ff-Main Tum aur Mohabbat(#2) ch# 24, pg-4

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* A story of luv between a vampire and a human ( sid & metz)

* Deepth of love in relations( abhay & pia)

* Love between alternate colours. ( agni & abhilasha)

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MR. AND MRS. RAICHAND ARE VAMPIRES. THEY HAVE TWO SONS AND A DAUGHTER. ELDER IS SIDDHarth WHO IS ALSO A VAMPIRE AND YOUNGER ARE TWINS ABHAY AND ABHILASHA WHO ARE NORMAL HUMANS. IN AN ACCIDENT SIDDHARTH BECOME A VAMPIRE,ABHAY FORGET EVERYTHING FROM PAST AND ABHILASHA WAS IN COMMA FOR 2 YEARS.BECAUSE OF SIDDHARTH MR. AND MRS. RAICHAND ACCEPT ABHAY AND ABHILASHA AND BOTH OF THEM ARE INNOCENT FOR VAMPIRES AND R UNKNOWNER.
CHAND RAICHAND WANTS HIS FAMILY AS VAMPIRE AND HE IS WAITING FOR ABHAY AND ABHILASHA BECOME VAMPIRE.
SID LOVE HIS BROTHER AND SISTER BEYOND THE THOUGHTS AND WANT TO FULFILL LIFE AND HAPPINESS FOR THEM.

ABHAY NOT BELIEVE IN LOVE AND MARRIAGE BUT WHEN HE FALL IN LOVE WITH PIA WHO IS OPPOSITE IN NATURE. HE FFEELS PENDULUM HIS LIFE BETWEEN PIA'S LOVE,HIS FUNDA OF LIFE AND RAICHAND'S RULES.

PIA IS ALONE. DOBRIYAL SISTERA ARE HER COUSIONS BUT THEY DON'T NEED HER AND DON'T HAVE ANY CARE FOR HER. PIA WANTS RELATIONS TO ENJOY HER LIFE AS NORMAL HUMEN WHO HAVE MILLION REASONS FOR SMILE,HAPPINESS,ENJOYMENT,ETC. BUT SHE IS ALONE IN THE PRESENCE OF HER COUSINS. NOW SHE WAITING FOR A PERSON WHO GIVE HER LOVE,HAPPINESS AND RELATION TO LIVE.Agni son of well known buissnes man of shimla. a rich boy. read in mount college for a secret mission.

Metz is a girl woh is completly look like pia. taken class in siddharth diploma institude. 

  

  

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character skatch

 

CHAND RAICHAND:

He is a vampire and bussinessman. Strict, puntual & disciplaned. Not do any compromise with his rules & regulations for abhay and abhilasha.


 

HASEENA RAICHAND:

Also a vampire but soft nature as mother. Devoted wife.

 

SIDDHARTH RAICHAND:

Elder son of Raichand family. A vampire but a good person, lovely brother and well known buissness man.

ABHAY RAICHAND:

Raichand's Younger son. He is very naughty in nature, love 2 play guitar, friendly, intelligent but non serious. 
Hobby: play games, abhilasha se fight, teachers se pange lena n mostly pia ko irritate karna.

 



ABHILASHA RAICHAND:

Abhay's twin sis. Confident, naughty with funny sense of humore n smart one.
Hobby: funny stanza's n songs on situation, love cooking (dn't have any idea about cooking), sometime she give pridiction.

PREM AGNI SINGHANIA:

He is serious, rude, quite in nature. Misterious sometime. Angry young man. Intelligent n known marshal arts.
Hobbies: painting, reading, cooking and watching natural creations.
 


 

MAITHLY PRIYA:

Bindas kuri (not vampire), doing fasion designing course from a private institute.

 


PIA KHANNA:

Very Sensitive, silent n serious nature. Dn't like abhay b/c of his naughtiness. Want a friend n relations who love her.
Hobbies: reading, create poetry, love to play piano, love nature things.

  

ARNAB DOBRIYAL:

He is a well known lawyer. A nice father, have a soft corner for pia but can't show it. He is pia's mother's couzin.

 
MADHU DOBRIYAL:

Perfect mother, loyal wife. She is not accept pia as family member. She is the elder sister of pia's mother.

 

PUNCHI DOBRIYAL:

Dobriyal's elder daughter. Fashionable, love to eat n hates pia.

 

JAY DOBRIYAL:

Punchi's younger brother. Jolly nature, cool dude. He hates pia's sensitivity nature.

  

MISHA DOBRIYAL:

Dobriyal's younger peice. Abhay's friend, apple of doriyal's eye. Pia ko bilkul pasand nahi karti or usay tang karne k moqay dhondti rehti hai.

 


Misterious girl.

T, KABIR, DANISH, ANGAD N TRACER are in same character.

Other characters are enter or exit according to the script.



Edited by InnocentZindagi - 10 years ago
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LINKS;

THREAD 1 LINK

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1743237

CHAPTER 1 (INTRODUCTION)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45766309

CHAPTER 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46006015

CHAPTER 3 (LIKNESS,RAGGING & FRIENDSHIP)  

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=46305746�

NEW CHARACTER SKATCH.

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484786�

CHAPTER 4 (PART 1)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484801�

CHAPTER 4 (PART 2)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484818�

CHAPTER 4 (PART 3)

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=47484927�

CHAPTER 5 (ABHAY'S SORRY)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47966998

CHAPTER 6 (ROMEO JULIET KA TIYAN PANCHA)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48255473

CHAPTER 7 (CONFUSION)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48501433

CHAPTER 8( Abhiya & agsha dance with sidmetz dinner)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48631067

CHAPTER 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49298857

CHAPTER 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49872948

CHAPTER 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52551937

CHAPTER 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52847839

CHAPTER 13 PART 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53521529

CHAPTER 13 PART 2

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=53521552�

CHAPTER 13 PART 3

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1743237&PID=53521575턑575

CHAPTER 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54321497

CHAPTER 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54908449

CHAPTER 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56046516

CHAPTER 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56686818

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CHAPTER 18 -1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092649

CHAPTER 18 -2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092690

CHAPTER 18 -3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092744

CHAPTER 18 -4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58092786

CHAPTER 19-1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59894192

CHAPTER 19-2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59894232

CHAPTER 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/62632859

CHAPTER 21 1-4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65202270

CHAPTER 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69306298

PRECAP:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72951985

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Reupdate chapter 23

Next Day:

Raichand Mansion:

Abhilasha was quiet. She was sitting on dinning table. Sid sit on head of the family chair and reading newspaper. Chand and Haseena sit in lounge. Abhay came after taking bath. He was late as usual. Sid look at Abhilasha, she look like a sign of sorrow. Sid sigh coz last night Abhilasha told him everything. She never hide anything from Sid that's why she told him about her love towards Agni and Agni's ignorance and rude behavior towards her. Abhay reached on dinning table. He greeting both.

Abhay: Good MorningBhai! Good Morning Cheeni!

Sid (smile): Good Morning!

Abhilasha still quiet.

Abhay: Cheeni! Chai thandi piogi kya? Aur tum aaj chup kyun ho?

Abhilasha look at him and try to smile.

Abhay (worriedly): Sab thek hai? Kisi ne kuch kaha hai tumhe? (angrily) Mujhe batao main chorunga nai usey.

Abhilasha (smile): Kisi ne kuch nai kaha.

Abhay: Phir tum chup kyun ho? Aur thori sad sad b lag rai ho.

Abhilasha: Bas aise hi, mood kharab hai.

Sid play a listener role in their convo.

Abhay: Oooh! To meri Cheeni ka mood kharab hai. (to Sid) Bhai ye to buhat bara problem hai, hamen jald se jald kuch karna chahiye warna masla buhat badh sakta hai, what say? (saying with fake worriedness)

Sid (make worried face): Han bilkul ye to maine socha hi nai. Apni Princess ka mood thek karna hi hoga lekin kaise?

Abhilasha give dagger look to both of them.

Abhay: Shopping pe chalet hain Cheeni.

Sid: You forgot Abhay! Ye shopping pe marne wali larkiyon ki tarah nai hai. Kuch aur socho.

Now Abhilasha look at Abhay. An interest hide behind her face expression to know what Abhay do for make her mood good.

Abhay: Party?

Sid: No! Dad allow nai karenge.

Abhilasha sigh.

Abhay: Uff! O.k phir movie dekhne chalet hain. Pia, Agni aur Maithli ko b bula lenge. Bhai aap b chalo.

Sid notice when Abhay take Agni's name Abhilasha face glowing. Sid smile and decide that he will do anything for her. At this moment he decide by hook or by crook he'll gave his sister's love to her.

Sid: Yah! I think that's great idea.vMovie dekhne chalet hain aur phir sab saath honge to achi si outing type feeling b aa jayegi.

Abhilasha: No! I don't want to go.

Both yelled: Why?

Abhilasha: Coz I want to watch twilight series.

Abhay: No yaar! I don't want to watch any vampire movie.

Abhilasha: It's a love story.

Abhay: I love those movies which based on reality not on dreams and imaginations.

Sid: Abhay! Its just a movie and movies are made for only enjoyment.

Abhilasha: Right and why we all take it to serious. We all know that vampire never exist.

A dark shadow appears on Sid's face for a while.

Sid: Princess! We can't say anything, may be vampires are exist. There is any evidence of vampires existancehat's why the writers wrote novels r books, filmmaker makes films etc. I don't think that vampires are a result of any imagination

Abhilasha shrug.

Abhay: I don't think so, believe it vampires, dracul and etc are not exist. Its all bullshit.

Pin drop silence in dinning area. Abhilasha realize that.

Abhilasha: I think we should go college. Today we have to submit some documents of us. Exams date will be announced soon.

Sid: O.k! Lekin tumne nashta to kiya hi nai.

Abhay: Don't worry college main canteen se kuch le dunga.

Abhilasha: Bye Bhai!

Sid hug her and whisper in her ear: Don't worry everything will go right.

Abhilasha nodded. Sid kissed on her forehead. Abhay look them and smile. They leave for college and Sid for office.

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After few hours:

Abhay was worried for Pia's absence.

"Oh God! Plz save Pia. Wo Dobriyals k saath ghar gayi thi kal, kahin usey un logon ne kuch kar na diya ho. Hope she is fine. Pata nai aaj aayi kyun nai. Agni b nai aaye warna un hi se puch leta. What would I do???

 

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In Evening:

All get this news that Pia is missing. Abhilasha was went to Dobriyal house after her college. She was first who get info about Pia's missing.

Flashback:

Abhilasha sit in Dobriyal's living room. Madhu, Punchi and Misha came.

Abhilasha to Madhu: Hello Aunty! Pia ko bula dain.

Madhu: Wo ghar main nai hai.

Abhilasha: What? Kahan hai wo?

Madhu: Mujhe kya pata, hogi kahin. Subha wo yahan nai thi.

Abhilasha(angrily): This is ridiculous! Wo aap k ghar main rehti hai to wo aap ki responsibility hui, aapko khayal rakhna chahiye tha uska.

Misha: Meri Mom uski "aaya" nai hain jo uske aagey pichey phirti rahen.

Punchi: Hogi kisi ameer zaade k saath. Is k elawa aata kya hai usey.

Abhilasha's blood boil on Punchi's statement.

Abhilasha(sarcastically): Tumhari shakal shuru se hi itni drawniey hai ya aise ghatia statement aur soch ki waja se hogayi hai???

Punchi(shout): What? How dare you???
Abhilasha: Shut up you moti bhens. Itna khayegi to haize se mar jayei, Pia se jalan b tujhe patla nai kar saki. (to Madhu) Agar Pia ko kuch b hua na to aapki in do aafaton ka main kya hashar karti hun.

Madhu(angrily): Mere ghar aa kar mujhe dhamki de rahi ho.

Abhilasha(harshly): Abhi sirf dhamki di hai, Pia mil jaye phir batati hun k main kya kar sakti hoon.

She leave from Dobriyal House.

Flashback Over.

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Abhay, Abhilasha, Metz and Agni sitting in Agni' house lounge. They look worried. Sid is in his office meeting and don't know about Pia's missing.

Agni(angrily): Main Dobriyals ko chorunga nai.

Abhilasha: Chorega to koi b nai. Hum sab un logon ko sabaq sikhana chahenge lekin pehle''

Abhay(interrupt): Pia ko dhoondna hai.

Maithli: Lekin kahan? Sab jaga try kar chuke ab kahan dhoonden?

Agni(worriedly): Raat hone wali hai, pata nai kahan hogi? Kis haal main hogi?

Abhilasha's mind click: Oh yah! How can i forget? Wo shayad jungle main ho, usne ek bar bataya tha k wo jab buhat ziyada upset hoti hai ya lonely feel karti hai to thori dair k liye jungle ki taraf chali jati hai, wahan ki khamoshi usey appeal karti hai.

Agni: Wo upset kyun hogi? Hum sab hain us k paas aur phir is baat ki kya gaurantee hai k wo jungle main hai???

Abhilasha: Uska mobile b to unreachable aaraha hai, so wo wohin hogi, i'm sure.

Maithli: Try karne main koi harj nai hai, Lets go, raat hone wali hai.

Abhay: Yah! Raat ko waise b jungle main jana ya kisi ka hona khatrey se khali nai hai, Pia wahan hai to jaldi usey wahan se lana hoga.

Maithli: Jungle main janwar b hain, right?

Abhay(serious tone): Janwar bhi aur khoon peene wale insaan bhi.

Maithli(with fear): What? Vampires, Dracula etc.

Abhay laugh. Painful shadow came on Agni's face.

Abhilasha: Ye bakwas kar raha hai.

Abhay: Vampires, Dracula kuch nai hote. Bas yahan k logon ne ghalat salat baatein phela rakhi hain.

Agni(seriouly): Mere khayal se hamen chalna chahiye, baatein baad main b ho sakti hain.

They left for jungle'

 

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Pia is sitting on a rock near small pond. She is in middle of the jungle. She was crying and shivring coz of fear.

Pia: Ye sach nai hosakta'' its impossible'. (crying)

She laid her head on knees and crying. Suddenly someone place hand on her shoulder. Fear attacks on her. Her heart beat boosting. She turn her face towards that one. She sighed coz that one is that mysterious girl.

Pia: Tum yahan?

Mysterious Girl: Ye sawal mera tha. Tum yahan kaise? Kyun?

Pia (crying again): Meri samajh nai aa raha k maine kisi ka kya bigara tha? Mere saath hi kyun?

Mysterious Girl: Kya hua?

Pia: Kal raat jab main pani lene kitchen main gayi tab''. (crying hardly)

Mysterious Girl: Dekho ro mat. Rone se masley hal nahi hote. Relax ho aur mujhe batao kal kya hua?

On Other Hand:

Abhay, Abhilasha, Agni and Metz reach in jungle.

Agni: Jungle hai so be careful everyone.

Metz: Main aur Abhay ek saath right side pe jate hain aur aap aur Abhilasha left side jaa k dhoonden.

Agni: Ek saath b chala ja sakta hai, alag alag jana zaruri nai.

Metz: Time lag jayega is liye 2 groups main jane ka keh rahi thi.

Abhay: She is right.

Agni (in head): I don't want to go with Abhilasha.

Metz look Agni who is in deep thought. She moved towards jungle Abhay follow her. Agni came back in sense but they both are gone and Abhilasha stay, she look confused and uncomfortable.

Agni (sigh): Lets go.

Both move towards another side. Metz look behind and saw them going together she smiled coz that's what she want.

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Pia crying.

Mysterious Girl: Kuch to kaho.

Pia: I'' can't''. exp''pp'.plain'. wha'..whatt'. happ'.ennn'.. lllaaa'.sssttt nite.

Mysterious Girl: Stop crying plz'. Just answer me why are you crying??? No long explanation i want.

Pia: Dobriyals''. (try to control herself) Arnab uncle aur Madhu masi ne''.. (wipe her tears)

Mysterious Girl: Bolo Pia un dono ne kiya???

Pia asked: Kya vampires hote hain???

Dark shadow reflect on her face but she didn't answer her.

Pia: Bolo na'. Jawab do'..

But Mysterious Girl remain quiet'.

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On Other Hand:

Abhay and Maithli's Side:

Abhay want to apologize with Maithli. They are searching Pia.

Abhay: Maithli! Past main jo kuch b hua main us k liye maafi mangna chahta hun'. plz forgive me.

Maithli: Main pehle b keh chuki hun k mujhe tumse kisi b bare main koi baat nai karni'.. don't you understand??? Jo karne aaye ho wo karo Pia ko dhoondo.

Abhay sigh.

Agni and Abhilasha's side:

Abhilasha quietly walk with Agni and searching Pia too. Agni ignore her, he call Pia's name again and again, he look too worried.

Abhilasha: Don't worry she will be fine.

Agni ignore her words and keep calling and searching Pia. Tears rolloing in Abhilasha's eyes.

On Other Hand:

Pia: Plz batao na kya vampires hote hain???

Mysterious Girl: What's ur point of view or thought or believe???

Pia: Nai hote.

Mysterious Girl: Rite! Sab kitabi baatein hain par tum kyun puch rahi ho???

Pia: Kya wo dono jhoot bol rahe the???

Mysterious Girl(irritatingly): Aisa kya kaha hai un dono ne? Tum batati kyun nai ho? Kua kiya un dono ne tumhare saath?

Pia: Arnab uncle pachta rahe the k unhone apne faide k liye mujhe dao par laga diya. Wo keh rahe the k'.. (crying again)

Mysterious Girl hug her and console her.

Pia: k unhone mujhe meri maa se is liye alag kiya ta k wo apni ki gayi ghalti ki bharpai kar saken. Unhone chura k mujhe is liye paala k waqt aane par meri bali charha den.

Mysterious Girl: Bali charha den matlab? Kala jaadu?

Pia: Nai! Mujhe vampires ki ek family k hawaley karna chahti hain Madhu masi aur wo log mujhe dhoond rahe hain. Wo mujhe maar denge.

Mysterious Girl shocked.

After few minutes:

Mysterious Girl (in stunned voice): Vampires nai hote sab bakwaas hai.

Pia: Wo log raat ko khamoshi se vampire wala jhoot kyun bolenge???

Mysterious Girl: Hosakta hai tumhe dara rahe hon. Metz ne b to unhen daraya tha. Jay prank'.. yaad hai?

Pia: Oo haan! Par tumhe kaise pata k Priya di Dobriyals ko darati rehtin hain???

Mysterious Girl didn't answer just smile.

Mysterious Girl: Relax Pia! Kuch nai hai.

Pia: Aur agar such hua to???

Mysterious Girl: Not at all, so be relax. I'm with you o.k. Just relax aur ghar jao tumhari family pareshan horahi hogi.

Pia smile: Oh God! Bhaiyyu aur Priya di'.. par mujhe raasta nai pata.

Mysterious Girl: I'm with you dear, lets go.

Pia ko apne sir se ton weight hat'ta hua mehsus hua. Now she is relax and walk with Mysterious girl.

 

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After Half Hour:

Metz was worried. Abhay look at her.

Abhay: Plz don't worry.

Tears rolling in her eyes.

Metz: Wo nai mil rahi. Pata nai kahan hogi. Mujhe darr lag raha hai kahan hogi wo???

Abhay: Mil jayegi pareshan na hon.

Metz(worriedly): Abhay wo thek hogi naa???

Abhay console her: Wo bilkul thek hogi hum jald dhoond lenge Pia ko.

Metz: Hum alag ho k dhoondte hain Pia ko.

Abhay: Lekin aap akele jungle main'.

Metz interrupt: Main apna khayal rakh lungi mujhe bas Pia ki chinta hai.

Abhay: As you say.

Both move in opposite direction.

 

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On Other Hand:

Abhilasha sit on a small stone. She feel pain in her feet. Agni turn and look at her and came towards her. He sit infront of her.

Agni: Are you o.k???

Abhilasha: Hmmm.

She look at him. Agni embarrassed for a while.

Abhilasha: You know what' Tum mujhe buhat ache lagte ho.

Agni (serious): Mere khayal se Pia ko jald se jald dhoondna chahiye, raat kahin gehri na hojaye.

He stand and start walking.

Abhilasha: Kisi k liye zindagi ki khushiyon se mun morna thek nai hai.

He stop and turn.

Agni (unfathomably): Excuse me???

Abhilasha: Aapki zindagi se aapki dost chali gayi aap accept karte kyun nai??? Zindagi ek larki pe khatam to nai hojati naa'.. Aap aage''

Agni move aggressively towards her.

Agni (in stern voice): Shut up! Just shut up. (holding her from shoulders) How dare you??? Who the hell are you??? Han??? Don't you dare interfare in my personal life'

Abhilasha (crying): You hurt me.

Agni look at his own hands and push her back in another second. She was crying.

Agni (irritatingly): Ro chuki ho to chalo Pia ko dhoondna hai mujhe.

He said and start walking. She folloe him and wipe her tears.

 

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Abhay look here and there. He saw a shadow. He was far from that shadow.

Abhay (whisper): Ye koun hai???

Abhay ne chup k uss saaye ko dekha. Wo saaya kisi cheez pe jhuka hua tha. Abhay ahista ahista qareeb gaya, ab manzar saaf hogaya tha. Wo koi kaala chogha pehna hua tha. Sir se paun tak lamba chogha. Abhay afraid for a while but he decide to saw that person. He move forward silently. Abhay itna aagey aaya k uss kale choghey wale pe Abhay ka saaya para. Wo choghey wala utha aur turn hua.

Abhay eyes wide and mouth open coz of shocked. Uska saans uppar ka uppar aur nichey ka nichey reh gaya aur kaale choghey wala b ek dam shocked ho k apni jag ape jama reh gaya.

 

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On Other Hand:

Pia saw Metz. She run towards her, Metz too run. Both hug each other.

Metz: Kahan chali gayi thin???

Pia: Kuch nai bas''.

Metz: Chalo ghar chalo'.. Hum sab pareshan hogaye the.

Pia: Hum dono b ghar ki taraf hi aa rahe the.

Metz: Hum dono??? Koun???

Pia: Ye meri friend aur koun' (she turn)

No one there.

Pia (surprisingly): Arey abhi to yahin thi'.

Metz (sigh): Lets go Pia.

Pia confuse about that girl. She move with her sister.

 

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 reupdating will update next but short update soon.. keep connected😊

Edited by InnocentZindagi - 10 years ago
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plz plz plz countinue this one.koi aur prhe na prhe ma zror prho gi.plz jaldi update karna yaar
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Plzzz plm me the updates :)
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hmmm dat mysterious girl is agni's special friend who is dead, isn't it?? and some vampire had killed her! abhayne kisko dekha? siddharth ko?? dat bloody dobriyals..!
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update madam ji we r waiting😭
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hey sorry for not seeing it because my last sem exam is ongoing. i love this story and thanks for updating plz continue.