Part - 78
Jo bhi ho Maan apne Geet ko khona nahi chahatha...
Chahe usske liye Maan ko kuch bhi karna pade...
Maan waits for the doctor...
The doctor comes out of the ICU...
He is still looking clueless...
Maan is worried...no one could answer his queries...
He doesn't know what's in store for him in future...
Does he even have a future? His future is his Geet and without her there is no future for him...
He knows he has erred somewhere and he just wants another chance to redeem himself...
Babaji, bas ek mokha do mujhe apne Geet se maafi mangne ki...
Ek bar usske batein sunne ka mokha dijiye ...
Ek bar usske chere pe muskurahat ko dekhna chahatha hoon mein...
Bas ek bar Geet apne aakhen kolkke mujhe dekhe...mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...
Mere Geet jaise bhi mere saath ho mujhe manzoor hai, par mein ussko knona nahi chahtha...
Maan pehle bar babaji se kuch mang raha hai, apne liye...
Ab Maan ko bhi patha hai ki sirf babaji usske madat kar sakthe...
Geet ko wapas lane ke liye Maan kuch bhi kar saktha...
Lekhin ab toh doctors hi kuch kar nahi pathe toh bechara Maan bahut dar gaya...
Aaj tak Maan kissi bhi situation ko dekkhe dartha nahi, ussne apne upar itna viswaas tha ki koi bhi muskil ko nidar se samna kartha, Geet aksar darthi rehthi aur Maan usske mazak udatha, ab Maan kudh itna dar gaya ki uska dimag blank ho gaya...
He is helpless, for he is so scared that he hates to think about anything now...
The more he thinks about Geet's condition the more he looses hope...
He doesn't want to think about a life without Geet...
He wants to remain optimistic, he is confidant that his Geet is a fighter and she will survive ultimately...
Maan ko apne pyaar pe Barossa ho ya na ho, apne Geet ke pyaar pe pura barosa hai, Maan ko patha hai ki Geet apne Maan ko kabhi akhele chodke nahi jayega, woh zaroor wapas aayegi...
He doesn't ask the doctor anything for he doesn't want to hear anything negative...
He knows very well that his Geet will come back ...
He just keeps praying and would never let anything to happen to his Geet...
He asks the doctor to let him see his Geet...
He just wants to be at her side...
The doctor asks him not to disturb the other patients and he can stay with her for a while...
Maan sneaks in...
The ICU itself is scary, even Maan is gripped with fear looking at the patients and the equipments surrounding them...he tries not to look at the others for that made him even more frightened...
He just moves staright towards Geet's bed...
It seems as if she is in deep sleep...
She has a bandage on her head and the mask to support her breathing...
Maan goes and stands beside her...
How many times had he admired her sleeping in the mornings while he wakes up erlier or leaves in the middle of the night for work...she would be in deep sleep and just as Maan tries to get off the bed without waking her up she often wakes up just when he is about to leave...
She is still half asleep when she calls out his name..."Maaan"
Maan would trun back to see her half awake and half asleep...
Maan would smile and wonder how she wakes up at the slight movement if his...
No matter how hard he tries to leave without waking her she always knows when her Maan is around and when he is not...
Now her Maan is here right in front of her praying for her to open her eyes and look at him, but she is completely ignoring him, why Geet? pls Geet, ek bar aakh kolkke dekho, mein yahi hoon, tere paas, Geet tumme job hi saza dena hai mujhe manzoor hai, par ye saza mujhse bardaast nahi hotha, tummari ye kamoshi mujhe bahut daratha hai Geet, pls mujhse baat karo Geet, pls...
Maan stands there staring her ...
The sister asks him to wait out as they don't want any disturbance to the patients...
Maan had to leave her and go...
Kal Geet kitne chahathi thi ki Maan usske paas ho, par Maan bahut dhoor tha, lekhin ab Maan chahe toh bhi apne Geet ke kareeb nahi reh saktha...
Shayad yahi Maan ka saza hai Geet ko neglect karne ki?
Ab woh swarthy gamandhi MSK kahan gayab ho gaya?
Geet ko hamesha kamzor darfok kehtha tha aur aaj Maan kudh itna kamzor kaise ho gaya?
Maan waits in front of the ICU...
He sits there all alone completely scared the whole night...
Sam wanted to saty back but Maan asked her to come in the morning...
Sam comes and she is also totally shattered...
Ranno is on her way to Delhi...
Adi and Pinky are here...
No one knows how to console Maan...
And how could they console MSK, the MSK who is used to consoling and commanding others is now in need of strength and support for his support system, his Geet, is in trouble...
They look at each other and feel so helpless...
Vicky asks Sam to go talk to Maan...
He is looking exhausted and very weak...
He will break down anytime...he needs some rest else he will go mad thinking about Geet...
Sam: Maaan, tum teek toh haina?
Maan smiles sarcastically ...
Maan: hmmm
Sam: Maan, kal se aaise hi beitte ho, ghar jaake fresh hokke aao, mein hoona Geet ke paas
Maan: ghar?
Sam: Maan, hum sab haina?
Maan: par Geet?
Sam: Geet jaldhi teek ho jayegi
Maan: haan, mujhe patha hai Geet jaldhi mere paas wapas aayegi
Sam: toh chalo kuch khakke aathe hai
Maan: nahi, tum log jao, mein yahi wait kartha hoon
Sam: Maan, aaise tum bhi bimar ho jaoge
Maan: nahi, meinne abhi abhi coffee piya hai, mujhe bhook nahi hai, mein badh mein katha hoon
Sam: patha nahi ye sab kaise hua? I hope Geet ko kuch nahi ho
Maan: Sam ,tum fikar mat karo, Geet itni bhi kamzoor ladhki nahi hai, woh zaroor coma se wapas aayegi
Sam: haan, mein bhi babaji se yahi dua karthi hoon
Maan: mujhe apne Geet pe pura barosa hai, woh bahut jaldh teek ho jayegi, tum dkehthe raho
Sam: haan
Maan: mujhe viswaas hai ki Geet jaldhi aakhen kolkke hum sabse batein karegi, mein tab tak intrezaar karoonga usske paas
Sam knows Maan won't move from that place till he sees Geet active ...
Doctor comes and calls Maan...
Doctor is happy that she is responding to the treatment and they expect her to come out of coma very soon...
Maan is also happy and is confident that his Geet will get well soon...
He asks the doctor to shift her so that he could stay with her...
Geet is showing some improvement, she is moving her fingers and rotating her eyes though they are still closed...her blood circulation to the brain has improved drastically and she would come out of coma anytime...
Doctor is happy with her progress and permits her to be shifted out of the ICU...
But he warns that only Maan could saty with her and the others should not disturb her...
Geet is shifted to the special room...
Maan stays with her and never leaves her...
Ranno comes and she is so worried about her daughter...
Ranno is surprised to see Maan dejected and pathetic...
She had never seen him like this before...
She knows that Maan loves her daughter so much ...
She had seen them grow together...she had seen their lov and affection grow along with them...
She remembers how her daughter was determined to marry Maan only...
Just then Ranno realized that Geet is not a coward but she is bold and stubborn and she knows how to get things done in her own way...
She believed in Maan so much and she had more faith in him than herself...she blindly believed that Maan would take care of her better than anyone else better than herself...ranno even thought that she is mad and her love is crazy and insane...
But after seeing them happily married and Maan's untiring efforts to keep her ahead in everything and his wish to give the best of everything Ranno understood why Geet is so lucky to have Maan in her life as her partner, Ranno is always proud of Maan and she is so happy that they succeeded in such a short time in their business and all this is b'coz of Maan's conviction to see Geet happy...
Ranno is confident that Maan would take care of everything as he always does and she need not worry about her daughter...she is all the more worried about Maan and how he is going to handle everything without Geet...Ved needs his mother the most and also Maan needs her to atke care of not only Ved but also himself...no one can replace Geet for they are not used to living alone since their childhood...
It's like they have lives the entire life together, fought together, struggled together, supported each other, and now Maan is struggling alone without her...
Ranno just wants to see them back together and nothing more...
It's Maan who is more affected than Ranno...
Geet has become an integral part of Maan and it's hard for even Ranno to imagine Maan's life without Geet, for he doesn't know how to live or why to live without her, she is everything for him, he does everything for her and suddenly if she is not there then there is no meanng for him to survive ...
Maan feels guilty that he had failed his promise to take care of Geet and so he is ashmed to face Ranno...he tries to avoid eye contact with her...
Maan ke aakhon mein pehle bar dar nazar aatha...Geet ko khone ka dar...
Ranno knows that it's not his fault and he has done everything he could to keep her daughter happy...
Ranno wants him to know that he has done nothing wrong and it's all in the hands of God ...
Ranno: Geet ko kuch nahi hoga, jab tum usske saath ho mere beti ko kuch nahi hoga, mujhe patha hai ki tum ussko kuch nahi hone dege
Maan: par meinne toh Geet ka khyaal nahi rakha
Ranno: nahi nahi, tumse achcha usska khyaal kaun rakh saktha? Tum apne aap ko dosh mat do, mein toh bahut kush hoon ki Geet ko itna achcha saathi mila jo ussko itna pyaar kartha aur apne zamedariyon ko itna khoob nibatha, Handaji ke jaane ke badh hi mujhe patha chala ki jeevan saathi kaun hotha? Jeevan saathi wahi hotha jo jeevan bar hummara saath detha aur humme aaise beech mein chodkke nahi jaatha, aur tummare Geet zaroor wapas aayegi tummare saath dene, zindagi bar tummare saath dene, ab toh Geet meri beti nahi teri biwi ahi, aur babaji tummare Geet ko kabhi tumse alag nahi karenge
Maan knows that Ranno has become so lonely after dadi and Handaji left, he had asked her to move to Delhi with them but she is not ready to leave her house where she lived with handaji, though she kept whinning about his drinking habits she loved him so much and Handaji also loved her equally, Handaji loved Geet the most and Maan always wanted to give Geet the same love and affection she got from her father...Geet never complained about her father though he gave them trouble at times...
Maan just want her to get well soon so that he can show her that he loevs her so much and there is nothing more important for him than her, not even his dreams about his business...
He has realized that there is no point chasing his dreams leaving behind his Geet alone, there is no use of him winning without her to wish him on his success...
After everyone left Maan is with Geet and she frowns as if she is pain...
Maan is happy to see some action on her face and now he is at peace ...
Though Geet is still unconscious Maan is now confident that she will retrieve soon...
He keeps a watch all night and doesn't sleep for a moment...
Her little moves bring a lot of joy as if he is watching a new born baby moving his limbs for the first time after he is out of the womb...
You know when Ved failed to show movemnets and there was panic Maan remembers his fist moving and then slowly he starts crying...that was such a relief for them then...
Maan holds her moving hands as he thinks that they are searching his hands only...
As he touches her fingers she grips his hands tight like a scared kid gripping his mom's hands for security...and then her face brightens and she is looking calm and distressed...her frown vanishes and she has a little smile on her lips...
She is gaining her conscience...she is going to open her eyes ...
Maan keeps looking at her face eagerly...
Maan: Geeet
Maan whispers in her ears...
His voice makes her tremble...
He knows that his Geet is listening...
Maan: Geet, mein yahi hoon, tere paas
Her little smile grows bigger and she tries to open her eyes...
Maan: Geet, tum sunrahi haina? Daro mat, sab teek hai, tum bilkul teek ho
Geet slowly opens her eyes...
She is happy to see Maan...
Maan smiles and assures her that everything is fine now...
Maan: Geet, ab tumme kuch nahi hoga Geet, aur mein kabhi tujhe akhele chodkke nahi jaoonga, kabhi nahi
Tears roll down Maan's eyes...
Geet nods her head as if she doesn't want to see him cry...
Maan wipes his eyes and tries to sport a smile...
Geet smiles at him...
Maan is so so happy to see her smile...
He was afraid that she would be very angry with him...
Suddenly her face changes...there is this fear in her eyes...
Geet looks worried...
Maan: Geeet, kya hua? Tumme dard ho raha hai, mein sister ko bhulatha hoon
Maan tries to move...
Geet holds his hand and stops him...
Maan turns back and looks at her...
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
8 months ago
She is awake. Will he understand her question?
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
8 months ago
Now Maan realizes what Geet had been telling him lately.