Part - 69
Geet expected Maan to be at home waiting for her...
Maybe he has planned a surprise for her...
Ye mann toh abhi bhi maantha hai ki Maan Geet ke b'day ko bhool nahi saktha...
But Maan has not yet returned...
Geet is disappointed...
Shayad koi zaroori kaam mein pasgaye honge...
Warna itne dher nahi kartha...
Subhe se intrezaar karke udaas nahi hui, abhi bhi umeed karthi hai ki Maan apne liye gift lekhe aayega...
she tries calling him but his line is busy...
Sam had presented her a wrist watch...
Geet usko table pe rakhkke bhool jaathi...
She keeps waiting for Maan...
Maan bahut dher ke badh hi aatha...
Geet ne kuch banaya bhi nahi hai...
Shayad she expected Maan to take her out for dinner...
Aur Geet ka mann bhi nahi tha kuch khane ki ya pakhane ki...
Maan is very tired...
He goes to sleep straight away...
Geet ko bahut bhura lagtha...
But she knows that Maan ka haal bhi bahut bhuri hai...
He can't even remember the date...
He is constantly worried about his business...
He is feeling guilty that he made a mistake which could turn their life upside down...
They could be thrown into the streets if this problem is not fixed in time and production strarts...
Poor Geet, how would she know all this...
She prays to god that everything is fine...
" babaji, mere Maan ki problems jaldhi teek kardho"
Next morning...
Maan notices the watch and asks Geet about it...
Maan: Geet
Geet koi kaam mein busy thi...
When she heard Maan calling her she runs to him...
She is happy that finally he remembered her b'day and is calling her to apologise...
Geet: Maan
Maan: Geet, ye tumne kab kareedha? Aur mujhe bathaya bhi nahi?
Maan thinks that she got it when she went out with Sam...
Geet is disappointed...
Geet: aapke paas waqt kahan hai ye sab dekhne ki?
Maan: Geeet, abhi isski kya zaroorat thi? Mein yahan kitne mushkil mein hoon? Aur tumme toh usski fikar hi nahi
Geet: aapko bhi meri fikar hi nahi
Maan: haan, mein sirf apne liye hi ye sab kar raha hoon, haina?
Geet: toh kya meinne aapko ye sab karne ke liye kaha hai?
Maan: tum bar bar meri galthiyon ko hi dekhthi ho, kabhi apne galthi ko dekha?
Geet: meinne koi galthi nahi kiya hai, galthi toh aap hi karthe ho aur ussko chupane ke liye mere upar gussa karthe ho
Maan: haan mein hamesha gussa kartha hoon, ye tumme aaj hi patha chala?
Geet: aur aapko ye baat abhi patha chala?
Maan: tujhe pehle hi patha tha toh mujhse shadhi kyun ki?
Geet: wahi toh mein bhi soch rahi hoon?
Maan: Geeet
Maan gets angry and leaves without even having his breakfast...
Geet is also angry...
She is not going to talk to him now...
Let him realize his mistake...
Aaise hi chaltha toh Maan would take her for granted...
Shyad Maan ko lagtha ki chahe kuch bhi ho Geet Maan ko chodkke nahi jayegi...
Usko koi aur sahara nahi hai...
Geet gusse mein ulta seedha sochne lagi...
Upar se ye tanhayi Geet ko bahut pareshaan karthi hai...
She is very scared that she has no one ...
No one needs her now...
Ved is also happy without her and Maan too doesn't like her company...
Geet ko lagtha hai ki Maan ko ab Geet ki zaroorat hi nahi...
Shayad Geet ke bina Maan bahut kush hoga, haina?
Maan too is upset that Geet doesn't understand his problems...
Aaise waqt pe Geet ko Maan ke saath dene chahiye thi...
Maan ki himmat badane chahiye thi...
Maan ko moral support ki zaroorat hai ab...
Lekhin Geet Maan ke pareshaniyon ko bada kar rahi hai...
Agar Maan Geet ko apne pareshaani ko khulkke bathatha toh Geet bhi koi upaay bathayegi...
Par Maan ko dar hai ki Geet ye sab jaankke bahut darjayegi...
Maan Geet ko kamakaam pareshaan nahi karna chahatha...
Aur apne pareshaaniyon ko ussko batha bhi nahi patha...
Pehle hi Geet ko Arjun se paise lena pasand nahi hai...
Geet maanthi hai ki rishton ke beech paise aatha toh rishte kamzoor hojaathe...
Kya hoga agar Maan paise sahi time pe wapas nahi detha?
Aur Annie musibat mein padjayegi...
Magar Maan ko apne upar itna barosa hai ki woh zaroor ek koshish karna chahatha...
Koshish karne se hi hum zindagi mein jeet hazil kar sakthe haina?
Agar koshish hi nahi karthe toh kaise aage badenge?
Agar Maan ne koshish nahi kit oh aaj itna bada business kaise hotha?
Aaise hi donno ek dusre ko galat samajthe hai...
Maan jab wapas aatha Geet se baat hi nahi kartha...
Geet ko bahut bhura lagtha...
Kam se kaam Geet ko daanttha toh bhi Geet kush hogi, magar aaise chup rehtha toh Geet toot jaathi...
Meine aaise kya kiya hai Maan?
Ab aapko mujhse batein karna bhi pasand nahi hai?
Geet ko ye kamoshi bilkul achchi nahi lagthi...
Geet bahut darjaathi, Maan ke kamoshi Maan ke daant se bhi zyada takleef dethi...
Maan ne kabhi aaise nahi kiya...
Naraaz hotha toh bhi Geet ussi waqt daantthe aur bhool jaatha...
Geet hi baat karthi...
She can't bear this silence anymore...
Geet: Maan, khana tayaar hai
Maan: hmmm
Maan comes to eat...
Geet has made his favourite pasta...
Maan chup chap khakke chale jaatha...
Kuch bhi nahi kehtha...
Geet Maan ko hi dekhthe rahi...
Maan ke peeche hi jaahti...
Geet: Maan, ye watch
Maan: Geet, mujhe isske barein mein koi baat nahi karna hai
Geet: lekhin Maan
Maan: Gud night Geet, mujhe chain se sone toh do
Geet: gud night
Both of them try to sleep but couldn't...
Agar Maan Geet se teek se baat nahi kartha toh Geet kaise soyegi?
Geet ko lagtha hai ki aaise naraaz hone se koi faida nahi, pehle Maan ko batha toh de ki Geet kyun naraaz ho gayi thi
Geet turns around and finds Maan awake...
Geet: Maan
Maan: Gee tab nahi
Geet: nahi, mujhe abhi baat karna hai
Maan ko bhi lagtha hai ki abhi Geet se baat karna hai...
Maan: bolo Geet
Geet: Maan, ye watch didi ne diya hai
Maan: Sam ne?
Geet: kal meri b'day tha
Maan ko abhi apni galthi patha chala
Maan: tumne pehle kyun nahi bathaya?
Geet: aap ko yaad hi nahi thi
Maan: Geet, agar mein bhool gaya toh tum mujhe yaad dilathi
Geet: ab aapko meri b'day bhi yaad nahi rehthi, haina Maan?
Geet looks disappointed...
Maan: Geet, ab toh mujhe apne b'day bhi yaad nahi rehthi
Geet: phir bhi aap kaise bhool sakthe? Aapko meri kadar hi nahi
Maan: haaan, mujhe sirf apne kadar hai, mein swaarthi hoon
Geet: Maaan?
Maan: tum yahi kehna chahathi haina?
Geet ab Maan se aur behas nahi karna chahathi...
Geet: chodo, ab bhool gaye toh kya hua?
Maan: phir tumne ab usske barein mein kyun bathaya?
Geet: mujhse galthi ho gayi, mujhe maaf kardo
Maan: tum kya kehna chahathi ho? Galthi meri hai?
Maan wahan se chale jaatha...
Geet: Maaan?
Geet tries to stop him, but he leaves ...
He needs a break or else he would really turn mad at Geet and hurt her more...
But for Geet his untimely exit from the house is even more scary...
She feels terrible...
Why would he leave at this time?
Would he return or not?
Unwanted thoughts come to her mind and she is in the clutches of an unfamiliar fear...
She had never felt like this earlier...
Suddenly she feels that her Maan had left her forever...
She may not see him again...
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
Both have their troubles but will not share.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
9 months ago
Geet is depressed and lonely. She feels no one needs her.