Part – 5
Next day…..it's the festival day……everyone is happy……
Annie aur Geet naye kapde pehenkke kushi se khel rahe hai…..
Gaav ko ek bar goomkke aagaye hai….
They have all those shops with all those colorfull clothes and bangles…
And also the chaats amd ice creams…..
Annie toh mele se bahar aathi hi nahi….Geet jabardasthi ussko ghar lekhe aathi hai…..warna bahut dher hojaathi toh Ranno kamakaam pareshaan hojayegi aur Geet ko agle bar bahar nahi jaane degi….
Abhi bhi Sam badhi hogayi hai toh ussko ghar se bahar jaane ki permission nahi milthi…..aaj ghaav mein itne log honge toh ladhkiyon ko thoda protect karkke rakhthe hai……
Geet aur Annie bhi ghar lautthe hai…..after having their favourite chaats….
Ab ghar mein hi khelna hoga….
Geet ko milnne usski nani aayi hai….
Geet unkko dekhke bahut kush ho gayi….
Naani ko apne naye friend Annie se milathi….
Apna naye kapde dikhaathi….
Jo bhi ho, naani ne hi bachpan mein usska dhekpal kiya haina?
Dadi feels a little jealous…..par sam toh Dadi ke paas hi thi….
Geet sare waqt apne naani ke saath hi rehthi…
Sare bachchen apne naye dosthon ke saath khel rahe hai….
Naani ke gaav se Geet ke friends bhi aaye hai….
Gurvinder aur usski choti behen rajji….
Geet ke wahan ka bachpan ke dhost….
Geet Annie ko introduce karthi…..
They all play together…..
Maan is getting ready to go to the ground & play cricket…
He comes out & finds Annie & party playing….
Maan ka nazar Geet pe hi hai….
Aur ye kaun hai?
Woh chor-police khel rahe hai…..
Gurvinder Geet ko chase kar raha hai….
Finally he catches her….
Gur: pakadliya
Geet bhi bahut kushi se khel rahi hai….
Par Maan utna kush nahi hai….
Geet ko isske saath akhele chodke jaana teek nahi lagtha…
Maan can't stay back…..his friends have come to take him…
He thinks of a plan….
Geet toh meri hai, isske saath kya kar rahi hai?
Maan is very possessive when it comes to his Geet, haina?
Lekhin abhi toh Geet bahut choti hai, phir bhi Maan ki Geet hi haina?
Maan ye baat ko kaise bardhaast kar saktha ki Maan Singh Khurana ke seva koi aur Geet ke haath pakde? Woh bhi Maan ke samne?
He throws his bat & goes to his room….
He comes back with his shuttle rackets….
He calls Annie….
Maan: Annie
Annie: bhai hum khel rahe hai, humme kyun disturb karte ho?
Maan: Annie, yahan aao
Annie comes……
Annie: kya hai?
Maan: ye aaplog kya khel rahe hai?
Annie: kyun? Aap ko bhi khelna hai?
Maan: nahi, ye kya hai?
Geet: Annie, jaldhi aao
Maan: tum ek minute rukh nahi sakthi?
Maan stares Geet…..Maan bahut gusse mein hai…..
Annie: bhai ,mujhe khelna hai
Maan: Annie
Annie: bhai ye bachchon ka khel hai, aap nahi khel sakthe
Maan: mujhe koi faltu game nahi khelna, tum bhi ussko chodke koi aur game khelo
Annie: kyun?
Maan: kahin ghirjaathi toh patha haina maa kya karegi?
Annie: kya karegi?
Maan: bhool gayi, jab mein aaise ek bar ghir gaya toh maa ne mujhe store room mein band kardhi
Annie sochthi ki ye kab hua?…..
Hua toh hi ussko yaad rahega haiana?
Maan toh ussko dara raha hai…..
Annie:achcha, toh hum kya khelein?
Maan: ye lo, shuttle khelo
Annie is surprised….
Usually he won't let her touch his things….nor he shares his toys with her…
But now he has no other go….
Ye Gurvinder ko Geet se dhoor rakhna haina?
Shuttle khelenge toh woh Geet se itna kareeb nahi jayega, haina?
Maan ko abhi bhi thoda shak hai, lekhin ye toh safe lagtha hai…..haina babaji?
Annie is very happy….
She calls Geet…
Ab Maan befikar khelne jaatha…….
Maan shamko lautke aatha toh abhi bhi woh Gurvinder Geet ke saath hi khel raha hai….
Aaj toh ye jaanewala nahi hai….
Mein bhi dekh raha hoon, ye subhe se Geet ke peeche hi pada hai….
Patha nahi aur kitne din rukhega?..….
Maan is not comfortable with him roaming around Geet….
Ye toh bache hai….aaise mokhe mein aaisa hi khelthe rahenge….
Maan thoda bada ho gaya toh he is not able to accept this….
He has become very possessive…….
Maan is possessive about all his things, he never lets anyone touch his things, not even Annie, but Geet doesn't belong to him, she is his neighbor, that's all….
He doesn't have any right to control her……..
She has every right to play with anyone she likes……
Geet bhi Sam ki tarah hi hai…
Lekhin patha nahi ye feeling naya hai….
Maan is confused…..why does this bother him?
Gurvinder unka mehmaan hai…..
Maan doesn't even know him till today….
But why this hatred?...
Next day….
Sab jaane ki tayaari kar rahe hai…
Ye Gurvinder bhi chale jaayega….
Maan is happy…everything seemed to be fine until …..
Geet starts crying….
Maan apne ghar se dekh raha hai….
Sab bahar kade hai….
Geet apne maa se baat kar rahi hai aur ro bhi rahi hai….
Maan thoda pareshaan hai….
Geet uss nikambe ke saath khelke kahin ghir toh nahi gayi?..…
Maan is pissed off….
He would crush his bones if it's true…..
Lekhin aaise koi baat nahi hai….
Ranno Geet ko daant rahi hai…..
Geet apne naani ke haath pakadke nahi chod rahi hai…..
Maan: Annie
Annie : kya hai bhai?
Maan: ye teri friend kyun ro rahi hai?
Annie: Geet apne naani ke saath jaana chahathi, par Ranno buaji nahi chodenge
Maan: ye bhi teek hai…
Ab Maan ko gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi….
Geet kahin nahi jaanewali hai….
Maan is happy….
Lekhin thode dher badh Geet apne naani ke saath chale jaathi….
Mr.Handa had let her go….
Itne din badh Naani ko dekhthi hai toh jaane dethe hai…
Geet kushi kushi apne naani ke haath pakadke chale jaathi…
Maan bas dekhte hi reh jaatha…
Ab woh kuch nahi kar saktha….
Maan is disappointed….
But he doesn't know why?
Ye Geet ke jaane se Maan ko itne takleef kyun hotha?
After a while Maan is geting ready to go & play cricket….
Annie comes…
Annie: bhai
Maan: kya?
Annie: mujhe bhi lekhe jao, mein bhi cricket kheloongi
Maan: ye bade bachon ka khel hai, tum nahi khel sakthi
Annie: teek hai. Mein shuttle kheloongi
So saying Annie runs to his room to take the rackets….
Maan usske peeche hi jaake rackets ko cheenkke chale jaatha….
He hides them in a safe place….
He comes back victorious…
Annie is crying….
Mr.Khurana ussko sambalthe…
Mr.Khurana: hare, kissne meri bachi ko rulaya?
Annie: Maan ne
Mr. Khurana: aane do usse, mein ussko sabak sikaatha hoon
Annie: papaji dekho wahan hai woh
Mr.Khurana tries to catch Maan….
But Maan is off in a flash…
Mr.Khurana: Annie, tum aao hum tere liye ice cream lekhe aathe hai
He takes Annie with him….
They stop at Geet's house…
Sam bahar khel rahi hai….
Mr.Khurana: Sam, tum bhi aao
Sam too joins them….
Donno parivaar aaise hi hai….
Woh sare bachchon ko apna hi samajthe….
after the celebrations it's school time….
It's time for Maan & Sam to leave….
Geet ab tak nahi aayi…..
Maan jaane se pehle Geet ko dekhna chahatha….
Kahin woh wahi settle toh nahi ho jayegi? Pehle ki tarah….
Maan: sam, tummare behen wapas chali gayi? tummare naani ke yahan
Sam: haan
Maan: ab yahan nahi aayegi?
Sam: mujhe kya patha?
Tabhi Ranno Mr.Handa se wapas aanne ke waqt Geet ko lekhe aane ko kehthi….
Ab Maan ki pareshaani dhoor ho gayi….
Geet wapas aajaayegi….
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
He is so happy to hear that Geet will be back.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
He is so upset that Geet left. He will miss her.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
He never felt anything for Sam. But for Geet, he does.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
Maan easily manipulated Annie to change the game.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
Maan is jealous of a little kid. No one can be near his girl.