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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updts..!! bt evn am nt understanding , whose tht person :p
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chand1234

awsm updts..!! bt evn am nt understanding , whose tht person :p


GUESS GUYS GUESS.😆ITS NOT TOO HARD,BAS DIMAAG GHUMAO
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


thanks frozy and try to guess yaar,i know thoda hard hoga but phir bhe do guess.

@radhi do comment soon.



Yeah ! Next Post ! Padh Padh Ke Choose Karna Hoga !! Poora Hi Itna Achha Hai !!
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER-18-A CERTAIN SOMEONE FROM HIS PAST,THE FATE AGAIN ENTWINED

The person turned,Vishnu got shocked when he saw the person,all memories of his childhood came in front of him.how he used to visit his father and how his children,shriyak ,ajay and suvasini were his best friends.

Amatya-pranaam(in a very sad sad voice)

Chanakya came and touched his feet-taat'.

Amatya touched his face,Vishnu now had neutral reaction-vishnu.

Rashi got confused seeing all this.

Raashi-aap ek dusre ko jaante hain.

Chanakya-to raashi'

Amatya-haan meri pautri hain,shriyak ke putri.rashi ye hain Vishnu,vishnugupta,tumhare pita ke mitra jinke bare mein tumhe hamesha bataya karta tha.

Chanakya-agar rashi shriyak ke putri hain to wo kaun hain jo dipankar(rashi's brother)aur rashi ke pita bankar milte the.

AMATYA SHAKTAR smiled-wo''..wo to ek aam dut tha,vishal ne rashi ko'''and he reminded vishal's warning-mere adesh ke virrudh aap kuch nahin karenge,jitna bolun utna he aap boliyega nahin to'..

Shaktar-vishnu ye sab jaane do but chanakya understood that rashi was a pawn of his game and a spy.

Rashi-to aap he hain vishnugupta acharya,hamne aapke itne kisse sune hain pitaji aur aapke.

Shaktar-rashi tum jao,muzhe Vishnu se kuch awashyak baat karni hain.

Rashi-jee and she left.

Shaktar and Vishnu went to an empty room.

Vishnu-taat aap yahan panchala mein kya kar rahe hain??

shaktaar-ye sab mein tumhe ratri mein bataonga,kyuki deewaron ke bhe kaan hote hain.😆

vishnu got disgusted by such a cheap joke😡

Shaktar hugged Vishnu in vain-muzhe shama karna Vishnu,tumhe koi sahayata na de saka,na he tumhare pita ke mrityu ke baad mein tumhe apne saath rakh saka,kitna kasht zhela hoga tumne.

Vishnu-in kashton ka mein aadi ho chukka hu,ab ye kaksht mere shakti hain,aap such ke kaamna karte hain mein dukh ke aas karta hun,kyunki yahe muzhe gatisheel rakhta hain.

Shaktar-tum bilkul bhe nahin badle,aaj bhe wahe tez,wahe buddhimati.

Vishnu-ajay aur shriyak kahan hain taat??

Shaktar-dono Magadha mein amatya hain.

Vishnu-hmm.aapke putron ko dhananada ne amatya banaya,kintu kyun??

Shaktar-suvasini ke wazah se(the name pierced his hear)kyunki suvasini ka vivah amatya rakashasa ke saath hua hain.vishnu in chanakya was not shocked or hurt because it would be fruitless to feel any pain.

Vishnu-oh to suvasini ke amatya rakshasa se vivahit hone ke wazah se shriyak aur ajay ko amatya ke pad mil gaye.

Shaktar-haan'.tum milna chahoge suvasini se??

Vishnu-nahin,mein paraye striyon se bina kise awashyak karya ke nahin milta.

Shaktar felt the pain in his voice but did not utter a word.

Vishnu-mein yahan jo vartalaap karne aaya tha wo mein kar ke jaonga.

Shaktar-bolo Vishnu.

Vishnu-muzhe Magadha mein vidroh karana hain.

Shaktar not shocked-mein samazh raha hun kintu uske liye tumhe swayam shriyak aur ajay se milna hoga aur iske liye tumhe Magadha jaana hoga.

Vishnu-nahin mein Magadha nahin jaonga,ab yudh ke prasthitiyan utpanna ho chuke hain,muzhe apne kise guptchar ko shriyak aur ajay ke paas bhejna hoga.

Amatya-guptcharon ke tum chinta mat karo,ab tum panchala aye ho to panchala tumhe pure sahayata dega.

Vishnu-muzhe aapke guptcharon..

Amatya-jaanta hun ke tumhare paas apne guptchar hain kintu muzhe pata hain ke ye tum bhe jaante ho ke panchal ke guptchar vyavstha pure jambu dweep mein sabse utkrishta hain.mein vishal se iske bare mein baat karunga.

Vishnu-nahin is bare mein main swayam baat karunga.

Amatya-theek hain,aaj shyam jo sabha hoge,usme hum sab charcha karenge.

Vishnu got up and he was about to leave when shaktar said-vishnu.

Vishnu turned

Shaktar-ek aur baat,vishal se sawdhaan rehna aur tum jaisa dekh rahe ho waisa hain nahin.

Vishnu neutral expression.

Shaktar-mere artha ko samazhna "KOI HAIN JISNE TUMHARE HAMESHA SE SAHAYTA KE HAIN"

Vishnu-kaun??

Shaktar-maine kaha na mere artha ko samazhne ka prayaas karna and he quickly left.

Vishnu-"koi hain jisne mere sahayata ke hain",kintu kaun,taat??shriyak??ajay???ya'.

Mihika was doing vomits,she fell very sick.

Shanky-mihika,mihika'ye mihika ko kya ho gaya.ispar to vish bhe asar nahin karega phir kya ho gaya,mihika,mihika''

A soldier came-suno..ye vastra pehen lo tum dono.he gave them clothes,they were silk clothes and he also gave jewellery for mihika.

Shankya-suno dekho ise'but soldier just left.

Mihika-shashanka,muzhe bahut jalan ho rahe hain,mera pura tan aisa ho raha hain jaise jal raha ho.

Shanky thought she was going to die so he did not thought for a sec and he KISSED HER.mihika go so surprised by his action.

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Mother reminding her past''-nahin swami,muzhe mat bhejiye,chitra,putri'

Chitra-maa''..

Mother-chitra'''.(dhanu dragging her)


Oops, Chitra, Durdhara Ki Behen ??

Chitra-nahin kuch nahin,aap khaiye hum chalte hain.she quickly left.

Chandu-bade vichitra stri hain.


Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi !!(Laughing)

Rashi-daadu..

Amatya-ah'raashi,kahan gaye the tum.


OMG !! Kya Raashi, In Any Case Bengali Thi ? Kyunki, Bengali Mein Dadashri Ko Dadu Bolte Hai !

Chandu-ye..ye mera harem hain,tum yahan kuch shan bita sakte ho.

Chandu-shama kijiyega,mein aise jagah apna samay vyartha nahin karta.

Vishal-are thoda to ananda le lo.

Chandu angry-shama kijiyega,mein ye sweekar nahin kar sakta.

Vishal-are are krodhit kyun ho rahe ho,theek hain.

Chandu did pranaam to him and left in anger,vishal turned,the girls there got up and bowed in front of him,they all were actually his army soldiers.no one in them was a ganika,he actually had a harem but those ganikas were actually his spies.the harem he showed was a place where these girls did sword practice and other fighting practices.

Aah, In The First Line, Do U Mean It's Vishaal ?And The Main Idea Is Brilliant !!

Mihika started coughing.

Shashanka-mihika'.mihika..

Mihika quickly went to the bathroom and did some vomits.

Shashanka-kya hua mihika.

Mihika-pata nahin shashnka,muzhe itne vomits(sry don't know hindi of this word)kyun aa rahe hain.


Oops, Pls Di, Tell Mihika To Take Care, Zaroor Ulti, Bandh Kamre Mein Rehne Ke Kaaran Ho Raha Hai ??And The Next Title Is Worth Saying Wow A Thousand Times !!

CHAPTER-17-A CERTAIN SOMEONE,WHO IS HE??

What Do U Mean, Is The Ans. To This In The Following Lines ??


Rashi-are acharya,hamare dadu se miliye,her grandfather turned and VISHNU GOT SHOCKED SEEING HIM.GUESS GUYS WHO IS HE??????????????????????????????????????????????





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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani



Yeah ! Next Post ! Padh Padh Ke Choose Karna Hoga !! Poora Hi Itna Achha Hai !!


yeah but comment.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Mother reminding her past''-nahin swami,muzhe mat bhejiye,chitra,putri'

Chitra-maa''..

Mother-chitra'''.(dhanu dragging her)


Oops, Chitra, Durdhara Ki Behen ??


no she is not her sister...YOU WILL GET TO KNOW THAT IN NEXT UPDATE.

Chitra-nahin kuch nahin,aap khaiye hum chalte hain.she quickly left.

Chandu-bade vichitra stri hain.


Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi !!(Laughing)

Rashi-daadu..

Amatya-ah'raashi,kahan gaye the tum.


OMG !! Kya Raashi, In Any Case Bengali Thi ? Kyunki, Bengali Mein Dadashri Ko Dadu Bolte Hai !


ACTUALLY I LOVE THAT DAADU WORD AND JUST PRETEND HONEY😆

Chandu-ye..ye mera harem hain,tum yahan kuch shan bita sakte ho.

Chandu-shama kijiyega,mein aise jagah apna samay vyartha nahin karta.

Vishal-are thoda to ananda le lo.

Chandu angry-shama kijiyega,mein ye sweekar nahin kar sakta.

Vishal-are are krodhit kyun ho rahe ho,theek hain.

Chandu did pranaam to him and left in anger,vishal turned,the girls there got up and bowed in front of him,they all were actually his army soldiers.no one in them was a ganika,he actually had a harem but those ganikas were actually his spies.the harem he showed was a place where these girls did sword practice and other fighting practices.

Aah, In The First Line, Do U Mean It's Vishaal ?And The Main Idea Is Brilliant !!


SRY I MEANT VISHAL

Mihika started coughing.

Shashanka-mihika'.mihika..

Mihika quickly went to the bathroom and did some vomits.

Shashanka-kya hua mihika.

Mihika-pata nahin shashnka,muzhe itne vomits(sry don't know hindi of this word)kyun aa rahe hain.


Oops, Pls Di, Tell Mihika To Take Care, Zaroor Ulti, Bandh Kamre Mein Rehne Ke Kaaran Ho Raha Hai ??And The Next Title Is Worth Saying Wow A Thousand Times !!


A VERY BIG SURPRISE IS BEHIND THE VOMIT AND DON'T WORRY SHE IS NOT PREGO BY SHANKY.😆

CHAPTER-17-A CERTAIN SOMEONE,WHO IS HE??

What Do U Mean, Is The Ans. To This In The Following Lines ??


Rashi-are acharya,hamare dadu se miliye,her grandfather turned and VISHNU GOT SHOCKED SEEING HIM.GUESS GUYS WHO IS HE??????????????????????????????????????????????





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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


yeah but comment.😆



De Diya, Par Aapne Bhi Reply Nahin Kiya ??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani



De Diya, Par Aapne Bhi Reply Nahin Kiya ??


REPLY TO DIYA HAIN MAINE 😕
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chanakya-agar rashi shriyak ke putri hain to wo kaun hain jo dipankar(rashi's brother)aur rashi ke pita bankar milte the.

AMATYA SHAKTAR smiled-wo''..wo to ek aam dut tha,vishal ne rashi ko'''and he reminded vishal's warning-mere adesh ke virrudh aap kuch nahin karenge,jitna bolun utna he aap boliyega nahin to'..


Oh ! Toh Voh Amatya Shaktar The ? Vaise, Phir Toh Astonish Hona, Normal Hai !!😲

Shaktar-vishnu ye sab jaane do but chanakya understood that rashi was a pawn of his game and a spy.


Oops Der Ho Gayi !!

Vishnu-in kashton ka mein aadi ho chukka hu,ab ye kaksht mere shakti hain,aap such ke kaamna karte hain mein dukh ke aas karta hun,kyunki yahe muzhe gatisheel rakhta hain.

Shaktar-tum bilkul bhe nahin badle,aaj bhe wahe tez,wahe buddhimati.


Wow ! Chanakya Vachan !! Yippee !!👍🏼

Shaktar-dono Magadha mein amatya hain.

Vishnu-hmm.aapke putron ko dhananada ne amatya banaya,kintu kyun??

Shaktar-suvasini ke wazah se(the name pierced his hear)kyunki suvasini ka vivah amatya rakashasa ke saath hua hain.vishnu in chanakya was not shocked or hurt because it would be fruitless to feel any pain.

Oh ! Soo Sad !😔

Shaktar-mere artha ko samazhna "KOI HAIN JISNE TUMHARE HAMESHA SE SAHAYTA KE HAIN"

Vishnu-kaun??

Shaktar-maine kaha na mere artha ko samazhne ka prayaas karna and he quickly left.

Vishnu-"koi hain jisne mere sahayata ke hain",kintu kaun,taat??shriyak??ajay???ya'.


I Know It's Worthless Trying To Guess But Is It (In Any Case) Vishaal, Or Anyone In His Gang, Or Amatya Shaktar Himself ?

Mihika-shashanka,muzhe bahut jalan ho rahe hain,mera pura tan aisa ho raha hain jaise jal raha ho.

Shanky thought she was going to die so he did not thought for a sec and he KISSED HER.mihika go so surprised by his action.


Bechari, Ek Toh Itni Peedha Ho Rahi Hai, Aur Upar Se Yeh !!😵



Edited by Radhikerani - 13 years ago

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