New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
Great ...
In the first part loved their little nok-jhok ...
But at the end , was so scared ...
Hope Riya is fine ...
Cont. soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol..hilarious scene at start..riya samjhaunifies arjun but speaks to chotu and arjun to shree🤣at last firing words to both of them🤣


shree and chotu cracked me with their"yha se jaldi ni nikle toh sandwich bn jaenge"🤣then with their folded hands"arjun sir ko ab aap hi inse bacha skte hai"😆🤣and"acha kia shree jo tune ac chala dia..temp high ho gya tha"🤣


so riya wants arjun to propose in a special way..


chotu's idea worked along with rathore's anger😆..and arjun's words"kabhi kbhi khote sikke bhi kam kar jate hai"😃


riya fought bravely..but her condition is soo bad😕😭


plss dont kill her😭


update soon.
Edited by priya00147 - 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 26
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
All r disturb , Chotu feels very bad he feel helpless tod , bcoz his two bestfrnds r in bad condition & he cn't do anything for thm. He just stand in one corner . Samar Rathod just look @ his sister frm d door of her room , doctor surround her , he sees dr try thr best , he helplessly put his bth palms of d door & glued his eyes on his sister . He curesd himself why why he is nt wit her ? why he leave her alone? why why & why??? His eyes turned red due to constant crying. "Chutki mai tujhe har khushi dena chahta tha , par ye sab maine kabhi nhi socha tha , mai darta tha ki kahi tumhe kuch ho na jaaye , isiliye hamesha tumhare saath khada rha , tum apni zindagi jee paaoo , isiliye maine ghar bhi choda , par aaj rakhi ka farz nhi nibha paaya , mujhe maaf karde , maaf kar de Chutki.. " Rathod thinks to himself.  He wip his tears & turn back , & look @ Arjun who silently seate thr on d bench. He is great shock , Rathod understands his condition & sits beside to him , he just keep his hand on Arjun's shoulder & sqeezes it. Arjun lift his head & look @ Rathod . Rathod shocked , he expected Arjun must be crying bcoz of Riya's condition , bt Arjun seems calm , he looked @ Rathod quizzically see his red eyes & shocked face & ask him .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : Tu kyu ro rha hai Rathod? Sikandar tera rishtedar tha ka?
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod : Arjun (shocked face)
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : Aur nhi to kya vo to mar gaya , aaj mera badla pura hua , aaj mari Roshni ko mukti mil gayi , aur mujhe bhi , ab mai khush hue. Aaj ghar jakar sab se pehele teri Chutki ko propose karunga , use shadi karunga .. (he sounds dreamy )
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod : (looked @ Chotu who also listens thr convo , bth looked @ Arjun confusedly)
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod : Arjun vo Riya...
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : Ha , vahi to mai tumse puchna cha rha tha , ki kaha hai madam? Kab se dikhayi nhi di , jarur Shree ke pass baithi hogi .
 
 
 
 
 
Chotu : (Aggressveily goes to near thm & inform Arjun) Sir Riya theek nhi hai , use aapki jarurat hai , aap jakar mil aayie use , use baht chot lagi hai , bahut khoon baha hai , abhi dr ne bhi kaha ki ab sab uperwale ke haath mai hai.
 
 
 
Arjun : (Stand up & slap Chotu hardly ) Chotu , aisa bolna bhi mat meri Riya kuch nhi ho sakta , vo theek hai bilkul theek , aur vo Shree ke pass hi hai , tum samaz gaye ya phir...
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod : (interrupted him ) Samjhne ki jarurat tumhe hai Arjun , vaha vo jindagi aur maut ke beech zunj rhi hai aur yaha tum ...
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : Tumhe sharm nhi aati Sameer , jo apni hi behen ke bare mai kuch bhi bol rhe ho... use kch nhi hua , chalo ab Shree ko milte hai & hum sab ghar chalte hai.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Chotu whispers in Rathod's ear , "Sir mujhe lafgta hai ki Arjun Sir ko bada shock laga hai , is saari events ka , isiliye vo kuch samaz nhi paa rahe hai .
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here Arjun look @ here & there & searches her , bt she is nt thr. "kahi ghar jaldi to nhi gayi? "  lagta hai ab mujhe hi use dhudna padega. " he thinks to himself. & start to searches her in all rooms in d ward whr thy standing , finally Arjun find her , his life , his love Riya , bt she is sleeping on d bed , huge machines connecting to her sme doctors r thr & discussing somthing. Arjun goes to near Riya. & ask her , " ab ye kya naya naatak hai ? chalo utho , janta hue bada thak chuki ho , par yaha pe koi sota hai kya? " he talking to her . Dr look @ him signaled nurse to take him away. Nurse slowly goes near to him.
 
 
 
 
 
Nurse : Sir , sir ...
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : (looke @ her ) jee
 
 
 
 
 
 
Nurse : aap yaha nhi baith sakte , aap ko jana hoga. plz sir. (she look @ him wit hpe. )
 
 
 
 
Arjun : (turn to see Riya ) jee , par inhe dekhiye so gye yahi , ab kya kare , ek baar vo uth jaaye to hame chale jaaynge.
 
 
 
 
 
 
Nurse : (smile to him ) Sir aap jaaiye bahar , mai unhe leke aa jaaungi.
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : hmm par ..
 
 
 
 
 
Nurse : plz sir.
 
 
 
 
She help Arjun to came out frm room . he is big shock his mind did nt accept fact tht Riya got hurt badly , she is serious. his fear for lonliness nt allow him to accept tht fact she is stabbed , his mind purposely put curtain on tht part.
 
 
 
 
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Within a five minutes dr come outside , rathod & Chotu goes near to him . Dr just look @ thm & utter "sry , hum unhe bach nhi paaye. " & goes frm thr. Chotu keeep his hand on his Cheif's shulder & console him who stand thr like a statue. Suddenely Arjun shouted luking @ his watch " ye kya baat hue Rathod , abhi tak vo nures Riya ko leke nhi aayi.? (wait for few minutes ) ohho acha ab samza mere saath prank kar rahi hai. Rathod get irritated & goes to Arjun & slap him hard across his face.
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Tu kya naatak kar raha hai , kab se dekh rha hue mai , mar chuki vo , mar chuki hai teri Riya , mar chuki hai , jaa chuki hame sab se dur.." (Rathod inform him)
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun only registered Rathod's last wrds , vo mar chuki hai , jaa chuki hai ham sab se dur... " (he get angry & hit Rathod )
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : Rathod (he yelled out of his lungs ) meri Riya ko kuch nhi ho sakta , vo theek hai , vo andar so rahi hai .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod hold Arjun's hand & dragged him inside of d room & show him Riya's body & yelled on him , "Dekh Rawte vo chali gayi , vo mar chuki hai , dekh uska chehera , (rathod draaged him near machines & shows Arjun one machine tht reflects heartbeats) dekh ise dekh kuch dikh raha hai yahi , bol na , nahi na Rawte vo chali gayi hai , use Sikandar ne maar diya meri behen ko Arjun , maar diya (& hugs Arjun) Nw Arjun slowly registered d whole incident in his mind, whole incident play again his mind. & he yell "Riyaaa" Rathod break d hug & look @ Arjun. Arjun look @ Riya. Wardboy abt to cover her face wit white chadar , bt Arjun stops him , He seat beside her on bed & start talking to her.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun : Dekho na , ye sab kya bole rahe hai . ( he take her hand in his hand) Par mai jaanta hue ki tum mujhe chodkar kahi nhi jaaogi , tum sirf naatak kar rahi ho na , plz Riya bolo na , in sab ko zooth saabit kar do . aur hamar pyar ko sach... (he pause for a second & again looke @ her & kiss her palm , which he hold. ) H aRiya mai bhi tumse pyar karta hue , bahut pyar , mera sab kuch sirf tum ho sirf tum , meri zindagi ka matlab ho tum , tum jaa nhi sakti , mari saans chal rahi hai iska matlab tum jinda ho , ur fine my baby , ur fine. (he cuppe her face) Tumhe pat hai na ki mai kitna akudu hue , case ke alval auer kuch nhi samaz aata mujhe , par tumne is akdu ko pyar karna sikha diya , mai phir se pyar karne laga Riya , mai aaj hasta bhi hue (& smile to her)
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod : (angryli yell on him ) Rawte ab bas , bahut sun chuka mai ( angryli goes to him & hold Riya's right hand in his hand ) dekho  , ye dekho Ratwe ( & pulled Arjun's hand & put on his sisters armrest ) kuch mehsus hua , nahi na , uski naadi bhi nhi chal hai , vo mar chuki hai , ab plz Rawte aur mat khelo meri behen ke pyar ke saath ... plz go away. ( Arjun try to find her naadi , bt he didn't get it , he is scared & look @ her , he try to read her face , her eyes was closed , no emotion is thr. he feard & tightly hold her hand ) "Riya tum mere saath aisa nhi kar sakti , mai mar jaaunga Riya , mai mar jaaounga ... sach mein tumhe vapis aana hoga mere liye , hamare pyar ke liye , mai akele jeena nhi  chahta ,  mai phir se ghut ghut ke marna nhi chahta , plz Riya . plz open ur eyes.. mai vaada karta hue Riya , mai tumhe chod ke kahi nhi jaaunga , zindagibhar tumhari ghulami karunga , tumhe kabhi chillane ne mauka nahi dunga. (he again look @ her bt still no response) He put his head on her palm & kisses it slowly . He suddenely remebered Riya's wrds , "Mai maut ke muh se bhi vapis aa jaaungi , agar usne mujhe vo three magical wrds bole to." Arjun slowly put her hand on bed again. & look @ her face , "I Luv You Riya." bt Riya does nt open her eyes. Arun said those wrds again & again , bt did nt affect her . Arjun get angry & feared also , he yelled angrily ths time mre loudly like whole wrd listen to him , "I LUV YOU , I LUV YOU RIYA , PLZ PLZ DN'T LAEVE ME" & closes his eyes in pain. Suddeenly he heard sme different sound , he open his eyes & look @ her ,  her head goes upward , she try to breath , like soul again come in to body ,  her body try to breath again , try to feel oxygen again   Rathod & Chotu who witness all , rushed to outside of room happily shouted for dr. Here Arjun lift her & pulled her in his arms , he broke d hug & look @ her face , she still try to get oxygen , Arjun happyli kisse her all over d face , he look @ her lip & her lips r slowly parting to get mre & mre oxygen for her body. Arjun caressing her lower lip through his thumb & bent down to claim her. within a minutes he enjy her lips , he dn't know abt time , bt still captures & enjy her lips. Suddenely one person ask him " Are ye aap kya kar rahe hai , ?" Arjun broke d kiss & turn around to see Nurse standing thr in embrassed situation. Arjun smirk & again look @ his lady love lips , which turned red & swolloen  , her lower lip is silghtily got cut bcoz of his teeths, little blood comes frm thr. Arjun slowly wipe blood , while wiping d blood , he feel burn on his lip , like somone bite thr . he felt her pain  in him too. He again pulled her in a hug . bt nw he hears his name frm her mouth , she try to call him in ths state also . Arjun kiss her hair & informed her , "im here , im here "  at tht point her lips closed . she stop calling him. Nw he felt her breath on his neck.
 
 
 
 
Hpe u like part , Finally he take first staep instaed of Riya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was awesome!!!
Arjun's state of mind not accepting Riya's condition & his breaking down and finally his confession, the three words.
Yeh Nurse ko bhi aana hai kya ..haddi banke.
loved the update ...awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
Riya maut ki muh se bahar aa gayi...nyce
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wow it was awsome ,
riya is alive so gud,
arjun was amazing
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! u made me cry n laugh too!!!

ur very last sentence!!!

arrey hum log hum tum ki baath kar rahi thi!! in this ff.. he took the first step before also... hahaha😆

very emotional update!!! i thought arjun again apna hosh kho gaya!!!😔

update soon!!!

so happy riya is fine!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx for d pm . nice update . continue soon . pm me .
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awesome update
loved it