SwaSan Drabble: 'Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu' - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nice..
What I like the most was shomi standing for shono this time...
And shekar understood her...

Thank u for the PM..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res - very long very bad day - checked the forum just now😭
And Unres:

Dear Viji,

Those lines - Mangalam Bhagwan Vishnu - those words conjure up the 'mandir wala sindoor' scene. God! the goosebumps that scene gives me! Truly one of most memorable SwaSan scenes and your story brings back memories of that scene.

So Swara decides not to let her father ride roughshod over her - Thank god - she decided that. And then, as if her memories conjured him, Sanskaar is there. That hug you described - we can never have enough of them!

Dadi and Shekhar never cease to amaze me (pure 100% unadulterated sarcasm) - they can only see their precious ladoo (somehow the use of precious here reminds me of there Lord of Rings Trilogy😉) suffering but not Swara. 😡
And Sharmistha finally snapped - yes it was high time she did indeed (Shekhar is one rare human being who grows a spine at the precise instant that it is not needed and becomes firm with people who do not deserve it.).
And she truly means it, that she is Ragini's mother as much as Swara, despite not sharing a blood bond with Ragini. Shekhar on the other hand (not much use writing about him). Finally for whatever reason, he does agree to let Swara go with Sanskaar.

Beautiful OS - Could we at least hope for a watered down version of this in the serial? Guess it is too much to aks for.

Love
Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Viji ...
are you a fortune reader .just read a spoiler that between sanskar and shekhar ,swara will choose her hubby dearest. ..wow,I know it will be more dramatic...but after reading this os,it was a shock for me...😊..but a happy one .
Love,
Simi
Edited by simsen23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Viji 🤗

Again great work...for u readers...
This drabble...perfect title... [=D >]

Swara..missing her husband...described about mehendi well done..
And caressing her neck..cute blush n shyness 😳
Swara so called papa and dadi... 😡 cant feel the pain what swara gone n going through except our sanskar..they cant oppose when Ragini doing sin to swara n maheswari ... 🤢

Sanskar encounter towards Shekhar but still tiny doubt about swara decision 😭
No more mahaan role for swara 👏

Shomi part was awesome...i,hope something like this will happen in soap...(in my dreams 😲 )

Last but not least...sanskar"I ll carry your burdens now"..but from fake marriage to till now he carrying her al burdens as a solid pillar.. 😳

New beginning starts for swasan...in this OS.. 😳

Really thank u so much ...for giving this. Wonderful..fantastic OS...

Continue ur work...will waiting for next...

Thank you..
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Viji 🤗 This is awesome!!
I hav stopped watching the episodes since maasi's jiji's khush nahi hai. I go by WU. But I dont know if they would show something so nuanced, heart felt and sensible. I loved it. For once, I want swara to be selfish and find her happiness. Swasan should go honeymoon-ing and let the elders of the deal with the situation.

I loved the mehendi scene. Her thinking about Sanskaar and him coming to see her. There is some cosmic force binding them. I know

I loved Sharmista. She respect fully gave it back to Shekar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Unresed in page 4 darling!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Viji,
This is amazing.Sweet and nice update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Viji
This was grt dear.
Sharm ista standing against Shekhar was very much needed.
Loved it very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Di...it was amazing...woow loved how mishty stood for swasan.. Hope we will get to see this in serial but we know it is not possible...u expressed swara's thoughts with clarity.. Amazing continue such...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Thanks once again friends, for all the most lovely comments coming in. Am very touched and humbled, will start my individual replies tomorrow.
Thanks and Good night. 🤗

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