New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Amazing update...

first part was real funny...sandwich ban jaayenge...nice one!!

then the second part...sikandar is dead...great!

Riya is wounded...thats sad...hope she will be alright and as she said, she gets to hear those 3 magical words from him and she comes back from death...

post soon!

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

argument part really nice but scared for riya.do continue soon

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elle..

@elle..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Lol loved ariya indirect figghttt

Riya be safe :):)
Update soon

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Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Hey ...

Great ...

In the first part loved their little nok-jhok ...

But at the end , was so scared ...

Hope Riya is fine ...

Cont. soon ...

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

lol..hilarious scene at start..riya samjhaunifies arjun but speaks to chotu and arjun to shree🤣at last firing words to both of them🤣

shree and chotu cracked me with their"yha se jaldi ni nikle toh sandwich bn jaenge"🤣then with their folded hands"arjun sir ko ab aap hi inse bacha skte hai"😆🤣and"acha kia shree jo tune ac chala dia..temp high ho gya tha"🤣

so riya wants arjun to propose in a special way..

chotu's idea worked along with rathore's anger😆..and arjun's words"kabhi kbhi khote sikke bhi kam kar jate hai"😃

riya fought bravely..but her condition is soo bad😕😭

plss dont kill her😭

update soon.

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

CHAPTER 26

All r disturb , Chotu feels very bad he feel helpless tod , bcoz his two bestfrnds r in bad condition & he cn't do anything for thm. He just stand in one corner . Samar Rathod just look @ his sister frm d door of her room , doctor surround her , he sees dr try thr best , he helplessly put his bth palms of d door & glued his eyes on his sister . He curesd himself why why he is nt wit her ? why he leave her alone? why why & why??? His eyes turned red due to constant crying. "Chutki mai tujhe har khushi dena chahta tha , par ye sab maine kabhi nhi socha tha , mai darta tha ki kahi tumhe kuch ho na jaaye , isiliye hamesha tumhare saath khada rha , tum apni zindagi jee paaoo , isiliye maine ghar bhi choda , par aaj rakhi ka farz nhi nibha paaya , mujhe maaf karde , maaf kar de Chutki.. " Rathod thinks to himself. He wip his tears & turn back , & look @ Arjun who silently seate thr on d bench. He is great shock , Rathod understands his condition & sits beside to him , he just keep his hand on Arjun's shoulder & sqeezes it. Arjun lift his head & look @ Rathod . Rathod shocked , he expected Arjun must be crying bcoz of Riya's condition , bt Arjun seems calm , he looked @ Rathod quizzically see his red eyes & shocked face & ask him .

Arjun : Tu kyu ro rha hai Rathod? Sikandar tera rishtedar tha ka?

Rathod : Arjun (shocked face)

Arjun : Aur nhi to kya vo to mar gaya , aaj mera badla pura hua , aaj mari Roshni ko mukti mil gayi , aur mujhe bhi , ab mai khush hue. Aaj ghar jakar sab se pehele teri Chutki ko propose karunga , use shadi karunga .. (he sounds dreamy )

Rathod : (looked @ Chotu who also listens thr convo , bth looked @ Arjun confusedly)

Rathod : Arjun vo Riya...

Arjun : Ha , vahi to mai tumse puchna cha rha tha , ki kaha hai madam? Kab se dikhayi nhi di , jarur Shree ke pass baithi hogi .

Chotu : (Aggressveily goes to near thm & inform Arjun) Sir Riya theek nhi hai , use aapki jarurat hai , aap jakar mil aayie use , use baht chot lagi hai , bahut khoon baha hai , abhi dr ne bhi kaha ki ab sab uperwale ke haath mai hai.

Arjun : (Stand up & slap Chotu hardly ) Chotu , aisa bolna bhi mat meri Riya kuch nhi ho sakta , vo theek hai bilkul theek , aur vo Shree ke pass hi hai , tum samaz gaye ya phir...

Rathod : (interrupted him ) Samjhne ki jarurat tumhe hai Arjun , vaha vo jindagi aur maut ke beech zunj rhi hai aur yaha tum ...

Arjun : Tumhe sharm nhi aati Sameer , jo apni hi behen ke bare mai kuch bhi bol rhe ho... use kch nhi hua , chalo ab Shree ko milte hai & hum sab ghar chalte hai.

Chotu whispers in Rathod's ear , "Sir mujhe lafgta hai ki Arjun Sir ko bada shock laga hai , is saari events ka , isiliye vo kuch samaz nhi paa rahe hai .

Here Arjun look @ here & there & searches her , bt she is nt thr. "kahi ghar jaldi to nhi gayi? " lagta hai ab mujhe hi use dhudna padega. " he thinks to himself. & start to searches her in all rooms in d ward whr thy standing , finally Arjun find her , his life , his love Riya , bt she is sleeping on d bed , huge machines connecting to her sme doctors r thr & discussing somthing. Arjun goes to near Riya. & ask her , " ab ye kya naya naatak hai ? chalo utho , janta hue bada thak chuki ho , par yaha pe koi sota hai kya? " he talking to her . Dr look @ him signaled nurse to take him away. Nurse slowly goes near to him.

Nurse : Sir , sir ...

Arjun : (looke @ her ) jee

Nurse : aap yaha nhi baith sakte , aap ko jana hoga. plz sir. (she look @ him wit hpe. )

Arjun : (turn to see Riya ) jee , par inhe dekhiye so gye yahi , ab kya kare , ek baar vo uth jaaye to hame chale jaaynge.

Nurse : (smile to him ) Sir aap jaaiye bahar , mai unhe leke aa jaaungi.

Arjun : hmm par ..

Nurse : plz sir.

She help Arjun to came out frm room . he is big shock his mind did nt accept fact tht Riya got hurt badly , she is serious. his fear for lonliness nt allow him to accept tht fact she is stabbed , his mind purposely put curtain on tht part.

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Within a five minutes dr come outside , rathod & Chotu goes near to him . Dr just look @ thm & utter "sry , hum unhe bach nhi paaye. " & goes frm thr. Chotu keeep his hand on his Cheif's shulder & console him who stand thr like a statue. Suddenely Arjun shouted luking @ his watch " ye kya baat hue Rathod , abhi tak vo nures Riya ko leke nhi aayi.? (wait for few minutes ) ohho acha ab samza mere saath prank kar rahi hai. Rathod get irritated & goes to Arjun & slap him hard across his face.

"Tu kya naatak kar raha hai , kab se dekh rha hue mai , mar chuki vo , mar chuki hai teri Riya , mar chuki hai , jaa chuki hame sab se dur.." (Rathod inform him)

Arjun only registered Rathod's last wrds , vo mar chuki hai , jaa chuki hai ham sab se dur... " (he get angry & hit Rathod )

Arjun : Rathod (he yelled out of his lungs ) meri Riya ko kuch nhi ho sakta , vo theek hai , vo andar so rahi hai .

Rathod hold Arjun's hand & dragged him inside of d room & show him Riya's body & yelled on him , "Dekh Rawte vo chali gayi , vo mar chuki hai , dekh uska chehera , (rathod draaged him near machines & shows Arjun one machine tht reflects heartbeats) dekh ise dekh kuch dikh raha hai yahi , bol na , nahi na Rawte vo chali gayi hai , use Sikandar ne maar diya meri behen ko Arjun , maar diya (& hugs Arjun) Nw Arjun slowly registered d whole incident in his mind, whole incident play again his mind. & he yell "Riyaaa" Rathod break d hug & look @ Arjun. Arjun look @ Riya. Wardboy abt to cover her face wit white chadar , bt Arjun stops him , He seat beside her on bed & start talking to her.

Arjun : Dekho na , ye sab kya bole rahe hai . ( he take her hand in his hand) Par mai jaanta hue ki tum mujhe chodkar kahi nhi jaaogi , tum sirf naatak kar rahi ho na , plz Riya bolo na , in sab ko zooth saabit kar do . aur hamar pyar ko sach... (he pause for a second & again looke @ her & kiss her palm , which he hold. ) H aRiya mai bhi tumse pyar karta hue , bahut pyar , mera sab kuch sirf tum ho sirf tum , meri zindagi ka matlab ho tum , tum jaa nhi sakti , mari saans chal rahi hai iska matlab tum jinda ho , ur fine my baby , ur fine. (he cuppe her face) Tumhe pat hai na ki mai kitna akudu hue , case ke alval auer kuch nhi samaz aata mujhe , par tumne is akdu ko pyar karna sikha diya , mai phir se pyar karne laga Riya , mai aaj hasta bhi hue (& smile to her)

Rathod : (angryli yell on him ) Rawte ab bas , bahut sun chuka mai ( angryli goes to him & hold Riya's right hand in his hand ) dekho , ye dekho Ratwe ( & pulled Arjun's hand & put on his sisters armrest ) kuch mehsus hua , nahi na , uski naadi bhi nhi chal hai , vo mar chuki hai , ab plz Rawte aur mat khelo meri behen ke pyar ke saath ... plz go away. ( Arjun try to find her naadi , bt he didn't get it , he is scared & look @ her , he try to read her face , her eyes was closed , no emotion is thr. he feard & tightly hold her hand ) "Riya tum mere saath aisa nhi kar sakti , mai mar jaaunga Riya , mai mar jaaounga ... sach mein tumhe vapis aana hoga mere liye , hamare pyar ke liye , mai akele jeena nhi chahta , mai phir se ghut ghut ke marna nhi chahta , plz Riya . plz open ur eyes.. mai vaada karta hue Riya , mai tumhe chod ke kahi nhi jaaunga , zindagibhar tumhari ghulami karunga , tumhe kabhi chillane ne mauka nahi dunga. (he again look @ her bt still no response) He put his head on her palm & kisses it slowly . He suddenely remebered Riya's wrds , "Mai maut ke muh se bhi vapis aa jaaungi , agar usne mujhe vo three magical wrds bole to." Arjun slowly put her hand on bed again. & look @ her face , "I Luv You Riya." bt Riya does nt open her eyes. Arun said those wrds again & again , bt did nt affect her . Arjun get angry & feared also , he yelled angrily ths time mre loudly like whole wrd listen to him , "I LUV YOU , I LUV YOU RIYA , PLZ PLZ DN'T LAEVE ME" & closes his eyes in pain. Suddeenly he heard sme different sound , he open his eyes & look @ her , her head goes upward , she try to breath , like soul again come in to body , her body try to breath again , try to feel oxygen again Rathod & Chotu who witness all , rushed to outside of room happily shouted for dr. Here Arjun lift her & pulled her in his arms , he broke d hug & look @ her face , she still try to get oxygen , Arjun happyli kisse her all over d face , he look @ her lip & her lips r slowly parting to get mre & mre oxygen for her body. Arjun caressing her lower lip through his thumb & bent down to claim her. within a minutes he enjy her lips , he dn't know abt time , bt still captures & enjy her lips. Suddenely one person ask him " Are ye aap kya kar rahe hai , ?" Arjun broke d kiss & turn around to see Nurse standing thr in embrassed situation. Arjun smirk & again look @ his lady love lips , which turned red & swolloen , her lower lip is silghtily got cut bcoz of his teeths, little blood comes frm thr. Arjun slowly wipe blood , while wiping d blood , he feel burn on his lip , like somone bite thr . he felt her pain in him too. He again pulled her in a hug . bt nw he hears his name frm her mouth , she try to call him in ths state also . Arjun kiss her hair & informed her , "im here , im here " at tht point her lips closed . she stop calling him. Nw he felt her breath on his neck.

Hpe u like part , Finally he take first staep instaed of Riya.