Part - 75
Maan: Geeet
Maan runs and picks her up in hs arms...
Maan: Geet, aakhen kolo, pls Geet, aakhen kolo
Sam: Geeet, ye kya ho gaya hai?
Maan takes her to the car and Sam follows him...
They rush her to the hospital...
Maan feels like his world is surrounded by darkness without Geet...
What have I done ?
Patha nahi ye sab kab hua aur kaise hua?
Sam tells him that she had called earlier and then too Geet didn't answer...
She might have fainted then itself...
She had been lying there for more than two hours...
And all this b'coz of Maan's negligence...
Had he attended her calls and kept in touch this might not have happened or he could have come earlier...
He should not have left her alone like that ...
He should have answered her calls...
Oh...god ...what have I done? What did she wanted to tell me?
Was she angry with me for my behavoiur?
Was she worried about something?
What was that which troubled her?
Maan knows very well that he has been the cause of all her troubles of late...
Maan just wanted his Geet to speak to him...
He pleaded to god that she opened her innocent eyes and looked at him...
How he wished she opened her mouth and strted scolding him straight away...
But all that just didn't happen...
His Mishty has turned in to a sleeping beauty...
If it were another day he wpuld have loved to see her sleep in peace...
He would have kept admiring his sleping beauty for ever...
But not now, now all he wants is Geet to wake up and smile at him...
How he wished to hear her call him..."Maaan"...
But his Mishty has gone into silence...she is angry with him and that's why she is not speaking with him...
Geet, mujhe maaf kardho Geet, tum job hi saza doge mujhe manzoor hai, lekhin tum aaise kamosh mat raho, mujhse baat karo Geet, apne aakhen kholke mujhe dekho geet...
Meinne ktine bar tujhe chup karaya hai..."chup...bilkul chup..."
Par ab muje ye kamoshi se bahut dar lagtha hai geet...aaise chuo mat raho Geet...
Apne muh kolke mujhse batein karo Geet...
Doctors check her and she is taken to the ICU...
Doctors say that she had lost a lot of blood and her brain stopped functioning b'coz of lack of blood...
She slipped into coma...
They can't say anything before 24 hours...
They give her blood and they have to wait and watch...
Maan: doctor, Geet kaisi hai?
Doctor: hum apne taraf se pure koshish kar rahe hai, agle 24 gante ke liye juch nahi keh sakthe, ab toh sab uparwale ke haath mein hi hai, God is great...
Maan is shattered to pieces...
He tries hard to hold himself together...
Ved flashes in his eyes ...
What will happen to his son?
How would he console his son?
And what would he do without her?
Maan can't imagine a life without Geet...
From the moment he saw her she had become a part of his life, an integral part of his life that he never realized that she is another person, for him she is a part of him and though we know that we can't live wihout any part of ourselves we only realize it when that part fails to function, just like that Maan life is paralysed without his Geet...
A thousand thoughts flash in his mind...
Maan feels guilty...it's all his fault...
He had forgotten his love in his greed for success...
He has been madly chasing his dreams and has failed to recognize that his real dream is always a happy life with his lovely wife and all this mad rush has been for that only...
He has failed to realize that his biggest asset has been Geet and Geet only, her companionship, her wonderful gift of life, one he cherishes the most, their son, Ved.
After Ved came to their life everything has been changed...he has become the new dream of their life...both have been trying hard to make Ved's life happy and comfortable...
Maan has been spending his free times with his son these days...
Inbetween Maan had ignored Geet totally and didn't realize that she too needed Maan's attention and care...
Though they have been living together in the same house they had become strangers, Maan had no time for her, to admire the little things that she did for him, to admire her never ending bhak bhak...
Infact Geet tried to keep silent for a whole day to check whether that made any difference,but Maan didn't even noticed her silence...he was busy with his work as always and never missed her anyway...
Geet got fed up with his attitude and had stopped her chit chats and just answered his questions when he needed her help to find his things or when he talks about Ved...
Geet has stopped asking him questions as he just ignored them...
When there is no answer at all why waste your time and energy asking him silly questions like, why are you late? What happened to the lunch? Why didn't you call me? Why didn't you answer my calls?
How could you forget your promises to take me out?
Maan often got irritated when Geet shooted those questions towards him. Now God only knows whether he would be able to hear her again shooting those innumerable questions and will he be able to answer her again?
All these days Maan had kept running like an athlete and his world revolved two times faster.and now all of a sudden Maan feels that his life has stopped functioning and his world has come to a standstill, for his world revolved around Geet, she has been the centre of his universe, she has been the source of his energy and today his world has sunk into complete darkness without her...
He can't live without her...what will he do in a world where there is no geet?
What will Vedant do without his mother?
How will he answer ved's questions abput Geet?
Ved would ask Maan why he didn't take care of his mother in his absence?
He would say that he would have taken care of her better...
How will Maan bring him up alone?
You can't replace a mother no matter how hard you try...
Ved will come to see his mother...
That thought scares him the most...
He is a confused man now, he doesn't know what would happen to him if there is no Geet in his life...
He had never ever thought about a life without her...
The future seemed dark and scary without Geet...
Maan couldn't stop thinking about his worst nightmare...a life without Geet...
And what about his son? How is he going to take care of him ?
No matter how hard he tries he can't substitute Geet, a mother can't be replaced...
That very thought scares him...
And what about him?
Geet ke bina iss duniya mein Maan akhele ho jayega...
Ab Maan ko patha chala Geet ki dar, usske uljan, usske parehsaani jab Geet kehthi thi ki Maan usse dhoor jaraha hai, ussko bhool gaya hai...
Abhi Maan ko uss tanhayi ka ehsaas hua...
What's life without your loved one?
Maan looses his confidence...he is broken beyond consolation...
His only hope is his mishty...
He knows that she won't leave him alone like him...
She is not selfish like him...
She still loves him the same way she used to love him earlier...
She had been loving him from the moment she knew about love and when she grew older and started realizing what love is she already knew thst she is in love...
She can't remember when she this affection and attraction started...
All she remembers is that she wanted her Maan around her always...
She wished he was there for her till her last breadth...
She just wanted her life to continue as it is...with all the love of her family and the special care and attention of her Maan...
He was there when she needed him, as a friend, as a support, as a backup, as a lover, as a mentor, and above all as a life partner, a companion in her journey without whome she wouldn't have had all the fun and joy...
As an adolescent girl when the harmones started palying with her emotions it was Maan whom she dreamt to be her partner...
She wanted to be his always...wanted to be with him and him only...
And for her Maan is her's and she started feeling possessive about him even before she knew that she loved him...even before she knew about marriage and commitment she wanted Maan for herself and she wasn't ready to atke any risk even if it was his cousin sweety...she was so jealous when she find someone with him...
And Maan never had any problem as he knew that Geet is his and she also loved him as much as he loved her even before she realized her love for him...
Infact it was Maan who nurtured that love that she began to realize and whenever she had her reservations about her feelings for him, it was Maan who gave her the confidence to go ahead and that there's nothing wrong in her feelings for him and it's always been mutual, their feelings for each other, Maan assured her that they are made for each other and though they didn't communicate their thoughts with each other they knew that their destiny is in each others hands only...
The first time Maan felt that yes she is in love with him...you may not say that it'sLOVE but just love as in you like him, you love him...
It's some function at Amritsar and the neighbors were all set out to attend that function in a tempo traveller...as usual Handaji was very excited as he has got a couple of booze friends to accompany him...
Geet and Annie dressed up pretty in their favourite attire and are also excited...
Maan ans Sam being older didn't want to go with them as they are not kids anymore and didn't want to be treated like their siblings in front of everyone...
Sam just hates when Ranno orders her and keeps saying that she is not supposed to do this and that...
Geet is still younger for Ranno to worry about...
And for Maan these weddings are for girls only with all their heavy make-ups and colourful lehangas...
It's not much fun for him without his friends company to woo girls...
His Hoshiarpur friends are still not mature enough or they fear their parents more unkile Maan...
Maan had to accompany them for his father wanted this to be a family get together...and with the Handas on board it is more fun ...
Yes it's much more fun than Maan would have imagined for this is the time he realized that Geet Handa is not just any other girl but someone very very special...and she liked him too...that's cool...
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coderlady @coderlady
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8 months ago
Too much blood loss and she slipped into a coma. That is bad.