Part - 74
Maan ki menhnat dekho...
picture milli toh posting...
Cuckoo...cuckoo...cuckoo...
The clock strikes three...
Geet has not had her lunch yet...
She feels a little hungry...
She had to have something for she had to feed her baby...
She can't ignore the fact that she is not alone now, she is carrying a life now...
Motherhood is a gift that God had given to women only for he knows that she is selfless and not selfish like the men...she puts her children ahead of her and starts living for them the the moment she conceives...she doesn't even wait for the baby to be born, she begins nurturing it even as it starts it's life as an embryo inside her...
Geet makes some juice for herself ...
She has not prepared lunch as she had gone to the hospital...
She wanted to inform Maan to have his lunch out...but Maan might well skip lunch today as he is too busy...
Geet is tired and so she goes to take some rest...
Her fears have made her pale and sick...
She feels as if she is left alone and she is afraid that she had to take care of this huge responsibility all on her own...she can't expect anything but anger from Maan as he is alreay in trouble...
He might consider this to be an added burden at this moment ...
He may be right, but she didn't expect this herself, neither did she plan this...
Geet couldn't even rejoice her special moment before she lets Maan know about this...
With all these speculations about Maan's reactions and her own confusions Geet feels tires and decides to rest for a while...maybe that would clear the smoke and give a clear picture...
Geet gets to her bed and lies down looking at the family picture hanging on the wall...
That was taken on Ved's delivery time...
Ved kahan hai?... apna cradle mein so raha hoga...Wink
How happy they are as a family...
Oh...what about Ved?
Will he be happy to have company?
Hamesha aaise waqt pe Maan Geet ko samjaatha ki kya sahi hai...
Aur Geet ki har sawaal ka jawaab Maan ke paas hi hai...
Agar Maan iss safar mein Geet ke saath ho toh Geet ke sare problems Maan apne shir pe uttaletha, haina? Phir Geet ke pareshaani Maan ke honge aur Geet sare doubts chodke sirf apne nane mehmaan ko kushi kushi swagat karthi...
Geet keeps staring at the picture and prays to her babaji to keep her family happy like that always...
Geet hears her mobile ringing...
She had left it in the kitchen itself...
She knows that it's Maan ...
She is so happy and relieved to pour her mind out...
She can't wait to hear his voice and she just wants to tell him everything, now...this very second...
She rushes to the kitchen as if this is the last call from Maan...as though this the end of everything...
That was her plight due to the fear and anxiety being alone and facing some crisis...atleast that's how Geet feels right now...
In her hurry Geet topples over the mat and she falls down...
Her mobile stops ringing...
Geet's head hits the sharp edge of the tea table and she faints...
And it's Sam who had called her and not Maan...
Sam thinks that Geet might be in the wash room and she would call back looking at the missed call...
Sam had called to ask about Maan's b'day gift and whether he liked her gift...
And after that Rohan(Sam's son) came back from schoo; and Sam got busy with him...
She forgot about Geet and it's only when Vicky asked her whether Geet liked the watch Sam thought of calling her back...
Ye Geet bhi na? itne dher kya kar rahi hai? Issko na mobile ki koi faida nahi, kabhi missed call check bhi nahi karthi...Maan sahi kehtha ki Geet ko mobile ki koi zaroorat hi nahi kyunki Geet kabhi mobile apne paas nahi rakthi aur hamesha kissi konne pe rakhkhe bhool jaathi...isse achcha landline hotha, usska ek permanent jagah toh hoga...
Sam calls her back...this time also there is no answer...
Iss ladhki ko kya ho gaya? Kahin phir se Maan ke saath jagdha karkke naraaz toh nahi hui?
Sam calls Maan...
Maan ka mobile abhi bhi silent mode pe hi haina?
So there is no answer...
Kahin ye donno chup chupkke apne second HM manane toh nahi gaye?
Sam calls Adi to confirm...
Adi: halo
Sam: Adi, tummare bhai mere behen ko lekhe kahan goomne gaye?
Adi: bhai goomne jaanewale the? Geet ke saath? Phir yahan kya kar rahe hai?
Sam: Maan wahan hai?
Adi: haan, subhe se yahi hai
Sam: aur Geet?
Adi: Geet toh ghar mein hi hogi, bechari bhai ki intrezaar kar karkke taq gayi hogi, issiliye toh bahut ushaas thi
Sam: kya? Geet ushaas thi? Kyun?
Adi: hare bhai ko Geet se baat karne ke liye bhi waqt nahi haina
Sam: par ye Geet apna phone kyun nahi utathi?
Adi: shayad bhai se naraaz hokke mobile silent mein rakhke sogayi ho
Sam: haan, ye toh kabhi bhi kahin bhi sojaathi
Maan: Adi, tum abhi bhi mobile mein baat kar rahe ho?
Adi: nahi bhai, abhi aatha hoon
Sam: teek hai Adi, tum apne kaam karo, bya
Sam: ye Geet kal se hi kuch pareshaan lag rahi thi, kya hua hoga? Mujhe kudh jaake usse baat karni hogi
Sam tells Vicky that she is going to Geet's house and she leaves...
Sam keeps pressing the doorbell but Geet doesn't open the door...
Sam is scared that something might be wrong...
Why isn't she opening the door?
Maybe she has gone out...
Sam calls her mobile and she hears it ringing inside the house...
Shayad Geet mobile ko ghar pe bhoolke kahin bahar gayi hogi...
Sam goes down and asks the security...
He says that Geet went out in the morning and came back...she is in the house only...
Sam goes back and knocks the door vigorously...
She is scared that her little sister might be in some trouble...
She calls Adi ...
Adi: halo
Sam: Adi, Maan ko phone do, abhi
Sam bahut parehsaan hai...
Maan: halo, Geet, mujhe thoda kaam hai, tum khana kalo
Maan thinks that she has called him for lunch...
Sam: Maan, Geet kahan hai?
Maan: Sam? Tum kahan ho? Geet ghar pe hi hogi
Sam: Maan, mein yahi hoon, ghar pe
Maan: Geet ghar pe nahi hai kya?
Sam: Maan, Geet darwaza nahi khol rahi hai, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai
Maan: Sam, tum kya kehthi ho? Geet darwaza kyun nahi kholthi?
Sam: mujhe kuch patha nahi, tum jaldhi aao
Maan: Sam, mein abhi aatha hoon, tum security ke bhulao
Sam: usne kaha Geet ghar pe hi hai
Maan: tum usse bhulakke darwaza thodke andar jao
Sam: teek hai, tum jaldhi aao
Maan: mein aatha hoon Sam
Maan looks for his mobile...
Maan: Adi, mera mobile kahan hai?
Adi gives him his mobile...
Man finds a lot of missed calls...
Most of them from Geet...more than 10 missed calls?
Maan: Geet, tine bar mujhe call karne ki noshish karthi thi?
Maan bahut pareshaan hotha...
Ye sab usski galthi hi hai...
Kal raat Geet se jagdah karne se lekhe abhi tak Maan ne Geet se baat nahi kiya hai...
Ye meinne kya kardhi?
Babaji mere Geet ko kuch nahi hona chahiye? Pls, usse rakhsha karo...
Par Geet ke raksha karna toh Maan ka farz haina?
Maan failed his duty to take care of his Geet...
Maan drives as fast as he could...
Maan keeps calling Sam...
Sam: Maan, ye darwaza khultha hi nahi
Maan: hare, kaise bhi ussko thodne ki koshish karo, jaldhi
Sam: hum koshish kar rahe hai
Maan remembers having a key in the garage...
Maan: Sam, neeche garage mein ek key hai, jaldhi lao
Sam takes the keys and they open the house...
Maan just comes in time...
Maan rushes in and finds his Geet lying down in a pool of blood...
Maan's heart stops beating for a second...
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coderlady @coderlady
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8 months ago
Finally Maan is on his way home. Hope Geet will be OK.