu's side-
chanakya
mihika
shanky+now jogita



BUT SIDES WILL CHANGE...AS IT IS A CHESS GAME AND EVERY TIME A NEW GAME HAPPENS,PIECES CHANGES,DON'T THINK THAT THESE SIDES ARE CONSISTENT.
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter-25-WHY IS THE TEACHER IS ON OPPONENT'S SIDE OR IS HE THE ONE???
chitra-kya??
rashi-haan,acharya aur vishal ne mere samaksha chandragupta ke vivah ka prastaav rakha hain.
chitra-to tumhara uttar kya hain??
rashi-pata nahin.kintu muzhe chinta is baat ke hain ke vishal vivah karna kyun nahin chahta,awashya he iske peeche koi kaaran hain.chitra wo to hamein batana nahin chahta,kintu tum usse pucho,shaayad wo tumhe koi uttar de de.
chitra-mm..main???nahin main nahin,satya kahun to muzhe vishal se thoda bhay lagta hain,pata nahin kab kaise wo muzhpar gussa ho jaye.ek tum he ho jo usse nahin darti.
rashi-ek karya karte hain leenajavi se baat karte hain,wo zarur vartalaap karege vishal se.
suddenly shaktaar entered...
chitra-pranaam amatya
shaktaar-pranaam,kya mein rashi se kuch shan vartalap kar sakta hun?
chitra-awashya he,aapko puchne ke kya awashakta hain and she left.
rashi was still sad.
shaktaar-mein jaanta hun rashi ke tum is prastaav se prasanna nahin ho kintu muzhe bhe tumhare liye chandragupta se accha var nahin mil sakta hain.
rashi-aap bhe jaante hain ke hum kewal vishal se prem karte hain.
shaktaar-vishal aapke liye sahe var nahin hain,wo striyon ka samaan awashya karta hain kintu usme bahut se buri baatein hain.
rashi-dadu aap kuch nahin jaante.
shaktaar-uske itne saari ganikayen hain,chandragupta tumhe hamesha sukhi rakhega.zara vichaar karo,muzhe tumhara shyam tak uttar chahiye.as he turned
rashi-chandragupta,raajkumari durdhara se prem karta hain.
shaktaar shocked-kya??
rashi-haa,wo ye vivah kewal acharya ke iccha se karna chahta hain,apne iccha se nahin,phir is vivah se kiska bhala hoga,
chanakya entered(oh boy aaj kal acharya kahin se bhe tapak jaate hain😆)-matrabhoomi ka bhala hoga,is desh ka bhala hoga.rashi humein kal nikalna hain,isliye aaj shyam tak aapka uttar chahiye,agar aapka utar haa hain to hum phir yahan aapke sagai aur vivah ke liye rukenge,aur jaankari ke liye bata dun,chandragupta ne parvateshwar ke sahayata se assaka jeet liya hain.
shaktaar happy-kya???ye to bahut prasaanta waali baat hain,rashi left.
chanakya-kintu assaka abhe chandrgupta ka pure tarah se nahin hua hain,jo ke hum chahte hain.parvateshwar ke sahayta ke kaaran chandragupta assaka mein gandhara ka vistaar nahin kar sakta.
shaktaar-to?????/
chanakya-maine vishal se baat ke hain,usne kaha hain wo is baat ko sambhaal lega.
shaktaar-vishnu tum aise vyakti nahin ho jo vishal jaise vyakti par vishwaas kare,kuch to chal raha hain tum dono ke sameep,kya hain satya??
chanakya-satya,satya kabhi kabhi bahut katu hota hain amatya,accha hoga jaise ghatit ho raha hain waisa hone den,he saw a chess board on the table and saw black king.kabhi kabhi kisi ko lagta hain ke wo jo kar raha hain wo sahe hain,kintu...
shaktaar-kintu kya vishnu??
chanakya folded hands-chalta hun...
chitra was walking when krishna's kids were harassing mihika,shanky and chandu.
they were circling around them singing-chacha hamein ghumao,chacha hamein ghumao...
chandu-aakhri baar,aakhri baar keh raha hun ke main tumhara chacha nahin hun.
chitra laughed-ha ha ha ha..😆
mihika-jao yahan se,hamein pareshaan mat karo.
chitra-bacchon...
kids ran to her and hugged her,they kissed her on the cheek.
chitra-kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho??
kids-hamein ghumne jaana hain kintu pitaji aur maa dono ne he hamein mana kar diya.
chitra-accha aisa hain,suddenly rashi was passing by accha to rashi aur chacha tumhe ghuma layenge.
rashi stopped,chandu saw her in embarrassment.
rashi-ye chitra bhe na,ek to hum itne pareshaan hain aur ye.
mihika felt so sad.
shanky saw the pain in her eye.
jogita entered-oh tum dono,mere saath aao.mihika and shanky left with her.
chitra to chandu-kyun ghumaoge na??
chandu-kintu mein panchala mein naya hun.
rashi smiled like normal-kintu hum nahin hain,chalo ghum kar aate hain,she grabbed chandu's hand to his shock and he went with them as she dragged him to this.
chitra laughing and when she turned she saw her mother.
chitra was so surprised,she had tears in her eyes.
chitra-maa...
mother-chitra,chitra meri putri...they had a cute mother daughter moment.(don't wanna detail it as it has no use in story)
both parvateshwars entered living room where krishna,shanky,mihika,jogita,chanakya and vishal were.
vishal-aaye aap dono,hum bahut prasaana hain aapke virta se,jis prakaar aapne assaka aur surasena ko jeeta hain,aap to puraskaar ke hakdaar hain.
one parvateshwar-ye sab to prabhu aur aapki kripa hain.
vishal evil smiled
two soldiers closed the door.
second parvateshwar-ye darwaza kyun band kiya??
vishal-aapko puraskaar dene ke liye,
jogita and krishna came to them with iron chains in their hands.
they tied it around their necks quickly and killed them.while they were doing this shanky and mihika were the one who were shocked.
shanky so shocked that he said-hey prabhu.
mihika-acharya ye.
acharya stopped her by showing her his hand.
vishal-muzhe maarne chale the,murkha,i have no intentions to die from your hands.(i think it sounds cool in eng)
vishal-acharya,assaka mein jo sainik hain wo mere he sainik hain,wahan ka baladhikrita ye acche se jaanta hain wo kiske liye karya karta hain ,aap nischinta rahein,wo chandragupta ko he wahan ka raja ghoshit karenge.
shanky and mihika smiled.
jogita-maharaja,malayketu aur dusre waale ka kya karna hain.
vishal-unke parlok sidharne mein abhe samay hain.jao dono parvateshwaron ke valadhikrita jo ke rajya mein baithe hain unse keh do ke wahan panchala ka raj goshit kar den aur koi bhe vidroh ho to bina kuch soche samzhe vidrohion ko maar dalen.
jogita-jee maharaja.
shankya and mihika were shocked that chanakya was seeing this foul treachery without a sight on remorse in his eyes.he was too included in this treachery.but they thought why?????????????????
vishal to shanky and mihika-in dono ko theekane lagane ka karya mein tum dono ko saupta hun.jao...
mihika and shanky nodded,acharya and vishal left together.
shanky-mihika.
mihika-haan
shanky-ye acharya is narbhakshi ka saath kyun de rahe hain.
mihika was actually pleased with vishal since he saved her from poison and treated her like a gentleman.
mihika-pata nahin shashanka,kintu ye vishal itna bhe bura nahin hain.agar acharya iska saath de rahe hain to kuch to visheshta hoge isme.
durdhara was getting all ready in her room.
amatya entered-raajkumari jee,aap ye itna saz kyun rahe hain.
dhuru was not happy seeing him but she had to show that she is mentally ill.
dhuru-are amatya aaiye,hum panchala jaane ke liye taiyaar ho rahe hain,hamein pata chala hain ke hamara chandragupta panchala mein hain.
amatya shocked.
amatya-raajkumari jee,theek hain main bhe aapke saath chalunge.
dhuru shocked,she thinks-agar amatya hamare saath ayenge to awashya he kise uddesha se jo chandragupta ke hit mein na hoga,kintu agar hamne mana kiya to awashya he amatya satya jaan jayenge.
dhuru-awashya amatya,chandragupta wahan aapke karya ke liye he to gaya hain and she left laughing.
amatya's flashback...
dhanu-kya??
amatya-haan maharaja,mere panchala jaane se he hamein pata chalega panchala ka satya.
dhanu-kintu agar usne tumhe wahan bandi bana liya to???
amatya-maine wahan patra bhijwa diya hain ke main ek dut ban kar aa raha hun,dut ko bandi banana dharma ke virrudh hoga.isliye mere liye aap nischinta rahein,jaise he chandragupta niklega bahar,humare sainik use wahin maar dalenge.
dhanu-dhinak dhinak dhin dha dha dha..
amatya-aur mein chitrangada ko bhe laane ke koi yuukti soch lunga.
dhanu-waah amatya waah...
amatya-kintu muzhe wahan durdhara ko le jaana hoga.
dhanu-kintu kyun amatya???
amatya-wahan raajkumari jayenge to wo chitra ko magadha aane ke liye mana payenge,aakhir dono bahut acche sakhi hain(wish amatya knew the truth😆)
dhanu-theek hain,jaaaooo...kintu wahan se hamein chitra aur chandragupta ke mrityu ke he suchna chahiye.
amatya-jee mahraja and he left to dhuru's room.
amatya-aa raha hun main PANCHALA,ab kaise bachoge vishal.
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n d title is really vry nycly chosen...
1 emo moment fr me was when mihika feels bad when she sees chandu n rashi 2gether..
if possible, plz write abt chandu n mihika scenes.
continue SOON!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: frozen.devil

awsm updt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

n d title is really vry nycly chosen...
1 emo moment fr me was when mihika feels bad when she sees chandu n rashi 2gether..
if possible, plz write abt chandu n mihika scenes.
continue SOON!


thank you frozy for the comment,yes it was mihika who felt bad,there scenes,i will surely try to write their scenes if they don't mess up with main storyline.thanks for the title,the original title i chose was creepy,i thought this one is more apt.

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