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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's Jogita, Right ? Well Lovely Update !! Bechari Ne Socha Bhi Nahin Tha Ke Thappar Khana Hoga Use !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

It's Jogita, Right ? Well Lovely Update !! Bechari Ne Socha Bhi Nahin Tha Ke Thappar Khana Hoga Use !!


yes it is jogita and us thappar ne use ek naye life de,ek respectable life though abhe bhe panchala ke soldiers samazhte hain ke wo vishal ke ganika hain kyunki sir jee ne afwahon ke zhadi laga rakhe hain,yahan tak ke chanakya bhe sach nahin theek se jaante aur unhone bechare mihika aur poor shanky ko phaswa diya.😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
d flashback was really gud..

like chandu's grup dis grup of rashi, chitra, jogita, krishna n vishal is also vry gud..

overall awsm updt!!!..

Edited by frozen.devil - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: frozen.devil

d flashback was really gud..


like chandu's grup dis grup of rashi, chitra, jogita, krishna n vishal is also vry gud..

overall awsm updt!!!..


thank you so so much,i know par chandu ka jo gang hain uska leader chanakya sirf unko morally discipline mein rakhta hain par is group ka leader to unke khane par bhe control rakhta hain,kya hoga jab mil bathenge ye dono group aur kya hoga jab chanakya milenge apne parchai sai(vishal)aur kya hoga jab chandu vishal ka chehra dekhega.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
mast flashback..!! likd it a lott...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
AN AWESOME SIGGIE DONE BY CHAND1234,DO APPRECIATE HER AWESOME WORK.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
guys which couple you would think is the best
??
chitra and vishal
rashi and vishal
jogita and vishal
krishana and jogita
krishna and chitra
mihika and vishal
rashi and chandu
rashi and krishna

please do answer,this ques is for fun and i wanna know whom you think is the best one.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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out of d choices u hav given..
i lyk vishal n jogita, but acc 2 me d best couple is mihika n chandu!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: frozen.devil

out of d choices u hav given..

i lyk vishal n jogita, but acc 2 me d best couple is mihika n chandu!


i know thats why i did not add mihika and chandu because that couple is everyone's fav.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER-11-AN IMPREGNABLE ESPIONAGE THAT HE POSSESS

Jogita-kya??

Chitra-haan,dhananda hamse kuch aur he chahta hain.

Jogita-aur tumne wahan se nikalne ke liye durdhara ka upyog kiya??

Chitra-to hum aur kya karte??

Jogita-theek hain kintu ab durdhara ka kya,agar use kuch ho gaya to??

Chitra-to hamein use kya??

Jogita-vishal bahut krodhit hoga,agar kalinga virodhi he use utha ke le gaye to??bechare,hamein use bachana hoga.

Chitra-aur tum chahte ho ke hum mahel waapas chale jayen.

Jogita-agar tum mahel waapas chale gaye to vishal pure Magadha ko aag laga dega,tum jao,maine durdhara ko dekha to hain he ,mein use dhundh kar maharaj dhananda ko saup dunge.

Chitra-aur ab hum kaise jayen seema paar,wo sainik.

Jogita smiled and gave her a ring.

Chitra-ye kya hain?

Jogita-vishal ne muzhe sabhe 16 mahajanpadon ke duton ke mudrayen banwa kar de hain,ye rahe Magadha ke duton ke mudra,agar tum ye seema par dikhaoge to koi tumhe nahin rokega togkega.

Chitra hugged jogita-dhanyawaad.

Jogita-ab mitron ke beech mein dhanyawaad.

Chitra-hmmm'chitra was about to cry when jogita said-bas bas phir se nahin'and jogita went to find durdhara and chitra took the horse and went for panchala.

Okay guys here is a brief update because I don't wanna drag the story unnecessary.

Jogita found durdhara and it took full day.chitra escaped from Magadha and went for panchala.jogita made durdhara faint and she went to dhananda to give her back.

Dhananda-dha dha tigra dha tigra dhe,to his soldiers(dekho murkhon)dekho,is stri ne hamare putri ko dhundh nikala aur ek taraf tum sab jo kise karya ke nahin.

Jogita-maharaj ye to mera sabhagya hain ke mein aapke aur raajkumari jee ke liye kuch kar sake.

Dhandu happy-hmm'kya wahan koi aur kanya the,ati sundar aur ati manmohak.

Jogita-nahin aur to koi nahin the wahan maharaj,kewal raajkumari jee achet pade hue the.

Dhanu sad-accha'.koi baat nahin hum chitra ko bhe dhundh nikalenge,kahan jayege humse bachkar,tir kit dha..

Jogita-maharaj kya ab mein jaon,mere bacche bhuke honge.

Dhanu-jao'awashya jaaaooo'..tir kit dha(he did a go sign to jogita)and she left

Jogita while walking-murkh,kal pata chalega tuzhe and she too left for panchala.

Next day'''

In morning''

A soldier came,mihika and shanky were sleeping.

Soldier spread water on them-oh utho tum kumbhkarno,ye lo bhojan.

The soldier opened their hands and 6 soldiers were there too as vishal strictly instructed them that they should not run away.

Mihika was waiting for an opportunity to bite someone so she could escape but she couldn't as there were too many soldiers and they knew she was a vishkanya.

Mihika and shanky got surprised seeing the food.

Shanky-ye bhojan hamare liye he hain na??

Soldier-to aur kya bhooton ke liye hain.

Shanky-kintu ye basmati chawal,suzi ka halwa,bajre ke rote,itna utkrisht bhojan aur wo bhe kaidion ke liye.

Soldier decided to scare them(vishal was a very generous king,he gave his captives good food but tortured them as well,he is a very grey shaded king,no one knows what his actual intentions are)-hamare maharaj jab kise dut ko maarne waale hote hain na to use aisa he utkrisht bhojan karwaate hai.

Mihika and shanky saw each other with scared faces.

Durdhara wakes up'

Dhuru-are hum ye kahan hain??

Suddenly dhanu came and slapped her.

Dhuru-pitashri'

Dhanu-us Chandragupta ke paas jaana chahte the na,chalo ab hum tumhe swarg he pahuncha dete hain,hamare samman ko thes pahuchana chahte the,dhanu slapped her tight'.suddenly a soldier came running to him'

Soldier-maharaj maharaj'

Dhanu-kya huuuaaa???

Soldier-maharaj kise ne Magadha mein ek bahut vishal drishta ke hain.

Dhanu-kkkyaaa..ho gayaaa??

Soldier-mahraj kise ne magadha ke deewaron par raajkumari durdhara aur maharaj Chandragupta ke rishte ke bare mein bady bhayankar apshabd likhe hain.

Dhandu shocked'-kkkyyyaa??kisne ke ye drishtaaa??

Soldier-mahraj hamare sainikon ne pata karwaya to pata chala ke kise ne ye karya ratri mein he kara hain ,ek vyakti ne dekha tha,usne bataya ke usne kale rang ke vastra pehne the aur uska chehra bhe Dhaka hua tha.dhuru got extremely shocked hearing it.

She thinks-aisa kaun kar sakta hain??

In gandhara'

Chanakya got the msg'

Rashi,bhadrabhatt and chandu were there'

Rashi-kya hua acharya??

Chanakya told him about the wall incident in magadha.rashi puts hands on her mouth.

Chandu got highly shocked,chanakya was angry as well because dhuru tried to escape from Magadha.

Chandu-durdhara aisa kaise kar sakte hain au raise drishta kaun kar sakta hain.

Rashi thinks-ye kahin vishal ne to nahin,parantu wo durdhara ko badnaam kyun karega??are uska kuch bharosa nahin,wo kab kya karta hain kise ko kuch pata nahin chalta.

Chanakya-aise drishta koi aisa vyakti he kar sakta hain jise dhananda ke samman se grhina ho.ab dhananda muzhpar aisa karne ka aarop lagayega.

Rashi-are aise kaise,aur agar wo aapar itna neech aarop lagata bhe hain to koi nahin maanega acharya,ulta use ke samman ke kirkiri hoge.

Chandu-haan acharya.

Chanakya-durdhara ke saath surasena ke raajkumari chitra bhe bhaage the aur wo bhaagne mein safal bhe rahe.

Rashi shocked(thinks)-chitra,wo,wo wahan kya karne gaye the??ab to pakka hain ke ye sara kiya dhara vishal ka hain.

Chanakya-hum aaj he panchala ke liye niklenge.

Chandu-kintu acharya hum to do din baad jaane waale the na.

Chanakya-haan,kintu ab gandhara par dhananda ke akraman ka sankat bhad gaya hain,hum aaj niklenge to do din mein pahunch payenge.saari taiyaariyan kar lo Chandragupta.

Rashi-acharya,kya hum bhe chalein??

Chanakya-aap panchala kyun jaana chahte hain??

Rashi-bas ab humne bahut gandhara ghum liya,ab hum panchala ghumna chahte hain,chanakya was about to say something when rashi said-waise to hum kai baar panchala jaa chuke hain aur rajprasaad mein ther bhe chuke hain phir bhe hamein panchala jaana hain.(actually chanakya knew that rashi has went to panchala before so he thought she was lying but as he was about to make a strike rashi stroked back.rashi was strictly warned by vishal that never lie to chanakya,just tell him the truth in highly twisted way.wow vishal really is a good player.chanakya has sent a spy to spy on rashi but actually that spy was vishal's spy and he was the one who made her listen to their talkings.this spy was in gandhara's army since ambhik became the king,in ever mahajanpada's army,vishal has his spy.)

Chanakya thinks-pehle baar mein ye nahin samazh paa raha hun ke raashi par vishwaas karun ya nahin,rashi ne ab tak aisa kuch na to kiya aur kara hain jisse wo koi guptchar lage parantu wo kise rajya ke raajkumari to hain nahin,agar wo guptchar ho sakte hain to vishal ke ho sakte hain parantu rashi ne aisa ab tak koi pramaan nahin diya hain..kintu'

Chanakya-theek hain raashi,aap hamare saath aa sakte hain.

Rashi got happy and she went to prepare herself.

Chanakya-ab panchala jaa ke he saare satya saamne ayenge,parabhu mihika aur shashanka surakshit hon''.

VISHAL SENT A MESSAGE TO MALAYKETU'

Malaketu reading-dhananda ko ye sandesh bhej do ke hum Chandragupta ke sahayata karenge na ke unke,kintu agar humne yuudh mein apne aapko haarte hue paaya to hum shigrha he Chandragupta aur chanakya ko bande bana kar unhe de denge.

Malayketu shocked by this double cross game.

Malaketu sent the message to dhanu.

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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