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Posted: 13 years ago

you still did not answer my ques.
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chapter-26-TWO SIDES,ONE GOAL AND A CRUEL ALLIANCE.
rashi,chandu and kids were outside in panchala.chandu was really impressed seeing the discipline of the state.he was feeling awkward but rashi was in her full form,smiling,laughing,even grabbing chandu's hands.chandu felt a little comfortable after wandering for half hours.
chandu-chalo bacchon,ab kuch kha lete hain.
kids shocked,they saw chandu like this🤢 😕
one kid-hum aur bahar ka khana??
chandu-haan chalo.
another kid in his ear-ye chacha ko kya ho gaya hain,kuch dino se bade he vichitra ho gaye hain.
another kid-muzhe to lagta hain chacha ke maansik stithi theek nahin hain haan,keh raha hun main.
chandu-kya hua bacchon??
rashi-ah..chodo na chandragupta,chalo na,wahan ped ke neeche aur nadi kinare baithte hain,aao,she grabbed his hand again,chandu felt a little heat in his body.he he...😆kids were playing while chandu and rashi were sitting on bank of river under the tree.
chandu was staring at her in amazement.
rashi-are aise kyun dekh rahe ho tum hamein??
chandu-is haste hue chehre ke peeche chupe dukh ko dekhne ka prayatna kar raha hun.
rashi became serious.
rashi-tum bhe to dukhi ho??ho na??
chandu-pata nahin kintu mein jo bhe karta hun,apne rashtra ke liye karta hun.
rashi-hmm..aur hum jo bhe karte hain wo vishal ke liye karte hain.
chandu-aap prem karti hain vishal se??
rashi-kya antar padta hain,wo to nahin karta,tabhe to usne hamse kaha ke hum tumse vivah kar le.
chandu-aap ye vivah nahin karna chahte??
rashi-tum karna chahte ho??are karoge kaise nahin,hum itne sundar jo hain...(omg she again in her insane mode)
chandu shocked..😳-jee???
rashi-kyun hum sundar nahin hain??😡
chandu-nahin aise baat nahin hain,aap to...
rashi-hum to kya,bolo
chandu-aap to,aap to...
rashi-are agar hum durdhara hote to bhe tum hamse itna he sharmate,are kaho bhe mitra,she punched him on his heavy shoulder.
chandu-aap bahut sundar hain,aapke sundarta ke to koi parakaashta he nahin hain.
rashi-aha man prasanna ho gaya,suno vivah ke baad kam se kam ek baar hamein apne prashansa sunni hain.
chandu shocked.😲-aap is vivah ke liye taiyaar hain??
rashi-aur koi marg nahin hain,aur waise bhe ek haatte katte,chust durust,sundar vyakti ho tum,hamein aur kya chahiye,ho na???
chandu-haan??
rashi-kya tum sundar nahin ho??
chandu-nahin,ah..mera matlab...ah...
rashi-of ho,tum sharmaate bahut ho,pata nahin suhagraat ke din kya karoge.😳
chandu too shocked-jjj...jee...he thinks-yahan sagain to hue nahin aur suhaagraat...hey prabhu,maine jaise socha tha ye stri to bilkul uski ulti,durdhara ke to ye maa hain,jitne wo zindadil hain usse 10 guna rashi hain,haan kintu sundar awashya hain..
rashi-kya soch rahe ho??
chandu-jee main soch raha hun ke hamein abhe chalna chahiye.
rashi-haan chalo,hamein acharya ko uttar bhe dena hain,aur haan are waah,tumne assaka jeet liya,and she kissed him and means she actually kissed him not on cheek but...understand guys...
chandu too shocked...kids saw that and blushed...
one kid-lajja nahin aati.
another kid-ye rashi didi ko kya hua hain,chacha ke saath ye kya...
another kid-chup kar murkha.
chandu was wide eyed,he could not understand how to react,even durdhara never kissed him,his first kiss was with someone whom he respected but not loved,but still there was a happiness in his heart,he thought it was just an attraction to her beauty.
rashi-chalo bacchon...
shashanka and mihika in jungle,they buried the bodies.
mihika-chalo ye karya to ho gaya,mahel chalte hain.
shashanka grabbed her hand,mihika-kya hua??
shashanka-mihika mein wo,bahut dino se tumse kuch baat karna cha raha tha.
mihika thought he will again confess and she was ready to say no.
mihika-bolo...
shashanka-mihika main wo tumse bahut prem karta hun,aur ab to tum swatantra ho to...
mihika-shashanka mein..
shanky-mihika,kya tum muzhse vivah karoge???????
MIHIKA SHOCKED...😲
mihika-vvv...vvv...
shanky-mihika..
mihika-vivah???????
shanky-haan vivah,kya karoge??he came to her and grabbed her waist,tum chaho to bhe chandragupta tumse prem nahin karega,wo tumhare baare mein aisa nahin sochta.
mihika was so shocked by this proposal,she never thought a guy would propose in her life.
shanky-agar tumhe samay chahiye to tum samay le sakti ho mein mana nahin karunga.
mihika-shashanka mein,muzhe awashya he itne bade nirnay ke liye samay chahiye aur upar se acharya ke swikriti.
shanky-pehle tum haan kar do to acharya ke swikriti bhe mil jayege.
mihika-abhe chalo yahan se,koi hamein yahan dekh na le.
they both left,he grabbed her hand and she could not do anything about it.(thats the similarity between dhuru and shanky,ekdum fevicol ka jod hain)
malyaketu-kya???
second parvateshwar-haan dono parvateshwar aye to kintu kahan gaye yahan se pata he nahin chala aur nepal raj bhe nepal waapas chale gaye(nepal is not in under vishal so he left him)aur vishal ne apna rajya sthapit karwa diya hain dono parvaton par.
malayketu-paurav raj...hum yahan fas chuke hain.agar hum ab kuch bhe karte hain to hamare mrityu karwa dega ye vishal.
parvateshwar-to kya karein hum??hum yahan mrityu ke prateeksha karein.
malyaketu-nahin,hum wahe karte hain jo hamein karna hain,awashya he parvateshwaron ne vishal ko aprasanna kiya hoga warna vishal aise rajaon mein se nahin hain,kitna sammaan karta hain wo sabka aur behad murkha hain warna hamein harane ke baad hamare rajyon par adhikaar na kar leta.humein bas sahe samay aane dena hain aur phir hum vishal aur chandragupta dono ko mrityu ke ghaat utaar denge aur saath mein us acharya chanakya ko bhe aur sampoorna purva bharat hamara hoga.
they both evil laughed...
chanakya-amatya ka yahan aana uchit nahin hain.
vishal-nahin acharya,aane dijiye amatya ko,agar hum magadha patra bhejenge to awashya he maharaja dhana ko amatya chandragupta ke vivah ke baare mein bata denge aur wo ho sakta hain ye vivah rokne ke liye acharya shriyak aur acharya ajay ko bandi bana len kintu muzhe aapko ye baat batani pad rahe hain,ye kaise acharya??
chanakya-mein bhale bhaati jaanta hun is baat ko kintu yahan amatya ke saath durdhara bhe aa rahe hain.
vishal-kya???
chanakya-aur wo awashya he yahan kohraam macha denge,ye uttardaitvya tumhara hain ke tum is vivah mein badha na banne do.
vishal chuckled-acharya,aapko muzhpar sandeh hain.
chanakya-sandeh muzhe tumpar nahin hain vishal kintu jo kuch tum karna chahte ho agar uske baare mein chandragupta ko pata chalta hian to wo toot jayega.
vishal-aap to use batayenge nahin aur aur kaun jaanta hain hamari yojna ke baare mein??
chanakya-nahin koi nahin.
chankya thinks-tumhare yojna safal na hone dunga mein,tum apne is kutil chaal mein safal na ho paoge,is baar is shatranja mein tumhe parajit hona he hoga.
vishal thinks-acharya aap muzhe parajit na kar paayenge aur aap parajit karenge bhe kyun,mein to aapke hit mein he karya kar raha hun.


Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsm updt!!!!

chandu - rashi scenes n also shanky-mihika scenes were jus awsm!!!

specially d latter one!! n i still cudnt make out wat chanakya n vishal r upto.

updt soon!! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
@frozy thanks for the comment,yeah those scenes were romantic specially of chandrashi.he he.😆
if you figure out what vishal and chanakya are upto then there is no need for me to right this story,this alliance is what is the key of the suspense.everything is related with this alliance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
more comments please.😃
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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chapter-27-PAWN WHO WILL BETHE OPPONENTS WIFE???
bhadrashaal was in his prison for the first time was in much more emotional pain than physical one.
bhaddu reminding all his moments of rashi,though he was a prisoner everytime whenever he thought about her he felt a strange feeling in his heart,this prison looked him the best place in the world,roses bloomed all the time around him.he was in LOVE with her and he realized that but he too wanted to get out of prison.
bhaddu thinking-yahan se nikalna he hoga kintu itni sudridha suraksha maine aaj tak nahin dekhi aur itna shishatachaar,muzhe yahan itna utkrishta bhojan mil raha hain jitna kabhe magadha mein nahin mila.ye kaisa raja hain yahan ka,muzhe yatnaein bhe deta hain aur mera dhyan bhe rakhta hain...and again he started thinking about rashi...her beautiful face came in front of him,she was standing in front of him and he was all staring at her very lovingly.
suddenly a soldier entered to give him food
bhaddu-muzhe yahan se nikalna he hain,main aur yahan nahin reh sakta.
bhaddu did some trick and made that soldier faint.(a trick that was used by soldiers in ancient time by pressing a certain point near ears)
he quickly wore his dress as panchala's sainik before anyone could realize it,in front of him there was another cell but that person was sleeping so he got a good oppurtunity.he wore his clothes and made him wear his clothes and then he left by hiding his face.
rashi and chandu came to the palace with kids,chitra was with her mom wandering in the palace,she saw rashi and said-hum abhe aate hain.
chitra-aur kaise rahe yatra.
chandu-acche the,panchala sachmuch ek samridha rajya hain,sab kuch kitna vyavastitha hain yahan.
chitra-hmm..vishal ke yahe to visheshta hain.
chandu-shama kijiyega kintu aap hain kaun??aapke vastra to kise raajkumari jaise lagte hain(she did not liked girly clothes and jewelleries but vishal made her to wear these,he loved her seeing all girly,poor chitra)
chitra-hum...hum...she thinks-pata nahin bataye ke na bataye,vishal ko kahe bura na lag jaye,ho sakta hain usne hamare bare mein chandragupta ko kuch sochkar na bataya ho.
suddenly a person came from behind.
chandu-acharya pranaam.
rashi-pranaam acharya
chitra did not greeted him,(chitra is a little proudy but sweet)
chanakya saw chitra...he did not knew how chitra looked like.
chanakya-aap kaun hain devi??
chitra-hum,hum bas jaa rahe the and she left.
chanakya-chandragupta kahan chale gaye the tum,tumhe dhundh rahe hain mihika.
chandu-mihika??ah..mein mil kar aata hun.
chanakya-to tumne kya nirnay liya??
rashi-acharya is vivah ke liye hamare swikriti hain.
chanakya-aap spasht roop se taiyaar hain.
rashi-jee acharya,hum taiyaar hain is vivah ke liye.
chanakya-theek hain to mein amatya se sagai ke saari vyavastha karne ko kehta hun,kintu sagai ke baad gandhara aur panchala nikal jayenge magadha se yudh ke liye aur aapko ek vishesh karya karna hoga.
rashi-hamein??
chanakya-abhe aap kewal sagai par dhyan dijiye and he left.
rashi-karya???
chitra went to vishal's room as she wanted to talk to him,she was running when she bumped into krishna.
chitra-are shama karna.
krishna was looking very serious.
chitra-krishna,kya hua??
krishna-kuch nahin,ah mein aur leena kal nikalenge parvat ke liye.
chitra-are itne jaldi??
krishna-haan kuch karya hain,suddenly rashi came.
rashi-are kam se kam hamari sagai tak to ruk jao.
krishna-oh to tumne chandragupta se vivah ke liye..
rashi-haan hamne kar diya.
chitra-krishna,kya baat hain??itne gambhir,vishal ke kaksha se aa rahe ho kya.
krishna-ah chitra mein tumse baad mein milta hun,abhe muzhe jaane do and he left,he had a sword in his hand.
chitra thinks-ye krishna ko kya ho gaya achanak?????
jogita and acharya came from the room krishna came.
chitra-jogita...
jogita-ah haan??
chitra-kya hua ye krishna itna gambheer.
jogita-ah mein tumse baad mein milti hun.
chitra and rashi confused.
chitra-ye sabko kya ho gaya hain???aisa lagta hain har koi hamse kuch na kuch chupa raha hain.
rashi-kya pata kya baat hain??
chitra-hum vishal se milkar aate hain,pata nahin kya baat hain.
chandu went to see mihika.mihika was sitting all upset.
chandu-mihika
mihika-aao chandragupta.
chandu-acharya ne kaha tum muzhe dhundh rahe the,koi aawashyak baat hain kya??
mihika-haan kintu tumhare liye awashyak hain ya nahin pata nahin.baitho.
chandu sat down.
mihika-chandragupta shashanka ne aaj and she told the whole story.
chandu-kya??Shashanka tumse prem karta hain,kamaal hain usne kabhe muzhe bataya he nahin,na he uske chehre se kabhe aisa laga.hairaan hun mein.
mihika had tears in her eyes.
mihika-main bhe hairaan hun,bahut hairaan hun.
chandu-tum ro kyun rahe ho??
mihika-itne bhole banne ka swang mat karo.
chandu realized what she meant.
chandu-mein tumhe dukhi nahin karna chahta hun.
mihika-tumhari yahe to visheshta hain tum kise ko dukhi nahin karna chahte aur dusron ke dukh se tum dukhi hote ho,jab tum magadha gaye the to tum raajkumari jee se mile the na??bolo..
chandu-mihika mein...
mihika angry-jhooth kyun bola??😡
chandu-mihika mein...
mihika-kya dikhana chahte the tum haan,ke mein bahut bade bechare hun,satya sehan nahin kar sakte.
chandu-mihika tum muzhe galat samzh rahe ho,dekho tum mere mitra awashya ho kintu maine tumhare baare mein aisa kabhe nahin socha.
mihika-to maine tumse kabhe spashat roop se pucha bhe to nahin,darti the,darti the ise baat se,kintu us samay mere paas ek wazah bhe the,mein ek vishkanya the,kintu ab mein swatantra hun aur ye baat muzhe aur peeda dete hain.
chandu was too sad for her😭
chandu-mihika shama kar do muzhe.
mihika-ek raja ko apne daas se koi shama maangne ke aawashakta nahin hain,maharaja.
chandu-mihika tum itna krodh kyun kar rahe ho???
rashi was hearing all this from outside...
rashi-are waah,ek anaar aur do beemar(referring to dhuru and mihika) aur hamein to anaar muft mein he mil gaya.😆
rashi made her entrance-are waah,kya baat hain.
mihika and chandu shocked.
rashi put hands on his shoulder-kya baat hain mere mitra,do do striyaan tumpar marti hain.
mihika-aap ye kya keh...
rashi-are mein to keh rahe hun ke mihika se bhe vivah kar lo...
mihika shocked.😲
chandu-kya???😕
rashi-are aur nahin to kya...dekho hum to tumhe mil he rahe hain,durdhara bhe mil jayege aur ye stri bhe dekhne mein theek thaak he hain,teen tarah ke raaniyan mil jaayenge.
mihika was too confused,was she really the dari sehmi raashi she saw in gandhara??
rashi-hamein to gaana gaane ka man kar raha hain,mere hone waale pati ke peeche striyan paagal...😆
mihika laughed so loudly...seeing her chandu too burst out...
rashi thinks-chalo,ye samasya to hamne sulzhe de,waah rashi tuzhe maana padega.
chandu-ha ha ha ha...
mihika-😆
rashi-are hum koi hasi thitole karne waale lagte hain tumhe.
mihika-aap jaise praani..mera matlab stri main aaj tak nahin dekhe.
chandu-ek baat to hain rashi,vivah ke baad mein hasna seekh jaonga.
rashi-to tum hamari mitrata sweekar karte ho??
chandu nodded...
rashi-ab tum hamare mitra hue to hamare dal ke bhe hue.
mihika-dal???
rashi-haan dal..hum,vishal,krishna,jogita,chitra aur...
chandu-aur??aur chitra??raajkumari chitra,surasena ke??
rashi-haan wahe wahe...accha hum chalte hain,hamein dadu ke saath jaana hain tumhare liye anghoothi khareedne,she gave him a quick kiss on his lips and left.at that time shanky too entered,they both got shocked by rashi's boldness.
mihika and chandu saw him with wide eyed.
chandu-kya???? and he left.mihika and shanky burst out laughing.
shanky-bechara chandu..
mihika-kya baatein ho rahe the aur kya ho gaya.😆
shanky-kaun se baatein??
mihika left laughing,shanky confused😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt..!

luv rashii 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt moni!!!
it all luks so realistic!! rashi is sooo bold n usne atmosphere itna accha kar diya...
n also i luv ur titles yaar!!
w8ing fr d updt!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will update late...to be continued though.
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hey!!!!! Finally, I m back..exams over...

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