Part – 48
After dinner Geet waits for Maan's call……
Maan was so busy that he had no time to call her in the morning…..aur subha call kartha toh Geet se akhele baat nahi kar saktha….ab aaram se baat kar sakthe hai…..
Maan calls……
Geet runs up to her room…..
Ranno: hare Geet, dhere chalo, koi phone nahi utayega
Sam: haan haan, humme patha hai ki ye Maan hi hoga
Geet toh kissi ko nahi sunthi, she just vanishes in a second…..
Geet: halo
Geet couldn't speak….she is breathing fast….
Maan: hare, Geet, sambalkke
Geet: hmmm
Maan: toh kaise rahi hummari sagayi?
Geet: meri sagayi toh bahut achche se ho gayi
Maan: teri sagayi?
Geet: haan, yahan toh sirf mein thi, toh ye meri sagayi hi hui haina?
Maan: mera kya ? Ab shadhi toh mere saath karogi ya woh bhi tum kudh karloge?
Geet: woh toh uss waqt bathaoongi, agar uss din bhi aap nahi aathe toh mein shadhi bhi kudh karloongi
Maan: mere bina?
Geet: haan, mein toh sab ke liye tayaar hoon, aapse shadhi karna hai toh sabko akhela hi sambalna hoga, haina?
Maan: tum toh kuch bhi kar sakthi, mujhe lagtha hai ki ab mein Hoshairpur aatha toh tujhe shadhi karkke hi wapas jaana padega
Geet: toh aapko sahdhi ki yaad bhi hai?
Maan: ab chalo ye tamasha band karo, meinne pehle hi tujhe samjaya ki mein kyun nahi aa saktha
Geet: mein toh subhe se aapka intrezaar kar arhi thi
Geet sounds very disappointed…
Maan: Geet, mein toh tummare saath hi tha, pura din
Geet: kya?
Maan: tujhe kya lagtha? Mein tumme miss nahi kartha, khaas karkke aaj ke din?
Geet: phir kyun nahi aaye the?
Maan: tum chaho toh mein abhi aatha hoon
Geet: woh kaise?
Maan: tum bas apna aankhen band karlo aur sirf mere awaaz ko suno
Geet closes her eyes…
Maan: Geet, kyat um mujhe dekh sakthi ho?
Geet could see him…..
Geet: haan
Maan: geet, tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi ho
Geet: aapko kaise patha?
Maan: mein bhi ab sirf tumme hi dekh raha hoon, apne maan mein
Geet: teek hai teek hai, ab bathao, aap kab aaoge?
Maan: bas do din mein kaam katam ho jayega aur mein aajaoonga
Geet: jaldhi aao, I miss you
Maan: mein bhi, mujhe bhi bahut bhura lagtha ki aaj mein tere saath nahi hosaktha, I love you Geet
Geet: sirf I love you se kaam nahi chalega, aap jaldhi mere paas aao
Maan: meinne ILU kaha aur tumme koi farak nahi pada? Kaisa pyaar hai ye?
Geet: hummare pyaar ke kliye ye theen lafz ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
Maan: tumme nahi hoga, mujhe tummare muh se sunna hai
Geet: aap samne aao, phir mein kehthi hoon
Maan: pacca
Geet: haan pacca
Maan: toh teek hai, tayaar raho, mein jaldhi aanewala hoon
Geet: aap aaise hi kehthe raho, mein jaldhi aatha hoon, jaldhi aatha hoon, agar do din mein nahi aathe toh mein aapse kabhi baat nahi karoongi, samje aap?
Maan: jaise ki ab tum itne sare batein karthi ho ?aur tum woh baat karna band karogi? Waise bhi tum kahan baat karthi, sirf mujhse sawaal karthi rehthi ki kab aaoge? Kaam kab katam hoga? Aur kuch nahi bolthi, isse toh achcha tum baat karna band hi karlo
Geet: kya?
Maan: haan, ab toh hummari sagayi bhi ho gayi, aur tum abhi bhi sochthe raho ki kaise pyaari pyaari meeti meeti batein karthe?
Geet: woh toh aap haina, meeti meeti batein karkke mujhe ullu banana ke liye, mein bhi aapki bathon ko yakheen karkke aapse shadhi karnewali hoon, aur aap sirf meete meete batein karthe ho aur kahin gayab ho jaathe ho
Maan: ahcha mein sirf batein kartha hoon? Tum dekhthe raho mein kya kya kartha hoon?
Geet: wahan beitkke apna kaam kar sakthe ho, aur kuch nahi
Maan: ab batein katam, aur seedhe action, tum tayaar raho Geet, Maan Singh Khurana aaraha hai, bye Geet
Next day Geet waits for Maan's call….Maan doesn't call her….
She is used to speaking with him everyday and going to bed with Maan's dreams…
Ab Maan se baat karne bina kaise neendh aayega?
Geet just waits near the phone…..
Geet hears someone calling out her name from outside……
She thinks it must be her imagination….
She hears it once again….
It looks like Maan…
She opens the window and to her surprise it's Maan standing there……
He has just arrived and had come to see her first….
Geet: Maaan
Maan: sshhh……..
Maan signals her to keep quiet for she may wake-up the others which is the last thing he wants….he asks her to come down and open the front door……
Geet comes and opens the doorfor him….
Maan enters and they go to her room…..
Mr.Handa hears the door opened and closed…
He tries to get up…..Ranno stops him….
Ranno: kahan jaa rahe ho?
Handa: koi aaya hai
Ranno: haan, Maan aaya hai, aap sojao, Geet haina
Handa: kya? Ye tum kehthi ho?
Handaji is surprised…..
Ranno: aap chup chap sojao
Maan gets inside her room and locks the door….
Geet: hare, darwaza kyun band karthe ho?
Maan: tumne hi kaha na ki mein sirf batein karna jaantha hoon? Ab toh MSK ko apne kamaal dikhana chahiye ya nahi?
Geet: nahi nahi, meinne bas gusse mein boldhi
Maan gets closer…….Geet steps back…….
Maan: gusse mein tum kuch bhi bologi aur mein chup chap suntha rahoonga?
Geet: nahi
Maan: ab dekhtha hoon ki tum kya karthi?
Maan lifts her and carries her to the bed……
Maneet eyelock….mahi………
Geet bhi resist nahi karthi…..sagayi ho gayi toh ab Geet kyun daregi?
Aur woh jaanthi hai ki Maan zyada se zyada kay kar saktha?
Lekhin Maan aaj bahut romantic mood mein hai…..
Geet ab usski ho chuki hai….baat toh pakki ho gayi haina?
Ab ussko kaun rokh saktha….
Bas dus din mein shadhi hojayegi aur Geet pura ka pura Maan ki hojayegi, maan ki Geet……
Ab toh Maan bas apne mishty ko jee barkke dekhna chahatha hai….
Itne dinse Geet ko dekhne ke liye usske aakhen bhi kitne taras rahe the…..
Geet toh Maan se milne ke kushi mein aur bhi sundar lag rahi hai…..
Maan: Geet
Geet: hmm
Maan: tum abhi bhi naraaz ho?
Geet: hmm
Maan: ab toh mein shadhi karkke tujhe saath lekhe hi jaanewala hoon, samji
Geet: aap ko kya lagtha? Mein aapko mere bina yahan se jaane dhoongi kya?
Maan: mein bhi yahan se nahi jaana chahatha
Maan puts his hands on her waist and pulls her closer…..
Geet: mera matlab hai Hoshiarpur se jaane nahi dhoongi
Maan: toh tum chahthi ho ki mein ab yahan se chale jaoon?
Geet: haan, ab aapko yahan koi dekhletha toh kya hoga?
Maan: kuch nahi hoga, hummari sagayi ho gayi hai
Geet: par shadhi abhi bakhi haina?
Maan: toh aaj aadha karthe hai aur shadhi ek badh pura karthe hai
Geet: kya?
Maan: haan
Maan looks at her ….Geet could sense something wrong……..
Geet: aap kab aaye?
Maan: abhi abhi aaya hoon
Geet: kya? Aap yahan kyun aaye ho?
Maan: Geet…ye kaise sawaal hai? meinne socha ki meinne sagayi ko miss kardhi toh tum bahut upset hogi aur issiliye seedhe tumse milne aaya tha, tumme toh kush honne chahiye
Geet suddenly gets up and looks out of the window….
Maan ke ghar ke lights on hai aur Rajinder bahar kissiko dhoodhkke wapas andar jaathi hai….
Maybe she heard the sound of Maan's jeep….
Geet too heard that just before Maan came……
Geet: Maan, aapne buaji ko kaha tha ki ap aaj aarahe ho?
Maan: nahi toh
Geet: dekho woh aapka intrezaar kar rahi hai, shayad unko bhi aapki gadhi ki awaaz sunayigayi
Maan : ab tum kya kehna chahthe ho?
Geet: aapko abhi bhi samaj mein nahi aatha Mr. MSK, chale jao yahan se, get out
Maan: Geet?
Geet: chalo jaldhi
Geet pushes him out of the room…..
Maan: Geet, ek pappi toh dedo
Geet sirf pappi nahi ek jadu ki jappi bhi dethi…..
Geet: ab jao
Maan leaves reluctantly…….
Rajinder is waiting for her son…..
Maan rings the bell…..
Raji: Maan, tu aagaya? Itne dher kahan gaya tha? Meinne kab teri gadhi ki awaaz suna tha
Maan: mein gadhi park karkke aaya tha
Raji: toh tumme abhi waqt milli? meinne kitne bar samjaya tha ki sagaye pe zaroor aao,Geet ko kitna bhura laga tha
Maan: meinne ussko pehle hi samjadhiya tha
Raji: lekhin phir bhi Geet din bar tera aane ka intrezaar kar rahi thi
Maan: tum fikar mat karo, mein ussko sambaloonga
Raji: kaise?
Maan: woh toh tum mujhpe choddho
Raji: toh chalo mujhe bhi dikhao ,tumne Geet ke liye kya laya hai?
Maan: kya? Kuch nahi
Raji: Maan?
Maan: par maa, Tumlogone shopping katam kar liya haina? Ab aur kya chahiye?
Raji: tu toh kabhi nahi sudhroge, Maan ab tummare shadhi honnewali hai, tumme toh Geet ke liye kuch lekhe aana chahiye, par mujhe patha tha ki tum aaisa kuch karnewale nahi ho
Maan: lekhin meinne achanak aane ka plan banaliya aur mere paas shopping karne ke liye waqt bhi nahi thi
Raji goes and brings a cover…
Maan: ye kya hai?
Raji: tum issko kal Geet ko dedo, aur kaho ye tum lekhe aaye ho, samje?
Maan: par maa, isski koi zaroorat nahi hai
Raji: aur suno, agle bar tum kali haath mere bahu ko milne nahi jaaoge, samje?
Maan: wah kya baat hai? abhi se bahu se darthe ho?
Raji: tu toh ye sab samajthe nahi, isse hi pyaar kehthe hai, aur suno Geet hummari ladli beti hai , itne din tum kaise bhi ho lekhin shadhi ke baat tumne Geet ko pareshaan karne ki sochna bhi mat, tumne kuch kadbad kiya toh mein tumme chodnewali nahi hoon, samje?
Maan: tu meri maa ho ya usski?
Raji: kyun? Geet bhi meri beti hi hai, haina?
Maan: haan haan, ab tummare bahu ki tarafdari karna band karo aur apne bete ke barein mein socho,mujhe kuch khilao, bahut bhook lagi hai, yahan toh koi bhi mere barein mein nahi sochtha,wahan toh ussne mujhe bhooke bhagadhi aur yahan tum usski tareef karthi ho
Raji: kya?
Maan: kuch nahi, tum jaldhi khana lagao, mein abhi aatha hoon
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
Poor Maan. He got no dinner at Geet's place and she run him off.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
Raji is training Maan for the future. Bring gifts for the wife.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
Rano knows Maan came and she is OK? Surprises never end.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
He wanted to hear the ILU back. Most of the the its woman who want to hear.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
What else can she do man? Get engaged to herself and marry herself.