New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE

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Guys i tried bt cn't stop myself frm Write.
Ths is my firest ever FF on IF. Plz sry for mistakes. Also , my English is nt gud . bt still i try my best
hpe u all like it ..
 
 
 made my my sweet frend funckylicious
 
CHAPTER : 1
 
He wake up bocz of disturbances of some loud noise. He forcebally open his eyes & look @his watch. It's only 4 am in the mrng. Thn he realizes he phn ringing He reach to the phn & curse tht person who dares  to wake up him in tht time. Bt whn he sees name flash on his cell screen , he is shock. He is in 2 minds he receive it or nt. Finally he receives call.
 
: Hello (He try to remain calm)
 
:Khamba Gani ... Kunwar sa.
 
:Gani Khamba (He spoke immedaetly)
Kya hua Gehlot ji aaj aapne cal kyu kiya hame , koi khaas baat ?(Why do u cal me tod , anything special)
 
G : Karan aap jante hai Kunwar sa..(Reason u knw)
 
: To aap hamara jawab bhi jaante hi hai na (Thn u knw my ans)
 
G : Jee ha , par kabhi kabhi soch bhi badal sakti hai ( Bt sometimes thinking is change)
 
: Kahe dijiye unse hum wapis nahi aayenge , na unse koi baat karnge.(Inform thm we dn't come back , r dn't talk wit thm)
 
G : Agar vo khud aapse milne aaye to. .. 6 saal beet gaye uss baat ko , ab jane bhi dijiye ( Bt wht if thy comes to meet u , it's 6yrs old thing nw.)
 
: (He irriates over d phn , bt remain silent )
 
G : Unhe aaj aap ki jarurat hai Kunwar sa , mai maanta hue ki galti unki thi , par ab sab kuch
 
shaant ho chuka hai . Ab aap baat ko na bada kijiye ( Thy needs u tod. I knw tht time thy was faluty , bt tod everything is fine , plz dn't push it further.)
 
: (He calmly listen all )
 
G : Hello , Kunwar sa ...
 
: Hum sun rahe hai (He said)
 
G : Aap phir ek baar vichar to kijiye (Think again )
 
: Gehlot ji jo beet chuka vo beet chuka hai (That was past)
 
G : Par Kunwar sa ...
 
:Gani Khamba.
 
G : Jee Hujur (Yes Sir)  He keep phn aside his bedside & switch off phn & goes to sleep . Sleep taken over him within few minutes.
 
PLZ DO NT COPY THS ON OTHER SITES...
 
                                     * INDEX *
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                page 9.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Chapt 18.  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?    TID=3197107&TPN=19                                                          page 19             
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69560526 (continued Chapter 24 on page 36)
 
 
 
page no 40
 
 
Chapt 26   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70712782                           page no 42 & 43
 
 
 
Chapt 27    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71261785                           page 46 &47
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
CS (Rathod's Father) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3197107?pn=51   page no 51
 
 
 
 
Chapt 31   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72944495                 page no 56
 
 
Chapt 32   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74054055                          page no 59
 
 
 
 
 
 
page no 65
 
Chapt 35    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3197107?pn=68  page no 68


Chapt 43  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&PID=103341895&#p103341895  page no 113

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&TPN=114  page no 114

 

 
Chapt 45  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&TPN=123  page 123



Chapt 46  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&PID=112559087&#p112559087   page 127 


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wannaa read more of it
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lol the language is different but im glad u wrote the english translation..:-)
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It's very good. Continue soon and please pm me.
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nice one i'm eagerly waiting who are they?

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please continue😊, coz i havent been able to guess who's who😆
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good start dear.. do continue soon!😃
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Loved it!
I have lived in rajasthan for a few years n i just love rajasthan.So i m rly looking forward 2 ur ff.
Update soon..
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CHATPER 2
9:00AM @ETF Ofc
                       Arjun , Riya & Chotu are thr. Arjun as usual reading his files , & Riya as usual lukng @him through corner of her eyes. It's a yr nw , whn he joined ETF. He also frnds wit Riya nw. But sumthing abt him Riya dn't knw. She feels his eyes tell her sumthing , she tries to read tht many times , bt failed.
"Gud Mrng Guys" Shree loudly greet thm frm door. "Vry Gud Mrng Shree" Arjun replied back. Chotu & Riya also greet thm. Ne trio (Riya , Chotu & Shree doing thr daily routine  gossiping.
9:30AM
                   It's 9:30 am nw. bt still thr gossiping nt ending , thy talk like thy never meet again , Nw thr voices easily reach downstairs . Shree & Chotu are doing silly things & Riya keep giggling loudly on thm. Nw Shree turned his back against door , so he cn't see who's coming in ofc. During his silly antics his back bumped on someone , he immeadatly turned back to the person whom he bumped. As soon as Shree see tht person his eyes popped out frm hus spects , his mouth goes to 'O' shape. His one hand in air & other rested on door. Shree luk @ tht person he wears blue & white chex box shirt wit blue jeans 7 black goggles on his eyes. Riya & Chotu tightly shut thr mouths , bcoz thy knew Shree is gone nw , bcoz he bumped thr khadus , super angry boss Mr. Rathod.
 
Rathod : Ths is ETF ofc , nt any theater group ofc , whr u show ur stupid antics. Go back to wrk nw , Shree.  Rathod glares @ trio vry angrily. Riya feel his anger.
While goes to his cabin He stops mid- way & glares @ Arjun , who silently do his wrk. Nw all doing  thr wrk silently.  Suddenely Rathod stromed out of his cabin ..
 
Rathod : Riya ( He shouted)
 
Riya : Ys Sir..( She gathers herself & stands on her feets.)
 
Rathod : Ye sab kya hai ( What is ths) He showed sme papers to Riya. Ye tumhara kam karne ka tarika hai  to badlo use , otherwise u leave ETF. ( Is ths a way to do ur wrk , thn change it nw , otherwise u leave ETF)
 
Raiya : Sry Si...
 
Rathod : (Cut her in mid - way) Ye koi school nahi hai , jaha mai tumharai mistakes theek karta phiru. (Ths is nt a school , whr i am correct ur mistakes)
 
Riya is a verge of tears nw. Rathod see ths & put papers on her desk & turn around he closes his eyes for a second. While returning his cabin ye again "Do it nw." & goes to cabin. In a cabin he seat on his chair & rested his head on chair   & closes his eyes , he clenched his fists , a lone tear escape frm his eye. bt aft a second his mind tell him , ' u hva to rough'
Arjun sees all ths drama & feel bad for Riya. Nw ths daily Routine of Rathod nw , he scolds her , insulted her for a such small small things. Bt Riya never utter a wrd against him. She always listens silently all. Arjun felt ths all weird. Riya silently tke her seat back & wips her tears tht ready to come out her eyes. Shree & Chotu rushed towards her desk & console her. Shree bad mouthing abt Rathod . Riya immeadatly Say Shree , "Let's complete our wrk , Shree " Both returned to thr desks. 
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Suddenly phn buzzes loudly , Arjun picks up d phn & aftersometime he puts d phn down & turned to his team "There is new case guys " Arjun provide all info to his team. After 1/2 hour ETF Team reaches crime spot & do thr wrk , thy returne back to thr ofc .
 
While discussing d case ,
 
Arjun : What do u think Rathod , who did ths?
 
Rathod : (Thinking something) Kahi ye uska kaam to nahi Raute agar hai to pta karo uske bare mai..
( Is ths wrk ws dne by him Raute , if ys thn find out abt him )
 
Arjun : Yes Sir ( Rathod angrily glares @ him . ths man getting on his nerves)
 
After 25 mins Arjun comes to Rathod ,
 
Arjun : You r right Rathod , ths wrk ws dne by him. 3 days ago he realised frm jail.
 
Rathod : Iknew it. any clue abt him..
 
Arjun give all info to him , thy discuss sumthng. while trio lukng @thm confusely. After smetime thy turned to thr team & Rathod tell thm "W hva to catch Rocky , ths wrk ws dne by him ." Whn Riya heard tht name she shivered.
 
Riya : Are you sure Sir? bt according to my info he is in jail ..
 
Rathod : Thn i please to update you Miss . Riya he realised frm jail 3 days ago.
 
Rocky is d most dangerous person . He kidnaps big ppl family & demands big ransom , whn he gets d ransom money he kills thm. He never leave thm. Thn he provide these money to terriorists group to continue thr actvities.
 
Rathod explain his plan to his team  Riya is vry excited finally she gng to prove herself to ths world, After 1/2 hour ETF Team reaches doc area whr Rocky hides himself. Rathod give sme instructions & orders to thm . He , Arjun & Chotu leads d front , Shree & Riya covers thm. Riya feel nervousness take over her , Arjun luke @ Riya & senses her body language is different tod. He assrues her frm his eyes. Riya nodded silently & feel relived. Suddenly Rathod turn around & luke back @ Riya , who readies herself for her position . He says Riya "Dn't act smart , just stay calm & follow ordres ." Riya nodded to him . She always obeys him like gud girl.
 
ETFE Team attacks on sme goons nw, goons also starts backfire on thm . After 1 & 1/2 hour team finish thm all. Nw thy goes further in search of thr main target Rocky. Thy find him seat calmly on rock . Arjun goes to him & put gun on his head.
 
Rocky : (Lifte his gaze towards thm 7 smile @ thm) So , finally u ppl arrived here , gud bt nw hw cn u go back.
 
Arjun & Rathod sense  sumthing wrong ,suddenly Rocky's men who hide themselves in a surroundinds start firing on thm . ETF Team also starts backfire on thm. Arjun & Chotu kills 4 . bt firing still start frm bth points. Rathod also hurts himself a bullet comes & touches his right hand & goes. Bt still he fires on thm. Suddenenly a bullet comes frm somwhere & hits her & thuuuddd...
 
ETF Team turn towards d sound & thy all shell - shocked. "Riya " Arjun shouted out of his lungs. Rathod feel numb. Thy all rushed  towards her . Riya fell on ground .. She felt unberable pain , Shree & rathod seat besides her , Shree beg @ her , "Plz Ri , dn't colse your eyes. , try to open thm for somtome , w all r wit u ." Riya sees Rathod who silently seat besides her & try to speak somthing bt her voice cn't  help her. Rathod seat thr like statue , he also hurts during ths operation bt he dn't feel anything. He tries to speak bt he feel like someone stole his voice frm him .
 
Rocky sees ths all & try to flee frm thr wit his men , bt Arjun & Chotu nab thm & kill thm , bcoz thy dn't wnt to arrest Rocky. bcoz thy knews after sme years whn he returned he again starts his criminal activity.   
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