New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
it is so awesome and fabulous ff just loved it
plz p m me ur update
cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
awesommme👏👍🏼 upd fast
Edited by Pamalo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hmm, story getting more thrilling...
Please continue, i'l eagerly wait😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Its awesome plz update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesome ff.
Want 2 read more.
Update soon and plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 9
Thy all reach near thr cars. Rathod reuqests his mother He & his team hva some wrk. So , thy drop her @ palace , thn leave 4 thr wrk. She okeys wit it. Nw Rathod , Chotu & Rathod's mother come in , another Shree , Riya & Arjun.. Shree immeadatly pick Front seat wit driver , While Arjun & Riya hva no choice bt hva to seated behind . Shree look @ thm in mirror. Thy bth uncomrtable with each other. Sme minutes goes in silence , Suddenely Shree , " Ahh.. i'm getting damn bored." Arjun & Riya look @ him confusedly. "Wht happened , Shree.?" Riya asked. "Aaj sab kitna shant lag rha hai na Ri.?" Riya confusely look @ him. Suddenely Arjun spoke ," Ha Shree , ye baat to hai , jo bhi Riya ke saath reheta hai , use shanti kabhi achi nhi lagti . uske bakwaas ki aadat jo pad jaati hai." Shree forwrd his to Arjun for hi5 , bt in mid-wy try to taken back , bt for his surprise Arjun give him hi5. Riya look @ thm wit fake anger. "You two , nw im nt talking to both of u , frm ths time im litterally stop talking to bth of u." " Sry Ri... i just... " bt Arjun cut him in between . " It's k Shree dekhte hai ki Miss. Chatterbox kab tak Silent mode pe rehegi. " Riya frowned @ him. & look outside. While Shree chukle @ himself.
10-15 mins goes in pindrop silence in a car. Arjun notices Riya is feeling disturbed , bcoz her body language shows signs of her disturbance , small smile formed on his lips. "I knew her." he thinks to himself. Nw Arjun look @ his watch & starts counting in mind , "tik tik 1 " , tik tik 2 " , tik tik3 " , tik ti... before he cn complte his countdown Riya hold his arm in excitment , "Sir vo dekhiye na zoola. " , Riya says childshily. Arjun kept looking @ her face, her face filled wit innocence , happyness & excitment. Arjun notices a small zoola thr , which hang on a one of d tree's branch. sme teenger girl were playing thr.
" Sir chaliye na muze zoola zoolna hai , plz " before Arjun & Shree open thr mouths to protest , Riya orderd her driver to stop d car. As soon as car stops Riya jumpe out of d car in excitment. Arjun & Shree follows her helplessly . All girls looking @ her , bcoz no one acknowldge her. ( bcoz she leaves in mumbai for 6 yrs. , so thy dn't knw she is thr princess.)
Riya : Kya hum aap ke saath khel sakte hai .( Should i play wit u) She asked in much excitment in her voice.
: Ha didi. ( one of d girl says.)
Riya tied her chunni backside , & seated on zoola. & starts to play zoola. Arjun look @ her fondly . her hair dances in front of her face. Sweet smile arrived in her lips. She starting to tke her zoola on high. Arjun notices ths & instructs her , " Nahi , Riya jaayda ubcha nahi , gir jaayogi ." ( No Riya , dn't be high , u might be fall.) bt Riya is in her world. Suddenely Arjun gaze catches zoola's one side rope which ws tied on branch, tht getting looser, by her playing. Arjun imagine a scene in front of his eyes. & open his mouth to stop her, bt till rope which ws tied on branch fell frm branch,All girls even Shree closes his eyes in a fear. Riya also closes her eyes in a fear. She is abt to fall , whn two strong arms catches her in a mid-way. She hold on tht strong arms & withdraw herself in tht arms bcoz of fear. She clunched to his shirt tightly in fear. Arjun automatically held her tightly , & try to soothing her. Riya is abt to cry , bt Arjun patted her back , " Shuuu Riya rona nahi , aisa hta hai kabhi kabhi. " ( Riya plz dn't cry , its happens sometimes.) Bt he felt her grip get more tighter on his shirt . " Mai hue na yaha , kuch nahi hua . daro mat." ( I'm here , nthng to wry , plz do nt scare) After couple of minutes Riya began to calm. She withdraw herself frm his hug , & says thank u to him. Riya put her foot to forward for walk, bt suddenely she winced in pain Arjun instantly held her & ask her worridly , "Riya kya hua.?" (Wht happened ) "Sir mera pairr..." she says in a painful voice. Arjun orderd her to hold on his hand & while he rested his another hand on her waist to support her. As soon as Arjun hand touches her waist , she felt sme eletritic wave comes in her body. She closes her eyes. Arjun leads her towards d car. While Shree followed thm . " Kash aaj mera paas handycam hota. " Shree murmered to himself. Arjun help her in seating & orderd her to put her injured feet on a seat , so seat comfortably . Bt she protests, "Riya" he yelled @ her , "Do what i tld, do it nw." Arjun seated beside her. Nw Riya keep her feets on a seat , her legs touches Arjun's things , she felt uncomrtable. Arjun sense ths , & says her , "It's k Riya." Thy reach @ palace.
@ Palace.
Rathod & Chotu reached palace before 2& 1/2 hour. Bt thr is no sign of Arjun , Riya & Shree. Rathod's anger rises like clocks secong hand. He paced like a angry lion. While Chotu gasped in a terror. He dn't knw wht to do. He also started to pace behind Rathod. Suddenely Rathod stops & look @ his watch & turn around , he bumped on Chotu. " Chotu" he yelled @ him. Before Chotu cn answer Rathod gaze fell on Shree . who coming in a hall . " Badi jaldi aa gaye tum Shree. " Rathod says in a scarisatic tone. "Zoola zool rahe the Rathod." Arjun answers frm Shree's back. Rathod's glares @ him. his gaze fell on his little sister who held Arjun's hand & Arjun held her waist . Rthod looked @ thm furiously. He noticed his sister is limping., he anger vanishes , he instantly goes to her side & held her another arm , & help her to seat on sofa. "Kya hua Chutki .?" (What happened little sis) he ask worridly " Zoole se gir gayi " ( She fell frm swing ) Arjun replied. " Maine kitni baar kaha hai Chutki , ki sambhal ke par tum sunti kaha ho.?" ( I warned u several times before , bt u never listend.) Rathod warned her in a big brother tone. Rathod tell her to tke rest. , while He , Arjun & Chotu , Shree goes to Army's ofc to meet sme officers. " I'm also coming ,Sir" Riya says & try to stand & bt fail. " Pehele theek se khadi hona to seekho."( First u hva to learn how to stand ) Arjun tld her. " Bt Sir.." Riya try to protests. "Raute sahi keh raha hai Riya , jaakar aaram karo." ( Raute is right , Riya u should tke rest.) Rathod ans her back. He ordered servant to tke Riya in her room & goes to wrk wit his team.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Such a lovely update
Arjun affected by her.childlike activities
Shree nd arjun hi5
Fun filled nd romantic part
Update soon..thnx for d pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awww...
So sweet arjun was taking care of her. 😳
loved also rathores brotherly care.
Update soon.
Thank u so much for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Lovely part
just lvoed it
jholla scene was awesome
shree is too hiarious
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thx Guys. Really Overwhelmed ...
Thx a Ton ...
Sry 4 lte..
Here is a Chapter 10.
CHAPTER 10
She getting bored , she want to go out. bt she cn't . Whn Ma sa know abt her , she immeadately call Doc. 4 her. She felt relived whn Doc. inform thm , thr is only cramp , so , dn't need to wry. she w'll be okey in 2-3 days. After returing home her brother also come to meet her wit her frnds , bt he no... She sees softer side of him tod , whr he always hide frm world. She thinks is he hva feeling for me.? Within seconds her alert mind inform her , no, for him you r his frnd only frnd. She felt vry bad. She expected atleast he come & ask her , meet her , scold her ... But no he dn't cme. She feels her eyes moist , her eyes starting throwing her sadness out of her. Suddenely she heard knock on her door. She immeadately wipe her tears & give permission to a person, to come in. She sees her Bhai sa comine her followed by servant who holds a little trolly in his hand , she knows her brother got sme food 4 her. She smil @ her brother. Her brother just lift his one hand in air & getsures someone to stop & go. Servant immedatly understood ths & leave d room. Her brother seating on bed facing her.
Rathod: Abhi tak dard ho rha hai.? ( Still u feel d pain thr.) He ask in concerned whn he sees sme water near her eyes, he instantly recognize she must be crying.
Riya : Nodded in ys manner. bcoz she does nt wn't reaveal him abt true thing. "Bhai sa , aap kyu aaye, kisi ke saath bhej diya hta. " ( Why r u cmg to give me food. plz snd someone to give me tht. ) She knows , her brother must be tired tod.
Rathod : Noo , kyu ki mai jaanta tha , ki tukya karti Chutki?(NO , Bcoz i knw wht u do.) He just get a plate frm trolly which filled wit food & give to her.
Riya : (Igonre it , & starting looking here & there.).
Rathod : (Smiles @ his little sis antics.) He immeadetly tke little piece of roti wit sabzi . & hold in front of her mouth , She instantly open her mouth & tke ths piece in her mouth & starting to chewing it. like she is waiting for ths.
Riya : ( Rathod do ths again , bt ths time he intentionally took other sabzi. & give to Riya.) As soon as Riya started to eat tht piece, She yelled, "eee , Bhai sa , ye to dhokha hai . " (Brother ths is cheating.) & grab glass of water frm trolly & drink it whinhin a seconds. Her brother look @ her mischivously .
Rathod : Tum kabhi nahi sudhori gi na. ( You never changed)
Riya : ( Making faces) "I dn't like like Karela "& open her mouth again. & look @ her brother's action.
Rathod : (Nw ths time he give her fav sabzi.)
Riya : Hmmm.. isi kehte hai khanna. ( Thats call food.) Rathod smile @ her.
Thr mother Maharani Gaytridevi passes by her room , whn she heard thr talking & enterd her room. & whn she sees bth of thm. She goes to flashblack. She knews whenever Riya ws ill. her brother always thr for her , bcoz its vry difficult to handle her r give her food. She always throws tanturums to avoid food & medicines. She remebered whn once Riya had high fever. (n Riya is 10 yrs old , & Samar is 15). Samar is in school , & Riya did nt ate anything in mrng ng thtswhy she skiped her medicines also. Her mother sends various types of foods to her like Juice , fruits , sandwitches through servants. Bt Riya sent thm back wit various reasons. Even her try to feed her , bt in vain. Whn Samar comes frm school in afternoon , Maharani Gaytridevi tld him to give something Riya to eat. He goes to her Room wit food , & retrun after 1 hr. wit empty dishes. He informed his mother tht he gave medicines to her & nw she sleep. Thr mother always wonder how little Samar Tackle Riya . Bcoz Riya is tantrum Queen of d house. Suddenely she feel someone calling her. She knw Riya calling her. She looked bth of her children.
Ma sa : Samar aur kitna bigado ke use? ( Samar , why r u pamperd her always.?)
Before Rathod ans her , Riya shouts: Aaa , ( shouts in fake anger & folded her hands towards her chest , pouted her face. Ma sa & Rathod look her & smiles @ her.
Rathod : Acha baba , pehele khana to khaa lo. ( k ,bt eat your food.)
Riya : naaa ( & turn her face sideways. )
Rathod : Theek hai , Sry baba . ab koi nahi daantga meri princess ko. ( K. Nw , anyone dn't scolds u.)
Riya : (Just look him wit d corner of her eyes.) Sachhi.( Are u sure)
Rathod : Ha. (& give her another piece of roti. nw she started eating.)
Masa : Beta , jab tumhari shadi hogi to tum kya karogi .? ( Whn u get married thn wht w'll u do.?) She ask her daughter.
Riya : Mai Bhai ke pass hi ghar lungi , to mai hamesha unse mil saku. ( I"ll tke house tht nearer to bhai's home.) She said chirply.
Ma sa : Agar tumhare pati ne tumhe Samar se milne nahi diya to.? ( If your husband dn't give u permission to meet Samar , thn)
Riya : ( Immeadetly replied ) To mai bhai se uski complaint karungi , & bhai use saza denge. ( I"ll complaint bhai , so , bhai w'll punish him.) She said childshily.
Rathod just smile @ her & her Mother tld her "ur r mad."
After dinner Rathod handle Riya her medicines , & took a glass of warmth milk frm trolly . . He look @ Riya, instead of taking tablets ,she look @ thm & observes each tablets size.
Rathod : Riya, just tke thm , dn't waste time.
Riya : Nodded in a negative manner.
Rathod : To theek hai , phir ye Gulabjamun mai wapis lekar jata hue. (K. , So , i tke ths sweets return wit me.)
Riya : (Whn she sees Bowl in her brother's hand filled wit her fav sweets. she tke medicines wit sme milk. & try to give him glass)
Rathod ( Bt he denies to tke glass frm her hand.) "Pura" , he signals her to drink all milk. Riya making faces while drinking milk . As soon as she finishes milk, she snatched Sweets bowl frm his nand & start to eat . A s soon as she chweing it, She closes her eyes in happiness & ecapes a moan frm her mouth.
After she is getting ready for bed. Servant comes thr to receive trolly. She shifted herself on bed & took a quilt over her , before closing her eyes, & she look @ her brother, who silently watched her.
She smiles @ him & closes her eyes. Rathod kisses her forehead & whisper "Gud Nite " in her ear. & switch off d light . & goes to his Room.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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