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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

CHAPTER 6 Finally d dy arrives , thy flew to Rajasthan . Nw thy all are @ a Jaipur (in Rajasthan) Airport. The ETF Team comes outside of the Airport wit thr baggage. As soon as thy passed d exit gate , suddenely 10 to 15 men who holding loded guns in thr hands approches thm , Arjun & Chotu notices ths, & try to get thr guns bt Rathod stops thm. Arjun notices these men wear sme dress white salwar & kudta & pheta on thrv heads. Red pheta (turban )These men goes to Rahtod & Riya & put garlands around thr necks. & after rest of d team. Team seems confuse. & luk @ Rathod who's face look like always emotionless. Then 1 of thm men goes to Rathod & greet him. : Khamba Gani Kunwar sa.

Rathod : Gani Khamba ( He instantly replied ) (Plz review my 1st chpter so u all get link of it )

: Hamara naam Girish hai , hum aap ko lene ke liye aaye hai , (My name is Girish , & i am here to pick u)

Rathod : Theek Hai . (k)

Girish : Chale Kunwar sa ( Shall w leave Sir)

Shree & Chotu thinks nw how thy can go with all these men.

Chotu ; Par , hum sab jaaynge kaise ( Bt , hw w "ll go)

Girish pointed towards the bunch of cars ... Chotu , Shree & Arjun look @ cars wit an 'O' mouth shape.

Neraly 20 cars r thr to receive thm . Team seat in one cars who is in exactly in a middle of all cars.While getting in car Arjun & Shree notices one sign tht common on all cars. It includes Red Sun on a center on a yellow colour & lions on his both sides. Shree asks Riya abt it. Riya informs thm , that is thr flag's sign. Shree &Chotu felt like thy r ministers. 😆

While Arjun observing surroundings & Riya look @ him . Rathod in a deep thinking like always.

All r come to close Riya & Rathod's house. , no not a house a big palace . Chotu thinks to himself .

A vry vry big gate ..

& afterthat 4 to 5 gardens thy passed. finally their cars stops in front of vry big Palace.

Arjun , Shree & Chotu look an awww expression on thr faces.. While Riya is so happy . As soon as Rathod comes out of d car , a person who waits outside of house near staircase , yelled loudly ,

"Kunwar sa aa gaye." ( Kunwar sa is coming) Suddenely 10 womens comes wit Rathod's mother . Rathod's mother do Rathod's & Rya's aarti , After aarti bth touch thr mothers feet. Thr mother instantly took thm in her arms & welcome rest of team thr house. When all team move further to enter palace , all women who came wit Rathod's mother , showered rose petals on thm Shree & Chotu feel vry happy , thy never think tht ppl welcomes thm in a grand manner . While Arjun observing ths . Thy alloted thr rooms. Thy all r tired so thy thy Straigly goes to thr rooms & dozzed off.

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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Mahi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Oh wow. this is getting even more interesting 😃 i like the story a lot now😳 waiting impatiently for the next update😛.. do you mind editing the title of your ff every time you update dear?😳 like on what page. so that one wouldnt have to go through all the pages to find the recent update😊

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

CHAPTER 7

Rathod's mother feel very very happy tod, finally family is complete nw.

"Hey kanha , kya vo kabhi nahi aaynge?" ( Hey lord , wht if he never comes here.)

"Kya hame yuhi intjar karte rehenge unka?"( Iam waiting for him like ths for my whole life?)

"Kya sapne sirf sapne hi rehenge?"(My dreams will ever come to true)

She closes her in lots of pain. Her hot tears rolled down her cheeks. she seat in front of her kanha , her frnd , her god.

She heard someone knock on her door repedtly ... She wips her tears wit her chunni , & opens d door . she found her best frnd , her most faithful servant " Chaturi " . She shares all secrats wit her ..

"Meera didi ", Chaturi hold her hands & twril her around in happiness

"Kya hua Chaturi , aaj badi khush ho. ( What happened Chaturi , why r happy tod.)

Chaturi : Didi agar aap suno gi to aap khushi se pagal ho jaayegi ( Didi , if u herad ths news u w"ll be so happy tod.)

Meera : Aisi kya baat hai , kahi tumhari shadi to tay nahi ho gayi ( Wht happened , is ur marraige fix )

Chaturi : Galt , shadi hamari nahi aap ki tay hone wali hai . ( Wrong , nt my bt ur marraige nw definatly fix nw.) Whn Meera heard ths , her face colour changes , happiness on her face flies , she gets angry on Chaturi.

Meera : Bas karo , ab hum aur nahi sun sakte.( Plz stop it , i cn't listen more) her eyes bcomes moist , her heart felt vry heavy.

Kisi aur ke saath shadi karne se cha hai ki hum mar hi jaaye . ( Iprefare to die , bt cn't marry someone else.)

Chaturi : Nahi didi , aap suniye to sahi ki hum kya kehena chate hai ( No didi , plz listen me only once)

Meera : ( Turn around) Jaao yaha se , hum kuch der akele rehena chahte hai ( Plz leave me , i want stay alone for somtime)

Chaturi : Par didi vo...

Meera : hame ne jo kaha vo suna nahi...( Dn't u listen wht i said befor )

Chaturi : Didi hum to ye kehe ne aaye to ki , vo waps aa gaye. ( Didi , i just want to inform u he's back)

Meera : ( As soon as Meera heard abt him , she turn around to face Chaturi ) Such... (really)

Chaturi : hum aap se zooth kyu bolnge..(Why i lie to u) Sau takka sahi khabar hai , unke mehel se hi aayi hai . (100% correct news , bcoz i received ths news from his household.)

Meera wips her tears , & runs towards to d main hall , she reaches thr & bumped into her servant.

She inform her servant tht she is gng outside for sme important work.

( I placed her oppsite Rathod)

Meera goes to parking lot , & inform her driver to tke her to Jaipur Palace. After 1 hour Meera reaches palace , she glanes @ her watch it's 6:30pm nw. Her heart fills wit lots of questions in her mind , hw he looks nw , hw he speaks , is he recongnise me , what if he found anyone. She enter main hall of palace & bumped into someone. She look who she bumped , she found she bumped on some guy , who wears t-shirt wit jeans , & jacket on his t-shirt. She notices tht guy also wears spects . She immeadely say "Sry" . The guy stood like a statue thr. he looke @her like he sees any fairy in front of his eyes.

: Meera , tum yaha.. (r u here)

Meera : ( she turns towards tht voice & found his mother standing besids her) she goes to her & touches her feet. hamne suna ki vo dono waapis aa gye , kya ye sach hai. ( I heard tht thy r cme back , is ths true)

Rathod's mother : ( Nodded happily ) tum baitho hum abhi aate hai . ( Plz seat here , i am coming in a few minutes)

Meera : ( Seat on large white couch , she luke around , she d guy whom she bumped look @ her , she smiles @ him.)

Suddenely d guy comes near to her & seats oppsites her.

: Hi im Shree. whats yiur name .

Meera : Meera , par maaf kijiy ga maine aap ko pehechana nahi. ( Bt sry i cn't recongnize you)

Shree: Ha , hum peheli baar hi mil rahe hai na , ( ys , ths our 1st meetings)

Suddenenly a guy who wears white & black chekx shirt wit black jeans. comes to them .

He silently goes to Shree & ask him somthing , Shree nodded in a negative manner . Tht guys feels someone gazes on him . He quickly turn around & see a girl who wears salwar-kameez luk @ thm.

He leave Shree & goes to tht girl .

: Maaf kiji ye ga hame ne aap ko nahi pehechana.( Sry, bt i cn't recongnise u)

Shree : (Interapts between ) Rathod Sir , ye Meera hai .

Meera : Whn she heard tht name her heart beat stops 4 a second , he is standing in front of her .

Rathod : (Give a hard glare to Shree )

she smiles to Rathod , bt he look @ her questioningly . Suddenely Rathod's Mother comes to his rescue , & tld him are ye Meera hai , Hamare Gehlot ji ki beti. Some servant comes thr & inform her tht in kitchen Maharaj ji needed her. So , she goes frm thr.

Rathod : ( His face lit up) To tum Meera ho .

Meera : Ha.

Rathod : ( Look @ her . mischivously & asks her ) kya abhi bhi tumhari naak beheti hai. ( Is your nose is still running.)

Meera : ( As soon as she heard tht she beats on his chest) Ab mai badi ho chuki hue , meri naak nahi beheti. ( I'm big nw , nw i dn't hva running nose )

Rathod : ( bent futher towards her , nw thr faces r inch closer to each other. thy senses thr hot breaths on each other's faces , he ask her in a small voice , nw only Meera hear. ) Badi bhi ho chuki ho , aur bahut khubsurat bhi.

Thy look @ each others eyes. Rathod feels sumthing in her eyes , tht he never sees. Thy lost in each others eyes.

Suddenely Shree felt awkward & started coughing intentionly . Suddenely Rthod comes out of his trance & glare @ shree. Rathod tld Meera nw he has to go somwhere for his wrk.

Meera nodded in a yes manner. Rathod goes wit Shree who scared nw what his Choef do wit him.

Meera look 2 his back . Suddenely Rathod stops his track & turn his face towards Meera & smile @ her. Meera smiles back. Rathod leaves frm there.

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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princess14

@princess14

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

great update! love the story so far!

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

The story is getting more interesting with each update, please update dear😊

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

plz plz plz send me a PM wen u update nxt i just looove❤️ ur ff

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nutsroxxx

@nutsroxxx

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hey i read all the parts together!!!

Cant wait to read more

Plz update fast😊😊

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Oh wow
Wonderful
Seems like this is a Rathod and meera love story tooo
Wonderful
Keep writing

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

CHAPTER 82nd Dy @ Rathod's House It's 6:30Am nw. Everyone is awake nw , Bcoz of thr daily habits. Rahtod , Arjun & Chotu r in a gym which is situated on a 3rd floor of palace. Riya is getting ready , bcoz she goes to Ancient Temple pf thr family wit her mother. Shree is as usual wondering in whole palace. Befor leaving gym Rathod inform thm to come break-fast table @ 9:00 Am sharp.It's 9:00AM. All ETF Team & family members gathers to d break-fast table. Shree & Chotu r happy to see lotz of , different food on a table. Rathod look @ d table & sighed. All things r his fav. bt nw he hva to keep long distance frm all of ths Ghee wala food. So , he orders sme healthy food for him & Arjun. Chotu is already filling his plate wit lotz of food. While Shree is still thinking Frm where to start. Arjun & Rathod look @ thm , smiles themselves. While eating Chotu glanes @ his Arjun sir & Rathod sir , he found thy both look @ him & his plate.Chotu : Sir sirf aaj ke din Plz ( Sir only tod , plz )Rathod : ( Smiles @ him ) Theek hai Chotu , par phir kal ye baat mat kehena . ( It's k Chotu , bt plz dn't repeat ths thing tom.)Arjun & Shree & Rathod smiles .. While Chotu helplessly lukng @ thm. Suddenenly Shree noticed Riya is missing ..He asks Rathod Sir abt tht.Rathod : Chutki Ma sa ke saath mandir gayi hai. ( Chutki has gone to temple wit Ma.)Shree & Chotu : Kya , Riya aur mandir??? Rathod : ( Look @ thm confusely) Ha , hamara pracheen mandir hai , 400 saal purana . ( Ys , they owned temple. .its 400 yrs old)Shree & Chotu : Kya sach . Sir kya hum bhi vaha chal sakte hai. ( Really , Sir cn w also go thr.)Rathod : ( Look @ Arjun )Shree & Chotu : Plz Sir...Arjun & Rathod : (Nodded happily)Atfer breakfast ,thy all headed towards temple. After 2 & 1/2 hours thy all reach in temple. Arjun inform thm , he waited outside .. bt Shree insists him , so he ready to come wit thm. In a Temple Rathod's mother giving bth of her childrens "kundali" to thr Rajpurohit ji . Bcoz she wanted to know , her childrens future is safe.Rajpurohit ji : ( Looking @ Riya & Rathod's kundali , & calculating somthing) Ma sa : Kya hua Rahpurohit ji (What happened) Sab kuch theek to hai na ( Everything is all right)Rajpurohitji : ( Looking bit tense) Maharani ji , ithihas phirse daura ya jaaye ga. ( Princess , histroy will repeat hetself )Ma sa : ( Scared whn remerbed all those scary things) Par koi upaaye nahi hai. ( Bt thr is any solutin on ths )Rajpurohit ji : Nahi Maharani , ye vidhi ka vidhan hai , jise hum badal nahi sakte . ( No , Princess ths is destiny , w cn't change thr destiny.)

Ma sa : ( Vry scared nw.) Par Riya ko kuch...( Bt Riya)

Rajpurohitji: Un dono ko kuch nahi hoga..( Dn't wry nthg happen to them.)

Ma sa : Un dono ko??? Kya matlab hai aap ka.( What do u mean)

Rajpurohitji : Maharani ji , Ye yog aap ke dono baccho ke kundali mai hai.( Princess , ths relates to both of ur childrens.)

Riya waiting 4 her mother for past half hour. People greets her . She gets bored , she is nt used to ths nw. Suddenely she feel he is near , vry near to her , she immedatly search her surroundinds , bt find nothing. She thinks , " Riya control yourself." Suddenenly ppl shouted , " Kunwar sa aa gaye." ( Sir is coming) Riya sees her brother is coming towards her wit his collguages. Her eyes searched for him. Bt she cannot see him. Suddenely he appers frm Rathod's back. Team comes near to Riya. She finally sees him ," hmm he looking nyc in blue. matching maching." Riya thinks to her herself. Shree & Chotu look @ Riya in a awww , bcoz thy never see her in a salwar kameez. Arjun also look @ her , "Finally she looking like a girl , only girl no a beautiful girl." Arjun corrects himself in a mind.

(Riya's dress )

His gaze meets her , She sees some unkown feeling in his dark eyes. She try to understand it , bt failed. Rathod dn't acknowledge it , bcoz he is too busy wit his phone. Shree & Chotu look @ thm , & whispers ,

" Dekha na abhi se same same.." Shree pointed towards thr colths colour.

"Ha , lagta hai , ab kuch baat aage bade gi."(Finally i think ths story move further.)

"Tere Naina , has diye , dil mai tere bas gaye mere naina..."

Shree sings ths song in a low voice , bt tht heard by Arjun & Riya , thy immeteadely comes of thr trance. Thy look @ surroundings. Bcoz of Shree song Rathod look @ him weirdly.

But ths things witnessed by Rathod's mother , she frightened. Finally histroy repeats herself. Scroll down for contiuation...

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Nw ETF Team goes inside temple & takes blessing . Suddenely Arjun gaze felt on a small temple of Lord Ganesh. He goes thr, bcoz since childhood Ganpati his fav god. Bcoz he got school holiday tht dy. His momther prepares sweet on tht day & father brings Ganeshiji idol @ thr home. Little Arjun always gave his little helping hand in ganpati's decorations. He loves Ganpati ji aarti so much , bcoz after tht he got his fav food ,"Modak " ( Ganpati prasad , one of d fav food of lord Ganesh.) . After his marraige Roshni also do things , bcoz she belives in a god. Arjun also helps her in a vry little little things. Roshni always tld him , " I got best husband in a world."

Arjun remerbed those days , where his frnds , realtives & collagues comes to his house during ganpati festival . Arjun himself sung Ganeshi ji aarti , his father teaches him His eyes feel wit tears. But tod he lost everthing bcoz of ths God. He hates god. His god stole his closed ones frm him. He wips his tears Suddenely Rathod ask him " Dinbhar yahi rahene hai , Raute ?" ( You wnt to live here for whole day.?) They leaves frm thr.

Sry guys but for 10 days i'm damn busy in Ganpati Festival. So i cn't hva time to update . Bt i promise all of u whnever i gets time i"ll surely update. If anyone want PM plz add me as ur buddy.

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