Part – 56
Next day…shadhi ke rituals continue….
Shaam tak sab bahut tak gaye hai….guests bhi chale gaye….
Geet apne kamre mein hai….she is waiting for Maan……..
Aaj Sam bhi jaldhi sogayi hai…..jijaji wapas chale gaye toh Sam free ho gayi….
Aaj toh Geet thoda excited ho gayi hai….apne jadah pe haina…..
Maan is a little hesitant to go to her house…..
Itne saal toh chaltha raha lekhin patha nahi aaj kuch ajeeb sa lagtha….
This is the first time he is going to stay overnight at the Handa residence ……
Maan is about to enter the gate…..
He finds Handaji trying to walk, but not able to stand….
He is fully drunk….Handaji toh aaj pura nashe mein hai….
Who Maan ko rokhthe aur baat karthe rehthe hai….
Ahdaji: hale, mella sheerl , aao
Maan ko patha nahi kya karein?
Handaji keeps on blabbering something or the other….
Geet becomes restless….
Geet: hare babaji, galthi se aaj apne kamre mein jaakke sogaye hai kay?
Nahi nahi, Maan aaisa nahi karenge, haina?
Par ye Handaji rukhthe hi nahi….
Shuker hai babaji ki, Geet ka dua ko babaji ne sunliya hoga…..
Ranno comes out in search of Mr.Handa…..
She finds him holding back Maan from getting inside….
Ranno: hare aap aaj bhi?
Ranno bahut pareshaan hojathi….
Maan: koi baat nah
Ranno: hare Maan, Geet ko bhula lethe
Maan: woh…Geet kamakaam pareshaan ho jayegi
Ranno: tum andar jao, mein innkko sambalthi hoon
Maan: mein madat kartha hoon
This is not new for him, Maan helps her take him to their room….
Geet bahut tension mein hai….
Geet: babaji, ye sab ek jaise hi hothe hai, hare ye mard, haina? Shadhi ke pehle toh peeche hi goomthe, aur shadhi ho jaathi toh, sab kuch ulta, aane do unnkko
Maan comes….Geet keeps quiet…she is very angry….
Maan: Geet?
Geet: hare, itne jaldhi aagaye ho?
Maan: mujhse naraaz ho?
Geet: nahi toh, mein toh bahut kush hoon
Maan: woh Geet, mein ek zaroori kaam mein fusgaya tha
Maan Geet ko Handaji ke barein mein bathakke pareshaan nahi karna chahatha…..
Geet: achcha, aap jaake apna kaam karo, mujhe bhi packing karna hai
Geet gusse se apna trolley nikhalthi….she almost hits Maan……
Maan gets closer……
Geet: kya dekhthe ho? meri madat karo
She thrusts the bag in his hands…..
Maan throws it away…..
Geet: ooohhh aapki itni himmat?
Geet tries to get back the bag….
Maan catches hold of her hands and stops her…..
He looks into her eyes…..Maneet eyelock….mahi…..
Maan: pehle tum meri madat karo
Geet: kya?
Maan: yahan aao, mere paas
Geet comes near…
Maan hugs her tight….after a while Geet ka gussa gayab ho jaatha…..
Maan: Geet
Geet: hmm
Maan: ab teek ho?
Geet: hmm
Maan: patha hai Geet? Jab tum aaise mujhse gusse karthi toh aur bhi hot lagthi ho
Geet: achcha? aur kitne joot bologe?
Maan: nahi Geet, sachi
Geet: aapko maska marne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
Maan: kya?
Geet smiles and tries to get away….
Maan catches her…..
Maan: Geet, mujhse bachkke kahan jaoge? Aaj tujhe patha chalega ki alsi MSK kaun hai?
Maan pushes her on the bed….
Geet: toh itne din mein aapki nakal se pyaar karthi thi? Toh shadhi kisskke saath kiya tha meinne? Aap se ya aapke nakal se?
Maan: mera mazak udathi ho?
Maan stares……
Geet: hare, mein toh dar gayi
Geet laughs…….she knows very well that Maan ki damkis yahan kaam nahi aayenge….
Maan: Geeet
Ab donno ki masthi shuru…….
Next morning….
Ranno Geet ko kal raat ke barein mein bathathi…
Geet goes to find Maan….
Maan apne kamre mein hai…..
Geet comes….she just runs and hugs him….
Maan: Geet, kya hua?
Geet: woh kal raat…..
Maan: toh teri maa se baat ho gayi?
Geet: hmm
Geet is quiet…she doesn't have words…..
She goes near the window and looks at her house….
Agar Maan ke jagah koi aur hotha toh kya hotha?
Geet wonders…..Vicky just hates this misbehavior of Handaji….
He has stopped talking with him……
He even suggested that Sam too stop talking to him so that he would realize his mistake and give up drinking….
But whatever it is, he is their father, they can't ignore him…..
Maan tries to cheer her up….
He goes and hugs her from behind…..
He is about to kiss her nape….
Geeet……….
Annie comes….
Maan steps back….
Ab toh ye Geet ka kamra ho gaya haina? Jab chahe Annie aaram se aa sakthi…haina?
Darwaza khula tha toh Annie aagayi…
Annie: Geet, jaldhi aao
Maan: Annie, tum jao, Geet ko thoda kaam hai
Annie looks worried….
Geet: Annie, kya hua? Tum itna udhaas kyun ho?
Ha ha ha …Geet ko apni nanad ki kitna parwa hai? Maan ko bhi apne behen ki itna parwa nahi hai……ye Geet toh kuch bhi nahi samajthi….Maan ko laga shadhi ke badh sab kuch badal jayega, lekhin yahan toh kuch nahi badalnewala….
Maan: Geet, abhi nahi...Annie tum jao, Geet badh mein aayegi
Geet: Maan, Annie bahut pareshaan hai
Maan: mere pareshaani ka kya hai Geet?
Geet: aap ki pareshaani thoda intrezaar kar sakthi…. Annie tu bathao, kya baat hai?
Annie: Geet, meri nayi salwar haina, woh lalwala, kahin nahi mil rahi hai, tumne kahin dekha hai kya?
Geet: hare mein toh tujhe bathana hi bhool gayi, woh tailor ne mere salwar ke saath bhej dhi
Annie: kya? Toh teri measurement ki hogi kya?
Geet: chal, jaakke dekhthe hai
Maan: Geet, kahan jaa rahi ho? rukho
Geet: mein abhi aathi hoon
Maan: Annie, mein ek kaam kartha hoon, Geet ko tere saath tere ghar hi bhej detha hoon, Geet aaise hi teri seva karthi rahegi
Geet: hare, bas 5 min, aap yahi rukho, mein abhi aathi hoon
Par Geet toh wapas nahi aanewali….
Maan ko bhi patha hai….ye toh aaise hi hai…..
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
A case of disappearing bride. Geet is an expert in escaping.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
Why can't he tell her about her drunk dad? She would know this habit of his.