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chapter-3-A REVENGEFUL HEART

girl-adhbhut,avismarniya...

chandu touched his face and said-jee...the girl was so so shocked,she was not able to utter a word.she was staring at cgm like she was hell confused.

chanakya-shama kijiye devi kintu aap hai kaun??

girl-huh??..ah huh...ah wo hum...ah...acharya chanakya ko hamara pranaam.acharya aap hamein bhool gaye,hum divyankar ke chote behen.

chanakya-divyanakar??

girl-haan acharya hamare bade bhai,jinhe aap hamesha daate the aur phir hamare pitaji ko bulate the,hum bhe to unhe ke saath aapse milne aate the.AH HUM...RAASHI,NEPAL KE RAJA KE PUTRI.

chanakya-are raashi aap,pranaam,shama kijiye,aap bahut chote the jab maine aapko dekha tha.

raashi-acharya,ye...

chanakya-yahe hain mera shishya aur gandhara ka raaja,chandragupta mauyra..

she literally screamed-kya?????

chanakya sighed 😡-ah shama kijiye acharya.

cgm-accha aap chaliye,agar aap acharya ke atithi hai to hamari liye to pujniya hue.

raashi-hein...?she thinks-ye vishal chandragupta...ah yes sab kya hain.pehle muzhe khud bhejta hain ke jao dut bankar pata lagao aur ye...kahe kuch judwaa jaisa to chakkar nahin hain,agar aisa hua to he he he he...😆

cgm-ah,aap gandhara mein??

raashi-wo hum acharya se milna chahte the,gurukul dekhne aur gandhara ghumne aaye the.aap jaante nahin hain,humein to acharya apne godi mein khilate the.

cgm-aapke yahan aane ka prayojan??

raashi-are pehle hamein apne mehel to le chaliye.

chanakya smiled-aap bina sainikon ke??

raashi-wo hamne he kaha tha ke hamein sainikon ke aawashakta nahin hoge.

chanakya-aur aapke pita ne jaane diya??😕

raashi-acharya ab aapse kaun chupa sakta

cgm shy smiled

they all went to their palace.

chitra was sitting in her room alone when she heard a pigeon came there.chitra smiled 😈-she tied a letter in his neck and the pigeon fled away.

chitra reminding-ah...nahin nahin,maa ko mat le jaiye...pitaji dekhiye na..maa...

dhananada-chal..he was dragging her mom.

her mom-swami,swami..(to chitra's father)aisa mat kariye,nahin swami...dhandu dragged her mother...and chitra was standing there and crying like hell...a boy was also there seeing it from behind the curtain,he was seeing the sad eyes of chitra and dhanu's cruelty.suddenly dhuru called her-chitra...

chitra-ah haan..durdhara.

dhuru entered-ye lo hum tumhare liye badaam ka halwa laaye hain.

chitra remembering-nahin nahin putri kha lo halwa.

chitra-nahin maa,hamein nahin pasand.

her mom-beta agar nahin kahoge to aapke maa aapko chod kar chale jayege...

dhuru-chitra

chitra-ah haan...

dhuru-are kahan swapn dekh rahe ho,lo khao.

chitra-dhanyawaad...and she ate with her heart full of revenge.

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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Offoh Kitni Der Ho Gayi !! Teen Teen Chaps Ho Gaye !! Waise Welcome Back Monidi And All !! Pata Kahaan Chali Gayi Thi !! Kitna Miss Kiya Yahaan Aana Toh Bandh Hi Ho Gaya Tha !! Aab Se Roz Aayenge !!

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Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Offoh Kitni Der Ho Gayi !! Teen Teen Chaps Ho Gaye !! Waise Welcome Back Monidi And All !! Pata Kahaan Chali Gayi Thi !! Kitna Miss Kiya Yahaan Aana Toh Bandh Hi Ho Gaya Tha !! Aab Se Roz Aayenge !!

thanks yaar and sry exams the.i hope you are liking the story.

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Originally posted by: lucykaede

thanks yaar and sry exams the.i hope you are liking the story.

It's Okay ! Aur Like Matlab ? Hum Toh love Kar Rahe Hai !!

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bhoomi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nyc updt!!

i was feeling as if m watching d live telecast! n m vry desperate 2 noe how chitra will seek revenge... continue soon moni!

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chapter-4-APPETITE

vishal,krishna and jogita were in a living room type room when a bird came on the window.

vishal-jogita..

jogita-ah jee...

she kissed the pigeon as he was his fav and she took the msg.

she gave the msg to vishal.

msg:::

vishwaas nahin karoge ke hamein kya pata chala hain.durdhara chandragupta maurya se prem karte hain aur usne usse vachan diya hain ke wo ek din lautke zarur ayega.tumhare hasne ke liye ek chote se bhet.

vishal was laughing his stomach off at this.

krishna to jogita-are baap re,ye jab hasta hain kise ke shaamat aate hain.

jogita scared because vishal's laughter means some evil plan and not really laughter.

krishna-kya hua mere sher.

vishal-ha ha ha...khud..ha ha ha..he padh lo.😆

krishna and jogita read the msg and they too giggled.

krishna-ye kya,dhananda ke putre apne he shatru se.😆

jogita-prem andha hota ye to suna tha par murkh bhe hota hain ye pehle baar dekha.😆

vishal now evil😈-ab dhananda ke samaan ke to...he he he...😆vishal pulled jogita towards him and said something in her ears.

jogita-jee maharaj ho jayega and she left.while she was going krishna was staring at her.

vishal-sochna bhe mat.

krishna-parantu kyun??😕

vishal-kyunki krishna jee aapke 50 maharaniyan,7 bete aur 2 betiyaan hain.

krishna-to kya hua hamein ek aur mahrani chahiye.

vishal-mahrani ya ganika??😃

vishal-ab dekho chahe tum use jo bhe maano hai to wo ganika he,tumhari GANIKA.

vishal glared at his so badly that he got actually scared.😡

in gandhara's palace...

rashi,cgm,mihika,bhadrabhatt and shanky were sitting around a table.

rashi looked at the food,everyone prayed before eating food and everyone started eating but not rashi.

mihika-are khaiye na.

rashi was looking at the food like she was very scared.the reason was that the food contained too much fat.

rashi remembering her childhood---

1 boy and three girls were standing in a row and other boy was checking them with a stick in his hand.

boy-agar tum chaaron ne kuch bhe aisa padaarth ka sevan kiya jisse tum teenon ke sehat par asar pade to yaad rakhna tumhara hast hoga aur mera danda.

one girl raised her hand.

boy-bolo...

girl-hum tumse darte kyun hain??

and she came out of her thoughts.

cgm-aap soch kya rahe hain khaiye.

chanakya-khaiye na aap.

rashi murmured-ye vishal ko kya ho gaya hain,muzhe,muzhe ye sab khane ko keh raha hain,bachpan se to hum sabko sirf ghaas phus khilata aaya hain,yahan tak ke kaumudi mahotsava ke divas par bhe hamein zyada nahin khane deta aur ab yahan,ye vishal ho he nahin sakta.

cgm-are kya hua??

rashi-ah...haan hum khaate hain.and rashi started eating,she was eating all good food after really long time so she started eating very fast so fast that everyone got shocked...she almost ate food of 2 people.chanakya was very surprised by her appetite.(poor acharya doesn't know 😆)

suddenly a spy came...

spy-acharya...

acharya-haan chalo..

rashi quickly understood that he was a spy but she couldn't do anything suspicious.

rashi-ufff...hamne to bahut kha liya,hum to chal rahe hain aaram karne and she left.

chanakya-tum mere kaksha mein aao,chandragupta tum bhe.

chandu-jee acharya...

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bhoomi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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m d 1st 1 2 comment!

abt d updt, nyc updt moni! krishna ki 50 maharaniyan, 7 bete aur 2 betiyan?? kya collection hai!! lolz..

continue soon!

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Ria

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey Bhagvan.!!! 😲 😲 😲

vishal-kyunki krishna jee aapke 50 maharaniyan,7 bete aur 2 betiyaan hain.

krishna-to kya hua hamein ek aur mahrani chahiye.

vishal-mahrani ya ganika??😃

😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣

too good updt 😃

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proteeti

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Ae Daiya !!!! Yeh Kya ? Pachaas Maharani Kuchh Kam Hai Kya ?a Apne Aap Ko Voh Sach-Much Ke Krishan Kanhaiya Sochta Hai ?? Aur Raashi Toh !! As Usual, Haste Haste Pet Dard Ho Gaya !!! Aur Aab Ye Naya/Nayi Guptchar Kaun Hai Kaun ??

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CHAPTER-5-PLANNINGS

durdhara was sitting in her room alone when chitra entered.

dhuru-are chitra aao.

chitra-kya soch rahe ho durdhara.

dhuru-hum to chandragupta ke baare mein soch rahe hain.

chitra-hmm...bahut yaad aa rahe hain😉

dhuru-bahut.

chitra-to ek kaam karo durdhara,bhaag jao mahel se.😈

dhuru-matlab

chitra-matlab ke bhaag jao aur chandragupta ke paas hamesha hamesha ke liye chale jao.

dhuru-kintu...

chitra-kintu kya,ab tum usse prem karte ho na,to chale jaao gandhara aur ban jao uske jeevan sangini.

dhuru-parantu pitaji ka samman.

chitra-tum kya chahte ho apne pitaji ka samman ya chandragupta ke jaan??tum jaante ho ke tum uske bina nahin reh sakte to jao,jao ye sabko keh do ke haan mein,mein rajjkumari durdhara chandragupta maurya se prem karte hun.

dhuru-parantu chitra ye sambhav kaise hoga??

chitra-ye sab tum muzhpar chod do.

dhanu and chitra's father were in dhanu's room.

chitra's father-maharaj parantu wo mere putri hain.mein aise uska sauda kaise kar sakta hun.

dhanu-jaise tumne apne patni ka kiya tha.tigra dha...he he ...hamein chitra bahut pasand hain,aisa hamne mirgnayani ke baad kise ke liye nahin socha.hamein chitra chahiye,hum use magadha ke maharani bana kar rakhenge,aur durdhara bhe to kitna pasand karte hain chitra ko.

chitra's father-aur hamein kya milega??

dhanu-jo tum chaho...they both evil smiled...and surprisingly chitra was standing outside.she heard it and became more than shocked...😲she got heart broken..💔 .a little love that she had for her father vanished in a second.😭her heart became full of anger 😡 and then she evil smiled...😈.(a plan was going in her mind and she got the idea how to fulfill it)

in gandhara's palace...

rashi in her room-kya karein,kaise pata lagaein ke wo guptchar kya sandesh laya hain,vishal ne kitna bharosa kiya hain humpar,hum aise use niraash nahin kar sakte,and a pigeon came to her window...

she got scared as she didn't got any secret yet.

she wrote something quickly and tied in pigeon's head and the pigeon fled away.

chanakya and cgm with spy...

spy-acharya...maharaj vishal ne hamara anurodh asweekar kar diya.unhone kaha hain ke wo koi vachan nahin dete ke wo he aapse milenge.

chanakya-hmm...tum jaa sakte ho.

spy-jee acharya.

cgm-acharya ab...

chanakya-hum vishal se milne jayenge chandragupta.par usse pehle maine apne guptchar uske saare satya jaane ke liye bhej diye hain.

cgm-kaun acharya??

chanakya sighed.😃

rashi thinking-acharya ke jassosi karna bahut kathin hain aur mere liye to aur bhe,acharya mere pita samaan hain,mein kya karun,mein koi kutil buddhi to hun nahin,acharya ko ek shan nahin lagega ye jaane mein ke mein yahan ek guptchar bankar aaye hun,kya karun mein??

amatya went to malayketu and talked with him and malayketu asked him for some time because he had to consult first with vishal whether to help amatya or not.

that pigeon came to vishal's window.vishal went their and read the msg and he got shocked seeing what was written inside it,he thought that rashi was doing a joke but he knew that rashi is well serious about her job so he believed it and then chuckled.

vishal-waah,ab is khel ka aur bhe ananda ayega,chandragupta aur mera pra😈tiroop.hey prabhu,tere khel tu he jaane.😊

sukhdeva and bhaddu were planning something...

sukhdeva-mrityu de do us chandragupta ko.

bhaddu-kintu kaise,ab wo ek mahraj hain,mein kewal ek samanta.

sukdeva-uske mahel mein ghus kar use maaro,jaise mahapadma ne kalasoka ko maara tha.

bhaddu-kintu mein mahel mein jaonga kaise aur wo chanakya.

sukhdeva-prateeksha karo bhadrashaal ,prateeksha karo,sahe samay aane do aur...