Part - 84
That evening...
Ved is waiting for Maan...
Maan has promised to take him to the movie...Dhoom 3...
Ved is a crazy Dhoom fan...
He had watched Dhoom 1 & 2 more than 10 times...
Maan wonders what's so special about them?
It's just a thief police story...
But for Ved the race between them with high speed chases is so cool...
And he likes Ali's comedy...
Atleast there is one fan for Udhay...
Ved loves the joker in the circus na?
This time Geet couldn't accompany them as she has to take rest...
She is a little worried that Maan would easily get irritated and he doesn't have the patience to sit for 2 hours...
Ghar pe bhi jab Maan ke saath movie dekhna hai toh sara songs FF kartha...
Aur sentiments bhi Maan ko pasand nahi hai...ussko bhi FF kartha...
Ek film ko 10 minute mein dekhtha hai...
He just can't accept such nonsense...
Maan comes...
Ved is ready and is so excited...
Geet had asked Adi to accompany them...
If Maan wants to leave in the middle atleast Adi would stay back with Ved...
Ved won't leave without watching the whole movie...
But Adi had some other important job...
Geet: Maan, aap chaho toh agle bar jaa sakthe
Ved: nahi , mujhe aaj hi dekhna hai
Maan: haan Geet, hum chalthe hai, tum fikar mat karo
Geet: par Maan, tum donno ka akhele jaana teek nahi lagtha
Maan: Geet, tumme mujhpe itna bhi barosa nahi? ye kya sochega mere barein mein?
Geet: aapka image toh pehle hi bahut damaged hai, mein bas ussko aur damage hone se bachana chahathi thi
Maan: mujhe patha hai Geet, tum mujhse jalthi ho, mein Ved ke saath jaa raha hoona? Issiliye?
Geet: jya? Maaan, aap jaao, Ved beta, apna papa ka khyaal rakhna, ye beech mein wapas aane ki koshish karthe toh aap mama ko phone karna, teek hai
Ved: teek hai, mama
Maan: Geeet, this is too much, mein koi dakhu nahi hoon, mein isska baap hoon
Geet: aapko kab yaad rehtha ki ye bacha hai aapka?
Ved laughs...
Maan: Geeet
Ved: ab toh papa dakhu hi lagthe
Geet: dakhu gabbar singh
Maan: tum donno aaise hi mere mazak udathe raho, picture katam ho jayega
Ved: bye mama
Ved runs...
Maan takes this opurtunity to kiss his Mishty...
Maan: Good bye Geet, tum chintha mat karo, aur aaram karlo
Geet: bye
Maan can't stand the picture for more than half an hour...
Ved is enjoying it like anything...
Maan gets a msg...
It's Geet...
Geet knows exactly what's going on...
"Maan, kya kar rahe ho?"
Maan is angry...Maan knows Geet is teasing him...
"Geet, picture dehkne do, disturb mat karo"
Geet continues...
"aapko itna pasand hai?"
"haan, Kartrina kamaal ka dance karthi aur bahut hot bhi dikhthi"
"kya? Maaan? "
Maan enjoys this better than the movie...
Geet keeps him busy...
"aapko apni chumma wapas chahiye ya nahi?"
"tumme usski fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mujhe patha hai ki ussko kaise wasool karna"
"jao jao, aapki KK se wasool kardo"
"KK?"
"Katrina Kaif"
"usska account alag hai. Tummara account mein abhi 23 bakhi hai"
"jooote, 21"
" toh tum bhi ginthe rehthi ho?"
"ha ha ha? Aaisa nahi toh aap mujhe cheating karthe"
"hare cheating karna hai toh 1 2 nahi 10 20 kartha"
"haan haan, kyun nahi?"
"tayaar raho Geet"
"abhi ?"
"khaas mein Adi ko isske saath bhejtha"
"aur aap?"
"mein apna wasool kartha"
"aaj karthe toh sirf 21, kal karthe toh 21 aur"
"achcha?"
Aaise hi Ved apna pura picture aaram se dekhtha...
He is very happy that his papa came to watch dhoom with him...
On their way back Ved keeps talking about the picture and Maan has no clue what he is talking about...
He just keeps saying...haan haan , kitna achcha tha? That was brilliant...
Next day...
Maan gets ready for the badla...
Ved ko hostel bhejdhiya hai...
Ab Geet akhele hi hogi...
Maan Ved ko chodkke wapas aatha...
He kept dreaming about his mishti all the way long...
Geet bhi mere intrezaar kar rahi hogi...
Maan keeps counting the hours...it's 32 hours...toh 32 kisses...
Maan ke body mein itna jagah hai kya?
Geet ke kiss ke liye Maan ke paas jagah ki kya kami hai?
Itne broad shoulder jo hai aur usske neeche kitne jagah hai?
Maan ab aur intrezaar nahi kar saktha...
He enters the house in a hurry...
Maan: Geeet
Pinky: lo aagaye jiju
Pinky and her family have come to greet Geet...
Maan: inko abhi abhi aana hai kya?
Maan: tum log kab aaye?
Pinky: hum toh subha hi aagaye, Adi office jaane se pehle humme yahan chodkke gaye hai'
Maan: ye Adi bhi na? pehle hi mujhse poochtha toh mein ussko kissi aur din aane ko kehtha
Geet is enjoying this...
Maan is aanoyed...
It's lunch time...
Geet: Maan, aap bhi aao, khana kao
Maan: tumne khana khya hai kya?
Geet: haan mein kha chuki hoon
Maan: mujhe bhook nahi hai, mein bahut tak gaya hoon, mein thoda aaram kartha hoon, aur tummara aaram karne ka waqt bhi ho gaya haina?
Geet: aap jao, mein mausi se baat karkke aathi hoon
Maan: Geet, mujhe patha hai tum subhe se baat kar kar ke tak chuki hogi, aao mere saath, aaise waqt pe zyada se zyada rest karna hoga, haina mausiji?
Mausi: haan Geet, tum jao
Maan takes her in...
Maan: ab tum kaise bach sakthi?
Geet: Maan, ghar pe mehmaan aaye hai, aur aap ko abhi bhi mazak soochtha
Maan: Geet, aaise hi 33 ganta ho gaya, mujhse ab nahi hoga, jaldhi shuru karo
Geet: aap toh pagal ho gaye ho
Maan: haan Geet, tum toh ab aur sundar hothi jaathi hai Geet, aur tum aaise hi mere samne aathi toh mein pagal kaise nahi ho jaatha?
Maan pulls her closer...
Geet: Maan
Maan closes her lips ...chup bilkul chup...
Maan: kam se kam ek ek karkke apna kisses pure karo Geet
Maan takes her lips into his...
Geet tries to tell something...
The door is still open...
She points it to Maan...
Maan closes it with his legs still holding to his Mishti...
Door ke peeche Aman chupa hai...
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
8 months ago
Geet refuses to take the hints. Maan has only one goal in mind.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
8 months ago
He was so excited but Pinky is here. He is done for.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
8 months ago
Don't play that jealousy game now Maan. It will not end well.