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Posted: 11 years ago
last part The crtn or histri chanel jovii ho...maja bohot ayaaa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
good one...


Arjun's confusion and desperation was nicely portrayed...poor Riya...felt sorry for her...

the last scene was funny! cont soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
😆 loved your updates...
So meera is a junglibili😆, and she bite him😆
But poor Riya and Arjun😭...
But the last fight between arjun and rathore😆
Please continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

CHAPTER 20

 awesome update plzzz update soon waiting eagerly👏
 
 
 
 
Sry 4 d late guys..
 
 
 
Rathod ordered his driver to drop Meera home. And he goes to Shree's room. His all team dng  hard wrk on ths case. Arjun thinking somthing , as soon as he sees Rathod he goes towards him.
 
 
Arjun : Rathod ek min.
 
wit his his voice , all team members lifts thr  heads to see whats happening nw. Thy r too busy in case nw , bcoz after Arjun mistake thy cn't catch Sikandar , bt tod thy it is mre difficult for tyhm to catch him r killed him.
 
 
Arjun & Rathod talked somthing for 30 mins. Riya looking @ thm . Arjun is in calm while Rathod is a very bad mood , After finished his talk Arjun look @ Riya wit d corner of his eyes, & found she directly look @ him. He sees 'wht happened look ' in her eyes, but choose to ignore it & goes frm thr. Riya only look @ his back. She sensed tht somthing bad happened..
 
Rathod throw tht paper on d table & shouts " Ye Arjun apne aap ko samjata kya hai ? Jo vo chaega vahi hoga kya ? Hamari bhi koi izzat hai ya nahi.? " All look @ him with surprised eyes. Thy always knew tht thr Chief is angry yong man , bt thy also knew he never express his feelings in front of thm.
 
 
Shree : What happened Sir?
 
Rathod : Kuch nahi , jake apna kaam karo.
 
Chotu : Par Sir aap bahut pareshan najar aa rahe hai .
 
Rathod : Chotu!!!!!!!!!
 
Riya : ( Senses her brother condition & ask him ) Bhai... ( & bite her lip... ) (Rathod look @ her angrily . Thy r brother-sister. bt thy always kept apart thr personal relation on professional front. )
Mai bas puchna chahti thi Sir ki koi prob hai , aap bahut hi pareshan najar aa rahe hai.
 
 
Rathod : Aur kya ho sakta hai Riya , meri pareshani ka karan sirf aur sirf ye Arjun hai , pta nahi kya chalta hai iske dimmag mai , pehele to ETF ko join karane ki jaldbaji aur ab ETF ko chodne ki jaldi. Sach mai ye pagal hai.
 
 
Trio is just shocked , Riya is standing like a statue , so finally he wants to go frm thr , he wants to cut his all realtion with her , He dn't want her. Riya felt bad , Whn he'll understand me , whn will he come to know tht wht i want actually frm him? He tld me  tht he loves me & nw. dn't ans me & just leave me all alone. Shree & Chotu look @ her , thy bth knew nowdaysc Arjun & Riya r coming closer bt nw wht is ths. , is anything happened wrong?
 
 
Rathod : ( Just look @ trio , he can understand thr feelings , bcoz thy always want Arjun in thr team , as a frnd , as a good observer , as strict person. & for himself hw wants his best buddy . Rathod dn't want to lost him again.) Just go back to wrk team , kisi ke jaane se ya kisi ke aane se hame koi fark nahi padna chayie . Agar use hamari jarurat nahi hai , to hame bhi koi jarurat nahi hai uski.
 
 
Shree suddenely noticed somthing
 
Shree : Sir...
 
 
Rathod : Ab kya hai Shree ??
 
 
Shree : Sir vo aap ke neck pe...
 
Nw all looking @ Rathod confusely & Rathod himself touches his neck to find out exactly wht happened.
 
 
Rathod : Kya hua Shree ( He nw irritates First Arjun , & nw ths trio )
 
Shree : ( Tke his Chief's hands & touches tht mark , as soon as Rathod touches it with his fingers he felt sme burn thr. )
 
 
Chotu : ( Goes close to Rathod ) Sir ye sab kisne kiya?
 
 
Shree : Sir ye to kisi ke kaatne ke nishan lagte hai , lagta hai ki kisi ne abhi abhi frseh kata hai aap ko. ( & bite his lips & also get a small slap frm Riya on his back)
 
 
Rathod : ( Suddenely remerberd his precious time wit Meera , she bite him on d neck during d moment )  (He look @ trio ) ha vo billi ne kata tha. 😆
 
Riya : (worridly ask him ) kab ???? 
 
 
Rathod : vo mere frnd ke ghar gaya tha na tab.
 
 
Chotu : Par Sir mujhe nahi lagta ki koi paltu billi aisa kaam kar sakti hai , Jarur koi jungli billi hogi , jise aapne pakdne ki kosish ki hogi  aur usne aap ko kaat diya.
 
 
Rathod : Haa haa vo jungli hi thi ( He remerbered Meera & smiles to himself & goes frm thr ) 😊
 
 
Chotu , Shree & Riya : ( confusely) Ab isme hasne wali konsi baat thi????😕

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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CHAPTER 21
 
 
 
Rathod orderd thm to go thr rooms. Arjun also goes frm thr & he dragged a nearer room by Rathod.
 
 
Arjun : Rathod kya hai ye sab?( He ask him angrily )
 
Rathod : Dn't ask me. U knw why i did ths. I lied front of thm , bt i knw wht r u dng thr. hw could you think tht , u try peep in my sister's room when she is sleep. ( Rathod holds Arjun's clooer angrily.) i want ans Arjun , i want ans.
 
 
Arjun : (Look @ Rathod , he knows he have to tell him all , otherwise he wiil be ...) I LOVE HER.
 
 
Rathod : ( Whn he heard ths he leaves Arjun's collar & hold his head) Hw , Whn ??????
 
Arjun : I really dn't knw Sam . I also realize ths yesterday. thyswhy i want to leave ETF. bt bt...
 
 
Rathod : Bt wht...bt wht Arjun ( Rathod roraed on him)
 
 
Arjun : Bt her love stop me. I cn't leave her
 
 
Rathod : ( hold Arjun's jaw & look @ him wit red eyes.)
 
 
Arjun : ( knows tod he is deal wit a Rajput Prince  , a brother who goes to any boundary , who does anything any extreme thing for his sister's happiness)
 
 
Rathod ( hold Arjun's jaw tighter & ask him again) say again , wht u said before.
 
 
Arjun : Ys Rathod , she also loves me.
 
 
Rathod : ( as soon as he heard  those sentences frm Arjun , he leave him.& turn around) par kaise Arjun??
 
 
Arjun : ( Narrtes him all )
 
 
Rathod : (Listen all calmly . bt he again hold Arjun's collar ) Dn't play wit her , she is innocent. if  i find out tht you r playing wid her , thn i 'll show u ...
 
 
Arjun : Nahi Rathod . I really feel for her. I want to marry her. I want to live wid her.
 
 
Rathod : Theek hai . Agar aisi baat hai to mai tum dono ke saath hue. (& goes frm thr leaving Arjun astonished. Arjun saw new face of Rathod) ( He heard lot abt Rajput family. thr anger , thr loyalty towards thr custom. bt first time he saw all ths in his best frnd , a true Rajput.)
 
 
 
 
All team disturb bcoz of Arjun's decision. All of them attached to him , close to him. Thr r nw family. Shree & Chotu feels very bad for thr best frnd . Riya  is so silent , Rathod palace is like ghost house for thm , bcoz all d time palace witness team fights , laughing , majak-masti. Everytime palace filled wit lagre laughter , happiness , bt tod he witness thr silence also. On dining table no one try to talk , all of thm silenlty eat thr break-fast. Arjun noticies ths. He noticies Riya , who cn't eat her food properly. She is so silent , she does nt even look @ him. "To use fark padta hai " Arjun thinks to himself.
 
 
Here Rathod's condition is very differnt frm others. He again lost his best frnd. Bt tod he care for his chutki , ys he knows d truth. Tht truth , his chutki try to hide frm him. She love him . Rathod felt vry bad for his little sis. He knows tht she love him tooo much , bt she love wrong person , emotionless person. Bt after last night Arjun's confession he felt relived . He is happy tht he also love his sister. Bt he also knows tht his family never approve thr relation . Bt tod he knows wht he want to do. He knows tod he is thr to save his sister , he is capble nw to fight wit thm . He only want his sister's happyness , he dn't care abt any custom r anything. Rathod knows his sister's happyness belongs to him. He also scared , whn his father knows abt thm , hw will he react? he never understand thm? he never understand her , her happiness thy just killed her in front of her mother. Rathod & Riya witnessed d bloddy histroy of thr family. Rathod knows tht time he ws small , he cn't do anything for her. but tod he do anything to protect her daughter frm thm , ys his Di's daughter. He unable to save his Di & VikramSingh. He never forgot her ples , her rquests , her crying & last her long scream. He cannot forgot his past , bt tod he will try to change his chutki's future. He only remeber his mothers voice , " Samar lekar chala jaaya Riya ko yaha se , in sab se dur. In darindo ka shikar hone se ab sirf tu hi bacha sakta hai use. "  thyswhy Rathod left his home wid Riya. He protect his sis frm everything frm his family , VikarmSingh family who search thm madly in mumbai. bt thr gud luck Rathod spotted thm once in a mumbai & afterthat he decided to shift Riya other safe place. He ket silent for d years abt his sisters. he only got to knw her frm his sources. bt after she joined ETF . Rathod felt happy , bt he also hva a tension. nw his worry increases , he hva to protect Riya frm VikramSingh's family & also goons etc. Rathod ordered her to hide thr relationship.
 
 
 
Here Riya seats in d garden. tears flow down frm her eyes. again he hurt her , again he misunderstood her. Suddenely a sunrays hit her eyes & she closes her eyes. She open her eyes bt again , sunrays hit her. she look here & there & sees lot of cars coming thr. She stands & look @ thm. She found one boy who is seating  in d one of cars, hold small mirror & ... ys she understand who is he... oh my god thy r here... she immedatly wipe her tears & smile . Cars stop in front of thm. One lady climb down frm car, Riya litterally run towards her like child. As soon as lady saw her she open her arms to her. & hugs her tightly .
 
 
 
 
 
Vaishnavi Mahant
                                   ( Riya's Choti Maa)
 
 
 
 
Riya : Choti Maaa... aap... (she said happily)
 
Choti Maa : Ha hum... (and started kissing Riya all over d face)
 
 
 
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Riya : Choti Maa ... im so happy..
 
 
Riya's gaze fell on two men who standing lilltle away frm thm & watching her. One man whispers somting in other. She instantly reconginze thm.
 
 
Riya : Samrat ke bacche ... teri  chugli karne ki aadat abhi tak nhi gyi na .
 
 
As soon as Samrat heard ths & he starts running here & there & Riya goes behind him. Thy yelled like small childrnes , throwing flowers on each other , Riya also throw several flowers pot on Samrat's direction , bt she miss it. Rathod disturbs bcoz of lotz of noise & open his romm's curtain & lokk @ ths drama. It's nt new to him. Rathod smile @ thm. Riya did ths whn Sam is thr ... Sam means Sam is thr.. if Sam is thr means she is also thr. Rathod ran like wind & goes to garden. in tht process he also hit his team , who cme thr to watch Riya's masti. Arjun lips curved into smile whn he sees Riya's ths avatar. Her hands filld wit mud ,  & wit tht hands she put her hairlocks behind her ear again & again. She fail to notice tht her dress & her hair filled wit mud. Rathod look @ lady , who is standing thr & try to stop bth of thm , while another boy  who standing near to lady chuckled himself. & also enjy ths drama. Tht boy gaze fell on Rathod who is badly panting. He goes to him & hug him tightly . Rathod also hug him .
 
 
Samar Rathod : Shuraya kaise hai tu..?
 
 
Shuarya : Mai theek hue , par tum kaise ho ( He ask in a concerned tone)
 
suddenely tht lady turned around & look @ Rathod.
 
 
Lady : Samar mera baccha..
 
Samar Rathod :  Gani khamba Choti Maa..
 
 
Lady : Khamba ga... ( She cn't complete her sentence bcoz starting crying , she kisses Rathod all over d face) Mera baccha , tu thik to hai na , kaise hai tu , kitna patla ho gya hai tu , tujhe vaha kuch khane ko nahi milta tha , ab mai aa gyi hue na , tujhe ekdum se theek kar dungi. ( wit tht she wpis her tears)
 
 
Rathod : Choti Maa , hum bilkul thik hai , ekdum hatte - katte.
 
Suddenely one flower hit on Rathod's face , he looke @ tht direction & smile .
 
Shurya : (Also look @ thm) Ab jak tak koi ek pakda nahi jata , tab tak ye sab chalta rehega.
 
 
All ETF Team looking @ Riya & Samrat who is busy in playing hide & seek nw.Suddenely one lady yells on thm ."Ab bas Samrat & Riya dona yaha aayie isi wqut. " All look @ the voice dirction & found Maharani Gaytridevi. who yelled bth of thm. Samrat & Riya silently come thr wit bending thr heads, " Pehele jakar naha kar aayie aap dono " Samrat & Riya enter d house , Riya turned around & showed a tounge to Samrat , while Samrat makes werid faces to her. " Riya & Samrat koi danga -masti nahi ." Maharani Gaytridevi yelled @ thm again.  
 
Gaytridevi : Kanti aap jaayie aur un dono ko dekhiye ( She ordres thr servant)
 
All now seated on hall , while ETF Team standing thr uncomfortablely.
Shuraya's gaze fell on thm
 
 
Shuraya: Samar Bhai sa ye sab kon hai?
 
 
Rathod : ( Turned around & look @ thm ) Ye sab meri family hai ( He introduce all to Shaurya & his Choti Maa. ( & then inform his team ) Ye hai Maharani Vaishnavi ji  aur meri Choti Maa matlb hamari sagi choti chachi. Aur ye hai Shuarya Rathod inke bade bete aur jo garden mai Riya ke saath khel rahe the vo hai Samrat Rathod , shuarya ke chote bhai . ye dono hamre sage chachere bhai (first cousin)  hai.
 
 
 
                                                                    
 
 
 Samrat Rathod (naughty)
 
                                                 Age : six month elder than Riya.
 
 
                                          
 
 
 
 
 
Shuraya Rathod (serious)
 
                                               Age :2 yrs small than Rathod.
 
                                                
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayyy you updated... finally... wait I'm reserving it🤣
 
Hayyyeee you introduced the charming Samrat... wow looking forward for more dear...
Cant wait loved the update...🤗
Haha...Samrat and Riya running around like kids..amazing...😳
well done manu... another awesome chapter...just update asap dear😃
Edited by funkylicious - 11 years ago
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It was awesome...and their masti time ... really cool..
hope their bloody history remains away.