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New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE

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Guys i tried bt cn't stop myself frm Write.
Ths is my firest ever FF on IF. Plz sry for mistakes. Also , my English is nt gud . bt still i try my best
hpe u all like it ..
 
 
 made my my sweet frend funckylicious
 
CHAPTER : 1
 
He wake up bocz of disturbances of some loud noise. He forcebally open his eyes & look @his watch. It's only 4 am in the mrng. Thn he realizes he phn ringing He reach to the phn & curse tht person who dares  to wake up him in tht time. Bt whn he sees name flash on his cell screen , he is shock. He is in 2 minds he receive it or nt. Finally he receives call.
 
: Hello (He try to remain calm)
 
:Khamba Gani ... Kunwar sa.
 
:Gani Khamba (He spoke immedaetly)
Kya hua Gehlot ji aaj aapne cal kyu kiya hame , koi khaas baat ?(Why do u cal me tod , anything special)
 
G : Karan aap jante hai Kunwar sa..(Reason u knw)
 
: To aap hamara jawab bhi jaante hi hai na (Thn u knw my ans)
 
G : Jee ha , par kabhi kabhi soch bhi badal sakti hai ( Bt sometimes thinking is change)
 
: Kahe dijiye unse hum wapis nahi aayenge , na unse koi baat karnge.(Inform thm we dn't come back , r dn't talk wit thm)
 
G : Agar vo khud aapse milne aaye to. .. 6 saal beet gaye uss baat ko , ab jane bhi dijiye ( Bt wht if thy comes to meet u , it's 6yrs old thing nw.)
 
: (He irriates over d phn , bt remain silent )
 
G : Unhe aaj aap ki jarurat hai Kunwar sa , mai maanta hue ki galti unki thi , par ab sab kuch
 
shaant ho chuka hai . Ab aap baat ko na bada kijiye ( Thy needs u tod. I knw tht time thy was faluty , bt tod everything is fine , plz dn't push it further.)
 
: (He calmly listen all )
 
G : Hello , Kunwar sa ...
 
: Hum sun rahe hai (He said)
 
G : Aap phir ek baar vichar to kijiye (Think again )
 
: Gehlot ji jo beet chuka vo beet chuka hai (That was past)
 
G : Par Kunwar sa ...
 
:Gani Khamba.
 
G : Jee Hujur (Yes Sir)  He keep phn aside his bedside & switch off phn & goes to sleep . Sleep taken over him within few minutes.
 
PLZ DO NT COPY THS ON OTHER SITES...
 
                                     * INDEX *
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                page 9.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Chapt 18.  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?    TID=3197107&TPN=19                                                          page 19             
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69560526 (continued Chapter 24 on page 36)
 
 
 
page no 40
 
 
Chapt 26   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70712782                           page no 42 & 43
 
 
 
Chapt 27    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71261785                           page 46 &47
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
CS (Rathod's Father) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3197107?pn=51   page no 51
 
 
 
 
Chapt 31   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72944495                 page no 56
 
 
Chapt 32   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74054055                          page no 59
 
 
 
 
 
 
page no 65
 
Chapt 35    https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3197107?pn=68  page no 68


Chapt 43  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&PID=103341895&#p103341895  page no 113

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&TPN=114  page no 114

 

 
Chapt 45  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&TPN=123  page 123



Chapt 46  https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3197107&PID=112559087&#p112559087   page 127 


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wannaa read more of it
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lol the language is different but im glad u wrote the english translation..:-)
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nice one i'm eagerly waiting who are they?

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please continue😊, coz i havent been able to guess who's who😆
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Loved it!
I have lived in rajasthan for a few years n i just love rajasthan.So i m rly looking forward 2 ur ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHATPER 2
9:00AM @ETF Ofc
                       Arjun , Riya & Chotu are thr. Arjun as usual reading his files , & Riya as usual lukng @him through corner of her eyes. It's a yr nw , whn he joined ETF. He also frnds wit Riya nw. But sumthing abt him Riya dn't knw. She feels his eyes tell her sumthing , she tries to read tht many times , bt failed.
"Gud Mrng Guys" Shree loudly greet thm frm door. "Vry Gud Mrng Shree" Arjun replied back. Chotu & Riya also greet thm. Ne trio (Riya , Chotu & Shree doing thr daily routine  gossiping.
9:30AM
                   It's 9:30 am nw. bt still thr gossiping nt ending , thy talk like thy never meet again , Nw thr voices easily reach downstairs . Shree & Chotu are doing silly things & Riya keep giggling loudly on thm. Nw Shree turned his back against door , so he cn't see who's coming in ofc. During his silly antics his back bumped on someone , he immeadatly turned back to the person whom he bumped. As soon as Shree see tht person his eyes popped out frm hus spects , his mouth goes to 'O' shape. His one hand in air & other rested on door. Shree luk @ tht person he wears blue & white chex box shirt wit blue jeans 7 black goggles on his eyes. Riya & Chotu tightly shut thr mouths , bcoz thy knew Shree is gone nw , bcoz he bumped thr khadus , super angry boss Mr. Rathod.
 
Rathod : Ths is ETF ofc , nt any theater group ofc , whr u show ur stupid antics. Go back to wrk nw , Shree.  Rathod glares @ trio vry angrily. Riya feel his anger.
While goes to his cabin He stops mid- way & glares @ Arjun , who silently do his wrk. Nw all doing  thr wrk silently.  Suddenely Rathod stromed out of his cabin ..
 
Rathod : Riya ( He shouted)
 
Riya : Ys Sir..( She gathers herself & stands on her feets.)
 
Rathod : Ye sab kya hai ( What is ths) He showed sme papers to Riya. Ye tumhara kam karne ka tarika hai  to badlo use , otherwise u leave ETF. ( Is ths a way to do ur wrk , thn change it nw , otherwise u leave ETF)
 
Raiya : Sry Si...
 
Rathod : (Cut her in mid - way) Ye koi school nahi hai , jaha mai tumharai mistakes theek karta phiru. (Ths is nt a school , whr i am correct ur mistakes)
 
Riya is a verge of tears nw. Rathod see ths & put papers on her desk & turn around he closes his eyes for a second. While returning his cabin ye again "Do it nw." & goes to cabin. In a cabin he seat on his chair & rested his head on chair   & closes his eyes , he clenched his fists , a lone tear escape frm his eye. bt aft a second his mind tell him , ' u hva to rough'
Arjun sees all ths drama & feel bad for Riya. Nw ths daily Routine of Rathod nw , he scolds her , insulted her for a such small small things. Bt Riya never utter a wrd against him. She always listens silently all. Arjun felt ths all weird. Riya silently tke her seat back & wips her tears tht ready to come out her eyes. Shree & Chotu rushed towards her desk & console her. Shree bad mouthing abt Rathod . Riya immeadatly Say Shree , "Let's complete our wrk , Shree " Both returned to thr desks. 
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Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 11 years ago