Part ' 51
Maan: Geet, ye dekho
Maan had cut off his mushtache by mistake'..
Geet starts to laugh'.Maan is embarrassed'.
Geet: Maan ye kya? Aapse ek chota sa kaam bhi teek se nahi ho saktha? Babaji innkko shadhi karkke mein kya karoon?
Geet pretends to be worried but she still couldn't control her laughter'
Maan: tumme mazak soochtha? Ye toh tere galthi hai Geet
Geet: kya? Ab meinne kya kiya? Babaji, ye toh nainsaafi hai, pehle toh ye shadhi ke samay aaisa laparwayi karthe aur inzaam toh hamesha ki tarah mujhpe hi dalthe hai
Maan: toh ye teri galthi nahi toh kya? Aajkal jahan bhi dekhoon tera chehra hi dikhtha, aur jab aaine mein mere chehre ke jagah tera chehra dikhtha toh aaisa hi hoga, haina babaji?
Geet: mujhe bhi aaise hi hotha, toh mein kya apne bal katkke goomthi?
Maan: toh Geet bathao, kab tum mujhe dekhthi ho?
Geet: subhe se lekhe shaam tak, jahan bhi jao aap mere peeche hi nahi chodthe
Geet sharmathi'..
Maan: toh khathe waqt, soothe waqt aur aaise akhele apne aap se baat karthe waqt, aur jab tum mere khyaalon mein khokke raat bar terrace pe left right karthe rehthi ho, tab bhi?
Geet: kya? Ye aapko kaise patha?
Maan: Geet, mere nazar toh har waqt tere upar hi rehtha, tum meri nazar se kabhi bhi bach nahi sakthi
Maan looks at her eyes'..she is blushing '..Maneet eyelock'..
Maan: Geet, tum aaise react karthi toh mein kaise chup reh saktha?
So saying Maan pulls her closer and admires her lal lal cheeks'.
Geet: Maan, aapka muh? Waise aap abhi bhi bahut handsome lagthe ho
She bursts out laughing again'..
Maan: ab kya hoga?
Geet: ab kya? Sabko shave karlo
Maan: kya?
Get: haan, aaise aadhe mushtache se kaise rahoge?
Maan looks at the mirror'..Geet sahi kehthi hai'..
He looks funny'..
p.boy knocks'': sir'm'am'.kya hua?
Geet comes out followed by Maan'..
P.boy couldn't control his laughter'..
Maan gets angry and stares him''
Maan: kya dekh rahe ho? teek se photo keechna, warna?
p.boy: sir, jo hai wahi dikhega, beech mein mein kya kar saktha hoon?
Maan samaj jaatha ki ye usski stuble ki baat kar raha hai'..
Maan: kya kaha tumne? Phir se kaho
p.boy darjaatha'..: kuch nahi sir, aap bahut handsome lag rahe ho
Geet: hare, ussko kyun darathe ho? aaise dekhoge toh photo kaise achcha aayega? Thoda toh muskurao
After a few shots''and a couple of hours of maneet masti'..
Geet: teek hai, ab bas, bahut dher ho gaya, chalo chalthe hai
Maan: hare, itna kya jaldhi hai? aur kuch photos keenchthe hai
Geet: nahi, maa pareshaan hogi, ab hum chalthe hai
Maan: toh motu, kaam ho gaya kya?
p.boy looks worried''
Maan: kya baat hai?
P.boy: sir, ek choti si problem hai
Maan: kya?
p.boy: woh mein camera ko load karna hi bhool gaya tha
Maan gets furious''
Maan: kya? Toh hummara photos?
Geet: issiliye kehthe hai ki aaise amateurs se kaam nahi karwathe, experienced logon ko kaam dena chahiye, naye logon se toh yahi umeed kar sakthe, achcha hua ye sirf casual photos hai, agar shadhi mein aaisi galthi kartha toh? Issko abhi nikhaalkke koi achche photographer ko fix kardo
Maan: nahi Geet, aaise sab sochthe toh naye log ko kaise kaam miltha? Meinne bhi toh naya naya business shuru kiya hai, aaise hummare clients bhi sochthe toh humme kaun kaam dega?
Geet: kya?
Maan: tum jao, jaldhi film lekhe aao
Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai
Maan gives him some money and sends him to get some food'..
Ab toh yahan sirf Maan aur Geet hai''
Maan keeps looking at his Mishty'..
Geet feels embarrassed'..she tries to move outside'
Maan gets hold of her':kahan jaa rahi ho?
Geet: hare, chodo mujhe, mein bahar thoda goomkke aathi hoon
Maan: kya? Tum kahin nahi jaa sakthi, tumme toh ab mere paas hi rehna padega, samji
Geet: ye kya hai? mere haath chodo
Maan: hare Geet, kitne mushkil se humme akhele milnne ka moka mila hai, mein toh isskka kitne din se intrezaar kar raha tha
Geet: toh ye sab aapka plan hai?
Maan: haan, ghar pe toh koi na koi humme disturb karthe rehtha, issiliye
Geet: issiliye?
Maan: meinne socha ki aaise kahin bahar milthe toh
Geet: toh?
Maan gets closer and closer'..
Geet: Maaan?
Maan: hare, mein bas tummare saath kuch pal aaise batein karna chahatha tha
Geet: ohhh, toh teek hai, mere haath chodo
Maan: kya?
Geet: haan, hum bahar walk karkke bhi batein kar sakthe hai
Maan had to accept it''warna ye baat bhi nahi karegi''.
p.boy comes back''.: toh sab, mera kaam ho gaya''.mein chaloon?
Maan: ye lo, ab jao
Maan gives him the money''
Geet: par usne kaha ki film load hi nahi hua tha
Maan: woh'.
Geet: Maan, toh ye bhi aapka hi idea tha?
Maan: kya karein? Aaise ladhki se pyaar kartha toh aaise hi hotha
Geet: kaise ladhki? Mujhe dekhkke bathao
Maan: kuch nahi Geet, chalo, hum bhi chalthe hai
Geet: Maan, aap kya chahathe ho?
Maan: kuch nahi'..Maan ka mann mein toh bahut sare ichcha hai'.
He looks at her eyes and is immediately is lost in them'..
Ye aankhen toh kitne bole dikhthe hai utna hi katharnak hothe hai, haina?
Geet: seedhe seedhe bathao
Maan: kuch nahi Geet, chalo, hum chalthe hai
He just utters those words but his eyes are fixed on her lips'.
Geet ko patha chaltha ki ye kahan kho gaya aur kya chahatha hai'..
Itne din Maan ke saath rehkke ye bhi nahi jaanegi kya?
Geet gets closer and she hugs him tight placing a kiss on his lips'..
Maan is shocked at the unexpected kiss'.but he thoroughly enjoys it'..
Ab dus din ke liye yahi kaafi hai'.haina?
They return home'but Maan still is not satisfied''
His hunger is getting bigger and bigger''
It's becoming hard to suppress his feelings'.
Par shadhi ke kaam Maan apne aapko busy raktha toh thoda aasaan ho jaatha'.
Raat toh Geet ki yadhon se guzar jaathe hai'..
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
She actually kissed him. Right on the lips. He is in heaven.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
So the pictures were taken? He was just pretending?
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
He didn't load the camera? Now they have redo it all.